“皖南八校”高三第二次聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+-偶遇流浪漢參考范文五篇

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ThecitycirclewasquietwhenmyvanpulleduptoTwo'sCompanycafe.Itwas8:00A.M.，andthemom-and-popbusinesseswouldn'tbeopenforanotherthreehours.Asthefilmcrewofstudentmovie-makershoppedoutofthevanandstartedunloadingatonofequipment,Isatinthedriver'sseatreadingabook.IlearnedalongtimeagothatIwasnotwantedorneededontheset.Sometimes,thatmademefeelabitsad.Thesekidsusedtoneedaparent'sadvice,helpandcaring.Now,asolderteens,theyweremakingtheirowndecisions,helpingeachotherandsupportingtheirfriendsthroughwhateverassignmentstheyweregiven.Emptiedofitsmovie-relatedcontents,thevannowbecametheplacetoleavepersonalitems.Myjob,asthedriver,wastostaywithincallingdistancewiththekeyssothatifanythingwasneededIcouldopenthevan,KnowingthatIcouldcrawl(爬行)intoacornersomewhereandfinishreadingthebookthatafriendaskedmetocritique,Ilookedforaplacetositdown.Againstawall,intheshade,justtwentyorsopacesaway,Ispiedabeautifullycarvedparkbench.Inoticedthatamanwassittingononeend,buttherewasplentyofroomforatleasttwomorebodies.Walkingover,IsetmydrinkonthegroundnearthelegofthebenchandsatontheendseatsothatIcouldrestmyelbow(肘)onthearm.Themanontheotherendlookedatmeoddlybutremainedseated.Iquicklydiscoveredthathe'dprobablyspentthenightonthebench.Hisclotheswereuntidy,hishairwasmessy,andIwassoonconfronted(使.…面對(duì))withastrongandveryunpleasantsmellofbodysweat.Ilookedathimandsmiled,andhesmiledbackwithamouthofmisshapenandblacked-outteeth.Thatwasit.Hewasn'tbotheringme,andIguessedIwasn'tbotheringhim.Webothsatthereforoveranhour.Iwasreading.Hewasintentlywatchingthefilming.第一段：Hethenstood.__________第二段：Iwasshocked.___________Possibleversions:1.第一段：Hethenstoodup,

stretchinghislimbs

inawaythatsuggestedhehadn’tmovedinhours.I

couldn'thelpbut

watchashe

cautiouslyapproached

thefilmcrew,

hishesitantstepsbetrayingamixofcuriosityandshyness.

Thestudents

seemedtooabsorbedin

theirworktonoticehimatfirst,butashe

inchedcloser,oneoftheteenslookedup.Iexpectedalookofannoyanceordiscomfort,yet

whatcame

wasawarmsmileandagreeting.Surprisingly,theybegantochat,andtheman's

guarded

manner

seemedto

meltawaywiththeattentionandkindnessbeingshowntohim.Itwasasmallinteraction,butit

spokevolumesabout

thecompassionatespirittheseyoungadultspossessed.第二段：Iwasshockedbyhoweasilythemanblendedintothescene.Itwasasthoughhe

transformedfromanoverlookedstrangertoanappreciatedobserverinaninstant.

Oneofthestudentsevenhandedhima

spare

headsetsohecouldlistenin.Astheycontinuedfilming,Imarveledat

howthisman'sraggedappearancestoodoutagainstthebackdropofyouthfulenergyandcreativity.Hisface,once

tiredandlinedwiththehardshipsoflife,now

displayedalookofgenuineinterestandenjoyment.Thisunexpectedconnectionbetweenhimandthestudentswasabeautifulreminderthat,despiteourdifferences,thereisasharedhumanitythatcanbringustogetherinthemostunexpectedplaces.2.第一段：Hethenstoodupabruptly,hismovementscatchingmyattention.Iclosedmybook,

curiousaboutwhathewasgoingtodonext.Tomysurprise,hebeganpickingupsmallpiecesoftrash

scattered（散落）

aroundthepark.Hisactionswere

deliberateandcareful,

asifhewastendingto

hisowngarden.Iwatchedhimmovearoundthebench,

hisuntidyappearancecontrastingsharplywiththe

thorough

carehewasgivingtotheenvironment.

Itstruckme

thenthateveryone,

regardlessoftheirsituation,hasastoryandacapacitytocontributeintheirownway.Hisdedicationtocleaningupthearea,despitehisapparenthardships,wasboth

humblingandinspiring.第二段：Iwasshockedwhenhesuddenly

approached

meandhandedmeasmall,crumpledpieceofpaper.

Hesitantly,Iopenedit,

revealingacrudelydrawnmap

oftheparkwithabigXmarkedataparticularspot.Hepointedtowardsanearbybushand

noddedencouragingly.

Interested,Istoodupandwalkedovertothelocation.There,

hiddenamongtheleaves,wasasmall,beautifullypaintedrockwiththewords"KeepSmiling"

carved

onit.Irealizedthenthatthisman,whoseemedtohavesolittle,hadchosentoshareapieceofjoywithastranger.

Thisunexpectedgestureofkindness

fromsomeonewhoappearedtohavesolittle,yetgavesomuch,deeplytouchedmyheart.3.Hethenstood.Ashedid,he

stretchedhisarmsoutwideandyawnedloudly.Inoticedhis

ragged

clothesandwornshoes

ashemoved.He

leaneddown

topickupa

old

worn

suitcasethathadbeensittingbyhisfeet,

hiddenfrommyview.

Withthecaseinhand,he

drifted

away

slowly,

headingtowards

thenearbypark.Iwatchedhimgo,

wonderingabouthislifeandsituation.

Wherewasheheaded

onthissunnymorning?Didhehaveaplacetostaytonight?

Myheartachedforthisstranger.Iwasshockedwhenhesuddenlyturnedand

camewalkingbackinmydirection.He

stoppedrightinfrontofme

andsethiscasedown.Fromhispockethepulledoutacrumpledonedollarbill."Getyourselfsomethingnice,"hesaid

ina

rough

voice

asheheldthemoneyouttowardsme.I

hesitatedbeforetakingtheoffering

withaquiet"thankyou."Withanodandtoothlessgrin,heliftedhiscaseandturnedawayagain.Ilookeddownatthedollarinmyhand,

overwhelmed.

Itwasn'ttheamountthatmovedme,butthekindnessbehindit.I

sawpastthedirtand

nastysmell

totheheartoftheman.Thoughhehadlittle,hewantedtogivemesomething.This

smallact

wasagiftIwouldneverforget.4.Hethenstood.

“MayIsitnexttoyou,ma’am?”

he

askedrespectfully.I

hesitatedbriefly,butthen

movedaside

andnodded.Hesatdown,

carefulnotto

cometooclose.Weweresilentforawhileuntilhesuddenlyspoke.

“Mylifehasn’talwaysbeenthisway,”

he

saidquietly,eyesdown.

“ImadesomebadchoiceswhenIwasyounger.NowI’mtryingto

getbackonmyfeet.”

Isawthesadnessinhisfaceand

feltcompassionwellupwithinme.

“It’snevertoolateforanewbeginning,”

Isaidgently.Hegavemeagratefullook.Wesatwithoutspeakingagain,

twostrangersonabenchfindingamomentofhumanconnection.Iwasshockedwhenthedirectorsuddenlycalled

“Cut!”

andthefilmingstopped.The"homelessman"

instantlystraightenedup

andwalkedovertoreviewthefootage

(鏡頭)withthecrew.Hewasn'treallyhomelessafterall,butanactorthey'dhiredforthestudentfilm.Theyalllookedoveratmeandlaughedatmyobvioussurprise.IhadtolaughtoowhenIrealized

thejokewasonme.Still,Iwasthankfulforthosemomentsonthebenchwhichremindedmethatweallhavestoriesandstruggles,andsometimes

allweneed

issomeoneto

listenwithoutjudgment.

Mysmallactofcompassiontowarda"homelessman"turnedouttobethebestscene

inthestudents'littlefilm.5.第一段：Hethenstood.Ashestartedtowalkaway,I

noticedacrumpled(皺巴巴的)paperbaglyingonthegroundwherehehadbeensitting.Hestopped,pickeditupandhandedittome."Youleftthis,"hesaid.Ilookedatthebag,

completelypuzzled,

wonderingwhatitcouldbe.

Openingit,Ifoundmybookinside.IwasastonishedasIhadn'tevenrealizedIhadleftitonthebench.Theman

musthaveseenmeputitdownwithoutnoticin