高考英語讀后續(xù)寫誤會故事類+飛機上誤會鄰座先生偷吃了自己的餅干+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)誤會故事——飛機上誤會鄰座先生偷吃了自己的餅干1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ayoungwomanwaswaitingforherflightatanairport.ShewasleavingforLondonbecauseshegotanewjobthere.ItwassaidthathernewbosswasatypicalEnglishgentleman—polite,modest,humorousandconsiderate.Shewasexcitedaswellasalittlenervousabouthernewlife.Withseverallonghoursbeforeherflight,thewomanhuntedforabookintheairportshops,boughtapacketofcookiesandfoundaplacetosit.Shetookoutabookandstartedtoread.Althoughshewasabsorbedinherbook,shehappenedtoseethatthemansittingbesideher,asbold（大膽的）ashecouldbe,grabbed（抓）acookieortwofromthebaginbetweenthem.Educatedtobewell-mannered,shetriedtoignoreittoavoidanargument.Buttoshowthatshewastheowner,shestartedtotakecookiesfromthatbagtoo.Unfortunately,themandidn`tgetthathint（暗示）,sincehedidn`tstopgrabbingthecookies.4續(xù)寫原文“Howannoying!”shethought.Asthegreedycookiethiefkepteating,thewomanmunched（用力咀嚼）somecookiesandwatchedtheclock.Shewasgettingangrierastheminuteswentby,thinking,“IfIweren`tsonice,Iwouldblackenhiseyes.”Witheachcookieshetook,hetookone,too;whenonlyonewasleft,shewonderedwhathewoulddo.Withasmileonhisface,andanervouslaugh,hetookthelastcookieandbrokeitinhalf.Heofferedherahalf,andatetheother.Shegrabbeditfromhim,glaredathimandthought,“Oh,brother.Thisguyhassomenerveandheissorude!Whydidn’theevenshowanygratefulness?”Shehadneverknownwhenshehadbeensoangry,andsighedinreliefwhenherflightwascalled.Shegatheredherbelongingsandheadedtothegatequickly,refusingtolookbackattherudethief.Sheboardedtheplane,sankinherseat,andlookedforherbook,whichwasalmostcomplete.5段首句Paragraph1：Asshereachedinherbaggage,shegasped（喘氣）withsurprise.Paragraph2：Surprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以餅干為線索展開，講述了一位女士在登機前被鄰座的先生“偷吃”了餅干。經(jīng)過多次試探，這個先生并沒有“收斂”，故而她認(rèn)為這位先生非常沒禮貌并且粗魯。登機后女士發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的餅干仍然在包中，并且冤枉了那位先生。她意外地發(fā)現(xiàn)那位先生坐在她的后面，并且向他道歉。這件事使她明白真正的禮貌是發(fā)自內(nèi)心的善意。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Asshereachedinherbaggage,shegasped（喘氣）withsurprise.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)她伸進(jìn)行李時，她驚訝地喘著氣?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫女士意識到那位先生并沒有粗魯?shù)赝党宰约旱娘灨?。相反，自己才是那個不禮貌且粗魯?shù)娜恕?0續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Surprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“令她驚訝的是，她發(fā)現(xiàn)這位先生正坐在她后面?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫女士向先生道歉，并且明白真正的禮貌的意義。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索看到餅干——意識到錯誤——想道歉——發(fā)現(xiàn)那位先生——道歉——感悟12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類道歉：saysorry/apologized笑：laugh/smiled情緒類令人惱怒的：annoying/irritating13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Sherealizedthatthemanwasn’ttheirritatingcookiethiefandhewaspoliteenough.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）[高分句型2]Itwasthemanwhotaughtherthetruth.（運用了Itwas…who引導(dǎo)的強調(diào)句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Asshereachedinherbaggage,shegasped（喘氣）withsurprise.Therewasanunopenedbagofcookies.Aterriblethoughtcrossedhermind,“Ifmycookiebagishere,theotheroneIateishisandhejusttriedtosharewithme.”Sherealizedthatthemanwasn’ttheirritatingcookiethiefandhewaspoliteenough.Incontrastwithhim,shewastheimpoliteone.Butitwastoolatetosaysorrytohim.16范文呈現(xiàn)Surprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.Herfaceburnedwithshameandapologizedforwhatshedidandsaidtohim.“Itdoesn’tmatter!”themansmiledatherandsaid.Itwastotallyunexpectedforhertohearhisresponse.Sheunderstoodthatrealpolitenessandgentlenesswassincerekindness,eventhoughotherstreatedyouinarudeway.Itwasthemanwhotaughtherthetruth.17范文譯文當(dāng)她把手伸進(jìn)行李時，她倒吸了一口涼氣(喘氣）驚訝。有一袋未開封的餅干。她想到了一個可怕的想法：“如果我的餅干袋在這里，我吃的另一個就是他的，他只是想和我分享。”她意識到這個男人不是那個煩人的餅干小偷，他很有禮貌。與他相比，她是個不禮貌的人。但是已經(jīng)來不及向他道歉了。18范文譯文出乎意料的是，她發(fā)現(xiàn)那個男人就坐在