2024版高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)寫作專題專題10旅游觀光課件新人教版

寫作專題專題十旅游觀光Ⅰ．應(yīng)用文寫作給報(bào)刊投稿(2021·天津卷3月)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括：1．該地方的基本情況(如名稱、地理位置等);2．該地方的特色(如文化、景點(diǎn)等)；3．你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinthesouthwesternpartofChina．Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaiValleyandDujiangyanIrrigationSystem．JiuzhaiValleyNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince．①Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolourfullakes．②What'smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandasandgoldenmonkeys．Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedthere．AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationSystem．Itdatesfromover2，000yearsago．③However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday．Sichuanisawonderfulplace．I'msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiuzhaiValleyaswellastheconstructionofDujiangyanIrrigationSystem．1．詞匯美：文章運(yùn)用了很多高級(jí)詞匯，如belocatedin,world-famous,placesofinterest,anaturereserve,impressive,multi-levelwaterfalls,haveachancetodosth．,rareanimals,scenicspot,datefrom,playanimportantpartin,beamazedby等。2．句式美：①句Whatisthemostimpressive是What引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句。②句walkinginthenaturereserve是動(dòng)詞-ing形式短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，toseerareanimals是不定式作后置定語(yǔ)。③句中的However表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。此外，文中多處巧妙運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~語(yǔ)，比如What'smore表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系；suchas,like表示列舉等。假定你是李華。上周你校組織了嘉興南湖一日游學(xué)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給校報(bào)英文版投稿，介紹該活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1．活動(dòng)時(shí)間、參加人員；2．游學(xué)活動(dòng)安排(坐游船、參觀紀(jì)念館等)；3．活動(dòng)反響。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：MemorialHall紀(jì)念館____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Lastweek,ourschoolorganisedaone-daystudytourinNanhu,Jiaxing．Alltheteachersandstudentsofourschooltookpartintheactivity．OnWednesday,wegatheredattheschoolgateat7o'clockinthemorning,andthenwenttherebybus．InordertoreviewthehistoryofthefoundingofthePartyandappreciatethespiritoftheRedBoat,wetookacruiseshipandvisitedtheMemorialHall．Welistenedcarefullytotheteacher'sexplanationofthehistoryofthePartyBuilding．Onehundredyearsago,theoldergenerationmadecontinuouseffortstorevitaliseChina,whichmadeusverymoved．Wewillworkharderforthehappinessofmankindinthefuture．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood．Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful．OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsusalotabouther．[懸念1]Ⅱ．讀后續(xù)寫MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway．Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgoodbyetoallofourfriends．Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain!Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff．Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveller'schecksMumhadforgotten．[懸念2]DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMumwasdrivingwhileDadslept．“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andIwillstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo．”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind．“Honey,wherearethekids？”

“What？！Oh,Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet．”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances．Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy(空房間)．Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Mumsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskedifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous．[懸念3]Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea．Mumnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反對(duì))．Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Mumwouldhavebeendelighted．Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis．Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown．注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。The

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②媽媽是健忘的，途中會(huì)不會(huì)有什么麻煩？③假如爸爸不在場(chǎng)，孩子們會(huì)怎樣？段首句2思考：①他們帶的帳篷會(huì)發(fā)揮作用嗎？

②野營(yíng)時(shí)，媽媽會(huì)怎么做？③作者對(duì)這次旅行的感悟是什么？通過(guò)以上思路，預(yù)設(shè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)如下：Paragraph1：沒有忘記帶帳篷→媽媽健忘把爸爸丟了→媽媽決定路邊露營(yíng)等他→孩子們害怕→母愛Paragraph2：露營(yíng)→母愛的力量→見到了爸爸→作者的感悟The

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way．Thetentbecameaclosefriendthen．Everytimewecamped,Mumwouldreadabookorsingasoftsong．Thewarmthofherarmsneverfadedawayinmymemory．Thoughshewasforgetful,laughteraccompaniedusalongtheway．WefinallymetpoorDadinourdestination．Thistripmademerealisethatlovemayhavemanyways,butitcanalwayswarmpeopleinthedark．1．使用恰當(dāng)?shù)男揎椩~讓描寫更加生動(dòng)。①forever暗示作者不喜歡露營(yíng)。②thesame表明途中爸爸走散了，他們不得不黑夜路邊露營(yíng)。③blewwildlylikeamonster烘托了讓作者害怕的自然環(huán)境。④poor一詞照應(yīng)MumlostDad，在孩子的眼里，媽媽因?yàn)榻⊥寻职峙獊G了，爸爸好可憐。2．詞匯與語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富、準(zhǔn)確。①still,thingscometoitsturningpoint,approach,takecontrolof,embrace,fadeaway,accompany等堪稱經(jīng)典。②FearfulasMumwas是as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。③whichreallyrelaxedus為which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。④stayingwithMum為動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)。閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Aboulder(巨石),asbigasahouse．That'showtheguidebookdescribedGiantRock．Dadsaiditarrivedheremillionsofyearsago．Iwasfinallygoingtoseeit,insnowshoes,withmytwooldercousins,mydad,andmyuncleDon．I'dbeensnowshoeingbefore,andIlikedtheadventureofhikingthroughdeepsnow．Attheparkingarea,afterputtingonoursnowshoes,westudiedthemap．Duetothegeographicallocation,electricaldevicesareinaccessiblehere．Themapisouronlyguide．“Westarthere，”Dadsaid．“Ontheredtrail(小路)．Thenweturnleftontothepurpleroad．That'swhereGiantRockis．”

“Remembertosticktogetheranddon'twanderoff,guys，”UncleDonsaid．Thetrailranuphillalongsideastonewall．Itwaseasytofollowbecauseredmarkerswerenailedtothetreesandthesnowhadbeenpackeddownbyotherhikers．Atthetopofthehill,weturnedontothepurpletrail．Wesettledintoapattern,withDadandeveryoneelseinfrontandmeintheback，crunching(嘎吱嘎吱地行進(jìn))throughthesnow．Isawlotsofanimaltracks—mostlydeer,squirrel,andrabbitprints．Asthetrailwounddown,mycousinAndrewsaidwhatI'dbeenthinking：“WillweeverreachGiantRock？”MycousinAidensmiledandturnedtome,“Luke,doyouthinkyourdadinventedthisideajusttogetusawayfromtheTVforawhile？”Ilaughed．“Youneverknow．”Finally,weclimbedahillandsawthemassivebouldersittingaloneintheforest．Itreallyisasbigasahouse!MycousinsandIhigh-fivedeachotherandjoggeduntilwestoodatthebase,breathless．Standingintheboulder'sbroadshadow,Inoticedthesunhadsunklower．“Let'sheadback，”Dadsaidafterafewminutes．“Therewillbeseveralcrossroadsonthewayback．Guys,keepupwiththeteam．”Soonwewerecrunch-crunch-crunchingourwayhome．Iwasalittlebehindthegroupwhenweapproachedacrossroads．AndInoticedasetofanimaltracksIdidn'trecognise,soIfollowedthemforacloserlook．注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。I

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