Unit+4+Looking+good,+feeling+good+Integrated+skills高中英語牛津譯林版(2020)必修第一冊+

Integratedskills(Ⅱ)Expressingyouropinionaboutplasticsurgery

Book1Unit4Lookinggood,feelinggoodLearningaims

Learningaims★

SummarizethefeaturesofthePREstructure;★Writeanargumentessaytoexpressyouropinionon

“plasticsurgery”;★

Developarightsenseandvalueofbeauty.

Lead-in

Recently,Jennifer’sclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgoondietstoloseweight.Laura,Jennifer’sclassmates,wroteanarticlewheresheexpressedheropinionaboutdieting.

Inordertokeepaslimfigureandtobemoreattractiveinappearance,

some

teenagers,especiallygirls,wouldliketoloseweightbyskippingmeals.Inmyopinion,dietingisnotgoodforthem.First,dietingisharmfultoteenagers’health.

Forexample,ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Withmuchpressurefromstudy,teenagersneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudy.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Asanoldsayinggoes,‘Healthispriceless’.Ibelievethatdietingisnotadvisableforteenagers.Let’sexplore

Isdietinggoodorbad?

Inordertokeepaslimfigureandtobemoreattractiveinappearance,

some

teenagers,especiallygirls,wouldliketoloseweightbyskippingmeals.Inmyopinion,dietingisnotgoodforthem.Let’sexplore

1.WhatisLaura’sopinionaboutdieting?1.觀點明確：不能模棱兩可。2.時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主3.人稱：第一人稱或第三人稱1.觀點明確：不能模棱兩可。2.時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主3.人稱：第一人稱或第三人稱

First,dietingisharmfultoteenagers’health.

Forexample,ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Withmuchpressurefromstudy,teenagersneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudy.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Let’sexplore

2.WhyisLauraagainstdieting?1.觀點明確：不能模棱兩可。2.時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主3.人稱：第一人稱或第三人稱Linkingwords(連接詞)

First,dietingisharmfultoteenagers’health.

Forexample,ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Withmuchpressurefromstudy,teenagersneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudy.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Let’sexplore

3.HowdoesLaurasupport(支持)herreasons?Evidence(論據(jù))Afact(事實)Anexample(例子)

Inordertokeepaslimfigureandtobemoreattractiveinappearance,manypeople,especiallygirls,wouldliketoloseweightbyskippingmeals.Inmyopinion,dietingisnotgoodformostpeople.First,dietingisharmfultopeople’shealth,especiallyforteenagers..Ifateenagegirleatslessthanwhatherbodyneeds,hermetabolismwillslowdownbecausethereisnotsomuchfoodtobetakenineachday.Second,dietingmayaffectourlivesnegatively.Inthismodernsociety,peopleneedtobeveryenergetictofaceseverecompetitionsintheirstudyorwork.Dietingwillsurelyreducetheirenergyandinturnaffecttheirlivesnegatively.Asanoldsayinggoes,‘Healthispriceless’.Ibelievethatdietingisnotadvisableforteenagers.

Let’sexplore

1.觀點明確：不能模棱兩可。2.時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主3.人稱：第一人稱或第三人稱Structure(結(jié)構(gòu))BeginningBodyEndingMainPoint(觀點)≧2Reasons(Facts/Example......)Conclusion(總結(jié))PREWriting目前整容變得日益流行，假如你是高一（1）班學(xué)生蘇華，你們班就整容的話題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論，有的同學(xué)支持，有的同學(xué)反對。請你以

“Plasticsurgery”為題寫一篇文章。內(nèi)容包括：你對整容的看法，支持還是反對；給出支持或反對的理由；3.總結(jié)。注意：詞數(shù)100左右Usefulphrases1.贊成2.改善外表3.做整形手術(shù)4.治療疤痕5.回歸正常生活6.建立自信7.獲得更多機(jī)會8.反對9.浪費金錢10.得不到滿意的效果11.動手術(shù)12.對......有害13.嚴(yán)重的健康風(fēng)險14.遭受健康問題困擾15.副作用16.對......上癮befor/insupportofimproveappearancetake/haveplasticsurgerytreatburnmarksreturntoanormallifebuildself-confidenceacquiremoreopportunitiesbeagainst/opposedtoawasteofmoneycan’tgetsatisfactoryresultsgoundertheknifebeharmfultoserioushealthriskssufferhealthproblemssideeffectgetaddictedtoBeginning（phenomenon+mainpoint）1.我們正生活在一個人們越來越關(guān)注容貌社會里。(定語從句)Wearelivinginasociety____________________________________________.2.如今，選擇整形來改變?nèi)菝驳娜藗兊臄?shù)量正在持續(xù)增加。(定語從句)Nowadays,thenumberofpeople__________________________________________________________isconstantlyincreasing.3.然而，在我看來，那樣做不明智。(it做形式主語)However,inmyopinion,_____________________.

whochoosetohaveplasticsurgerytochangetheirappearanceitisunwisetodothatwherepeoplepaymoreandmoreattentiontotheirappearanceReason1:Plasticsurgery

isharmfulto/doesharmtohealth.Example:上個月,據(jù)報道，一位著名的女明星整容手術(shù)失敗后遭受嚴(yán)重的健康問題的困擾。(定語從句)Lastmonth,__________________

afamousfemalestar

____________________________________sufferedserioushealthproblems.Body（reason+example&facts(data......)）whohadfailedplasticsurgeryoperationsitwasreportedthatLastmonth,afamousfemalestarwasreportedtohavefailed

plasticsurgeryoperations,sufferingserioushealthproblems.句式升級Reason2:Data:根據(jù)一項調(diào)查，2021年，美國人在美容整形上的消費超過146億美元。Accordingtoasurvey,Americans_________________________onplasticsurgeryin2021.spentover14.6billiondollars

wallet-unfriendlyBody（reason+example&facts(data......)）Plasticsurgery

isveryexpensive.devoted14.6billiondollarstoReason3:Plasticsurgery

isaddictive(容易使人上癮的).whoundergoplasticsurgeryonce

人們對整容上癮的原因是他們不能接受自己容貌上的不完美。(thereasonwhy......isthat......)Thereason

why

_______________________________

is

that

________________________________________________________.經(jīng)歷一次整形的人們之后更可能會進(jìn)行更多的手術(shù)來改變身體的其他部分。People_____________________________aremorelikelytogetmoreoperationstochangeotherpartsoftheirbodyafterwards.peopleareaddictedtoplasticsurgerytheycan’tacceptanyimperfectionontheirapperance.Body（reason+example&facts(data......)）Facts:Thereisagoodchancethatpeopleundergoing/experiecingplasticsurgeryoncewillgetmoreoperationstochangeotherpartsoftheirbodyafterwards.句式升級Reason:Plasticsurgery

canhelppeopleimprovetheirappearance.整形手術(shù)可以幫助那些有燒傷疤痕的或天生缺陷（birthdefect）的人回歸正常的生活。Plasticsurgerycanhelppeople_______________________________returnanormallife.whohaveburnmarksorbirthdefectBody（reason+example&facts(data......)）Conclusion俗話說，不要以貌取人。________________________________________________________________我們應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)好的內(nèi)在品質(zhì)，這比改變我們的容貌更重要。（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）Weshoulddevelopgoodinternalqualities，________________________________________________________________Thereisasayingthatgoes,‘Don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.’（quotation）whichismoreimportantthanchangingourphysicalappearance.Asasayinggoes,‘Don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.’Wearesupposeddevelopgoodinternalqualities,whichoutweighourphysicalappearance.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WritingMyopiniononplasticsurgeryYourmainpoint:Reason:(chooseone)Facts&example......Check

intermsofGrammarSpellingChoiceofwordshandwritingStructureWritingLet’srevise(修正)Groupwork

Requirements

(15points)

SelfCheck

PeerCheck（