高考聯(lián)盟高三11月教學質量測評讀后續(xù)寫+104歲老人高空跳傘+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。In2017IgraduatedfromamedicalschoolandstartedtotraintheseniorsforrecoveryasatherapistintheBrookdaleLakeSeniorLivingCenterwhereImetHoffner,whohadlivedthereforroughlythepastdecade,forthefirsttime.2017年，我從一所醫(yī)學院畢業(yè)，開始在布魯克代爾湖老年生活中心作為治療師培訓老年人康復，在那里我第一次見到了霍夫納，他在那里生活了大約十年。Hoffner,aladyof104yearsoldnow,grewupinChicagoandworkedasatelephoneoperatorforBell

Companyformorethanfourdecades.Shenevermarriedorhadchildren,butsheenjoyedbeachvacationsanddrivinghersmallbluecartouringalloverthecountry.霍夫納現(xiàn)年104歲，在芝加哥長大，在貝爾公司當了40多年的電話接線員。她從未結婚，也沒有孩子，但她喜歡海灘度假，開著她的藍色小車在全國各地旅行。Shelovedsportsandwaskindtoeveryoneshemet.ShewatchedeveryChicagoCubsgameonaTVinherroomandalsoenjoyedwatching“MASH”runs.Shestayedactive,walkingseveralblockstothegrocerystoremultipletimesaweekandgoingonwalkstohavealookattheneighbor'sdogs.Shewasknownforcarryingcandies——Heathbars,Reese'sPeanutButterCupsanddarkchocolate——inherwalker.

Shesharedhercandieswitheveryoneshemet,butshealwayskeptsomeforme.她喜歡運動，對遇到的每一個人都很友善。她在房間里的電視上觀看了芝加哥小熊隊的每一場比賽，也喜歡看“MASH”跑。她保持活躍，每周多次步行幾個街區(qū)去雜貨店，并散步看看鄰居的狗。她以在助行器里攜帶糖果而聞名——希思巧克力棒、里斯花生醬杯和黑巧克力。她和遇到的每個人都分享糖果，但她總是給我留一些。IrememberedthatafternoonIandoneofmypatientswerefiguringoutwhenthemealwasservedwhenHoffnerinvitedustoeatsupperwithherinthediningarea.Sincethen,wethreeatedinnertogetheralmosteverynightandHoffnerstartedcallingmegrandson.我記得那天下午，我和我的一個病人正在弄清楚什么時候上菜，霍夫納邀請我們在用餐區(qū)和她一起吃晚飯。從那以后，我們三個人幾乎每天晚上都一起吃飯，霍夫納開始叫我孫子。Onenighttwomonthsago,IcarelesslytoldHoffneroverdinnerthatIwasgoingskydivingin

Ottawa.WhenHoffnersaidshewantedtogo,too,Ithoughtshemeantasanobserver.“No,no,no,Iwanttojumpoutofaplane,”

Hoffnersaid.MyheartsankbecauseIknewclearlywhatitmeanttojumpfromanairplaneatabout13,500feethigh.Itmightinjureher.兩個月前的一個晚上，我在晚餐時漫不經(jīng)心地告訴霍夫納，我要去渥太華跳傘。當霍夫納說她也想去的時候，我想她是指作為一個觀察者?！安?，不，我想跳下飛機，”霍夫納說。我的心一沉，因為我清楚地知道從大約13500英尺高的飛機上跳下來意味著什么。這可能會傷害到她。Butshemadeuphermindandstartedtodoeverythingtoprepareforit.Shewenttothedoctortohaveacheckandaskedmetomakeatrainingplan.Withherwalkershekepttrainingeveryday.但她下定決心，開始做一切準備。她去醫(yī)生那里檢查，并讓我制定培訓計劃。她每天都用助行器繼續(xù)訓練。注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.開頭已給出。Oneday,Iwenttothedininghallandsawhersittinginacorner,sadandalone.“Jump,”

withtheorderofthepilot,Ijumpedoutoftheplanefollowingher.

文本分析：故事大意--我從一所醫(yī)學院畢業(yè)，開始在布魯克代爾湖老年生活中心作為治療師培訓老年人康復，在那里我第一次見到了霍夫納。她未婚未育，喜歡旅行，十分活躍。慢慢我和她熟悉了，關系也越來越好。有一天，我在晚餐時漫不經(jīng)心地告訴霍夫納，我要去渥太華跳傘。她居然也想去跳傘，我不太贊同，感覺這會傷害一個老太太。但她下定決心要去，而且開始做好一切準備。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：第一段：我坐在她旁邊，一開始一句話也沒說?！叭绻茏龅?，我也能，”她堅定地說?！拔覀円黄鹛蔽揖o緊地握著她的手。第二段：我們立即接受了在空中翱翔的自由。在空中盤旋了幾分鐘后，我們一個接一個地降落在地上?！澳挲g只是一個數(shù)字，”她驕傲地說。官方范文，Oneday,Iwenttothedininghallandsawhersittinginacorner,sadandalone.

Isatbesideherwithoutsayingawordatthebeginning.“l(fā)wanttoskydivebutthepilotsaidIamtooold.”Shesaidsadly,lookingupatme.lpushedtohermycellphonewhichsaida103-year-oldwomanfromSwedenjumpedfromaplaneinMay2022astheoldestpersontoskydive,saying“Thereisnoquestionthatyoucouldhandleit.Butanyway,itisuptoyou.”“Ifshecoulddoit,lcantoo,”Shesaidwithadeterminedlook.“Weshalljumptogether,”tightlyIheldherhands.“Jump,”withtheorderofthepilot,ljumpedoutoftheplanefollowingher.

Weimmediatelyembracedthefreedomofsoaringthroughtheair.Seenfromthe13,500feethighsky，

thelongriverlookedlikeasmallline.Wewerefallingtowardsthegrassylandwhensuddenlyherparachutewasreleasedbeforeme,likeaflower.lopenedminetoo,sendingushigherintotheair,Aftercirclingintheairforaboutsevenminutes,welandedonthegroundoneafteranother.“Ageisjustanumber,”shesaidproudly.“Iwasreallyexpectingtocomeskydivingwithyounextyear.”參考范文一，Oneday,Iwenttothedininghallandsawhersittinginacorner,sadandalone.

NeverhadIseenhersodepressed,soIapproachedherandaskedwhy.Sheexplainedsorrowfullythatshehadaccidentallysprainedherankleandnowthecoachrefusedtotrainherforthesakeofhersafety.“IknowIcould,buthejustdidn’tbelieveme.”Hoffnersaidinatonemixedwithangeranddisappointment.Deepdown,IknewHoffnerwasright.Shewasdefinitelystrongermentallyandphysicallythanhowshelookedlike.Therefore,IlookedforhercoachandpersuadedhimtocontinuetrainingherandIwouldtrain,too.Thecoachedagreeandwekepttrainingtogether.Finallycamethedaywhenwecouldreallyjumpedfromtheplane.

“Jump,”

withtheorderofthepilot,Ijumpedoutoftheplanefollowingher.

Theairwasbitingandroaringtomyearsandtheearthwasstretchedlikeacanvas.Icouldfeelmyheartbeatingwildlyandbloodrushingtomyhead.Butwhatcamewiththeheartbeatwasthewildpleasureofflying,theoverwhelmingsenseoffreedomandpresence.However,theeuphoriadidn’tlastlonsbeforewelandedsafely.IturnedaroundtoseeHoffner,whosecheekswereredandeyeswereglitteringwithexcitement.Nowshewastheoldestwomantohaveasuccessfulskyjump.Thenewshittheheadlineandnumerouspeoplepostedcommentstopraiseher.Forthem,notonlywasHoffneralivinghistory,butalsoservedasareminderofhumanspiritofconfidence,optimismandcourage.參考范文二，Oneday,Iwenttothedininghallandsawhersittinginacorner,sadandalone.

Concerned,Iapproachedherandaskedwhatwasbotheringher.Withahintofsadnessinhereyes,Hoffnerconfessed,"IwishIcouldjoinyouinthatskydivingadventure,butthecoachrejectsme."Thedisappointmentinhervoicewaspalpable,andIfeltasurgeofempathyforher.SoIwenttomycoachandassuredthatHoffnercouldmakeit,too.Inthefollowingweeks,wewenttrainingtogetherandmadeprogressinthepreparation.Hoffner,withherunwaveringdetermination,surprisedeveryonewithhercommitmentandresilience.MoretraineesjoinedintosupportHoffner'sdaringendeavor.Thedayfinallyarrivedwhenweweresettoexperiencetherealdeal.

“Jump,”withtheorderofthepilot,Ijumpedoutofthepla