2022年高考全國1卷英語作文賞析

本文格式為Word版下載后可任意編輯和復制第第頁2022年高考全國1卷英語作文賞析20xx高考全國1卷假定你是李華，正在教你的英國伴侶Leslie學習漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的方案。內(nèi)容包括：

(1)時間和地點;

(2)內(nèi)容：學習唐詩;

(3)課前預備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。

留意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

同學實例1分數(shù)：23.5廣東湛江一中

DearIeslie,

Asscheduled,wewillhaveaChineselessonnextweekend.Consideringourstudentsarepreparingfortheirfinalexam,Isuggestwehavethelessonintheparknearourschool.

ThemainlycourseofourclassistolearnthepoemofTangDynasty.It'suniversallyacknowledgedthatthepoemofTangDynastyisoneofthesolidfoundationsofourculture.Alargenumberoftalentpoetsshowedtheirviewaboutthesocietyandexpressedtheirsatisfactionwiththebeautyofourmotherland.Youcanbroadenyourhorizonandhaveabetterunderstandingofourcolorfulculturethroughthisstudy.

KnowingthehistoryofTangDynastyisbetterforyoubeforehavingclass.It'sthesocietythatcreatesthebrilliantpoem.

Yours

LiHua.

點評：本文要點掩蓋較全面，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，語法錯誤較少，長短句運用合理，結(jié)合了簡潔句同時運用了較多的簡單句式，如主語從句It’suniversallyacknowledgedthat…，強調(diào)句型It'sthesocietythat…非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語Consideringourstudentsarepreparingfor…等等;同時恰當使用了肯定的高級詞匯如solidfoundation，broadenone’shorizons等。

建議：1文章要點方面，建議時間更精確些，比如下周周幾幾點到幾點;2語法方面，留意細節(jié)語法的錯誤，比如mainly改成main，poem改成poems等。

同學實例2分數(shù)：20河南光山二高

DearLesile

Howareyou?IhavelearntyourprogressinyourChinesewithmyhelpandyourhardwork.Iamwritingtotelltheplanthatwhatshouldyoudoinadvance.

First,let'smakeitateighto'clockinschoollibrary.Wecanconsultedanumberofbooksaboutthesubjectthere.Second,thenextthemeisaboutChinesecultureespeciallytheTangpoemsthatarefullofhistoryandact.Ibelieveyouwillbeattractiveonceyouputyourheart.ThirdIneedyoutoperparesomework.TheTangpoemsarebasedontheTangdynasty

soyoushouldtolookthroughthehistoryandgreathappening.

Asthesayinggoesnopains,nogains.Chineseissobeautifulanddifficultthatyouneedbeinvolvedsincerely.Iamlookingforwardtostartingourstudy.

Yours，

LiHua

點評：本文要點掩蓋較全面，文章結(jié)構(gòu)較清楚，有恰當?shù)倪B接詞使用，長短句運用較合理;同時恰當使用了肯定的常用句式及諺語，如asthesayinggoes，nopains，nogains等。

建議：1文章要點方面，建議時間更精確些，比如詳細是哪一周哪一天的8點;2語法方面，留意細節(jié)語法的錯誤，如canconsulted改成canconsult等;3規(guī)律方面，留意詞和詞之間的單配規(guī)律，如youwillbeattractiveonceyou…規(guī)律上不是很通順;4單詞拼寫上，留意拼寫的精確?????性，如perpare改成prepare等。

同學實例3分數(shù)：22日照一中

DearLeslie,

How'sitgoing?HaveyouabsorbedalltheknowledgeItaughtyoulasttime?Nowletmetellyoutheinformationofnextlesson.

IwillgivethelessononnextSaturdaymorning,from8:00a.m.to11:30a.m.at101Roomintheteachingbuildinginourschool.

WearegoingtolearnaboutTangpoetry,whichisanextremelyimportantpartofnotonlyChineselanguagebutalsoChineseculture.WhatyouneedtodoinadvanceistoknowbrieflyaboutthehistoryofTangDynasty.YoucanconsulttheInternetorthebooksIgaveyou.Besides,don'tforgettoreviewwhatyouhavelearnedbefore.

Iamlookingforwardtoourmeeting.Seeyounextweek!

Yours,

LiHua.

點評：本文要點掩蓋全面，行文流暢，有額外的細節(jié)添加，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚緊湊，