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續(xù)寫原文MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStatecrosscountryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimax(頂點(diǎn))ofmyexistence.Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowd–tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormaltoohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.Paragraph1:

However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Paragraph2:

Iwhispered,“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”文本分析：伏筆和線索：1.Para.3Itwashotterthannormaltohot!Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmybackblindingmewithitsbrilliancemystrengthwasrunningout.Para2.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.(Runningisoursharedpassionpanyanddream.)Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.(Iwasproactive)主題：Theme:Victoryisn'tdefinedbywinsorlosses.ltisdefinedbyeffortlfyoucantruthfullysay,didthebestIcould”1stencethenyouareawinner.ReplotthestoryHowever,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Difficulties(leakingstrength+waningconfidenceMyefforts(dad'sunwaveringencouragement+myrekindledhope)3.Myfailure(unexpectedresult+adefeatedheart)Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."Dad'sfort(aheartypraise+aproudheart)Myresponse(agreatrelief+amovedheart)Myreflection(anewunderstandingoffailure)Difficultymet(intherace)(遭遇困難）環(huán)境:Itwashotterthannormaltoohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.2身體:體力不支mystrengthwasrunningout.3.路線崎區(qū)Wemadetheturnfromthedustyroadontothemuddy,woodedtrailthatwouldgoaroundthelakebacktothefield.4.意外受傷:Throughthetrees,Itrippedoveratreerootandfall.舊傷復(fù)發(fā):ForthefirstfewlapsIwastakingthelead,butbylap8myonceinjuredanklehurtbadlyandIgraduallyfellbehind.Effortsinvested:刻苦訓(xùn)練+控制飲食Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears...Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet...WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona...Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.(pound[V+adv./prep.]tomovewithnoisysteps咚咚地跑)Effortsmade:咬緊牙關(guān)堅(jiān)持Igrittedhisteethandpushedon.Thelastlapwasablur.ButonIran.克服困難DespitetheeyestinginglightandtheextremeheatItotteredacrossthevalley./Thetrailwasruggedanduneven,butIperseveredthroughthechallenge.沖刺Withanextraburstofenergy,Ichargedoff(猛跑起來)/sprinted/ranasfastasmylegscouldcarryme.自我激勵(lì)Suddenlysomethinginsidemebegansaying,"Holdon!Timetospeedup!"不氣餒ExhaustedasIwas,Isworetonevergiveintoit.LessonsLearnt真正的收獲:Therewardisnotthescorebutwhatyoulearn./AhealthybodyandasoundmindarewhatIearnedthroughthesport.突破自我:WithDad'sencouragementandtoughlove,I'vegonebeyondmylimit.正確的態(tài)度:Learningtobehumbleinvictoryandgenerousindefeatarethevaluablelessonssportscanteach.學(xué)會(huì)在勝利中保持謙遜，在失敗中保持慷慨是體育可以教給我們的寶貴經(jīng)驗(yàn)。It’snotwhetheryouwinorlose.Itshowyouplaythegame.正確看待挫折:Lifeisalwaysgoingtohaveitsupsanddownsandyoucan'tletthatdeterminehowyouactorappearinfrontofothers.正確看待前進(jìn)路上的絆腳石:Thoughtheremaybesomedifficultiesinfrontofyou,justmoveforwardanddon'tletthedifficultiesbetherockholdingyouback.Theymightbetheladderforyoutoseethebeautyoflife.下水文：However,withoutwarning,mystrengthswasrunningout.Coughingandwheezing,Ifeltasiftheairhadbeenstrangledoutofme.Despitethis,Itrudgedonwithmyheavyfeet.Eachpassingminutedrainedmypreviousconfidence.Justonthebrinkofgivingup,IheardDad'sfamiliarshoutsofencouragement,whichsuddenlyawokeme.couldn'tlethimdown!Summoningeverybitofstrengthremaining,Isprintedtowardsthefinishline,onlytorealizeIhadn'tmadeittothe