2024屆上海市嘉定區(qū)高三二模英語(yǔ)試卷英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文-新建游樂(lè)設(shè)施的建議（參考范文三篇）講義素材

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你所在的小區(qū)附近將新建一個(gè)大型游樂(lè)場(chǎng)，很多居民表示不滿(mǎn)。社區(qū)管理處決定征集居民意見(jiàn)并召開(kāi)專(zhuān)題討論會(huì)，作為居民代表，寫(xiě)一份討論會(huì)發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容需包括：

1.你認(rèn)為新建大型游樂(lè)場(chǎng)可能會(huì)存在的問(wèn)題（至少2個(gè)）；

2.你對(duì)以上問(wèn)題的建議和理由。

Version01

Dearfellowresidents,

Asarepresentativeofourcommunity,Iwouldliketoaddresstheconcernssurrounding

theproposedconstructionofalargeamusementparknearourneighborhood.Whiletheideaofhavingsuchafacilitymay

initially

seem

exciting,thereareseveral

potential

issuesthatweneedtoconsider.親愛(ài)的居民們:

作為我們社區(qū)的代表，我想就在我們社區(qū)附近擬議建設(shè)的大型游樂(lè)園的問(wèn)題發(fā)表意見(jiàn)。雖然擁有這樣一個(gè)設(shè)施的想法最初可能看起來(lái)令人興奮，但我們需要考慮幾個(gè)潛在的問(wèn)題。

Firstly,theconstructionofalargeamusementparkmayleadto

increased

noiselevelsinourarea.Theconstantsoundsofrides,music,andcrowdscoulddestroythepeaceandquietthatmanyofus

value

inourhomes,affecting

ouroverallqualityoflife.

Secondly,thereisaconcernaboutthepotentialincreaseintrafficjamcausedbythestreamofvisitorstotheamusementpark.Thiscould

resultin

difficultiesforresidentstryingto

navigate

ourneighborhoodroads,aswellassafetyrisksforpedestriansandcyclists.首先，一個(gè)大型游樂(lè)園的建設(shè)可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致我們地區(qū)的噪音水平增加。持續(xù)不斷的交通工具、音樂(lè)和人群的聲音可能會(huì)破壞我們?cè)S多人在家中所珍視的和平與安寧，影響我們的整體生活質(zhì)量。第二，人們擔(dān)心大量游客涌入游樂(lè)園可能會(huì)加劇交通擁堵。這可能會(huì)給居民在社區(qū)道路上行駛帶來(lái)困難，也會(huì)給行人和騎自行車(chē)的人帶來(lái)安全風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。

Toaddresstheseissues,Isuggestconducting

thorough

studiesto

assess

theimpactoftheamusementpark

on

noiselevelsand

trafficflow.Additionally,implementingmeasuressuchassoundbarriersand

alternative

transportationoptionscanhelpreducethenegativeeffectsonourcommunity.

為了解決這些問(wèn)題，我建議進(jìn)行徹底的研究，評(píng)估游樂(lè)場(chǎng)對(duì)噪音水平和交通流量的影響。此外，實(shí)施隔音屏障和替代交通選擇等措施可以幫助減少對(duì)我們社區(qū)的負(fù)面影響。

ItisessentialtoMakepublicknowledgea

priority

throughout

thisprocesstoensurethattheconcernsofresidents

areheardandaddressed.Together,wecanworktowardsfindingsolutionsthatenhanceourneighborhoodwhile

minimizinganypotentialdrawbacks.

在整個(gè)過(guò)程中，必須將信息公開(kāi)作為優(yōu)先事項(xiàng)，以確保居民的關(guān)切得到傾聽(tīng)和解決。我們可以一起努力尋找促進(jìn)社區(qū)解決方案，同時(shí)最大限度地減少任何潛在的缺點(diǎn)。

Thankyouforyourattention.[223words)Version02TowhomitmayconcernAsaresidentinRoseResidentialArea,it’smy

dutyandright

to

offer

myideas

about

theconstructionofanewlarge-scaleamusementpark

nearourneighbourhood.Thisdevelopment

undoubtedly

brings

some

problems

that

needtobeaddressed

withcarefulconsideration.

作為玫瑰住宅區(qū)的一名居民，我有責(zé)任也有權(quán)力就在我們附近建造一個(gè)新的大型游樂(lè)園提出我的意見(jiàn)。這一開(kāi)發(fā)無(wú)疑帶來(lái)了一些需要認(rèn)真考慮的問(wèn)題。

Tobeginwith,theheavy

trafficwillbe

thepotentialconcern,

which

couldleadtotrafficjam,especiallyonweekendsandholidays.

Afloodof

visitorscould

cause

longer

commutetimes

and

affect

theemergencyservices'

responsetimes.

Inaddition,the

annoying

noise

of

backgroundmusicandcrowdswillbreakupthepeaceofourneighbourhood

sothat

thedailylivesoftheresidents

canbeimpacted.Moreover,theconstruction

andoperation

ofalargeamusementparkcouldhave

annegativeimpacton

environment,

includingthelossof

greenspaces,increasedwaste,andpotentialpollutionoflocal

waterbodies.

首先，繁忙的交通將是潛在的問(wèn)題，這可能導(dǎo)致?lián)矶?，特別是在周末和節(jié)假日。大量的游客可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致更長(zhǎng)的通勤時(shí)間，并影響緊急服務(wù)的響應(yīng)時(shí)間。此外，背景音樂(lè)和人群的惱人噪音會(huì)破壞我們社區(qū)的安寧，從而影響居民的日常生活。此外，大型游樂(lè)園的建設(shè)和運(yùn)營(yíng)可能會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響，包括綠地的喪失、廢物的增加和當(dāng)?shù)厮w的潛在污染。

Toaddresstheseissues,

hereare

mythreesuggestions,and

hopefully

theycan

beofsomehelp.

Firstofall,

I

propose

that

theroadsnearourneighbourhoodshouldbewidenedandmoreparkinglotshouldbebuilt.Onlyinthisway

can

trafficjambeavoided.

Inthesecondplace,Isuggestwecanplantmanytreestomakea

“treewall”notonly

toimprovethenaturalenvironmentofourestate,

butalso

tokeepaway

thenoiseandpollution.

Lastbutnotleast,

itiscrucialthat

leadersinchargeof

theamusementpark

oughttotake

measuresto

reducewaste,userenewableenergy

and

recyclesources

inorder

tominimizeitscarbonfootprint.

【①be+of+名詞≈be+該名詞對(duì)應(yīng)的形容詞②

only修飾狀語(yǔ)引起的倒裝句：Onlyinthisway

can

trafficjambeavoided.③主語(yǔ)從句中的and并列的是什么？】

為了解決這些問(wèn)題，以下是我的三個(gè)建議，希望它們能有所幫助。首先，我建議我們小區(qū)附近的道路應(yīng)該拓寬，并建立更多的停車(chē)場(chǎng)。只有這樣才能避免交通堵塞。第二，我建議我們可以種很多樹(shù)來(lái)做一個(gè)“樹(shù)墻”，不僅可以改善我們小區(qū)的自然環(huán)境，而且可以遠(yuǎn)離噪音和污染。最后但并非最不重要的是，負(fù)責(zé)游樂(lè)園的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)應(yīng)該采取措施減少浪費(fèi)，使用可再生能源和回收資源，以盡量減少其碳足跡。

Thesearejustmy

humbleopinions.IhopeyoucantakethemintoconsiderationandI’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

這些只是我的拙見(jiàn)。希望您能考慮一下，期待您的回復(fù)。Sincerely,CommunityRepresentative

Version03

LadiesandGentlemen,

Asarepresentativeofourcommunity,I

appreciate

theopportunityto

voice

theconcernsofmanyresidentsregardingtheproposedconstructionofalargeamusementparkinourneighborhood.Whiletheideaofhavingarecreationalfacilitynearbyis

appealing,itiscrucialtoconsiderthepotentialdrawbacksandimplications

itmaybring.

作為我們社區(qū)的代表，我很高興有機(jī)會(huì)表達(dá)許多居民對(duì)我們社區(qū)擬建大型游樂(lè)園的關(guān)切。雖然附近有一個(gè)娛樂(lè)設(shè)施的想法很吸引人，但考慮到它可能帶來(lái)的潛在缺點(diǎn)和影響是至關(guān)重要的。

Firstandforemost,theconstructionofalargeamusementparkcouldleadto

increased

noisepollutioninourneighborhood.Theconstantsoundofrides,music,andcrowdsmaydistroythepeaceandquietnessthatmanyofus

cherish

inourhomes.This

disturbancecoulddisadvantageously

affect

thequalityoflife

forresidents,especiallythoselivinginclosetotheproposedsite.

首先，建造一個(gè)大型游樂(lè)園可能會(huì)增加我們附近的噪音污染。持續(xù)不斷的交通工具、音樂(lè)和人群的聲音可能會(huì)破壞我們?cè)S多人在家中所珍惜的和平與安寧。這種干擾可能對(duì)居民的生活質(zhì)量產(chǎn)生不利影響，特別是那些居住在擬議場(chǎng)地附近的居民。

Furthermore,thearrivalofvisitorstotheamusementparkmaycausetrafficjaminourarea.Withmorevehiclesontheroads,thereisariskofmoreaccidentduringpeakhours,making

it

challengingforresidentstowork,

orsimply

navigate

withintheneighborhood.This

notonly

addstothe

frustration

ofresidents

butalso

poses

safetyconcernsforpedestriansandcyclistssharingthesameroads.

此外，游客到游樂(lè)園的到來(lái)可能會(huì)造成我們地區(qū)的交通堵塞。隨著道路上的車(chē)輛越來(lái)越多，高峰時(shí)段發(fā)生事故的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)也越來(lái)越大，這給居民們的工作帶來(lái)了挑戰(zhàn)，或者只是在附近閑逛。這不僅增加了居民的挫敗感，也給共用同一條道路的行人和騎自行車(chē)的人帶來(lái)了安全問(wèn)題。

Inlightof

thesepotentialissues,Iproposeseveralmeasurestoeasethenegativeimpactsoftheproposedamusementpark.

Firstly,itisessentialtoconductacomprehensive

environmentalimpactassessment

toevaluatethepotentialnoisepollutionandtrafficjamthattheparkmay

generate.Thisassessmentshouldinvolve

input

fromexpertsinurbanplanning,transportation,andenvironmentalsciencetoensureathoroughandproperanalysis.

鑒于這些潛在的問(wèn)題，我提出了一些措施來(lái)緩解擬議的游樂(lè)園的負(fù)面影響。首先，有必要進(jìn)行全面的環(huán)境影響評(píng)估，以評(píng)估公園可能產(chǎn)生的潛在噪音污染和交通堵塞。這項(xiàng)評(píng)估應(yīng)包括城市規(guī)劃、交通和環(huán)境科學(xué)專(zhuān)家的投入，以確保進(jìn)行徹底和適當(dāng)?shù)姆治觥?/p>

Secondly,measuresshould

beimplemented

to

minimize

noisepollutionfromtheamusementpark,suchastheuseofsound

barriers,sound-absorbingmaterials,and

restrictionson

operatinghours

forcertainridesandattractions.

其次，應(yīng)采取措施，盡量減少游樂(lè)場(chǎng)的噪音污染，如使用隔音屏障、吸聲材料，以及限制某些游樂(lè)設(shè)施和景點(diǎn)的營(yíng)業(yè)時(shí)間。

Additionally,thedevelopmentofalternativetransportationoptions,suchasshuttleservicesorbikelanes,couldhelp

ease

trafficjamandreducerelianceonprivatevehicles.此外，開(kāi)發(fā)替代交通工具，如班車(chē)服務(wù)或自行車(chē)道，可以幫助緩解交通堵塞，減少對(duì)私家車(chē)的依賴(lài)。

Lastly,communityengagementandconsultationshould

beprioritized

throughouttheplanningandconstructionprocesstoaddresstheconcernsand

preferencesofresidents.opencommunicationbetweenthedevelopers,localauthorit