如何寫建議信 公開課教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)

如何寫建議信【寫作任務(wù)】假設(shè)你叫李華。下面是你的美國朋友Tom給你寫的一封信，請根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容給他寫一封建議信。DearLihua,I'mwritingtoaskyouforsomeadvice.IhaveagoodfriendwithwhomIhadquarreled(爭吵)theotherday.Iregretitanddon'twanttolosehim.WhatshouldIdo?

Yours,

Tom注意：詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearTom,I'msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一封建議信。建議信是書信的一種形式，屬于應(yīng)用文。建議信是寫信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建議或忠告，有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就收信人遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等方面提出建議或忠告。建議信要給出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。且語氣一定要得當(dāng)，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說服力。就本篇習(xí)作而言，可以把全文分為三段：第一段：表明寫作意圖——給Tom提供一些建議。第二段：針對(duì)Tom的問題，給出具體的建議以及理由。第三段：簡單予以希望，希望自己的建議能對(duì)對(duì)方有所幫助?！境Ｓ帽磉_(dá)】開頭：I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.It'smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/adviceon...Iwouldliketogiveyousomesuggestions/adviceon...I'msorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficulty/problemsin...Hereareafewsuggestionsabout...Herearesometipsforyou.正文：Iwouldliketosuggestthat...Itisnecessary/important...Itseemstomethatyoucould...Whynot...?Ifyoudothis,...Itwouldbeagoodideaif...First,itisimportantto...Then,italsohelpsto...Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato...結(jié)尾：Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/advice/ideasuseful/helpful...Ihopemysuggestionswill...Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful/practical...【參考范文】DearTom,I'msorryyouhavehadaquarrelwithyourfriend.

Herearesometipsforyou.

First,don'tbetooworried.Mostfriendshavedisagreementsfromtimetotime.Second,whynotsaysorryforwhatyoudidwrong?Ifyoudothis,yourfriendwillknowyouvaluehis/herfriendshipandwanttomakeupwithhim/her.Atthesametime,he/shewillsurelyrealizehe/shewasatfault,too.Third,talkwithyourfriendaboutyourdeepestfeelingsandthoughts.Onlyinthiswaycanyouunderstandeachotherbetter.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.

Yours,

LiHua【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】1.

范文脈絡(luò)分明，層次清晰。作者在第一段開門見山地提出主題，第二段就如何解決問題提出具體的建議，第三段就所提建議表達(dá)期望。2.First,Second,Third的恰當(dāng)使用，不僅加強(qiáng)了文章的邏輯性和連貫性，而且使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。3.saysorryfor