高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫技能之情緒描寫(2)課件

讀后續(xù)寫技能之情緒描寫高興、興奮一、高級詞匯

n.快樂;高興;歡樂2.happiness n.幸福;愉快3.delight vt.&n.

使高興;高興4.pleasure n.高興;愉快5.amusement n.娛樂;娛樂活動6.excitedly adv.激動地7.thrill vt.&n.使激動;興奮8.cheerful adj.令人愉快的;快樂的;高興的9.merry adj.愉快的;高興的10.overjoyed

adj.欣喜若狂;非常高興二、高級語塊

雀躍/高興地跳起來2.giveajumpintheair

高興地蹦跶3.lightup 喜形于色4.brightensb.’sheart 使某人心情愉快5.bewildwithjoy/delight/happiness 欣喜若狂6.inagoodmood 心情好7.inhigh/cheerfulspirits 興高采烈8.toone’sdelight/joy 讓某人開心的是9.ontopoftheworld

高興壞了10.beoverthemoon

欣喜若狂11.amixtureofexcitementandhappiness 既興奮又開心12.grinfromeartoear

咧嘴大笑三、亮點(diǎn)句式1.Icould

hardly

contain

my

joy/happiness/delightanddancedintothehouse.我抑制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅,蹦蹦跳跳地進(jìn)了家門。2.Delighted

and

thrilled,Igaveajumpintheairandthenskippedintothesupermarketalongwithmysmilingmother.又高興又激動,我蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟著我微笑著的媽媽進(jìn)了超市。3.Herhandsweretremblingwith

excitementassheopenedthebox.當(dāng)她打開盒子時,她的手激動得發(fā)抖。4.Tears

of

joy/happiness

welled

up

in

their

eyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether.他們喜極而泣,緊緊擁抱在一起。5.Shecameuptohim,with

a

smile

shining

like

a

diamond.Innotimehiseyeswerefilledwithwarmexcitedtears.她帶著鉆石般閃耀的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激動得熱淚盈眶?！厩榫硲?yīng)用】Ⅰ.完成句子1.Hecouldhardlywaittosharehistrip,____________________________________________________(雙眸閃閃發(fā)亮,臉上洋溢著喜悅).

2.Shefeltontopoftheworld,andeveryfreckleonhercheeks___________________(雀躍起來).

3.Atthesightofsuchalovelyrabbit,Iwas____________________(欣喜若狂)andfolloweditstrack.

4.Momtriedto_____________________(抑制自己的激動),buttheglitteringtearsfailedher.

5.“Aha!Icatchyou!”_____________________canbenoticedinhisvoice.

“啊哈!我抓住你了!”他的聲音里帶著一絲喜悅。eyesshining/twinklingandfaceglowingwithjoy/delightwasdancingwithjoywildwithdelight/joy

containherexcitementaflashofpleasure/joy

Ⅱ.翻譯句子1.我開心地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭,臉上露出燦爛的笑容。

Inoddedcheerfully/happily/joyfully,withabig/broad/brightsmileappearingon/spreadingacross/crossingmyface.

2.他臉上露出笑容,雙眸閃爍著喜悅/激動的光芒。Asmilelituphisfaceandhiseyeswereshining/twinkling/sparklingwithgreatjoy/excitement.

3.他高興極了,跳起來,高興地在院子里跑。Fullofhappiness/Pleasedbeyonddescription/Overjoyed,hejumpedupandranhappilyaroundtheyard.

4.這時,一個快樂的聲音從遠(yuǎn)處傳來,使我們沉浸在狂喜之中。大家都笑得合不攏嘴。Thencameahappyvoicefromadistance,bathingusinextremejoy.Everyonewasgrinningfromeartoear.

5.史蒂夫知道這個令人滿意的結(jié)果后,一種喜悅和幸福的感覺涌上心頭。AfterStevelearnedthissatisfactoryresult,asenseofjoyandhappinesssweptover/floodedoverhim.

Ⅲ.片段續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫一段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文,寫作時盡量使用表示“高興、興奮”的情緒詞匯和句式。

Asanonlychild,NicoleRenaeoftenfeltlonelyinheryouth.Butthatallchangedwhensheturnedten.Forherbirthday,Renae’sgrandmothersurprisedherwithanadorablegraypuppynamedChloe.Fromtheverystart,thetwowereinseparable.“Shewasmybestfriend,”Renaesaid.ForeveryounceofloveRenaegave,thelittledogreturnedtenfold.“Shewassuchasweetdog,”Renaesaid.“She’dlickyourfaceforeverifyoudidn’tstopher.”注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右。

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