讀后續(xù)寫英文寫作比賽(2023.6全國新高考1卷)講義高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

真題再現(xiàn)

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,my

socialstudiesteacher(社會學(xué)科老師)

askedmeto

enterawritingcontest(參加寫作比賽),Isaidno

withoutthinking(未經(jīng)思考).Ididnotlovewriting.

MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonly

mysecondlanguage（我的第二語言）.Writingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperon

the

sinkingoftheTitanic（泰坦尼克號的沉沒）

by

actingoutaplay（表演劇本）,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.

Ifyou’rewillingto

applyyourself（努力工作）,Ithinkyou

haveagoodshot（有很大機(jī)會）

atthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedto

giveitatry（試一試）.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775to

Lexington（萊克星頓）

to

warn（警告）

peoplethatBritishsoldierswereing.Mystorywould

estraightfromthehorse’smouth（此處意味著從馬的角度講述故事）.

Nota

brilliantidea（不是一個高明的想法）,but

funny,andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashe

spedthroughthenight(夜間狂飆，speedspedsped)?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?I

sympathized(同情）

immediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedto

quit（放棄）.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.I

checkedmyspelling（檢查拼寫）.Iaskedmyoldersisterto

correctmygrammar（糾正我的語法）.I

checkedout（借出）

ahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,

laughedoutloud（大聲笑了）

andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,

thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.（獲勝的念頭已經(jīng)變成了寫作的樂趣。如果我沒有獲勝，我也不在意）情節(jié)概述：本文講述了主人公在學(xué)校社會學(xué)科老師的要求下參與寫作比賽的故事。雖然主人公并不喜歡寫作，但通過老師的鼓勵和自己的努力，最終完成了有關(guān)雷弗爾騎馬的題目。在這個過程中，主人公面臨著語言難關(guān)和寫作的煩惱，曾想放棄，但通過不斷地嘗試和堅持，最終取得了成功。本文強(qiáng)調(diào)了努力和持之以恒的重要性，在成功之前，克服困難和持之以恒的精神是必不可少的。寫作指導(dǎo)

01.

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,

thereethenews."Congratulations!youwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontest."mydeskmaterushedtomudeskwitheyesglisteningexcitement.Uponhearingthisamazingnews,Iwasstuckdumbwithsurprise.ThethunderousapplauseandheartfeltblessingsfrommyfellowstudentsconfirmedwhatIheard

tobetrue.Finallycamethebigday!

Withprizecupinonehandandawardandcertificateinotherhand,awaveofgratitudetomyteacherrosefromthebottomofmyheart.

Intheabsenceof

without

myteacher'sinspiration,Icantmakesucharemarkableachievement.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation."Unbelievable!Imadeit！

Iexclaimed，pleasedbeyonddescription.

HegrinnedfromeartoearasIshowedhimthetrophy.

“AswhatIsaidifyouarewillingtoapplyyourselfintowritingyou'lleventuallymake

it!"Wheneverlooking

backonthisincident.Ifeelextremelygratefultohim.

JustlikeRevere'shorse,nomatter

howdifficultthechallengesIfaced

were,Ialways

keptgoingandnevergiveup!02.

A

fewweekslater.whenIalmostforgetthe

contest,

thereethenews.AssoonasI

walkedintotheclassroom.IwasinformedthatIhadwonthefirstprizeandanawardpresentationwouldbeheldinthreedays.Hearingthis

greatnews,Iwasstuckdumbwithsurpriseandthenwildwithjoy.Finallyethebigday

!whenIwasreallyonthestageandawardedthefirstprize,my

eyesshinedwithpuredelightandpride.Myclassmatesandsocialteachersatunderthestageandcheeredwarmly.

I

wenttomy

teacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

ThenIwentuptohimandsaidsincerely"IneverthoughtIcouldactuallydoitand

nowIseemtofallinlovewithwriting.""Congratulations!

"herepliedseriously"I

Knowhowtalentedyouareandhowhardyou'veworkedtomanageit.Youareboundtobesuccessfulsoonerandlaterinmyeyes.

Sincethen,

hiswordsjustlikealighthouseinthemist,wouldalways

lightinmysky.03.

Afewweekslater,whenIalmost

forgetthecontest,therecamethenews.ItwasexhilaratedtolearnthatIhadgainedthefirstprizeandanawardceremonywouldbeheldinthreedays.Immediately,thunderousapplauseresoundedfromtheclassmates,

Istunnedbythenews.

While

gavingmyacceptancespeech,Iwas

seemlyontheninecloud.

Isteppedontothepodiumwithatroubledheartanddeliveredmymostsincerewords.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.AssoonasIwalkedintotheteacher'soffice,thevoiceofcongratulationsfrommy

teacherrangout.Hardworks

alwayspayoff,I'mgladtoseethefruitsofyourhardwork.Iboweddeeplytotheteacherwithgratitude"Ifitweren'tforyourtrust,IbelieveIwouldn'thavehadsuchasuccessfuloute!”Wordsfailedto

conveymygratitudetohim.

Itwashewhomademerealizenothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.04.

Afewweekslater,whenIolmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenewsMy

classmatescongratulatedmethatIwonthesecondprizeatthewritingcontest,mydeskmaterushedtomydeskwitheyesglistening

excitementandMyjawdroppedtotheflooratthattime.Finallycamethebigday!Whenmy

headmasterannouncedthatIwonthesecondprize,myheartpounding

widelyinmy

chest.TherewasastormofapplausewhenIwentontheplatform.Ilookedatmyprise

andsmiledwithrelief.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeafterawardpresentation.Withouthesitation，Iexclaimed,"Unbelievable!Imadeit!Myteachersaid:"Youdidagoodjob!AswhatIsaid,ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourselfintowriting,you'lleventuallydoit!Ithinkyoulikethehorsethatinyourstory!Anditleadyoutowontheprize.Keepgoingandyouwillwonthefirstprizenexttime!”

OnlythendidIrealizedthatitwaspersistencethatcanconquerwhateverdifficultiescameintheway!05.

Afewweekslater,

whenIalmostforgetthecontest,therecamethenews.ItwasexhilaratedtolearnthatIhadgainedthefirstprize.Ifeltmyheartracingandmy

bloodrushing.Attheawardceremony，Imountedthestageagainstwidecheersandthunderousapplausewhenmynamewasannounced.Joywaswellingupandsurgingthroughmyheart.Iheldtrophyandcanhardlywaittosharethedelightwithmyteacher.

Iwenttomyteachers'officeaftertheawardpresentation.“Iwonthefirstprize!”Ishowedmycertificatetohim.

Helookedatthetrophy,withhislips

curvinga

smile."Congratulations!"hesaid,"

Itisyoureffortsthatcountmost.”

Fromthenon，IbegantoburymyselfinEnglishaswellasEnglishwriting,forever

gratefultomyteacher

whoalwaysheldroseswitheverlastingfragrance.06Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Thenewsjoltedmefrommydailyroutine.Ihadwonthecontest.anoutethatseemedasunlikelyasahorsepenningahistoricaltale.Thewasmadeduring，radiobroadcastonmorningannouncementcampus,andawaveofapplausewashedovermelikeawarmembrace.Iwasstunned,heartracingwithandentedprideanddisbelief.Thevictorywasitservedfarbeyondasproofofmyteacher'sfaithinmyabilitiesandtheuntappedpotentialthatIhaddiscoveredwithinmyself.幾周后，當(dāng)我?guī)缀跬浟四谴伪荣悤r，一個消息打破了我的日常生活，讓我震驚不已.我贏得了那場比賽，這個結(jié)果就像馬撰寫歷史故事一樣不可思議。公告是在早晨的校園廣播中宣布的，一陣聲像溫暖的擁抱一樣涌向我。我感到震驚，心跳加速，充滿了前所未有的自豪感和懷疑不相信。這次勝利遠(yuǎn)不僅僅只是收到認(rèn)可，它是對那位信任我的老師，以及我在自己內(nèi)心發(fā)現(xiàn)的未開發(fā)潛能的證明。

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