讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)愛(ài)心助人類-好心的墨西哥一家人 講義 高考英語(yǔ)專題復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。（綠色備注：學(xué)生生詞）【1】Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthree

instances

ofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,I

wassickof【厭倦、厭煩】

thewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,Iwasonthesideoftheroadforclose

tothreehourswithmybigJeep.I

put

signsinthe

windows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤頂),and

offeredmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,a

Mexican

familyinasmalltruck

pulledover,

andthe

father

boundedout【2】Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.He

conveyedthroughher

thathehada

jackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneed

somethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(鋸子)

from

truckand

cut

asectionoutofabiglog

onthesideofthe

road.We

rolled

it

over

rand

put

hisjackontop,and

we

wereinbusiness.【3】Istarted

taking

thewheel

off

,andthen,ifyoucan

believeit,Ibrokehis

tireiron.

Noworries:He

handed

itto

hiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuya

new

tireiron.Shewasback

in15minutes.We

finishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.【4】Thetwoofusweredirtyand

sweaty.

Hiswifeprepared

apotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20

billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttake

it,so

instead

Il

wentupto

gave

ittohiswife

asquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.Theywerein

Oregon【n.俄勒岡州（美國(guó)州名）】

so

MommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenext

fewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.2.

分析過(guò)程通讀文章了解文章情節(jié)和情感發(fā)展關(guān)鍵對(duì)象+事件+相關(guān)信息點(diǎn)：主要對(duì)象1：作者——車壞了--》無(wú)人幫忙-》請(qǐng)求幫助+付費(fèi)20美元----》主要對(duì)象2：墨西哥一家人爸爸，媽媽，女兒：幫助作者次要對(duì)象1：嫌麻煩不愿幫助他人的人+車相關(guān)信息點(diǎn)【地點(diǎn)

，食物】：墨西哥

+農(nóng)場(chǎng)+水果情感變化：作者：失望---》開(kāi)心---》感激結(jié)合兩句開(kāi)頭句：第一段：根據(jù)1段開(kāi)頭句+2段開(kāi)頭提示句+文章信息點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)詢問(wèn)是否吃飯+包：作者；婉拒---吃---墨西哥一家人：熱情---水果農(nóng)場(chǎng)+墨西哥故事---》包

妻子放作者車內(nèi)----》作者：妻子把包放在車內(nèi)【對(duì)應(yīng)文章

asquietlyasicould】墨西哥一家人：妻子-》裝包：吃得【農(nóng)場(chǎng)】：水果+錢20---》包里第二段：2段開(kāi)頭句+結(jié)合文章信息點(diǎn)【對(duì)象：墨西哥家人幫助+不愿意幫助得人】表達(dá)關(guān)鍵對(duì)象情感和認(rèn)知以及行為的升華；開(kāi)頭句信息點(diǎn)

:包作者動(dòng)作變化：坐上車-》打開(kāi)包-》發(fā)現(xiàn)食物【吃飯】+錢【20美元】情感升華變化：墨西哥：妻子錢+食物【此段表示他們幫助】-----》作者感動(dòng)+震驚----認(rèn)知：不幫助與幫助

：感恩+傳遞->上升行為：幫助他人注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在以下位置作答。第一段When

I

wasaboutto

saygoodbye,the

girl

【墨西哥】askedifI'd

hadlunch.作者+墨西哥+吃飯+吃飯過(guò)程【聊天+農(nóng)場(chǎng)+墨西哥】+飯后+【吃+錢】+車第二段After

they

left,IgotintomyJeepandopened

the

paperbag.包：+打開(kāi)包+發(fā)現(xiàn)錢+吃的東西+感激+要成為那樣的人】3.

答案第一段WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'd

hadlunch.Abrightsmileflashed

on

her

face

when

I

said

I

hadn’t.【拒絕】

The

family

invited

me

to

enjoy

the

lunch

together.Originally,I

refused

but

watch

their

enthusiastic

faces

I

nodded

with

gratitude.

We

shared

wonderful

meal

over

which

they

shared

interesting

stories

about

their

lives

in

Mexico

and

on

fruit

farms.

After

lunch【與文章信息一致，引出下文得包】.

The

girls’

mother

put

a

paper

bag

in

my

jeep.I

showed

my

gratitude

again

and

we

said

goodbye

to

each

other.第二段：

Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthe

paperbag.Inside

the

bag

were

some

fruits【果園】.I

was

also

surprised

to

find

the

20

bill【給妻子得錢】.I

was

over

come

with

mixture

of

respect

and

gratitude.【情感得正能量升華】

It

was

awesome

to

know

that

while【雖然但是】

many

people

tend

to

ignore【對(duì)應(yīng)文章hadn'tbotherto

do

】

those

in

need,there

are

some

kind-hearted

ones

who

go

out

of

their

way

to

lend

a

hand【墨西哥家人】

.The

good

deed【行為】

the

foreign

family

did

will

never

escape

me.I'm

sure

I

will

pay

it

forward!將愛(ài)傳遞下去4.

文章精細(xì)化分析：時(shí)態(tài)：主要過(guò)去+將來(lái)【行為】相關(guān)詞匯+細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)句式結(jié)構(gòu)：定從、并列簡(jiǎn)單句、介詞短語(yǔ)，關(guān)鍵對(duì)象性別：【1】1）Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthree

instances

ofcartrouble.時(shí)間短語(yǔ)【狀語(yǔ)】，

主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)【n+of短語(yǔ)】2）Eachtimethesethings

happened,I

wassickof

theway

【mostpeople

hadn'tbothered

tohelp.】時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句+主句Eachtime+句子：時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句主句：主+besickof+賓：+定從【省略連詞】知識(shí)點(diǎn)：Theway+連詞+定從如果連詞后定從完整：inwhich、that、省略3）Oneofthosetimes,I

was

onthesideoftheroadforclose

tothreehourswithmybigJeep.Oneof+cn復(fù)數(shù)，主+系+表【介詞短語(yǔ)】+【for+時(shí)間段】+with+名詞主系表+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)+with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)4）I

put

signsinthe

windows,bigsignsthat

said

NEEDAJACK(千斤頂),and

offered

money.主謂賓+介詞短語(yǔ)，強(qiáng)調(diào)名詞+定從【兩個(gè)并列謂語(yǔ)】5）Nothing.6）

RightasIwasabouttogiveup,a

Mexican

familyinasmalltruck

pulledover【把車停在一邊】,

andthe

father

boundedoutAs引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句【倒裝】+主【介詞短語(yǔ)】謂and+主謂As：=when時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句=because原因狀語(yǔ)從句=evenif、although讓步狀語(yǔ)從句=正如：方式狀語(yǔ)從句=as...as比較狀語(yǔ)從句=介詞：作為n1asn2=suchas比如+doingsth注意：通過(guò)復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)看透簡(jiǎn)單句主+【介詞短語(yǔ)/從句】+謂+賓【+介詞短語(yǔ)/從句】原句

AsIwas

right

abouttogiveupRightAsIwasabouttogiveupAsIamfree，iwillhelpothers.FreeasIam，iwillhelpothers.【2】1）He

sizedupthesituation【了解情況】

andcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.主+謂+賓+and謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)，非限定從2）He

conveyedthrough

her

that

【he

had

a

jackbut

that

it

was

toosmallfortheJeep,】

so

we

wouldneed

somethingtosupportit.conveyed【表達(dá)】主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+2個(gè)賓從+結(jié)果從句3）Then

hegotasaw(鋸子)

【from

truck】

and

cut

asectionoutofabiglog

【onthesideofthe

road.

】Log【日志，木頭記錄】銜接詞：

then主謂賓+介詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)+and謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+介詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)4）We

rolled

it

over

and

put

hisjackontop,and

we

wereinbusinessrolled

it

over滾動(dòng)【3】1）Istarted

taking

thewheel

off

,

andthen,

ifyoucan

believeit,Ibrokehis

tireiron.

tireiron.【拆輪胎棒.】And連詞+副詞then銜接2）Noworries:He

handed

itto

hiswife,

3）and

shewasgone【

inaflashdowntheroad

】tobuya

new

tireiron.主系表+介詞短語(yǔ)+非謂語(yǔ)表示目的【todosth】4）

Shewasback

in15minutes.Back返回主系表+介詞短語(yǔ)【時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)】5）We

finishedthejob,andIwasavery

happy

man.第四段1）Thetwoofusweredirtyand

sweaty【adj.渾身出汗的；汗臭的；吃力的；汗似的】.

2）Hiswifeprepared

apotofwater

forus

towashourhands.主謂賓+todosth表示目的3）Itriedtoputa$20

billintheman'shand,but

hewouldn'ttake

it,

so

instead

Il

wentupto

gave

ittohiswife

asquietlyasIcould.instead

副詞:相反地主謂賓+as+advas+sbcan/couldasquietlyasIcould.我盡可能的安靜。Iwillrunasquicklyasican.4）

Iaskedthelittlegirl

where

theylived.主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)從句Asksbsth5）Mexico,shesaid.6）TheywereinOregon【n.俄勒岡州（美國(guó)州名）】

so

MommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenext

fewweeks.7）Then

theywouldgohome.范文第一段1）WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'd

hadlunch.When時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓從2）Abrightsmileflashed

on

her

face

when

I

said

I

hadn’t.【拒絕】無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)[情緒、表情】+flashed+介詞短語(yǔ)+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句Aclearangryflashedinhereyeswhenirefusedher.3）The

family

invited

me

to

enjoy

the

lunch

together.4）Originally,I

refused

but

watching

their

enthusiastic

faces

I

nodded

with

gratitude.

副詞【時(shí)間】，主謂

+轉(zhuǎn)折連詞+非謂語(yǔ)【doingsth】+主謂+with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)5）We

shared

wonderful

meal

over

which

they

shared

interesting

stories

about

their

lives

in

Mexico

and

on

fruit

farms.

主謂賓【meal】+介詞+which【meal】+定從定從：主謂賓+介詞短語(yǔ)6）After

lunch，the

girls’

mother

put

a

paper

bag

in

my

jeep.介詞短語(yǔ)【銜接時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)】+簡(jiǎn)單句【介詞短語(yǔ)】7）I

showed

my

gratitude

again

and

we

said

goodbye

to

each

other.第二段：1）Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthe

paperbag.After+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)+兩個(gè)并列謂語(yǔ)【and】2）Inside

the

bag

were

some

fruits.完全倒裝some

fruits

were

Inside

the

bag表語(yǔ)或者介詞短語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)放首句