商務(wù)英語(yǔ)論文-Study on the Translation of Cosmetic Instructions from the Perspective of Skopos Theory-A Case Study of L'Oreal

ChapterOneIntroductionDuetothedifferencebetweenEnglishandChineselanguageandculture,agoodcosmeticinstructionInstructionsmaynotmeetthetasteofthetargetlanguagereader,especiallyifthetranslatorisrigidlyclingingtotheformoftheoriginalwork,sothestudyoftranslationTheoryissignificant.The

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practice.Throughthistranslationpractice,theauthorhopestomakeupforthelackofEnglishtoChinesetranslationofcosmeticsinstructions,andtheauthorhasstandardizedandimproveditsEnglishtoChinese,andalsohopestoplayaroleinthetranslationoftheInstructionstext.Inviewofthesedifficultiesandputforwardcorrespondingcountermeasures,thistranslationpracticereportiswrittenonthisbasis,hopingthattheresearchresultscanprovidesometranslationstrategiesandmethodsforthetranslationofrelevanttexts.Inthe21stcentury,cosmeticshavedevelopedrapidly,sotranslatingEnglishcosmeticinstructionsisextremelyimportant,andthestudyofSkoposTheoryhasmadegreatcontributionstoit.Judgingfromthecurrentresearchsituation,peoplearestudyingSkopostranslationmoreandmore.Withthedeepeningoftheeconomy,moreandmoretranslationsareconstantlyproposed.TherearemanystudiesonSkoposTheoryinChina,suchasZhouMengzhen's"SkoposTheory""Xindaya""In

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them.that"SkoposTheoryisamultivariatetheoreticalsystemoftranslationstandardsdominatedbySkoposlaw."YanFu's'Xindaya'ismoreabstractandvaguewithacertainsubjectiveTheory,andthetwotheorieshavesimilaritiesinthepursuitoffidelity,thecoherenceoftranslation,andtheobservanceofreader'sadaptability,buttheyareintermsoftheoreticalsystematic,translationstandards,andtranslatorstatus.ItisalsoworthpayingattentiontoresearchontheTheoryoftranslationSkoposintranslationeducationsuchasTaoYoulan's"ConstructionofEnglish-Chinese-Chinese-EnglishTranslationTextbooksfromthePerspectiveofTranslationSkoposTheory"(2006),YangPing'sFrom

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teaching(TheauthorusestranslationSkoposTheorytostudydomestictranslationteaching.analyzedandmadeanumberofrecommendations).Sinceitsinception,theTheoryhasattractedconsiderableattentioninthetranslationcommunity,includinginMonaBaker&2004EncyclopediaofRoutledge'stranslationstudies,theSKOBISTheoryanditsrelatedconceptsinMarkShuttleworth&MoniaCowie,dictionaryofTranslation,SkoposTheoryandrelatedconceptsinfunctionalisttranslationarealsoincluded.TherearemanyotherimportantworksonthisTheory,suchasNODS's2001book“PurposefulBehavior:AnanalyticalTheoryoffunctionaltranslationtranslatedintopurposefulactivities:aninterpretationofthefunctionalapproach”,whichisbyfarthemostrepresentativeanddetailedbook.L'Oréalisawell-knownenterprise,itmainlyincludesbeautyandhairdressingtwotypesofsalesindustry,itsproductsarelovedbythemajorityofconsumers.Amongthem,thebeautystudiedinthispaperhastheInstructionsofitsproduct,andtheinstructionisanalyzedfromtheperspectiveofSkoposTheory.ThispaperaimstostudythetranslationstrategyofcosmeticinstructionsfromtheperspectiveofSkoposTheory.ItmainlyintroducesthethreeprinciplesofSkoposTheoryandtranslationmethods,includingtheprinciplesofpurpose,coherence,faithfulness,andtranslationmethodssuchasliteraltranslation,paraphrasing,provincialtranslation,andaddition.ThetranslationoftheL'OréalInstructionsisanalyzedthroughtheabove.ChapterTwoAnOverviewofSkoposTheory2.1TheConceptofSkoposTheoryTranslationalSkoposTheory(SkoposTheory)isthecoreofGermanfunctionalistTheory,developedbyHans.Vemeer,arepresentativeoftheGermanfunctionalists,inthelate70softhe20thcenturyperiodfounded.ThewordSkoposisofGreekoriginandmeanspurpose.Vermeerbelievedthattranslationisapurposefulactofsatisfyinghumanneeds.Accordingtotheexpectedfunctionofthetranslation,thetranslationfunctioncanbewellrealized.ChristianeNordinheritedanddevelopedVermeer'sTheoryasarepresentativeofthesecondgenerationofSkoposTheory.Nordsystematicallysummarizestheideasoffunctionalisminthebook"PurposefulBehavior:AnAnalysisofFunctionalTranslationTheory"andanswersvariouscriticismsoffunctionaltranslationTheory.Inviewoftheshortcomings,theprincipleof"functionality+loyalty"isproposed.Translationismainlyakindofhumandailylifecommunication,sothepurposeoftheactoftranslationdeterminesitstranslationprocess,thatis,"theendjustifiesthemeans"Nord2001:29,themethodoftranslationmustbedecidedaccordingtothepurposeofthetranslation.Accordingtoonestudy,"TranslationSkoposTheory.From

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orientationtheproductionoftranslatedtextsinwhichmultiplefactorsinteract.(TangYujie,2008).2.2TheThreePrinciplesofSkoposTheoryVermeer'sSkoposTheoryoftranslationhasthreeprinciples.Therearethreeprinciples.ThefirstprincipleistheScoposprinciple.ThemaintaskoftheScoopsprincipleistobefidelity.Amongthem,thefirstprincipleistheprincipleofend,theprincipleofcoherenceandtheprincipleoffidelitybelongtothestatusofobedience,andtheprincipleoffidelityisaccordancetotheprincipleofcoherence,andthefirstprinciplefollowedbyalltranslationsisthe"principleofend".2.2.1PrincipleofPurposeTheprincipleofpurposemeansthattranslationshouldbebasedontheaudienceofthetargettext,theircultureandcontext,andthetranslationactivitiesshouldbecarriedoutaccordingtotheexpectationsofthetargetlanguagereaders.Therefore,inthegivencontext,thetranslatorshouldbeclearaboutthespecificpurposeofthetranslation,andwhethertotakealiteraltranslationoraparaphrasedtranslation,orsomewhereinbetween,isdeterminedaccordingtothespecificpurpose.Inalltranslationactivities,the"purposeprinciple"isthefirstprincipletobefollowed,andtheentireprocessoftranslationbehaviorisdeterminedbythepurposeitisintendedtoachieve,thatis,the"resultdeterminationmethod"(Nord,2001).2.2.2PrincipleofCoherenceTheprincipleofcoherencereferstothecriterionofcontextualcoherence.Theprincipleofcoherence,thatis,consistencywithinthetext,requiresthatthetranslationbeconsistentwithinthelanguage,sothatthetranslationhasmeaning,andtheexpressionofthetranslationneedstobefluentandfluent,inlinewiththerecipient'slinguistichabitsandlinguisticlogic.2.2.3PrincipleofFidelityThedegreeandformoffidelitydecidesthepurposeofthetranslationandthetranslator'sknowledgeofthetranslation,andtheprincipleoffidelityservestoachievethepurposeofthetranslation.Itisworthmentioningthatthefaithfulnessemphasizedhereisdifferentfromthepreviousconceptof"faithfulness",andintheSkoposprincipleoffaithfulness,thedegreeandformoffidelitychangewiththepurpose,dependingonthepurposeofeachtranslation.Thepurposeoftranslationisusuallydividedintothreetypes:thebasictargetofthetranslator,thecommunicativetargetofthetranslation,andthetargetofusingaspecialmeansoftranslation.ChapterThreeTranslationAnalysisofL'OréalCosmeticsInstructionsunderGuidanceofSkoposTheoryCosmeticinstructionsarepracticalstyleswrittenbymanufacturersinordertointroduceproductstoconsumersanddescribetheproductfunctions,mainingredients,methodsofuse,andproductiondatesofcosmetics.TheultimatepurposeoftheChinesetranslationofcosmeticinstructionsistopromotethesalesofcosmeticsandfacilitatetheuseofconsumers.Thepurposeoftranslationdeterminesthetranslationbehaviorandtranslationstrategy,thepurposeoftranslationdeterminesthemeansoftranslation,anditcanalsobesaidthatthewholeprocessofthepurposeoftranslationofcosmeticinstructions.At

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Chinese.ThischapteranalyzesL'OréalinstructionsfromtheperspectiveofSkopostranslationprinciplesandtranslationmethods.3.1FunctionsofL'OréalCosmeticsInstructionsTranslationunderSkoposTheoryGuidanceFromtheperspectiveofSkoposTheory,anyTheoryofcosmeticInstructionstranslationisonlyonpaperifitcannotbecombinedwithpractice,andSkoposTheoryisaverypracticalTheory,andtheprincipleoffunctionalpurposeandfidelityofitstextisusedforguidingthetranslationofEnglishcosmeticoperation.Onlycosmeticinstructionsareconcerned,itsmainpurposeistwofold:oneistointroduceconsumerstothebasicinformationoftheproductsuchasingredients,characteristics,efficacyandusemethods;Ontheotherhand,theintroductionofproductinformationisaccompaniedbyadvertisingelementstoarousethereader'sinterestandpurchasetheproduct.Butitisdifferentfromotherpracticalgenresbecauseitrequiresbothaccuracyandconcisenessofthetext,aswellasartistry,whichinturnstimulatespeople'sdesiretobuy.AccordingtotheBritishtranslationtheoristPeterNewmark'sdivisionoflanguagefunctions,combinedwiththepurposeofcosmeticinstructions,thereare3functions:1、informativefunction:conveyinginformation;2、aestheticfunction:makingthesensespleasant;3、callingfunction:Enablesthereadertorespondasdesiredbythetext.3.1.1InformationFunctionTheinformationfunctionoftranslationmainlyreferstothetruthfultransmissionofallinformationintheproductInstructionsthroughtranslation,whichhastheroleofexplainingandexplaining，thatis,accuratelydescribesthecomposition,characteristics,purposeanduseoftheproduct.ThefollowingisananalysisofthetranslationoftheL'OréalBlackGoldEssenceInstructionsfromtheperspectiveofinformationfunction:(i)[L'OrealBlackGoldEssence]isabottleofsynergisticanti-agingessencecontaining10%BosePROandLongtruffle,whichcanstimulatethegrowthofcollagen,lift,tighten,lightlinesandrejuvenatetheskin.Step1:Takeanappropriateamountofblackgoldessenceanddropitonthepalm;Step2:Kneadrevitalizingexpansiveluxuryingredientsgentlyinthepalm;Step3:Signalliftrevitalizing;Step4:Fromthefaceandneck,fadenecklines.譯文：【歐萊雅黑金精華】是一瓶蘊(yùn)含10%玻色因PRO和長(zhǎng)盛松露的協(xié)同抗老化精華，可刺激膠原蛋白生長(zhǎng)，提拉·緊致·淡紋、煥活肌膚年輕狀態(tài)。黑金奢養(yǎng)煥膚步驟：步驟1：取適量黑金精華滴于掌心;步驟2:于掌心輕揉煥活矜奢成分;步驟3:信號(hào)式提拉煥新；步驟4：由面及頸，淡褪頸紋。Analysis:ThroughtheanalysisofthetranslationofL'Oréalserum,alltheinformationaboutthefunctionofcosmeticsisdisplayedindetail,suchasdosage,timing,frequencyandotherusagemethods,aswellastheingredients,parameters,contentandotherinformationdata.3.1.2AestheticFunctionWhentranslatingcosmeticsinstructions,itissignificanttofaithfullyconveytheinformationoftheproduct,butalsorequireelegantandgenerouslanguage,fullofemotionalcolor,andempatheticeffect,soastostimulateconsumers'desiretobuy.Thereaderderivestheenjoymentofbeautyfromthetextdescriptionofthetranslation,producespleasantsensationsandimaginesandfeelsthebeautyoftheproductitself.ThefollowingisananalysisofthetranslationoftheinstructionsforL'Oréal'stwosmallhoneypotcreamsfromtheperspectiveofaestheticfunction:(ii)Thishoneypot(lightversion)willbe"Manukanectar"and"liquidgoldfourwinpeptide"surprisefusion,bettertextureabsorptiondoesnotrollmuddoesnotsuppressacne,butcanensurethatthecoreingredientsaddedconcentrationdoesnotreduce,istheoilskin,skinlovecream.Thishoneypot(lightversion)willbe"Manukanectar"and"liquidgoldfourwinpeptide"surprisefusion,bettertextureabsorptiondoesnotrollmuddoesnotsuppressacne,butcanensurethatthecoreingredientsaddedconcentrationdoesnotreduce,istheoilskin,skinlovecreamoh譯文：這款小蜜罐(滋潤(rùn)版)采用“麥盧卡花蜜”與“液體黃金四勝肽”相結(jié)合，讓肌膚層層穿香，觸膚即融，層層滋養(yǎng)成膜鎖水，輕松get“蜜光肌”透現(xiàn)年輕活力~這款小蜜罐(輕盈版)將“麥盧卡花蜜”與“液體黃金四勝肽”驚喜融合，質(zhì)地更好吸收不搓泥不悶痘，但卻能保證核心成分添加濃度不降低，是混油皮、油皮的摯愛(ài)面霜哦Analysis:Theoriginalsentencestructureissmooth,andmostEnglishlongsentencesareused,andthetranslatedtextcaterstotheChineseexpressionhabits.Inaddition,inthechoiceofwords,thetranslationalsopaysattentiontoconveyingbeauty.SincethecosmeticsInstructionshastheeffectofadvertisingwhileintroducingtheproduct,thetranslationusessuchas"skinlayerbylayer","touchtheskinandmelt","Adjectiveswithbeautifulconnotations,suchas"honeyskin",showthebeautyofthiscosmetics.Whenreading,thesebeautifulwordstendtotouchwomen'sloveofbeautyandmakethemfeelpleasant.Itbringsabeautifulmoodtomindandstronglyattractswomentotrytheefficacyoftheproduct.3.1.3CallfunctionTheappealfunctionreferstotheroleplayedbytranslationindisseminatingappealstothepublic.Consumerscanmaketheresponseexpectedbytheoriginaltext;BemotivatedbytheinstructionInstructionstotakeconsumeraction.Therefore,thecallfunctionistheincentivesupportforexportingcosmeticlabels,aswellastheoriginalmotivationforre-consumptionaction,andstronglyattractswomentotrytheefficacyoftheproduct.TheinformationfunctionandaestheticfunctionoftheoriginaltextarereproducedinthetranslationoftheInstructions,whichnaturallyhasthecallingfunctionoftheoriginaltext,andtheverbuseoftheinstructionbookisveryparticular.ThefollowingisananalysisofthetranslationofL'OréalEyeCreaminstructionsfromtheperspectiveofcallfunction:(iii)BosinsolutionconcentratesBosinPRO,justlikeregularjuiceVSjuiceconcentrate.Morepureandefficient.Thesameskindepthmoreeffectiveabsorption.+119%collagensynthesispower,effectivelyfilltheskinaroundtheeyes.Aroundtheeyeantiaging5repeatedingredientsfinelines,dark,allimprove.Foborin,hyaluronicacid,snakevenomandskin.Visiblelines,dynamiclines,potentiallinescanbelight.Goodeyecreamcannotonlylightlines,newicesensemassageheadwipeapress,fadebubbleeyes.Calmenough,coolenoughandsnugenoughforsensitivemuscles.Icesensingtechnologyhyperboloiddesign.Sensitivemusclefriendlyandreassuringformula,lightcreamtextureeasytoabsorbnongreasy.譯文：玻色因溶液濃縮玻色因PRO，就像普通果汁VS濃縮果汁。更精純更高效，同樣肌膚深度更多有效吸收。+119%膠原蛋白合成力，有效充盈眼周肌膚。眼周抗老5重復(fù)配成分細(xì)紋、暗沉，統(tǒng)統(tǒng)改善。孚玻因、玻尿酸、類(lèi)蛇毒勝膚?？梢?jiàn)紋、動(dòng)態(tài)紋、潛在紋都能淡。好眼霜不止能淡紋，全新冰感按摩頭抹一按，淡化泡泡眼。夠安心、夠清涼、夠貼合，敏感肌可用。冰感技術(shù)雙曲面設(shè)計(jì)。敏感肌友好安心配方，輕盈乳霜質(zhì)地好吸收不油膩。Analysis:Thisparagraphemphasizesthepowerfuleffectofcosmeticsthroughwordssuchaseffective,improve,Calmenough,coolenoughandsnugenough,Sensitivemusclefriendly,easytoabsorbnongreasyattractingtheattentionoffemaleconsumers,therebyarousingconsumers'desiretobuyproductsandcallingforpurchases.3.1.4InterculturalCommunicationFunctionAnotherimportantaspectofthetranslationofcosmeticbrochuresisthatitcanpromoteculturalexchangesbetweenChinaandtheWest.Itcanallowthetranslationrecipienttoresonateonthebasisoffullygraspingtheproductinformation,andbecomeanimportantwayofculturalcommunication.ThefollowingisananalysisofthetranslationofL'Oréal'sproductstrategybrochurefromtheperspectiveofcross-culturalcommunicationfunction:(iv)L'OrealGrouphasalwaysattachedgreatimportancetoscientificresearchandinnovation.Itinvests3.4%ofitsannualturnoverinscientificresearchandthedevelopmentofnewproducts.SinceitsentryintoChinain1997,L'OrealGrouphasdevelopedmakeupandskincareproductssuitableforChinesewomenaccordingtothecharacteristicsofAsianwomen.OnSeptember23,2005,L'OrealGroupofficiallyopeneditsfirstR&DcenterinChinainShanghai.Thisisthe14thR&DcenterofL'OrealGroupintheworld,whichwillspecializeintheresearchanddevelopmentofChineserawmaterialsandformulations.InChina,whetheritishigh-endfashionmagazines,butalsobuildingTV;WhetheritisthemostprosperousshoppingmallsinChina'smajorcities,orthewomen'schannelsofSinaandSohu;WhetheritisChinesejournalistsattendingtheCannesFilmFestivalorsponsoringeventssuchasgoldenRoosterandstylefashion,L'OrealParisandothersimilarbrandscanattractpeople'sattentionandshowthefashionstyleconveyedbythebrand.譯文：歐萊雅集團(tuán)一向?qū)τ诋a(chǎn)品的研究和創(chuàng)新方面非常的重視，此外他還將營(yíng)業(yè)額的3.4%投入到了科學(xué)研究和新產(chǎn)品的開(kāi)發(fā)，歐萊雅品牌自從在中國(guó)上市之后他根據(jù)了亞洲女性的特點(diǎn)然后開(kāi)發(fā)出了一些彩妝護(hù)膚品，此外歐萊雅集團(tuán)還在上海開(kāi)設(shè)了第1家的研究中心，這也是歐萊雅在全國(guó)以及世界上第14個(gè)研發(fā)中心，用于原材料和配方的研發(fā)，在中國(guó)無(wú)論是你從雜志廣告還是電視上，從國(guó)內(nèi)的各大城市的繁華的市場(chǎng)，以及一些商業(yè)頻道，例如新浪無(wú)論是從電影節(jié)中的中國(guó)記者還是一些時(shí)尚活動(dòng)歐萊雅品牌，都能夠吸引人的眼球，傳達(dá)出時(shí)尚的理念。Analysis:ThroughthetranslationandanalysisofL'Oréal'sproductstrategy,ithighlightstheimportanceofL'Oréalproductstoculturalcommunicationintheworld,anditispreciselybecauseofitscontinuousimprovementofinternationalinfluencethatL'Oréalwillbefavoredbysomanyconsumers.3.2MethodsofL'OréalCosmeticsInstructionsTranslationunderSkoposTheoryGuidanceGenerallyspeaking,themainpurposeofcosmeticinstructionsistwofold:oneistointroducetheingredients,properties,characteristicsandmethodsofuseoftheproducttoconsumers;Ontheotherhand,thepresentationalsohasanadvertisingcomponent.Productintroductionandadvertisingaretwoseparatecategories,butChineseproductintroductionisoftencombinedwithadvertising,andtheintroductionisaccompaniedbyadvertisingtoarousereaders'interestandpurchaseproducts.Cosmeticsinstructionsarealsolikeotherpracticalstyles,whileaccuratelyandfullyconveyingproductinformation,theyrequireconcise,focused,andlayeredlanguage,reflectingaconciseandbrightbeauty.Butitisdifferentfromotherpracticalstylesbecauseitrequiresbothaccuraterefinementandartistry.Thatis,throughtheartistryoflanguageandwritingitself,peoplearegivenafeelingofbeauty.Agoodtranslationisagoodadvertisementthatdrivespeople'spurchases.Afewexamplesareanalyzedbelow.Duetosomedifferencesbetweenthesourcelanguageandthetargetlanguage,suchasdifferentlanguagestructure,stylisticstyle,historicalandculturalfactors,etc.,literaltranslationandparaphrasinghavetheirownstrengthsandweaknessesinpracticalapplication.Literaltranslationisoftenpreferredbecauseitstrictlyfollowsthepatternoftheoriginaltextandfullyreproducestheform,contentandstyleoftheoriginaltext.Paraphrasingisanotherindispensablemajortranslationmethod.Paraphrasingfocusesonpreservingtheessenceoftheoriginaltext,pursuingthefluencyandnaturalnessofthetranslation,andnotonmaintainingtheintegrityoftheoriginalwording.Literaltranslationandparaphrasing,astwobasictranslationmethods,playapivotalroleintranslation.3.2.1LiteralTranslationBasedonPrincipleofPurposePrincipleofpurposereferstofreetranslation,inwhichsomewordscanbeaddedintheprocessoftranslation.Toexpandtheexistingpartandfurthersupplementtheexplanationsoastomaketheexpressionmoreinlinewithlocalexpressionhabitsandcontext.Throughadditionaltranslation,onepurposeistopromoteintegrityofthegrammaticalstructureofthetranslatedtext,makethatthemeaningofthetranslatedtextisclear.Literaltranslationreferstotheone-to-onetranslationoftheoriginaltextword-for-word.Theso-calledliteraltranslationmeansthatword-to-wordtranslationpaysattentiontothemeaningofthe

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characteristics。Paraphrasingrequiresthatthetranslatedtextcorrectlyexpressesthecontentoftheoriginaltext,butitcannotbelimitedtotheformoftheoriginaltext.(ZhangPeiji)ThefollowingisananalysisofthetranslationofL'Oréalproductinstructionbyliteraltranslationbasedonprincipleofpurpose:(v)L'OrealParisisundoubtedlyoneofthemostsuccessfulbrandsinthecosmeticsindustry,whichisknownasthe"hopeinabottle"industry.Tosomeextent,cosmeticscompaniesarebrandmanagementcompanies."OurvisionforL'OrealParisistobeaFrenchbrand.ShecomesfromFrance,isthefoundingbrandofL'OrealGroup,thepricepositioningismediumtoupper,thepackaging,textureandfeelingareveryhigh-grade.Whatwewanttobringtoconsumersis'luxurywithinreach.'"SaidChengLei,publicrelationsmanagerofL'OrealGroup'smasscosmeticsdepartment.譯文：化妝品行業(yè)被稱(chēng)為是“把希望放在瓶子里”的行業(yè)，化妝品公司是品牌管理公司，巴黎歐萊雅就是這個(gè)行業(yè)里最成功的品牌之一?！拔覀儗?duì)巴黎歐萊雅的定位是：一個(gè)充滿(mǎn)法蘭西情懷的品牌。她來(lái)自于法國(guó)，是歐萊雅集團(tuán)的創(chuàng)始品牌，價(jià)格定位，包裝、質(zhì)地都是非常高檔的。給消費(fèi)者帶來(lái)的是‘伸手可達(dá)到的奢華’。Analysis:Theliteraltranslationmethodonlyseekstoreflectthefinebeautyoftheoriginaltext,anddoesnotconsidertherulesofEnglishgrammar,whichisarepresentativeofthismethod,andthetranslationusingtheliteraltranslationmethodisoftenmisunderstoodasaliteraltranslation.Translate"hopeinabottle"into“把希望放在瓶子里”andtranslate'luxurywithinreach'into‘伸手可達(dá)到的奢華’.Thisinstructionattractstheattentionofconsumersbyintroducingandexplainingthecompany,soastoachievetheeffectofincreasingproductsales,andalsoreflectstheapplicationoftheprincipleofpurpose.3.2.2FreeTranslationBasedonPrincipleofCoherenceUndertheguidanceofthelawofcoherence,thetranslationusesnaturalizationstrategiesandword-addingtechniques,andafterskillfulprocessing,thetranslationfreesthetranslationfromtheshacklesoftheoriginallanguage.Thetranslationshouldbefluentinexpression,logicallyorderlyandclear,whileensuringcoherenceandconsistencywiththecultureoftherecipient,beingadoptedandunderstoodbythereaderinthecontextofthetargetlanguage,andbothreadableandacceptable,soastogeneratemeaninginthecommunicativecontextofthetargetlanguage.Freetranslationisamethodofmakingthetargettextidenticalwiththeoriginaltextinexpressingideasandlanguagefunctionsbymeansofdynamicequivalence.ThefollowingisananalysisofthetranslationofL'Oréalproductinstructionbyfreetranslationbasedonprincipleofcoherence:(vi)Withaccuratepositioningof"luxurywithinreach",strongproductresearchanddevelopmentasthebackground,launchalargenumberofnewproductseveryyear,supplementedbyacomprehensivepromotionstrategy,emphasizing"hands-onexperience",L'OrealParishasmaintainedexcellentresultsinChina,andhasbecomethedominantbrandofmanynewrich.L'OrealParisisundoubtedlyoneofthemostsuccessfulbrandsinthecosmeticsindustry,whichisknownasthe"hopeinabottle"industry.Tosomeextent,cosmeticscompaniesarebrandmanagementcompanies."OurvisionforL'OrealParisistobeaFrenchbrand.ShecomesfromFrance,isthefoundingbrandofL'OrealGroup,thepricepositioningismediumtoupper,thepackaging,textureandfeelingareveryhigh-grade.Whatwewanttobringtoconsumersis'luxurywithinreach.'"SaidChengLei,publicrelationsmanagerofL'OrealGroup'smasscosmeticsdepartment.譯文：巴黎歐萊雅以"奢華觸手可及"定位,強(qiáng)研發(fā)為背景,推新產(chǎn)品輔以全策,強(qiáng)以"躬身體驗(yàn)",巴黎歐萊雅持異績(jī)于中國(guó),為眾新富主品牌。巴黎歐萊雅無(wú)疑化妝品行業(yè)之品牌,謂之瓶中希望。自某種程度上言,化妝品公司者,品牌治公司也。巴黎歐萊雅者愿景法國(guó)品牌。自法國(guó)者,歐萊雅之始品牌,價(jià)定位為中上層,包裹手感甚高檔。所欲消費(fèi)者者,觸手可及之奢侈品也。"歐萊雅大眾化妝品部公關(guān)經(jīng)理程磊說(shuō)。Analysis:Paraphrasingusesadynamicequivalencemethod,amethodinwhichthetranslatedtextisidenticaltotheoriginaltextinexpressingideasandlinguisticfunctions.Translate"whichisknownasthe'hopeinabottle'industry"into“謂之瓶中希望”andtranslate'luxurywithinreach'into‘伸手可達(dá)到的奢華’.ThisinstructionintroducesthebackgroundoftheL'Oréalcompanythroughacoherentlanguagetranslationoftheproductmanual,reflectingtheapplicationoftheprincipleofcoherence.3.2.3OmissionBasedonPrincipleofFidelityThe

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languagetoavoidtranslationcumbersome.ThefollowingisananalysisofthetranslationofL'Oréalproductinstructionbyomissionbasedonprincipleoffidelity:(vii)L'OrealParisisoneofthefoundingbrandsofL'OrealGroup.L'OrealParisofferstrulycutting-edgeandqualityproductstopeoplewhocareabouttheirimage.Andthecommitmenttoinnovation,effectiveness,styleandexcellenceinexperienceisperfectlyencapsulatedintheideathatyoudeserveit.Stronginvestmentinscientificresearchandtechnologyprovidesgoodsupportforthecorevaluesofthebrand.譯文：歐萊雅作為歐萊雅品牌之一，向目標(biāo)人群提供，高質(zhì)量的產(chǎn)品。相信我們對(duì)這一廣告理念不陌生，你值得擁有對(duì)創(chuàng)新功效和風(fēng)格進(jìn)行體驗(yàn)，同時(shí)在科技和技術(shù)方面也提供了很大的支持。Analysis:Omissionmainlyincludeprovincialpronouns,provincialconjunctions,provincialarticlesandprovincialprepositions.Theomissionof"And"inthetranslationofthisparagraphistheembodimentoftheprovincialconjunction.Thisinstructiontranslatesthecosmeticleafletwithflowerywords,andatthesametimeitstranslationcontentissimilartoitsownmeaning,reflectingtheprincipleoffaithfulnessoftranslation.3.2.4AmplificationBasedonPrincipleofPurposeThePrincipleofPurposeofthediscoursehasaprofoundimpactonthereadabilityo