看圖作文濟南市中考英語作文省公開課金獎全國賽課一等獎微課獲獎課件

writingapicturestory06/28/061/382/381.讀圖。即分析圖畫所提供信息，充分發(fā)揮自己想象力，正確了解圖中內(nèi)容確實切含義。如圖1所表示：父母親和“我”去公園。圖2：在公園里劃船。圖3：“我”抓魚時不慎掉入水中。圖4：母親跳出水中把“我”救起。2.試寫。即依據(jù)圖中情景及漢語提醒來表示文章內(nèi)容，充分發(fā)揮自己實際水平，避難就易，一法不成，另找它途。如圖1所表示：MyparentsandIwenttothepark.圖2：Wewentboatingonthelake.圖3：IwascatchingthefishwhenIfellintothewater.圖4：Mymotherjumpedintothewaterandsavedme.3.擴寫。即適當增加情節(jié)和過渡性詞語，把上述句子連貫起來。這里擴寫并不是毫無依據(jù)地簡單地經(jīng)過想象把試寫內(nèi)容拉長，而是緊緊圍繞圖片中心把試寫內(nèi)容進行擴充。使內(nèi)容更豐富、人物活動更形象、事情過程更詳細，因而增強文章感染力。力爭做到合理想象，用詞得當，句子結(jié)構(gòu)及語法利用正確，條理清楚。3/38LastSunday，myparentsandIwenttothepark.Wewentboatingonthewater.Thereweresomebeautifulfishinthewater.Icouldn'thelpcatchingthem.Suddenly，Ifellintothewater.IwassofrightenedthatIcriedloudly.Mymotherjumpedintothewateratonceandliftedmeoutofthewater.Iwassaved.Howdangerousthetripwas！該文章轉(zhuǎn)載自無憂考網(wǎng)：4/38假定你是TOM,請依據(jù)下面圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇日志.5/381.Style:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.GoovertherequirementAdiarypasttenseI6/38TuesdayDecember6,FineIhadaverybaddayyesterday.Everythinggowrong.Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidn'tringsoIwokeupanhourlate.IaminsuchahurrythatIburnedmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.

Correctanymistakeswent

was7/38ThenIrunoutofthehousetocatchthe8:30bus,butofcourseImissit.IwasveryunhappybecauseIknowmyteachergotangryifanyonewaslateforclass.SoIranthreemilestotheschool.ButwhenIarrivedthereintheend,IfindthatitwasSundayCorrectanymistakesranknewfoundmissed8/38

依據(jù)以下圖畫中Tom騎自行車經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇故事。短文要寫得連貫、完整。Sample19/381.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.GoovertherequirementAstory（atrafficaccident)pasttenseTom,he10/38Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)11/38Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)12/38Thedriver/frightened/runaway2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)13/38Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)14/38KeywordssentencesAwomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.rideabike/runfasttoseetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaughtbefrightened/runawayhithim/falloffhisbikeWhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.15/38

Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwasfrightened.Heranaway.Awomansawtheaccident.Sherememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman.Thedriverwascaught.Passage13.Writingapassage16/38

Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.passage2

17/38

Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet

when

hesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.

Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwas

so

frightened

that

heranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.

Fortunately,awoman

happenedtoseeit

and

rememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman

andtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,

thedriverwascaught

andpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Passage2

18/38Usingconnectives并列轉(zhuǎn)折3.因果4.其它and,both…and

but,however,though,while

so,therefore,because

when,suddenly,immediately,assoonas,unfortunately,so…that…,finally,asaresult,Whatwasworse19/38Goovertherequirement（person,tense,style）

Summary:Howtowriteapicturestory?Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Writeapassage（usingconnectivesandaddingdetailsandspecificinformation.)20/38基本篇章結(jié)構(gòu)①點題（時間、地點、人物、事件）②事件起因③事件發(fā)展/過程④事件結(jié)果⑤扣題21/38年遼寧下面4幅圖片描述是星期天早晨在中山公園里發(fā)生一件事。請依據(jù)圖片所提供信息用英語為你?！坝⒄Z園地”寫一篇短文。注意：①短文須包含全部圖片主要內(nèi)容。短文內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；②短文單詞數(shù)：100左右（已給句子中單詞不計入總詞數(shù)）；③參考詞匯：貨攤stand(n.);搶奪snatch(v.);逮捕arrest(v.)22/3823/381．點題（時間、地點）星期天早晨，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁2．事件起因年輕婦女包被搶3．事件發(fā)展/過程人們追趕搶包者；長排椅上坐著一位老人；搶包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒4．事件結(jié)果兩名警察逮捕搶劫者：5．扣題婦女感激老人，人們稱贊老人機智24/38審題描述過去個人經(jīng)歷第三人稱4.主題：3.人稱：1.體裁：2.時態(tài)：記敘文體普通過去時25/38星期天早晨，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤OneSundaymorning,；inZhongshanPark.；Atanice-creamstand年輕婦女包被搶snatchherhandbagaway人們追趕搶包者runafterthesnatcher在附近長排椅上坐著一位老人Therebesb.sittingonthebenchnearby提要26/38從老人身旁跑過Runpasttheoldman拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間；pickuphisumbrella;putitbetweenthetwolegsofthesnatcher;

摔一大跟斗falldownonthegroundheavily27/38兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者Cameinapolicecar;arrestsb.感激老人幫助Thanksb.forhishelp

稱贊老人機智Praisetheoldmanforhiscleverness28/381、幾天前theotherday;severaldaysago2、使人感到意外toone’ssurprise3、就在這時atthatmoment;atthattime慣用關(guān)聯(lián)詞29/38①副詞：suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediatelyasaresult……②so/such…that…③twohourslater,④…and…30/381.Itwas…(天氣)2.Whilesb.wasdoing/sb.wasabouttodo…when…3.sb.did…and…4.see/hearsb.Doing5.

withthehelpofsb.一些可能用到句型和詞組31/38

OneSundaymorning,

manypeoplewenttoZhongshanPark.

Asitwasveryhot,somepeoplegotthirstyandweretryingtobuysomeice-cream.

Suddenly

awoman

atthestandshoutedbecause

ayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway.32/38

Seeingthis,immediately

afewpeoplebeganto

runafter

him.

However,

thesnatcherran

sofastthat

itwasnoteasytocatchhim.

Luckily

,therewas

anoldman

sitting

onabenchnearby.

33/38As

thesnatcherwas

runningpast

him,theoldmanquickly

pickedup

hisumbrella

and

putitbetweenthesnatcher’slegs.Th