Unit2HealthylifestyleWriting健康生活建議信課件高中英語(yǔ)人教版選擇性

HealthylifestylePeriod5(WritingaletterofADVICE)1.TolearnsomeusefulSENTENCESTRUCTURES2.ToREVIEWhowtowritealetter3.ToraisetheirawarenessofhealthylifestyleLearningaimsLeadinWhatadvicecanwegivetoLucy?Lucyisaseniorschoolstudent.Butrecentlyshefoundherselfeasilygettingsleepyandstressedout.Ifyouareherpenpal,thencanyougivehersomesuggestions?HealthylifestylementalhealthphysicalhealthMaintainhealthybodyweightEatabalancedandhealthydietExercisemoderatelyandregularlyHaveenoughsleepbeincontrolofyourownlifebeabletodealwithstressesfeelgoodaboutyourselfbepassionate

What’sthemeaningofbeinghealthy?Howtowritealetterofadvice?Let’slearnPara.1Para.2Para.3greetingandpurposegivingsuggestions(3pieces)hopesandgratitudeAletterofadvice1.Iamdelightedtohearfromyouanditismygreatpleasuretogiveyousomeadviceon...2.Knowingthatyouhavesomedifficultyin...Iamwritingtoofferyousomepracticalsuggestionsasfollows.3.Sinceyouaskedmeforsomeadviceon...inyourlastletternowIamwritingtosharewithyoumyideas.Pre-writingHowtobeginaletterofadvice?1.Frommyperspective,youmayaswell...2.Idobelieveitiswiseofyou/agreatideato...3.Irecommendthatyoushoulddo...4.IfIwereyou,Iwould(not)...5.Itwouldbeofbenefitif...6.Thebestwaytodo...istodo...Howtogiveadvicepolitely?1.Ihopemyproposalscanbeofhelp/use/benefittoyou.2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoufindmysuggestionspractical.3.Iwouldbemorethanpleasedtosee...4.Istronglysuggestyoufollowmyadviceandyouaresurelytomakeit.4.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Howtoendaletterofadvice?1.表示時(shí)間順序的銜接性詞語(yǔ)atthebeginning/endof,intheend,afterwards,sincethen,meanwhile,afterthat,immediately,fromthenon,allofasudden,atpresent,afterawhile,atthesametime,inthepast,tobegin/startwith2.表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的銜接性詞語(yǔ)what'smore/moreover,furthermore,besides,inaddition,tomakethingsworse,themostimportantofall,worstofall,especially,inparticular3.表示并列和轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的銜接性詞語(yǔ)however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,despite,inspiteof,afterall,nevertheless,aswellas,neither...nor...,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not..but...Howtoconnectsentencestogether?4.表示條件和讓步關(guān)系的過渡性詞語(yǔ)as(so)longas,unless,incase(of),onconditionthat,evenif/though,as5.表示因果關(guān)系的銜接性詞語(yǔ)because(of),nowthat,thanksto...dueto...,asaresult/consequence(of),therefore/thus,since6.表示列舉事實(shí)或觀點(diǎn)過渡的詞語(yǔ)suchas,forexample/instance,take...forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...,for的onething...foranother...,personally,inmyopinion/view,asfarasI'mconcerned,asforme7.表示總結(jié)的過渡性詞語(yǔ)inshort,inbrief,inaword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral/generallyspeaking,inconclusion建議信模板DearXX，

Hearingthatyouhavetroubledoing...,Ifeelextremelyanxious.NowIamwritingtoofferyousomeadviceon....

Herearemysuggestions.

Firstandforemost,itiswiseofyouto...(建議一)Besides,youmayaswell...(建議二)Lastbutnotleast,Iwouldrecommendthatyoushould...(建議三).

Idohopeyouwillfollowmysuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,XX【寫作要求】假定你是李華,得知你的英國(guó)筆友Cindy經(jīng)常不吃早餐,因而胃病發(fā)作住院治療。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的寫作提示,用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括:1.陳述不吃早飯的危害;2.勸她培養(yǎng)健康的生活方式。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.請(qǐng)?jiān)谙鄳?yīng)位置作答。Practice【審題謀篇】

體裁建議信人稱第一、二人稱時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)話題健康的生活方式框架引入話題:就健康的生活方式提出建議介紹細(xì)節(jié):不吃早餐的危害表達(dá)希望:……【遣詞造句】1.詞匯①擔(dān)心的

②有用的

③精力充沛的

④對(duì)……有害

⑤由……引起

⑥鍛煉

⑦不吃早餐

worrieduseful

energeticbeharmfultoresultfromtakeexerciseskipbreakfast2.句式(1)要點(diǎn)翻譯①得知你在住院,我很擔(dān)心。(beworriedtodo)I____________________________________youareinhospital.

②你不吃早餐而引起了胃疼。Youhaveastomachache___________________________yourskippingbreakfast.(which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)

③你沒有按時(shí)吃早餐的習(xí)慣,這對(duì)你的健康有害。(harmful)Youdon’thavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,and________________________________yourhealth.

amworriedtoknow

whichresultsfromitisharmfulto④每天進(jìn)行足夠的體育鍛煉將幫助你保持精力充沛和免于疾病的困擾。(動(dòng)詞-ing形式作主語(yǔ))____________________________________everydaywillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.

(2)句式升級(jí)⑤把句①和②升級(jí)為含有原因狀語(yǔ)從句和動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)的句子TakingenoughphysicalexerciseIamworriedtoknowyou’reinhospitalbecauseyouhaveastomachacheresultingfromyourskippingbreakfast.⑥把句③升級(jí)為含有非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句⑦用Itiswise...和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句升級(jí)句④Youdon’thavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,whichisharmfultoyourhealth.Itiswisetotakeenoughphysicalexerciseeveryday,whichwillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.【妙筆成篇】

DearCindy,I’mworriedtoknowyou’reinhospitalbecauseyouhaveastomachacheresultingfromyourskippingbreakfast.I’dliketoofferyousomeadvice.Asweallknow,it’simportanttohaveagoodbreakfastthatconsistsofgrain,fruitandvegetables.However,youdon’thavethehabitofhavingbreakfastontime,whichisharmfultoyourhealth.Ithinkyoushoulddevelopahealthywayoflifefromnowon.It’swisetotakeenoughphysicalexerciseeveryday,whichwillhelpyoustayenergeticandfreefromdisease.Ihopeyouwillfindmyadviceuseful.Yours,LiHua針對(duì)訓(xùn)練假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國(guó)朋友Mike就讀的學(xué)校要舉辦一年一度的“中華文化節(jié)”,他來(lái)信向你征求活動(dòng)意見,請(qǐng)你寫封回信,內(nèi)容包括:1.寫作目的;2.活動(dòng)建議;3.表示祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.請(qǐng)?jiān)谙鄳?yīng)位置作答。DearMike,Sodelightedtolearnthatyourscho