讀后續(xù)寫人與自然：拯救鱒魚+-基于協(xié)同效應(yīng)的讀后續(xù)寫情節(jié)協(xié)同多元化寫法講義 高三英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。JuliaalwaysenjoyedrunningthroughTheDarkWalktowardsthelightattheendofit.Itwasadark,damptunnelofsmoothbranches.Thisyearshehadtheextrajoyofshowingittohersmallbrother,Stephen,andofterrifyinghimaswellasherself.Onedaytheyfoundaholeononesideofthewalk.Insidetherewaswater,inwhichtheyperceivedapantingtrout（鱒魚).Theywerebothsoexcitedthattheywerenolongerafraidofthedarknessastheybentdownandpeeredatthefishpantinginhistinyprison,hissilverstomachgoingupanddownlikeanengine,otherwisehewasmotionless.Juliawonderedwhatheateandthoughtofhishunger.Shefoundhimaworm.Heignoredthefood,andjustwentonpanting.Bendingoverhim,shethoughthowhehadbeeninthere.Allthewinter,inthedarktunnel,allday,allnight,floatingaroundalone.Nobodyknewhowthefishgotthere.Hermothersuggestedthatabirdhadcarriedtheegg.Herfatherthoughtthatinthewinterasmallstreammighthavecarrieditdownthereasababy,andithadbeensafeuntilsummercameandthewaterbegantodryup.Beforetheywenttobed,Stephenaskedhismummythewholestoryofthetrout,notreallyinterestedintheactualtrout,butinthestorywhichhismumbegantomakeupforhim,andJuliainherbed,presentedherbacktothemandreadherbook.Butshekeptoneearcocked.“Andso,intheend,thenaughtyfishgotbiggerandbigger,andthewatergotsmallerandsmaller…”

Passionately,sheturnedaroundandcried,“Mummy,don’tmakeitahorribleoldmoralstory.”Hermomthenbroughtinafairy,whohadmadeitrainandfilledtheholesothatthetroutcouldfloatawaydowntheriverbelow.Staringatthemoonsheknewtherewasnosuchthingasafairyandthatthetrout,downinthetunnel,waspantingforhislife.注意：

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續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

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請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephenwassoundasleep.Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.1.

基于協(xié)同效應(yīng)的描寫Julia想去救鱒魚的內(nèi)心活動(dòng)例1ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephenwassoundasleep.Shecouldn’tshakeoffthefeelingofuneaseknowingthatthefishwasstilltrappedinthedarktunnel,gaspingforlife-givingair.Determinedtohelp,Juliadecideditwastimetotakemattersintoherownhands.

她在寂靜的夜里坐了起來，斯蒂芬睡得很熟。她無法擺脫那種不安的感覺，因?yàn)樗滥菞l魚還被困在黑暗的隧道里，大口大口地呼吸著維持生命的空氣。下定決心要幫忙，朱莉婭認(rèn)為該是自己行動(dòng)的時(shí)候了。例2ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephenwassoundasleep.Julia’smindwasrestlessasshesatinthestillnessofthenight.Theimageofthepantingtrouttrappedinthedarktunnelhauntedherthoughts.Unabletobearthefish’ssufferinganylonger,shequietlygotoutofbedandtiptoeddownstairs.

她在寂靜的夜里坐了起來，斯蒂芬睡得很熟。坐在寂靜的夜里，朱莉婭心緒不寧。被困在黑暗隧道中大口喘氣的鱒魚的形象一直縈繞在她的腦海中。鱒魚正在遭受的痛苦讓她再也無法忍受，她悄悄地下了床，躡手躡腳地走下樓去。例3ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephenwassoundasleep.Her

heartfeltheavy,thememoryofthepantingtroutinthetinyholeweighingonherthoughts.

她在寂靜的夜里坐了起來，斯蒂芬睡得很熟。她心里感到很沉重，想起小水坑里那條大口喘氣的鱒魚，她的思緒沉重起來。例4ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephenwassoundasleep.TheimageofthepantingtroutinthetinyholehauntedJulia’smind,preventingherfromfindingsolaceinsleep.Shewasfilledwithasenseofresponsibilityforthetrout’swell-being.Unabletoignorehergrowingunease,shedecidedtotakemattersintoherownhands.她在寂靜的夜里坐了起來，斯蒂芬睡得很熟。小水坑里大口喘氣的鱒魚的形象一直縈繞在朱莉婭的腦海里，使她無法在睡眠中找到安慰。她對(duì)鱒魚的健康快樂充滿了責(zé)任感。她無法忽視自己日益增長的不安，于是決定自己動(dòng)手來解決。例5ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephenwassoundasleep.

Hermindfilledwiththoughtsofthetroutandthehopethatithadfounditsfreedom

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Stephen

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unawareoftheturmoilthatJuliawasgoingthrough.Determinedtobringpeacetoherrestlessmind,Juliadecidedtotakeaction.

她在寂靜的夜里坐了起來，斯蒂芬睡得很熟。她滿腦子想的都是鱒魚，希望它能重獲自由，而斯蒂芬卻不知道朱莉婭正在經(jīng)歷著怎樣的煎熬。朱莉婭決心讓自己不安的心平靜下來，她決定采取行動(dòng)。2.基于協(xié)同效應(yīng)的描寫鱒魚被放入河里的情景例1Thefishhesitatedforamoment,disorientedbyitssuddenfreedom.Then,withasurgeofenergy,itswamaway,disappearingintothedepthsoftheriver.

魚猶豫了一會(huì)兒，突然的自由使它迷失了方向。然后，隨著一股能量的涌動(dòng)，它游走了，消失在河的深處。例2Assoonasthefishtouchedthewater,itstartedtoswim,itsmovementsbecomingmorelively.Juliawatchedinamazementasthetroutdisappearedintothedepthsoftheriver,blendinginwithitsnaturalhabitat.

這條魚一接觸到水，就開始游，動(dòng)作變得更加活潑。朱莉婭驚奇地看著鱒魚消失在河水深處，融入了它的自然棲息地。例3Julia

pouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.Thetroutswamaway,itssilverscalesglisteningunderthemoonlight.Theoncepantingfishnowseemedtodancegracefullyinthewater,asightthatfilledJulia’sheartwithjoy.

朱利婭把鱒魚從小桶里倒進(jìn)河里。鱒魚游走了，它銀色的鱗片在月光下閃閃發(fā)光。那條曾經(jīng)大口喘氣的魚現(xiàn)在似乎在水里優(yōu)雅地跳著舞，這一幕讓朱莉婭心中充滿了喜悅。例4Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.Thewaterembracedthefish,carryingitawayfromtheconfinedtinyholeinthetunnel.Thetrout’ssilverfigureshimmeredunderthemoonlight,almostasifitweredancingwithnewfoundfreedom.

朱莉婭把鱒魚從小桶里倒進(jìn)了河里。河水擁抱著魚，把它從隧道狹窄的小水坑里帶走。鱒魚銀色的身軀在月光下閃閃發(fā)光，好像這條魚正在為新獲得的自由而起舞。例5Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.

Thewatersparkled,reflectingthenightsky,asifbeckoningthetrouttowardsitsdepths.

朱莉婭把鱒魚從小桶里倒進(jìn)了河里。水面波光粼粼，倒映著夜空，仿佛在召喚鱒魚游向它的深處。3.基于協(xié)同效應(yīng)的續(xù)寫Julia放鱒魚時(shí)的心理例1Juliastoodthere,illuminatedbythemoon’ssoftglow,feelingarushofreliefandhappiness.Sheknewthatthetrouthadfounditswaybacktowhereitbelonged,inthewildandfreewatersoftheriver.

朱麗婭站在那里，沐浴在柔和的月光里，感到一陣寬慰和幸福。她知道這條鱒魚已經(jīng)回到了屬于它的地方，回到了野外和自由的水域。例2AsenseofreliefwashedoverJuliaasshewatchedthefishswimaway.

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thatmoment,sherealizedthepowerofcompassionandtheimpactonesmallactofkindnesscouldhaveonanotherlivingbeing.Sheknewshehadmadeadifferenceinthetrout’slife,rescuingitfromthedarknessandgrantingitthechancetothriveoncemore.

看著魚兒游走，朱莉婭感到如釋重負(fù)。在那一刻，她意識(shí)到同情的力量，以及一個(gè)小小的善舉可能對(duì)另一個(gè)生命產(chǎn)生的影響。她知道她改變了鱒魚的命運(yùn)，把它從黑暗中拯救了出來，給了它再次茁壯成長的機(jī)會(huì)。例3AsenseofreliefwashedoverJulia,knowingthatthetroutwasnolongerconfinedinthedarktunnel.Shehopedthatitwouldfinditswaybacktoitshome,whereitbelonged.

朱莉婭感到如釋重負(fù)，她知道鱒魚不再被囚禁在黑暗的隧道里了。她希望它能找到回家的路，回到屬于它的地方。例4Withaglimpseofhopeinhereyes,Juliawatchedasthetroutswameffortlesslydownstream.Sheknewthatitsjourneywouldbefilledwithuncertaintiesandchallenges,butshealsoknewthatshehadgivenitafightingchance.Inthatmoment,Juliarealizedthatsometimes,takingrisksandfollowingyourheartweretheonlywaytotrulymakeadifference.

朱莉婭眼中閃過一絲希望，看著鱒魚毫不費(fèi)力地向下游游去。她知道這段旅程將充滿不確定性和挑戰(zhàn)，但她也知道，她已經(jīng)給了它一個(gè)奮斗的機(jī)會(huì)。在那一刻，朱莉婭意識(shí)到，有時(shí)候，冒險(xiǎn)和追隨自己的內(nèi)心是真正有所作為的唯一途徑。例5Watchingthetroutswimfreely,Juliacouldn’thelpbutwonderaboutitsjourney.Woulditfinditswaybacktothetunnel?Orwoulditexplorenewhorizons,venturingintodistantstreamsandrivers?Nomattertheoutcome,Juliaknewshehaddonetherightthing.Shehadgiventhetroutachanceatlife,emancipatingitfromtheconfinesofthatdarkandlonelylittle

pole.

看著鱒魚自由自在地游來游去，朱莉婭不禁對(duì)它的去向產(chǎn)生了好奇。它會(huì)游回到隧道嗎？還是去探索新的天地，到遙遠(yuǎn)的溪流和河流中去探險(xiǎn)？無論結(jié)果如何，朱莉婭知道她做了正確的事。她給了鱒魚一個(gè)生存的機(jī)會(huì)，把它從黑暗和孤獨(dú)的小水坑中解放了出來。例6Watchingasitswiftlyswamawayintothedarkwaters,shecouldn’thelpbutfeelasenseofreliefandsatisfactionknowingthatthefishwasfinallyfree,nolongerconfinedtothetinyprisoninthehole.

看著魚兒迅速游向黑暗的水域，她不禁感到一種解脫和滿足，因?yàn)樗吏~兒終于獲得了自由，不再被困在水坑那狹小的牢籠里了。4.基于協(xié)同效應(yīng)的續(xù)寫主題升華例1Asshelaybackinherbed,shecouldn’thelpbutfeelasenseoffulfillment,knowingthatshehadmadeadifferenceinthelifeofacreaturethathadbeentrapped

inatinyhole

andyearningforitsfreedom.

當(dāng)她躺在床上時(shí)，她油然而生一種成就感，因?yàn)樗雷约焊淖兞艘粭l被困在小水坑里、渴望自由的生靈的生活。例2AsJuliawatchedthetroutswimaway,asenseofaccomplishmentfilledherbeing.Sherealizedthateveninthefaceofuncertainty,shehadtakenaction,determinedtomakeadifferenceinonesmallcreature’slife.Inthatmoment,Juliaunderstoodthepowerofcompassionandtheimpactasimpleactofkindnesscouldhave.

當(dāng)朱莉婭看著鱒魚游走時(shí)，一種成就感充滿了她的內(nèi)心。她意識(shí)到，即使面對(duì)不確定性，她也已經(jīng)采取了行動(dòng)，決心改變這個(gè)小家伙的命運(yùn)。在那一刻，朱莉婭明白了同情心的力量，以及一個(gè)簡單的善舉可能產(chǎn)生的影響。例3Thenextday,asJuliaandStephenwalkedhandinhandthroughTheDarkWalk,theyobservedtheever-changingbeautyofnature.Juliasharedthestoryofthetrout’sliberation,emphasizingtheimportanceofempathyandrespectforalllivingbeings.Stephenlistenedintently,hisyoungmindsoakinginthevaluablelessonsthathissisterimparted.

第二天，當(dāng)朱莉婭和斯蒂芬手牽手走過黑暗之路時(shí)，他們看到了大自然不斷變化的美麗。朱莉婭講述了鱒魚被解放的故事，強(qiáng)調(diào)了同情和尊重所有生物的重要性。斯蒂芬專心地聽著，他年輕的心靈沉浸在姐姐傳授的寶貴經(jīng)驗(yàn)中。例4Witharenewedsenseofpurpose,Juliareturnedhome,readytoshareherexperiencewithStephenandinspirehimtojoinherinprotectingandcherishingthenaturalworld.Intheirsmallactsofkindness,theyknewtheyhadthepowertomakeadifference,onecreatureatatime.

帶著一種新的使命感，朱莉婭回到了家，準(zhǔn)備與斯蒂芬分享她的經(jīng)歷，并激勵(lì)他和她一起保護(hù)和珍惜自然世界。在他們小小的善舉中，他們知道自己有能力改變世界，一次改變一個(gè)人。例5Throughherjourney,Julialearnedthatthedarktunnelwasnotaplaceoffear,butametaphorforthechallengesandobstacleswefaceinlife.Itisthroughcompassion,unity,andthepursuitofacommongoalthatwecanbringlightandhopetoeventhedarkestofplaces.

通過她的旅程，朱莉婭了解到黑暗的隧道并不是一個(gè)恐懼的地方，而是我們?cè)谏钪忻媾R的挑戰(zhàn)和障礙的隱喻。只有通過同情、團(tuán)結(jié)和對(duì)共同目標(biāo)的追求，我們才能給最黑暗的地方帶來光明和希望。例6Feelingasenseofclosure,Juliareturnedtoherbed,joiningStepheninthepeacefulslumberofthenight.Assheclosedhereyes,theimageofthetroutfloatingfreelyintheriverreassuredherthatsometimes,eveninthedarkestofplaces,thereishopeandachancefornewbeginnings.

感覺一切都結(jié)束了，朱莉婭回到她的床上，和斯蒂芬一起進(jìn)入夜晚平靜的睡眠中。當(dāng)她閉上眼睛的時(shí)候，鱒魚在河里自由游動(dòng)的畫面讓她確信，有時(shí)，即使在最黑暗的地方，也有希望和新的開始的機(jī)會(huì)。例7AsJuliareflectedontheirjourney,sherealizedthateventhesmallestactofkindnessandawarenesscouldhavefar-reachingeffects.Thememoryofthetrappedtroutwouldforeverremindherofthepowerofcompassionandthepotentialforp