讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：71號(hào)街角（2023年12月15日浙江高考模擬考精誠(chéng)聯(lián)盟）講義 高三英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)寫(xiě)作專項(xiàng)

試題呈現(xiàn)：I'mTia,apassionateteenagegirl,livingnextdoortothecornerof71stStreet.It'smycorner.Mostfolksfindthere'snothingthere,justanemptylot.Buttome,it'slikeawide-opentreasurebox.Steppingintoit,Ifeellikeleapingintoaseaofgreen.Thetallgrass,probablyjustweeds,withbutterfliesgatheringaround,smellscleanandfresh,andIwonderwhyI'mtheonlyonewho'sthankfulforthisplace.Oneevening,Mamasaid,“Tia,thecitywantstoturnthatcornerofyoursintoaparkinglot.”Istoppedinmytracks.“No!Theycan'tdothat!”“Tia,youhavetomakethemseewhatyousee.Makesomenoiseaboutit.Nooneevergotanyplacebysittingbackandstayingquiet.”Thatnight,Ilayawakethinkingforalongtime.“I'vegottodosomething.EarlythenextmorningIdraggedachairdowntothecornerwithabigcardboardonwhichI'dpainted“NoParkingLot!SaveOurNature”inlargeletters.Isatdownandwaited.Mostpeoplepassedby,payingnoattentiontome.MyfriendTanyaaskedmewhatIwasdoing,andItoldher.ThencameMrs.DiRisio,abeautyshopowner,whoangrilywavedherhandatmysign,saying,“Mycustomersneedaplacetopark.Yougohome,littlegirl.ButIdidn’tmove.ThenInoticedawomandownthestreettakingpicturesofmycorner.Shewalkedovertome,smiling,“I'mSaraBennett.CanItalktoyou?"Inodded.IknewIneededtomakesomenoise.Istartedtalking,andMs.Bennettscribbledonanotepad.“Awalkingpathwouldbenice,maybeavegetablegarden.Andabench,sopeoplecouldsitdownandlistentothebirdssinging.”Iwassurprisedatmyself,athowmanyideasI'dgotforthiscorner.Thenextmorning,mybrotherburstintomyroomwithamorningpaper.“FightingforNatureontheCornerof71st"wasthetitleofthearticle.andalongwithitwasapictureofme!Afterbreakfastmybrother,MamaandIdraggedourchairsandsignsbacktothecorner.第一段：Tomyamazement,Isawsomefamiliarfigurescomingtowardsus.第二段：Ayearlater,thesignonthecornermadeitofficial.文本分析：Storysummary:Theemptyspaceinthecornerofthestreetisnothingforordinarypeople,butforthepassionate17-year-oldgirlTia,thisplaceisapreciousgiftfromnature.Recently,itwasheardthatthevacantlandwouldberequisitionedasaparkinglot,andTiadecidedtomakeeffortstoprotectit.Sheplacedsignsonthestreetcorner,callingoneveryonetoprotectthenaturallandscapetogether.Afterayearofeffort,Tiafinallysucceededinprotectingthiscornerandmakingitapublicnaturalspace.Thethemeofthestory:Harmoniouscoexistencebetweenhumansandnature.續(xù)寫(xiě)要回答的問(wèn)題：第一段：令我驚訝的是，我看到一些熟悉的身影向我們走來(lái)。1.那些熟悉的人物是誰(shuí)？2.熟悉的數(shù)字做了什么？3.我的感覺(jué)如何？我進(jìn)一步做了什么來(lái)保護(hù)這個(gè)角落？第二段：一年后，街角的標(biāo)志正式生效。1.那個(gè)角落是什么樣子的？2.當(dāng)?shù)厝耸侨绾螐闹惺芤娴模?.我的感受和想法是什么？Theclimaxofthisarticle:Thenextmorning,Idraggedachairtothestreetcornerwithalargecardboardstickerthatread"NoParking!"and"SaveOurNature.".Isatdownandwaited.Mostpeoplewalkedbyanddidn'tnoticeme.MyfriendTanyaaskedmewhatIwasdoing,andItoldher.ThencameMrs.DiRisio,theownerofabeautysalon.Shewavedangrilyatmysignandsaid,"Mycustomersneedaparkingspot."Yougohome,littlegirl."ButIdidn'tmove.ThenInoticedawomantakingphotosonmystreetcorner.Shewalkedtowardsmeandsmiled,saying,"I'mSaraBennett.CanItalktoyou?"Inodded.IknowIneedtomakesomesound.Istartedspeaking,andMs.Bennettwasscribblinginhernotebook."Awalkingpathwouldbegreat,maybeit'savegetablegarden.There'salsoabenchsopeoplecansitdownandlistentobirdssinging."Iwassurprisedbymyselfandcameupwithsomanyideasforthiscorner.續(xù)寫(xiě)思路的關(guān)鍵：抓住沖突—阻止市政部門(mén)建停車場(chǎng)，解決沖突---呼吁建成花園，供附近居民休閑娛樂(lè)，同時(shí)保護(hù)棲息在此處的昆蟲(chóng)如蝴蝶，小鳥(niǎo)等；參考范文：Tomyamazement,Isawsomefamiliarfigurescomingtowardsus.MyfriendTanyaandherfamily,eachcarryingachair,joinedus!“Tia,You’vegotsomegoodideasforthiscorner.Weneedalittlenaturearoundhere.”Moreandmoreneighborsshowedup,wavingsignsandmakingnoise,includingMrs.DiRisio.Mominspiredmetomakeaspeechtothecitycall.Ididsodayslater.“Ifthisisthelastlittlebitofnatureinourneighborhood,”Ispoke,“doesn’titmakesensetotryandsaveit?”Everyoneapplaudedattheendofmyspeech.Ayearlater,thesignonthecornerhasmadeitofficial.Nowwe’vegotawalkingpaththatcurvesandwindsitswaythroughthe71stStreetNaturePreserve.We’vegotastonebenchandplansforavegetablegarden.Schoolgroupscomeheretocollectleavesandstudytheinsectsandbirds.Folkscomeheretowalk,runorjustsit,talking,laughingandlisteningtobirdssinging.Mycornerisn’tjustmineanymore,butI’mmorethanhappytoshareit.下水文：Tomyamazement,Tanya,mybestfriend,approachedwithadeterminedlookonherface,holdingasignthatread,“PreservetheGreenOasis.”Behindherwereagroupofotherneighbors,includingMrs.DiRisio,thebeautyshopowner.Shehadachangeofheartandproudlyjoinedme,wavinghersignhigh.Thecommunityhadcometogether,unitedbyasharedlovefornatureandadesiretoprotectthispreciouscorner.Inspiredbytheirsupport,Idecidedtotakefurtheraction.Ireachedouttolocalenvironmentalorganizations,seekingtheirhelpinpreservingthisnaturalgem.Ayearlater,thesignonthecornerhasmadeitofficial.Theonce-emptyspacenowboastedabeautifullylandscapedwalkingpath,linedwithvibrantflowersandnativeplants.Avegetablegardenhadbeenplanted,allowingresidentstocometogetherandcultivatetheirownproduce.Acozybenchstoodproudlyunderashadytree,invitingpeopletosit,relax,andenjoythemelodioussongsofbirds.AsIwalkedthroughthenewlycreatedpark,Icouldn'thelpbutsmile.Theonce-threatenedgreenspacehadbecomeaplaceofsolaceandinspiration.Moreimportantly,mysmallactofresistancehadblossomedintoapowerfulmovement,inspiringotherstoprotectingthenaturalworldamidstthebustlingcityscape.默寫(xiě)版：Tomyamazement,Tanya,mybestfriend,approachedwithadeterminedlookonherface,holdingasignthatread,“PreservetheGreenOasis.”____________________________在她身后是一群其他鄰居,includingMrs.DiRisio,thebeautyshopowner.Shehadachangeofheartand__________________________________________驕傲地和我一起，高高地?fù)]舞著她的牌子.Thecommunityhadcometogether,unitedbyasharedlovefornatureandadesiretoprotectthispreciouscorner.___________________________________受到他們支持的啟發(fā),Idecided