高中英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作教學(xué)課件公開(kāi)課(活動(dòng)安排)

Whatmakesagoodessay?英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作2021/5/91基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作中存在的主要問(wèn)題及分析話題詞匯、短語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤2.詞匯、短語(yǔ)、句型貧乏3.句子語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤4.連貫性差積累少語(yǔ)法不扎實(shí)篇章意識(shí)不足2021/5/92考場(chǎng)作文TIPS1.取悅評(píng)卷人:有清晰的整體脈絡(luò),有自然的段間銜接.經(jīng)典的用詞用句,有整齊美觀的書(shū)寫(xiě).2.經(jīng)典的用句：

感嘆句，倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)、虛擬、省略句、定語(yǔ)從句，名詞性從句，名人名言。2021/5/93寫(xiě)作基本步驟1.仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱。2．圍繞要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出句子。3.添加過(guò)度，確保連貫。4.先求正確，再求靈活。5.認(rèn)真眷寫(xiě)，卷面整潔。2021/5/94近3年基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作分析活動(dòng)安排地點(diǎn)介紹2021/5/95基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作之活動(dòng)安排2021/5/96學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備舉行一次以環(huán)保為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一個(gè)書(shū)面通知,歡迎大家積極參與。[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]Notice……..Thestudents’Union典型例題：2021/5/97Notice……..Thestudents’Union認(rèn)真審題①②③④⑤學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備舉行一次以環(huán)保為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一個(gè)書(shū)面通知,歡迎大家積極參與。[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]一般將來(lái)時(shí)1.

時(shí)態(tài)：2.信息重組：2021/5/981.學(xué)生會(huì)將要舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽。目的：增長(zhǎng)環(huán)保知識(shí)和提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)。主題：“保護(hù)環(huán)境,節(jié)約能源”。2.

比賽時(shí)間：6月5日星期五4:00-5：30。比賽地點(diǎn)：教學(xué)樓五樓演講大廳。3.

報(bào)名時(shí)間：5月25日前。報(bào)名方式：studentcenter@163.com。4.

評(píng)獎(jiǎng)：一等獎(jiǎng)3名,二等獎(jiǎng)6名,三等獎(jiǎng)12名。5.

歡迎大家積極參與。信息重組2021/5/99本節(jié)課的目標(biāo)學(xué)習(xí)與這一話題相關(guān)的詞句2021/5/910舉辦______增加/豐富_________知識(shí)_______提高_(dá)_______學(xué)生會(huì)__________參加_______________保護(hù)_________環(huán)境____________________________口語(yǔ)_________________英語(yǔ)演講比賽___________________

主題n______節(jié)約vt

_____能源n______報(bào)名________相關(guān)詞匯默寫(xiě)hold/organize

increase/enrichknowledgeimprove(vt)TheStudents’Uniontakepartin/participateinprotect(vt)protection(n)environment(n)environmental(adj)

spokenEnglish/oralEnglish

English-speakingcontestthemesaveenergysignup2021/5/911

(1)增長(zhǎng)環(huán)保知識(shí)：_____________________________________________________(2)舉辦一次比賽：______________________(3)保護(hù)環(huán)境：__________________(4)節(jié)約能源：__________________(5)表示目的的短語(yǔ)：__________________________________________________enrich/increaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmenthold/organizeacontestprotectourenvironmentsaveenergythepurposeof.../withtheaimof...inorderto.../with詞語(yǔ)翻譯2021/5/912(6)在6月5日星期五下午4:00-5:30：_____4:00p.m.___5:30p.m.,___FridayJune5th(7)教學(xué)樓：_________________(8)在五樓：____the5thfloor(9)演講大廳：___________onfromteaching/classroombuildingtoon

thelecturehall詞語(yǔ)翻譯2021/5/913(10)參加比賽的人：______________________________________(11)在5月25日前：_____May25th(12)在studentcenter@163.com上：__studentcenter@163.comthosewhowanttoparticipateinthecontestbeforeat詞語(yǔ)翻譯2021/5/914(13)三個(gè)一等獎(jiǎng)：___________________(14)歡迎參加：________________________________________________________threefirstprizesYouarewelcometobethere./Welcometojoinus.詞語(yǔ)翻譯2021/5/915句子翻譯1.學(xué)生會(huì)將要舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽。目的：增長(zhǎng)環(huán)保知識(shí)和提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)。主題：“保護(hù)環(huán)境,節(jié)約能源”。2.比賽時(shí)間：6月5日星期五4:00-5：30。比賽地點(diǎn)：教學(xué)樓五樓演講大廳。3.

報(bào)名時(shí)間：5月25日前。報(bào)名方式：studentcenter@163.com。4.

評(píng)獎(jiǎng)：一等獎(jiǎng)3名,二等獎(jiǎng)6名,三等獎(jiǎng)12名。5.

歡迎大家積極參與。2021/5/916句1：學(xué)生會(huì)將要舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽。目的：增長(zhǎng)環(huán)保知識(shí)和提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)。主題：“保護(hù)環(huán)境,節(jié)約能源”。TheStudents’UnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontesttoincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish.Thethemeis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”.適當(dāng)調(diào)整更加順暢句子1翻譯2021/5/917合并：InordertoincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish,theStudents’UnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhich/whosethemeis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”.(定語(yǔ)從句)合并句子2021/5/918句2.比賽時(shí)間：6月5日星期五4:00-5：30。比賽地點(diǎn)：教學(xué)樓五樓演講大廳。ThecontestwillbeheldintheLectureHallonthe5thfloorintheclassroombuildingfrom4:00p.m.to5:30p.m.,onFridayJune5th.先地點(diǎn)，后時(shí)間由小到大句子2翻譯2021/5/919句3.報(bào)名時(shí)間：5月25日前。報(bào)名方式：studentcenter@163.com。Ifyouwanttoparticipateinthecontest,youshouldsignupatstudentcenter@163.combeforeMay25th.中文沒(méi)有主語(yǔ)時(shí)：要補(bǔ)充主語(yǔ)再翻譯。句子3翻譯2021/5/920句4：獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)：3個(gè)一等獎(jiǎng),6個(gè)二等獎(jiǎng)和12個(gè)三等獎(jiǎng)。

Therearethreefirstprizes,sixsecondandtwelvethirdones.句5.希望大家積極參與比賽。Anyoneiswarmlywelcometobethere.句子4、5翻譯2021/5/9211.ToincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish,theStudents’UnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhichis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”.2.ThecontestwillbeheldintheLectureHallonthe5thfloorintheclassroombuildingfrom4:00p.m.to5:30p.m.,onFridayJune5th.3.Ifyouwanttoparticipateinthecontest,youshouldsignupatatstudentcenter@163.combeforeMay25th.4.Therearethreefirstprizes,sixsecondandtwelvethirdones.5.Anyoneiswarmlywelcometotakepartinit.連句成篇ThosewhoaresupposedtoitLotsofprizeswillbedeliveredforthecontest,including2021/5/922Notice

ToincreaseourknowledgeabouttheenvironmentandimproveourspokenEnglish，theStudents’UnionisgoingtoorganizeanEnglish-speakingcontest,thethemeofwhichis:“Protectourenvironmentandsaveourenergy”ThecontestwillbeheldintheLectureHallonthe5thfloorintheclassroombuildingfrom4:00p.m.to5:30p.m.,onFridayJune5th.Thosewhowanttoparticipateinthecontestaresupposedtosignupatstudentcenter@163.combeforeMay25th.Lotsofprizeswillbedeliveredforthecontest,includingthreefirstprizes,sixsecondandtwelvethirdones.Dearfellowschoolmates,youarewarmlywelcometobethereandthanksforyourparticipation.