高中英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作-如何寫(xiě)建議信

書(shū)面表達(dá)專題---Howtowritealetterforadvice寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.建議信：作者就有關(guān)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和建議。2.對(duì)象：1）寫(xiě)給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；2）寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。3.基本框架：開(kāi)頭（beginning）----開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn).(stateyouridea)主體(body)----對(duì)所提出的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并說(shuō)明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)結(jié)尾(ending)----呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion.)4.注意事項(xiàng)：1）建議信要寫(xiě)出寫(xiě)信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力；2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)。可從政治、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、倫理、法律以及個(gè)人等多角度給出建議；3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。常用套語(yǔ)A．建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫(xiě)作意圖)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletterIamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof…Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout/on…B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Whynot…?/How(What)aboutdoing…5.…isagood/greatidea.6.Youmayconsiderdoing…7.Itwouldseem/seemstomethatyoucould…8.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.9.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…

First,/Firstly,/Secondly,/Then,/Afterthat,/Intheend,/Finally,/Meanwhile,/What’smore,/Inaddition,/Besides,/Furthermore,…C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.假如你叫孫軍，是紅星高中的學(xué)生，要給市長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，反映學(xué)校門(mén)前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：參考詞匯:穿行threadone’sway天橋overpass問(wèn)題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過(guò)街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問(wèn)題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的體裁是什么？要寫(xiě)的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？

(order)動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？(時(shí)態(tài))(when)第一人稱一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況說(shuō)理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)書(shū)面表達(dá)如何寫(xiě)？三個(gè)步驟Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板模板二：Dear_____(對(duì)象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(問(wèn)題).Firstandforthemost,_______(建議一).Inaddition,_____(建議二).What’smore_____(建議三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMingDearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon

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問(wèn)題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過(guò)街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。

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worse/What’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.makingthesituationmoreserious.makingthetrafficheavier可意譯為：so….that….=too…toThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,which

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學(xué)生過(guò)街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)threadone’sway，whendoingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.for…todo….Studentsarerisking

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靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行意譯：

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takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchas政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。Mysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…表語(yǔ)從句固定句型Itishightimethat…(虛擬語(yǔ)氣)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass.簡(jiǎn)單句1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…潤(rùn)色小建議2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…A.適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過(guò)渡句）Thegovernment

shouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit.B.語(yǔ)義的意譯3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…C.添加形容詞和副詞Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures第三步.連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatA.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例不推薦字體優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生能靈活地處理各個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，大量運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，連詞等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個(gè)性和語(yǔ)言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例1優(yōu)秀作文范例2優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生的書(shū)面整潔，字體美觀，運(yùn)用therebe句型，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，非謂語(yǔ)，套用句式等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例3優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生運(yùn)用倒裝句，so…that句式，精彩的表達(dá)以及虛擬語(yǔ)氣等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例4優(yōu)點(diǎn)：該考生最大的特色是運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語(yǔ)言底蘊(yùn)。如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

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小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題

假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。

注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出。DearPeter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；看電視，報(bào)紙，雜志；學(xué)唱中文歌曲；交中國(guó)朋友；DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

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First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpsto

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TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua為了迎接即將到來(lái)的期末考試，你校要取消所有的體育課。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生王麗的身份給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，建議不要取消體育課。注意：1.詞數(shù)：120左右；2.文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearHeadmaster,I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschool’sdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.常見(jiàn)連接詞表時(shí)間關(guān)系：

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