2021全國(guó)新高考卷讀后續(xù)寫（母親節(jié)禮物）和2016浙江卷（直升機(jī)救援）講義高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

2021全國(guó)新高考卷原文：AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.續(xù)寫:Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Para1父親要發(fā)火 情緒描寫 情緒的“外露” 父親了解情況后，沒有發(fā)火 動(dòng)作描寫 “動(dòng)作鏈” 父親和他們一起做早餐 動(dòng)作描寫 “立即行動(dòng)” 在父親的幫助下，早餐順利做好了! 動(dòng)作描寫 “動(dòng)作面” 他們非常開心 情緒描寫 “死里逃生” 句式1:Judgingfromsb.’svoice/eyes/expression/behavior,itwasevidentthatsb.wastrappedin+情緒從他的表情中判斷，顯眼看到臟亂之后，他將要發(fā)火情緒描寫句式：“從某人的聲音/眼神/表情/行為判斷，很明顯某人陷入了……之中?！盝udgingfromsb.’svoice/eyes/expression/behavior,itwasevidentthatsb.wastrappedin+情緒.1Judgingfromhisexpression,Itwasevidentthathewasabouttoexplodeafterseeingthemess.但是，讓他們寬慰的是，爸爸了解了他們的計(jì)劃后，彎腰，輕拍他們的肩膀并且說(shuō)：時(shí)間在我們這邊，讓我們一起做吧動(dòng)作鏈描寫句式：Havingdone...,sb.did...,did...anddid...2Buttotheirrelief,havinglearnedtheirplan,hekneltdown,pattedthemontheirshouldersandsaid,“Timeisonourside.Let'sdoittogether.”沒有絲毫猶豫，他們?cè)俅伍_始了他們的戰(zhàn)役句式：沒有絲毫的猶豫，某人……Withouttheslightesthesitation,sb.did...3Withouttheslightesthesitation,theystartedtheirbattleonceagain.不久后，擁有失敗的經(jīng)歷和額外的援手，早餐準(zhǔn)備好了，發(fā)出令人愉快的香味動(dòng)作面描寫：非謂語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)，非謂語(yǔ)4Beforelong,armedwiththeexperienceoffailureandanextrahelpinghand,thebreakfastwasready,givingoffpleasantsmell.5盡管筋疲力盡，他們的心里也充滿了快樂和自豪句式：“盡管某人又……又……，但是某人的內(nèi)心充滿了……”Adj.andadj.thoughsb.was,sb.'sheartwasfilledwithnothingelsebut....5.Exhaustedthoughtheywere,theirheartswerefilledwithnothingelsebutjoyandpride.Para2雙胞胎祝母親節(jié)日快樂 語(yǔ)言描寫 “先聞其聲” 母親非常驚喜! 心理描寫 “喜出望外” 環(huán)境描寫 “環(huán)境比喻” 母親注意到了Jeff的手 動(dòng)作+情緒 “如鯁在喉” 母親萬(wàn)分感動(dòng)! 情緒+動(dòng)作描寫 情緒的“升騰” “收尾點(diǎn)晴” “喃喃自語(yǔ)” 1母親節(jié)快樂，他們異口同聲地說(shuō)1“HappyMother’sDay!”Theyutteredthewordsinthesamebreath他們的媽媽絕對(duì)沒有想過(guò)他的一天會(huì)從一件溫暖的禮物開始句式：“某人絕不會(huì)料到……會(huì)如此……?！盉ynomeans/Undernocircumstanceshadsb.expectedsth.tobesoadj..2Undernocircumstanceshadtheirmotherexpectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.3食物的香味充滿了臥室，臥室好像魔術(shù)般的變成了世界上最可愛的地方“環(huán)境描寫”之“環(huán)境比喻”句式：“A充斥/點(diǎn)亮了B，好似魔法般，B變成了C?！疉filled/litupB,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintoC.3Thesmellofthefoodfilledthebedroom,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintothemostlovelyplaceintheworld.4但當(dāng)媽媽注意到Jeff的手時(shí)，他的喉嚨哽咽了“當(dāng)……，某人喉頭一緊?！盨b.'sthroattightenedwhen....4Butthen,themother'sthroattightenedwhenshenoticedJeff'shand.5她一下就理解了整件事情并且感覺到一股暖流涌上心頭并涌遍全身“某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈的……在內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌?！盨b.feltagreatsenseof+情緒+wellingupinsb.'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.5Sheunderstoodthewholethingatonceandfeltawarmcurrentwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.6她溫柔地抱住了雙胞胎6Shefondlygatheredthetwinsintoherarms.7“謝謝你，親愛的，謝謝”，這個(gè)世界上最幸福的媽媽不斷重復(fù)這些話7.“Thankyou,myhoney.Thankyou,”thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptrepeatingthesewords. 范文Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Judgingfromhisexpression,Itwasevidentthathewasabouttoexplodeafterseeingthemess.Buttotheirrelief,havinglearnedtheirplan,hekneltdown,pattedthemontheirshouldersandsaid,“Timeisonourside.Let'sdoittogether.”Withouttheslightesthesitation,theystartedtheirbattleonceagain.Beforelong,armedwiththeexperienceoffailureandanextrahelpinghand,thebreakfastwasready,givingoffpleasantsmell.Exhaustedthoughtheywere,theirheartswerefilledwithnothingelsebutjoyandpride.Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“HappyMother’sDay!”Theyutteredthewordsinthesamebreath.Undernocircumstanceshadtheirmotherexpectedherdaytostartwithsuchawarmgift.Thesmellofthefoodfilledthebedroom,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintothemostlovelyplaceintheworld.Butthen,themother'sthroattightenedwhenshenoticedJeff'shand.Sheunderstoodthewholethingatonceandfeltawarmcurrentwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.Shefondlygatheredthetwinsintoherarms.“Thankyou,myhoney.Thankyou,”thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptrepeatingthesewords. 2016浙江卷直升機(jī)救援1.環(huán)境描寫萬(wàn)能句式：Immediately,anabsolute+n.+ruledthe＋地點(diǎn)n。+andawaveof+情緒n.+sweptoversb.突然，一種絕對(duì)的。。?？刂屏?。。。，并且一波+情緒+席卷了某人Eg:Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforestandawaveofterrorsweptoverher.突然，絕對(duì)的黑暗控制了森林，一波恐懼感席卷了他2.動(dòng)作+心理描寫萬(wàn)能句式：One'sheartpoundingfiercelyandone'spalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldsb.that.(獨(dú)立主格）sb.心臟狂(fiercely)跳，手掌出汗，內(nèi)心有一個(gè)聲音告訴自己要Eg:Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldthatshehadtofindasafeplace.他的心臟狂(fiercely)跳，手掌出汗，內(nèi)心有一個(gè)聲音告訴自己要找一個(gè)安全的地方。萬(wàn)能句式：adj.andadi.assb.was,sb.didsth,doingsth.（非謂語(yǔ)）盡管又…又..，sb.依然做sth.Eg:Tiredandterrifiedasshewas,Janestruggledtoherfeet,tryingnottohaveabreakdownbothphysicallyandmentally.盡管她又累又害怕，Jane掙扎著站了起來(lái),盡量不讓身心都崩潰。3.語(yǔ)言描寫萬(wàn)能句式：Luckily/Fortunately,itdidn'ttakelongbeforesb.did...Eg:Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.幸運(yùn)的是，不久后他就找到了一個(gè)洞穴。萬(wàn)能句式：sighingwithrellief,shesensedaglimmerofandfeltasifsth.hadbeendoingandsaying.如釋重負(fù)地嘆了口氣sb.感覺到了一絲(aglimmerof),sb.感覺好像sth.在對(duì)他做什么，并且說(shuō)，“…”Eg:Sighingwithrelief,shesensedaglimmerofhopeandfeltasifthecavehadbeenfortingherandsaying,"ein,youmustbeexhausted!"他感覺到一絲希望，感覺似乎這個(gè)山洞在安慰他，并對(duì)他說(shuō)“快進(jìn)來(lái)，你一定很累?！?.絲滑連接二段首萬(wàn)能句式：with…,sbdid…，+非限制定從伴隨著＋一種狀態(tài)，sb.做了?，非限定從Eg:Withthat,shewenttosleep,inwhosedreamherhusbandkeptherpany.隨著發(fā)生的一切，她進(jìn)入了夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng)，在她的(inwhose)的夢(mèng)里,他的丈夫陪伴著他新的一天來(lái)了從…判斷來(lái)看，很顯然sb.依舊被困于(betrappedin)…（無(wú)助）萬(wàn)能句式：Judgingfromthe，itwasevidentthatsb.wasstilltrappedin(withoutanyhelp).sb.wasatalosswhattodo.Eg:Judgingfromthequietsurrounding,itwasevidentthatJanewasstilltrappedintheforestwithoutanyoneingtotherescue.轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)出現(xiàn)萬(wàn)能句式：Itsuddenlydawnedonsb.thatsb.shoulddo...Eg:Itsuddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.萬(wàn)能句式：Toone'sgreat_______令sb.＋情緒n./surprise/delight（高興）?Tohergreatjoy,itdidn'ttakeherlongtospotsuchaplaceandsheheardthedeafeningnoiseingcloser.救援來(lái)啦！萬(wàn)能句式：Seeing/Hearingsth,sb.feltagreatsenseof+情緒+wellingupinsb'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.Eg:Lookingupandseeingahelicopter,Janefeltagreatsenseofexcitementwel