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論文審稿Ms.Ref.No.:JSV-D-06-01203Title:Faultdiagnosisresearchbasedontime-frequencyanalysismethodinrotorsystemsJournalofSoundandVibrationDearstudent××××,Wehavenowreceivedcommentsonyourmanuscriptfromthereviewers(reportsincludedbelow).Pleasereviseyourmanuscriptaccordingtothereferee'ssuggestionsanddetailallthechangeswhichyouhavemade.Ihopeyouwillbepreparedtoundertakethis,andIwillthenbepleasedtoreconsiderthemanuscriptforpublication.Pleasenotethatduetotheextensiverevisionsnecessayonyourmanuscript,itwillneedtobesentoutforre-review.Ifyoudodecidetorevisethepaper,weneedtoreceiveyournewmanuscriptwithinthenextsixmonths.Youareaskedtosubmitthefollowingitemsalongwiththemanuscript:(1)Apoint-by-pointreplythatwecansendtoeachreviewer;(2)Aseparatelistoftherevisionsmadetothemanuscript.Itisimportantthatyouaddressalltheissuesraisedbythereferees,eitherbyrevisionorreasonedrebuttal,beforewemakeadecisiononpublication.Whensubmittingyourrevisedmanuscript,pleaseensurethatyouuploadthesourcefiles(e.g.Word).UploadingonlyaPDFfileatthisstagewillcreatedelaysshouldyourmanuscriptbefinallyacceptedforpublication.

Ifyourrevisedsubmissiondoesnotincludethesourcefiles,wewillcontactyoutorequestthem.Tosubmitarevision,pleasegoto/jsv/andloginasanAuthor.Yourusernameis:********Yourpasswordis:**************OnyourMainMenupageisafolderentitled"SubmissionsNeedingRevision".Youwillfindyoursubmissionrecordthere.Yourssincerely,RichardBerrymanEditorialOffice(Australasia)JournalofSoundandVibrationReviewers'comments:Reviewer#1:CommentsonJSV-D-06-01203Title:Faultdiagnosisresearchbasedontime-frequencymethodinrotorsystemsBy:××,××and××××××_______________________________________Thepaperpresentsanapplicationofreassignedwaveletscalogramforrotorsystemfaultdiagnosis.Itisatopicofinteresttotheresearchersintherelatedareasbutthepaperneedsverysignificantimprovementbeforeacceptanceforpublication.Mydetailedcommentsareasfollows:1.Thewaveletmethod(reassignedwaveletscalogram)usedinthepaperworksverywellfortheunderlyingfaultdiagnosisproblem.Ontheotherhand,thiswaveletmethodisawell-establishedmethod,andthepresentresearchisadirectapplicationofthismethodwithoutnewcontributioninmethodologicalresearch.2.Fortheabovereason,thepresentationshouldbefocusedontheresults.Unfortunately,thepresentationisfarfromacceptableforpublication.ThematerialwasnotproperlyorganizedanditisstronglysuggestedthattheauthorscheckcarefullytheEnglishwritingandusestandardterminologiesinthetechnicalarea.3.Thetitleofthepapershouldbemorespecificsincenumerousstudieshavebeendoneonthefaultdiagnosisofrotorsystemsusingwaveletsandtime-frequencymethods.Also,removetheword"research".4.OnSection1:·Thissectionlistedmanyreferencesthataremainlyrelatedtorotordynamicsandarenotdirectlyrelatedtorotorsystemdiagnosis.Iftheauthorswouldliketokeepthesereferences,somediscussionsontherelevanceoftheserefstothepresentresearchareneeded.·Reviewonthedirectlyrelevantrefswillbemorehelpfulforthereader.Also,time-frequencyandwaveletsaremainlyfornon-stationaryandtransientanalysis.Theauthormaydiscussinmoredetailwhattypesoftransientsandnon-stationarycomponentswouldappearinrotorsystemvibration.·Afewsentencesontheorganizationofthepaperwillbehelpful.5.OnSection2:·Sincethemajormethodusedintheapplicationisreassignedwaveletscalogram,itisnotneededtogivethedetailsofthreeothermethods(onlygiveafewwordsandgivetherefs).Instead,theauthorsmaydiscussmoreontherelationshipbetweentraditionalwaveletscalogramandthereassignedwaveletscalogram,andexplainwhythelatterisbetterthantheformer.·Eq(2):theright-hand-sideiswrongand"2"ismissed.·ThedescriptionafterEq(2)isnotclear.SeeCohen'sbookfordetailsaboutthecross-terms.6.OnSections3and4:Thedescriptionneedstobeimproved.ThematerialinSection3shouldbeorganizedinseveralparagraphs.7.OnSection5:·Theauthorsdidagoodexperimentandsomeofthephenomenapresentedinthetime-frequencyplanesarealsoveryinteresting.However,theobservationsshouldbedescribedconcisely,andtheauthorsshouldfocusmoreon:1)whetherthesephenomenaaregeneralcharacteristics,and2)ifpossible,explainthereasonofthephenomenaandtheadvantagesofreassignedwaveletscalogramoverothertime-frequencymethods.·Infact,itispossibletointerpretmostofthephenomenainthetime-frequencyplanesusingrotordynamics.Forexample,shaftrubcausesbroadbandvibrationandwillresultinnearlyhorizontallinesinthephaseplanes.·Someoftheparagraphsaretoolong.8.Theconclusionshouldbeconciseandonlysummarizethemostimportantcontributionoftheresearch.Reviewer#2:Thispaperpresentstheresultsoftime-frequencyanalysisappliedtoatabletoprotatingmachinerytestrigunderasetoffaultconditions.Thetitleofthepaperisverymisleadingbecausenoautomatedmethodsforeitherfaultdetectionordiagnosis/isolationarediscussedinthepaper.Rather,underdifferentfaultscenarios,severaltime-frequencymethodsavailableintheliteratureareevaluatedfortheirabilitytogeneratevisuallydiscriminatingfeaturesassociatedwiththefaultconditions.Hence,thispaperprovidesacharacterizationoftime-frequencyfeaturesassociatedwithrotatingmachineryfaultsasopposedtothedevelopmentofanytypeoffaultdiagnosismethodology.Hence,thepapermustbejudgedsolelyonthequalityoftheexperimentation,thepresentationoftheresults,andhowthetime-frequencyfeaturesidentifiedinthevariousfaultcasesrelatestothedynamicaloperatingconditionsoftherig.Themainproblemwiththepaperisthatitisverypoorlywritten,andthismakestheevaluationandinterpretationofthemaincontributionsofthepaperobscure.

Thepaperrequiresacompleterewritetoimprovethegrammar,styleandreadability.Alsoconsider:Inequation(1)onpage2,whatdoesitmeanthath(t)iscenteredatt=0andf=0?h(t)isawindowingfunctioninthetimedomain!Whatisthepointofthesimulationexperiments,whatdotheyaddtowhatisalreadyknownaboutthetime-frequencytechniquesfromtheliterature?Sincetheonlycontributionofthepaperisthetime-frequencyanalysis,theresultsofthesecomputationsneedtobeexplainedindetailinthetextandthegraphicalresultsneedtobeproperlyannotatedsothatreaderscancomprehendandunderstandwhichdistinguishingfeaturesareassociatedwiththefaults.Currently,thegraphicalresultsarepoorlydisplayedanditisdifficulttocorrelatethefigureswiththetext.以下是從一個朋友轉(zhuǎn)載來的，關(guān)于英文投稿過程中編輯給出的意見。與大家一起分享。以下12點無輕重主次之分。每一點內(nèi)容由總結(jié)性標題和代表性審稿人意見構(gòu)成。1、目標和結(jié)果不清晰。ItisnotedthatyourmanuscriptneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEnglisheditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgrammar,spelling,andsentencestructuresothatthegoalsandresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.2、未解釋研究方法或解釋不充分?！鬒ngeneral,thereisalackofexplanationofreplicatesandstatisticalmethodsusedinthestudy.◆Furthermore,anexplanationofwhytheauthorsdidthesevariousexperimentsshouldbeprovided.3、對于研究設(shè)計的rationale:Also,therearefewexplanationsoftherationaleforthestudydesign.4、夸張地陳述結(jié)論/夸大成果/不嚴謹：Theconclusionsareoverstated.

Forexample,thestudydidnotshowifthesideeffectsfrominitialcopperburstcanbeavoidwiththepolymerformulation.5、對hypothesis的清晰界定：Ahypothesisneedstobepresented。6、對某個概念或工具使用的rationale/定義概念：Whatwastherationaleforthefilm/SBFvolumeratio?7、對研究問題的定義：Trytosettheproblemdiscussedinthispaperinmoreclear,writeonesectiontodefinetheproblem8、如何凸現(xiàn)原創(chuàng)性以及如何充分地寫literaturereview:The

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