校園欺凌 熱點(diǎn)01 -中考英語高分作文（江蘇專用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點(diǎn)01校園欺凌一、話題作文1．近年來校園欺凌事件頻頻發(fā)生，為了提高青少年的自我防范意識和保護(hù)能力，某中學(xué)圍繞校園欺凌（bullyv.）問題召開主題班會。假定你是班長李華，以Howtoprotectourselvesinschool為標(biāo)題寫一篇短文，主要包括如下內(nèi)容：1.校園欺凌對我們的影響。2.要求每個學(xué)生都學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)知識。3.遇到校園欺凌時(shí)要冷靜處置；及時(shí)告訴老師和家長；在校要友好待人，遵守校規(guī)……4.請求大家團(tuán)結(jié)起來，校園會變得更美好。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sgettogetherandmakeanefforttostopbullying.I’mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.【參考范文】Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Sowewilllearnhowtoprotectourselvesatschool.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldkeepcalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldaskourteachersandparentsforhelpassoonaspossibleorwecancallthepoliceintime.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan’thaveanyrudebehavior.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Finally,followingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.Let’sgettogetherandmakeanefforttostopbullying.I’mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭，呼應(yīng)短文結(jié)尾；要求我們對“校園欺凌”這個事件展開，并聯(lián)系實(shí)際，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；要將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在作文中，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、完整，但需要注意合理性，要緊貼題目要求和文章主旨；同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。2．請你根據(jù)上面五個問題的內(nèi)容及你的回答，結(jié)合以下提示，以“HowCanWeProtect

OurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。提示：1.謹(jǐn)慎交友。2.不參與打架斗毆。3.面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)。參考詞匯：1.

self-protection（自我保護(hù)）2.bully(n./v.欺凌）3.personalsafety（人身安全）4.haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗毆）HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture,doyouthinkso?【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，以“HowCanWeProtect

OurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，確定要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容。字?jǐn)?shù)80-100詞。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：在學(xué)校我們?nèi)绾伪Ｗo(hù)自己？幾乎每個學(xué)校都有欺負(fù)學(xué)校的行為。在我的學(xué)校里，我們有時(shí)會被欺負(fù)，一些學(xué)生會受到傷害，所以在學(xué)校欺負(fù)別人或被欺負(fù)對我們來說真的很不好。當(dāng)我們遇到校園欺凌的麻煩時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該阻止任何校園欺凌。例如，在發(fā)生欺凌行為之前，我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜。與他人交朋友時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該總是友好和樂于助人。以下是我關(guān)于制止學(xué)校欺負(fù)的一些想法。首先，我們將學(xué)習(xí)如何自我保護(hù)，因?yàn)槲覀兊娜松戆踩亲钪匾?。第二，我們要時(shí)刻與他人和睦相處，不能有任何暴力行為。最后，遵守校規(guī)也是避免學(xué)校欺負(fù)的一種方式。我希望將來學(xué)校里不會發(fā)生欺負(fù)學(xué)生的事，你這么認(rèn)為嗎？【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。寫作六步法：1.審題：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。2.抓住要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.擴(kuò)充句子：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯誤：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.謄寫作文：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。3．校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學(xué)生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不敢去學(xué)校，甚至?xí)霈F(xiàn)心理問題等嚴(yán)重后果。請仔細(xì)觀察下面的圖片，并根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇短文。提示：（1）Whatcanyouseeinthepicture？（2）Whatdoyouthinkofschoolbullying?（3）Whatwillyoudoifyouarebulliedoryouseesomebodyelsebeingbullied?要求：1、表達(dá)中必須包含所給提示要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；3、短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名和地名。參考詞匯：mentalhealthproblems（心理問題）bullies（仗勢欺人者）Inthepicture,Icansee______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】

Inthepicture,Icanseetwogirlsarebullyingonegirl.Bullyingoftenoccursinschools.Inmyopinion,schoolbullyingisaseriousproblemthathasgotmoreandmoreattentioninsociety.Beingbulliedcanmakestudentsfeelscaredorupset.Somestudentsareafraidofgoingtoschool.Schoolbullyingcanevenleadtomoreseriousmentalhealthproblems.Sohowshouldwestopschoolbullying?IfIseesomebodybeingbulliedorIambullied,Iwilltelltheteachersormyparentsatonce.Itisnotagoodideatodoanybadthingstothebulliesonmyown.【詳解】1.題干解讀：觀察所給圖片，根據(jù)所給提示和要求寫一篇有關(guān)校園欺凌方面的短文，文中必須包含所給提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名和地名。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要是發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，提出處理方法，所以時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主。寫作時(shí)，可先描述圖片中的現(xiàn)象，再發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)以及處理方法。保證內(nèi)容完整、行文連貫、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、書寫規(guī)范。4．在日常生活中，人們會遇到各種安全問題，例如飲食、交通、防疫或校園欺凌（bullyv.）等問題。但有些同學(xué)不知道如何進(jìn)行自我保護(hù)。基于此，為了提高同學(xué)們的自我保護(hù)意識，請以“SelfProtection”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括:1.結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，談?wù)勛晕冶Ｗo(hù)的重要性。2.列舉生活中的安全問題（至少兩個方面），并分別提出合理化建議。寫作要求：1.語言流暢，層次清晰，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)100詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生本人的學(xué)校名稱和姓名。SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!【參考范文】SelfProtectionThesedays,peoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.Asstudents,wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedgoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough,wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Also,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Thesethreesuggestionsaregoodforustoprotectourselves.Weshouldadoptthesesuggestionstoprotectourselves.Inshort,selfprotectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求結(jié)合生活實(shí)際講述自我保護(hù)的重要性，講述自我保護(hù)的一些建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，講述自我保護(hù)的重要性及自我保護(hù)的一些建議，要敘述完整，條理清晰。二、材料作文5．為配合掃黑除惡專項(xiàng)整治工作，杜絕校園欺凌，打造和諧安定校園，作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語作文。提示：1.尊敬老師（respecttheteachers），努力學(xué)習(xí)。2.與同學(xué)融洽相處（getonwellwith），互相幫助。3.不要與他人吵架，不偷盜他人物品。4.遵守學(xué)校的規(guī)章制度（followtheschoolrules），不下河洗澡，不攜帶管制刀具（restrictedknives）。5.不要私自會見陌生人，遇險(xiǎn)應(yīng)報(bào)警。要求：1.語句通順，語意連貫。2.運(yùn)用以上提示詞，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.作文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。It’simportantforusstudentstohaveaharmoniousandstablecampus._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】It’simportantforusstudentstohaveaharmoniousandstablecampus.It’sgoodforourlifeandstudy.Asstudents,weshoulddosomethingtocreateaharmoniousandstablecampus.Firstly,weshouldrespecttheteachersandstudyhard.Secondly,weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates,andweshouldhelpeachother.Thirdly,weshouldnotfightwithothersorstealothers’things.What’smore,wemustfollowtheschoolrules.Wecan’tswimintheriversortakerestrictedknivestoschool.Lastly,weshouldnotmeetthestrangersalone.Andweshouldcallthepolicewhenweareindanger.It’sourdutytokeepourcampusharmoniousandstable.Let’sstartfromtoday.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)所給提示，寫一篇作文關(guān)于解決校園欺凌、打造和諧安定校園。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱采用第一人稱行文。寫作時(shí)涵蓋要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，適當(dāng)使用連詞使文章更加連貫。最后力求語句通順，無單詞語法錯誤。6．近來，校園暴力頻發(fā)，引起無數(shù)人關(guān)注。請你根據(jù)下列圖表和相關(guān)文字提示，以“Buildacivilizedschool”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)具體內(nèi)容現(xiàn)狀危害恐懼；厭學(xué)；自卑；措施國家：頒布法律；社會：呼吁學(xué)校和家庭關(guān)注生命教育和心理教育；個人：就如何從自己做起，正確處理和同學(xué)的關(guān)系，提出你的建議（至少兩點(diǎn)）。注意：1.短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；2.詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.短文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名等信息。4.參考詞匯：civilized文明的；psychologicaleducation心理教育；buly欺負(fù)（動詞）.BuildacivilizedschoolRecently,schoolbullyinghasbecomeaseriousproblem._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】例文BuildacivilizedschoolRecently,schoolbullyinghasbecomeaseriousproblem.15.6percentofstudentsarebulliedatschooland30.2ofthestudentsseeothersbullied.41%ofthevictimschoosetotellthepolice,teachersandparentsabouttheirsituation,while51%ofthemchoosetokeepsilent.Schoolbullyinghasagreatimpactonstudents.Theywillbecometiredofstudyingandbeafraidofanything.Andtheywillalsofeelinferior.Inordertochangethesituation,wemusttakeactions.Firstofall,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstopunishthesepeoplewhobullyothers.What’smore,schoolsandparentsshouldpayattentiontolifeeducationandpsychologicaleducation.Themostimportantisthatstudentsshouldrealizetheharmofbullyingandtrytogetonwellwithother.Whenintrouble,asktheadultsforhelpimmediately.Ihopethroughworkingtogether,wewillbuildacivilizedschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要以“Buildacivilizedschool”為題根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇有關(guān)校園暴力的文章，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第三人稱為主。第一段主要描述校園暴力的現(xiàn)狀和危害；第二段講述為阻止校園暴力采取的措施；第三段表達(dá)希望。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。7．請你根據(jù)以下提示，以Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool為題，寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1．謹(jǐn)慎交友；2．不參與打架斗毆；3．面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。參考詞匯：self--protection(自我保護(hù))；bully(n.&v．欺凌)；personalsafety(人身安全)；haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗毆)Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】HowcanweprotectourselvesatschoolSchoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself--protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehaviors.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Howcanweprotectourselvesatschool”為題，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容，從謹(jǐn)慎交友、不參與打架斗毆、面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)等方面寫一篇短文；注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來展開寫作，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。三、講稿8．近日，“校園欺凌”