大學英語四級強化-書面表達

新東方大學英語四級強化班——書面表達作文四級作文評分方法五級評分制：2、5、8、11、14分注意字數(shù)適中用不同單詞表達不同意思如何打動評卷人文章的整體脈絡清晰段落的銜接暢順用詞造句經(jīng)典書寫美觀英文寫作的基本常識清晰的結構觀點鮮明的開頭緊扣主題的結尾由主題句引導的銜接自然的中間段落統(tǒng)一的中心自然的銜接寫作的重中重：邏輯關系顯性化寫作的重中重重復詞：概括；直接；齊頭序數(shù)詞關聯(lián)詞：遞進；轉(zhuǎn)折；因果平時如何提高寫作閱讀四級閱讀理解文章等等背誦18篇優(yōu)秀四級作文看電影——阿甘正傳、獅子王、老友記30遍圖表類特點：有圖——趨勢透，字數(shù)少段落安排：第一段：趨勢（變化）第二段：分析變化的原因第三段：自己的看法和感想正文：第一段：如圖所示Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram,……The…displaythatstandingthe……carefully,wecansee.Thechart/graphshows/displaysthat……Ascanbeshowninthetable……,Itisclear/apparentfromthechart/tablethat比例Bhasthelargestpercentage/proportionof…….……account(s)for/take(s)up10%.Onthetopofthelistis……,whichaccountsfor60%.Atthebottomis……,whichaccountsfor10%.Aisranked/ratedfirst,followedbyBat30%andCat25%.增長與下降Thenumberof……increased/rosesuddenly/rapidly/dramatically（戲劇地）/substantially（實質(zhì)的）/considerably/sharply/steeply（險峻地）from1990to2000.Therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steepincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.Thenumberof……increased/rosesteadily（穩(wěn)定地）/gradually（逐漸地）/slowly/slightlyfrom1990to2000.Therewasasteady/gradual/slow/slightincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.下降：decrease/fall/drop；adecrease/drop/reduction/declineinthenumberof……達到某點Thesituation/figuresreached/hitapeak/highat60%in…….Thesituation/figurespeakedat60%in…….Thesituation/figuresbottomedoutat20%in……. Thesituation/figureshitatroughat20%in…….倍數(shù)Aistwice/three/fourtimeswhatitwasin1990.Aistwice/three/fourtimestheamountin1990. Aistwice/three/fourtimesasmuch/manyas……in1990.Thefigurewasroughlydoubled/tripled/quintupledbetween1990and2000.第二段：As…thenumberof…動詞+副詞during…As…earlyas數(shù)字，thenumberwas……,then……itbecause……列舉First……,second……,last（inaddition）Foronething,……,foranotherthing,……,what’smore……Ononehand,……,ontheotherhand,moreover,……Thereforeallthesereasons……thechanges.第三段：總結：Hencefromthe……喊口號：=1\*GB3①Itishightimethat+一般過去時=2\*GB3②Onlythrough……canwe……只有……我們才能…… =3\*GB3③ +名人名言操辭：上升：rise,increase,goup,boon,rocket下降：decrease,reduce,comedown,onthedecline快速：rapidly,dramatically,sharply（銳）慢：slowly,gradually二選一類特點：給出兩個觀點段落安排：第一段：引出將要評論的事物或者觀點；提出第一種觀點；本觀點支持性分論點。第二段：承上啟下；提出第二種觀點；本觀點支持性分論點。第三段：我的觀點正文：第一段：引言：Inrecentyears,withfasteconomicgrowth,……h(huán)aveappearedinmanyfamiliesinChina. 近年來，伴隨著經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展，……在中國很多的家庭中出現(xiàn)了。人們對……有著不同的觀點。Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinaryChinesefamiliesbegintoafforda…….Yet, 伴隨著人們生活水平的提高，一些中國家庭開始能夠買……。但是，人們對……的觀點是不同的。Eversinceearlythiscentury,……h(huán)asbecomeanessential（本質(zhì)的）partofourmodernlife.……isthedrivingforcebehindtheswift（迅速的）progressofindustry,agriculture,scienceandtechnology.Nobodycandenythatthedevelopmentofourcivilizationdependson……. 自從本世紀初夜，……已經(jīng)成為現(xiàn)代生活的一個重要部分?！枪I(yè)、農(nóng)業(yè)和科技飛速發(fā)展的動力。沒有人能夠否認人類文明的發(fā)展依賴于……。Theissueof……h(huán)asbeenwidelyargued/debated（爭論）currently. 關于是否……的問題，如今公眾已經(jīng)展開了廣泛的討論?！環(huán)asbecomeahot/populartopicamongpeoplerecently.Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson. ……已經(jīng)成為人們談論的熱門話題，不同的人對此有不同的看法。Thereisapublic/general/muchdebate/discussion/controversy（論戰(zhàn)）today/nowadaysabout/on/upon/over/astotheproblem/issueof……. 關于……的問題，公眾已經(jīng)展開了討論。Thereisanargument/muchdisagreement/noconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleconcerning/over/asto/on……. 關于……，人們的看法不盡相同。Thereisnoconsensusofopinionamongpeopleastotheviewof……Somepeoplebelieve/argue/say/maintain/advocate（提倡）/advise/hold/claim/thinkthat…… . 一些人認為……Itiswidely/generally/commonly/universallythought/believed/accepted/heldthat…….Tothegeneral/public/poplarmind,……. 人們通常認為……Thosewhocriticize/opposeto/objectto……arguethat……. 那些反對……的人認為……。分論點Thereareseveraladvantagesin/of…….Thefist/biggestoneisthat……. ……有很多的優(yōu)點。其中第一個/最大的好處是……。……h(huán)asappositiveimpact/influence/effectonpeople’slives. ……對人類的生活起到了積極的影響。Mostpeoplewouldagreethattherecanbenosubstitutefor…….Theysaythat…….Besides,theyassert,…… 大多數(shù)人認為……是不可替代的。他們認為……。另外他們還認為……。Anotherattractionabout……isthat…… 另外關于……的另一個優(yōu)點是……。Moreover,oneoftheadvantagesof……isthat…… 另外，……的另一個優(yōu)點是……。Themostimportantadvantageof……isthat…… ……最重要的優(yōu)點是……。Wemustnotlosesightofthefactthatthereareadvantagesto…….Moreimportantly,therecanbenosubstitutefor……. 我們不應當不注意到……有這樣的優(yōu)點。更重要的是，……是不可替代的。Foronething……foranotherthing……What……wecantakeitforgrantedthat……第二段：承上啟下 即使有其優(yōu)點，但是它們?nèi)匀挥凶陨淼娜毕?。However,likeanythingelse,theyalsohavetheirownweakness/limits/negativeeffects. 和其它事物一樣，它們也有著自身的缺點。However,theyarenotwithoutshortcomings/faults. 但是它們并不是沒有缺點的。Ofcourse,thedisadvantagescannotbeignored. 當然，缺點也是不能忽視的。However,justaseverythinghastwosides,……alsohasmanydrawbacks. 但是正如每個事物都有兩面性一樣，……也有很多缺點。Yetothersspeakoftheproblemsof……h(huán)avebrought.Theycomplainthat……. 但是還有人在談論它所帶來的……問題。他們抱怨……。However,……mayalsobringwithitproblemsoursocietyhadnotpreviouslyfaced. 但是，……也有一些我門未曾遇到的問題。Despitetheincreaseinefficiencyandconveniencegeneratedby……,thechangestheybringcouldverywellleadtopotentiallyadverseconsequences. 拋卻……所產(chǎn)生的效率和方便，它們所引發(fā)的變化也許會導致潛在的不良后果。Thismaybeso,butitmustbepointedoutthat……alsothathasitsdrawbacks. 這也許是這樣（有好處），……自身的缺陷也應當被指出。However,……mayalsocause/bringabout/leadto/resultin/contributetosomeproblems. 但是，……依然會帶來一些問題。第二種觀點（Howeveracoinhastwoside）Onthecontrary,someothersthink/believe/argue/emphasis/claim/maintain……because……,besides……However,thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent/obvious/evident.Tobeginwith,…….Tomakemattersworse,…….Worstofall,……. 然而，不足之處也是顯而易見的。首先，…。更糟糕的是，……。最后……。Thesideeffects……h(huán)asexertedonhumanbeingscanbeboileddowntoseveralmajoronesasfollows.First,…….Second,…….Inaddition,……. ……對人類所產(chǎn)生的副作用歸納起來有以下幾個方面。其一，……。其二，……。此外，……第三段：AsfarasIamconcernedtheformerpointofviewcoincideswithmine.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayeasilydrawtheconductionthat……Unquestionably,thechallengeof……meansweallshouldconsiderhowwecancontrolthem,sothattheywellnotcontrolus. 毫無疑問，……的挑戰(zhàn)意味著我們應該思考怎樣控制它們而不是被它們控制。Whetherthe……areablessingoracurseisadifficultquestiontoanswer,yetthedesireforthecomfortandindependence……canbringwillnotbeeliminated. ……究竟是一個祝福還是詛咒是一個很難回答的問題，但是它所產(chǎn)生的舒適和對立是不會被忽視的。Anyway/Anyhow/Inanycase,whethertheeffectisgoodorbad,onethingiscertain:ithaschangedandwillcontinuetochangethewayofourentertainment,ourleisureandourlife. 總之，不管是好還是壞，可以確定的是：它已經(jīng)并且還將改變我們的娛樂、讀家和生活方式。Giventhechoicebetweenthesetwomethodsof……,Iprefer…….ThisisbecauseIamthesortofpersonwhofindsitdifficulttoconcentrateon……. 在……兩者之間做一個選擇，我會選……。這是因為我是這樣的一種人，我發(fā)現(xiàn)要專注于……是很困難的?！?Ifeel,istheonlyoneinwhichmostpeoplefeelcomfortableapplyingalltheirenergiestotheall-importanttaskof……. 我認為……是唯一的（一種方式），從而人們在把精力投入到很重要的事情……上的時候會覺得很舒適。ThereisnodoubtinmymindthatAnowadaysisafarbetterwayto……thanB. 毫無疑問，我認為現(xiàn)在對于做……A是比B更好的方式。Inmyopinion,theadvancesmadein……recentlyhavemade……obsolete. 我認為，最近……方面的進步使得……過時了。Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreach/draw/cometoconclusionthat……. 考慮到所有這些因素，我們得出結論……。Alreliableevidencespointtoonesaying/reflectonefact,thatis……. 將所有可靠的因素歸結為一點就是……。Forthereasonspresented/statedabove,Istronglycommittothenotionthat……. 從上面提到的原因，我強烈地支持這樣的概念是……。WhileitistruethattheargumentIdisagreeholdalittlebitofwater,Ithinkthat……. 有一個事實是，雖然我不支持的論點也有一些優(yōu)點，但是我還是認為……。Therefore/So/Hence/Thus,itissafelytodrawtheconclusionthat……. 于是我們得出結論……。Toputallintoanutshell,I……. 綜上所述，我……。Inmyopinion,itiswisetosupportthestatementthatitisbetterto……. 我認為，最好同意……的論點是明智的。Frommypointofview,itiswisetochoosesAratherthanB. 從我的觀點來看，選擇A而不是選擇B將更加明智。Attheriskofaddressingtheissuetoodirect,theadvantagesofAoutweighthatofB. 請原諒我說得直接一些，A的優(yōu)點要大于B的優(yōu)點。Therearedifferentviewsasto/concerningthistopic.Inmypart,Iwouldliketovotefor……. 關于這樣一個論題有各種各樣的觀點，就我個人而言，我傾向于同意……。AsfarasIamconcerned,IhaveapreferenceforAoverB. 就我個人的觀點來看，我選擇A而不是B。Bothpatternsof……presentadvantagesanddisadvantages,however,……. 以上兩種情況都有優(yōu)缺點，然而……。Certainly,Iamawareofthatbothmethodshaveshortcomings,nevertheless,frommypointofview,Iamfor/votefor……. 確切地來說兩種情況都有一些缺陷，然而從我的觀點來看，我傾向于……。TheadvantagesclaimedforAoverBare4nowbeingdoubted/debated.Nonetheless,measureformeasure,IconfessthatBismoreadvantages. A要優(yōu)于B的觀點越來越受到質(zhì)疑，經(jīng)過左右權衡，我認為B擁有更多的優(yōu)點。TheadvantagesofAcarrymoreweightthanthoseofB. A的優(yōu)點大于B的優(yōu)點。Inmypointofview,Aisasimportantas,ifnotmoreimportantthan,B.soitissagacioustochooseA. 從我的觀點來看，A和B一樣重要，如果不是更重要的話。所以選擇A是比較明智的。Nodoubt,IpreferA,sincetherearetoomanybenefitsthatoutnumberitsdisadvantagesofnotchoosingit.ButB,ontheotherhad,hasadvantagesnomorethanitsdisadvantages. 毫無疑問我選擇A，因為A的益處大大超過了不選擇它的缺點，現(xiàn)飯B的缺點要大于它的好處。Astome,Ithinkthemeritsoutweigh/carrymoreweightthanthedemerits. 我認為利大于弊。Butforme,Ithinkwhatismoreimportantisitspositiveside. 但就我而言，我認為它積極的一面更加重要。Theadvantagesof/derivedfrom……faroutweigh/aremuchgreaterthanthedisadvantages/problems……entails. ……的優(yōu)點遠遠多于它所引發(fā)的問題。闡釋類特點：提綱比較隨意；與前兩類文章有千絲萬縷的關系文章分類：舉現(xiàn)象、說原因、談感受、論影響舉現(xiàn)象單舉：Forexample/Forinstance/acaseinpoint/takeanexamplefor多舉：1.Forexample……nextto……furthermore……2.Forexample……and……also……even……3.Forexample……besides……論影響：Theinspect/effect/influence（harm）ofrumorhasbecomemorethemobviousatthatmoment.Foronething……foranotherthing……Recentlythephenomenonhas引起了關注/……becomeahottopicamongpeoplerecently/Nowadays,…h(huán)asbecomeaproblemweface.解決問題：Thekeyfactortosolvethisproblemis……/Thereisnoimmediatesolutiontotheissueof……,but……mightbehelpful.正文：第一段：引出話題 當前我國/我們社會所面臨的最棘手的問題是……。由于它已經(jīng)嚴重影響了……，所以也引起了公眾的關注。 最近有一項官方報告表明，有至少百分之十/超過四分之一/四分之一的大學畢業(yè)生/年輕人/看電視的人……（和1990年相比）?！F(xiàn)象已經(jīng)引起了公眾的關注。Nowadays,……h(huán)asbecomeaproblemwehavetoface. 如今……已經(jīng)成為我們必須面臨的問題。Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblem……. 現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始關注……的問題。Onceinanewspaper,Ihitupon/cameacrossareportthat……. 我曾經(jīng)在報紙上看到一篇關于……的報道。Recently,theissue/problem/questionof……h(huán)asbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublicattention/posedamongpublicattention. 最近……問題已經(jīng)成為人們關注的焦點。Inrecentlyyears,manycities/nations/peoplehavebeenfaced/troubledwiththeserousproblemof……. 在最近幾年里，很多城市/國家/人已經(jīng)面臨……問題/受到……的干擾。Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplecometorealize/beawareoftheimportanceof……. 越來越多的人開始意識到……的重要性。Itundeniable/Thereisnodenyingthefactthat……h(huán)asbecometheutmostconcernamongpeoplenowadays. 不可否認，……已經(jīng)成為人們最關注的問題。Recently,theriseinthephenomenonof……h(huán)asdrawn/aroused/capturedworldwideattention. 最近……現(xiàn)在日益增多已經(jīng)引起了全世界的注意。第二段：細節(jié)論證分析原因 在人們所提出的對……最重要/有說服力的原因當中，有一點值得強調(diào)……。 這個趨勢/增長/現(xiàn)象應當被看成是……的一種象征/結果。 ……的增長/改變/失敗/成功的主要/部分原因是這樣的……。 我們應當在……方面批評……，但這個問題的產(chǎn)生是有更深層次的原因的。 產(chǎn)生這個顯著/非凡增長/變化/下降的原因有很多。一、…… 導致該變化/上升/下降/成功/失敗/發(fā)展的因素有很多。 產(chǎn)生……的另一個因素是……。 另一個因素是……。 為什么……？首先……。其次……。也許最重要/首要的原因是……。 ……是導致……增長/下降的另一個/部分/主要/唯一的原因。 產(chǎn)生……的原因是眾多的，也許它們存在于這樣的事實……之中。 我們可能百密一疏，產(chǎn)生……的根本原因是……。 產(chǎn)生這個復雜現(xiàn)象/趨勢的因素是多樣的，要把它們找出來不是一件容易的事情。后果 它將導致……的巨大變化/增長。 它將產(chǎn)生一系列問題。 它將對……產(chǎn)生深遠的/巨大的/有益的/災難性的影響 這會導致一些嚴重的/致命的后果。第三段：提出解決方案Peoplehavefoundmanysolutions/approachestodealingwiththisproblem. 人們已經(jīng)找到了許多解決這個問題的辦法。Wecanfigureoutmanywaystorelievethepresentcrisis. 我們可以想出很多辦法來緩解目前的危機。Then,howshouldwesolvethisproblem?Herearesomesuggestions,whichmaybeofsomehelp. 那么，如何來解決這個問題呢？這里有些建議可能會有幫助。Facedwith,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation. 面對……，我們應該采取一系列的措施來應付目前的形勢。Itishightimethat…….Hereareafewexamplesofsomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetakenimmediately. 是……的時候了。這里有幾個可以馬上付諸實施的措施。 為了扭轉(zhuǎn)局勢，我們必要采取有效的措施。 并沒有很容易的方法來解決這個問題，……有可能會有幫助。 （大家）建議我們?nèi)σ愿啊?。記敘類記述明確中心思想情節(jié)人物對話的描述圍繞中心展開六要素：時間、地點、人物、起因、經(jīng)過、結果按順序：事物發(fā)展順序，或者提綱的順序詳略得當時態(tài)：一般過去時，插敘用過去完成時使用副詞，使文章生動介紹地點抓住所介紹地點的基本特征，說出一事物與另一事物區(qū)別的特征，使讀者在短時間內(nèi)獲得足夠的信息遵循一定的順序，使文章條理清楚中心突出（時間、空間、邏輯）運用恰當?shù)姆椒ㄟM行特征描寫語言做到準確無誤，尤其是方位詞書信：例文：December26,2004KenNEWEASTNERAUTOTEXTLISTDearMomandDad,Iammosthappytohearfromyou/receiveyourletter.Howareyou?（領導：Iamsorrytooccupyyourprecioustime,butIreallyhavesomethingtotellyou.）….Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.AUTOTEXTLISTBestregards,AUTOTEXTLISTDan開頭段：告知對方你的身份（假如對方不認識你）DearSirorMadam:/Mr.Promentheus,Iwasastudentatyourcollege,enrolledinPhilosophyDepartment.Iama……atyour……Iama……atyourcollege,enrolledinthe……course.Mynameis……,Iam…….問候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）DearPrometheus,HelloHi.Howareyou?Ihopeeverythingisfine.Howarethingsgoingwithyou?Howareyougettingonin/gettingalongwith……?解釋寫信的原因致謝Ideeplyappreciate（感激）yourcourtesy（謙恭）andIhopetoreciprocate（酬答）yourfavorwhentheopportunity.Iamgreatlyindebted（感恩的）toyoufor（thedouble）youhavegonetoonmybehalf.ThankyouforyourletteraboutstudyinginCanada.Iamwritingtoyoutoexpressmyheartfelt（衷心的）gratitude.IamwritingtotellyouhowgratefulIamfor…….Iwouldliketothankyoumostsincerelyfor…….抱怨Iamwritingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceatyourdining-room.Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/at…….Iwishtomakeacomplaintabout…….Iamwritingtodrawyourattentionto…….IamafraidIhavegotacomplaintabout…….致歉Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbesokindastoprovidemewithcertainessentialinformationregardingthefollowingaspects.IamwritingtoyoubecauseIamunableto…….Ianterribly（十分）sorrythat……Iwouldliketoexpressmyapologiesfornotbeingableto…….詢問Iwouldliketoobtain/request/seek/inquireaboutsomeinformationabout…….Iamwritingtoaskifyoucandomeafavor.Iwouldlikesomedetailedinformationon/about…….結尾段：發(fā)出請求Pleasegivethismatteryourimmediateattention.Iwouldverymuchappreciateitif……assoonaspossible.Pleaserender（呈遞）mesomevaluableadvicewhichisconducivetomayfinaldecision.提供幫助Ihopethese……willbehelpful,andpleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.……willbetakingoverresponsibility（責任）foryouandifyoushouldneedanyassistance（援助）,she/hewillbepleasedtohelpyou.再次表示歉意或感激Thankyouforyourkindassistance.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltthanksanddeepestgratitude（感激）,nowandalways.IamsorrythatIcannot……,andtrustthatyouwillunderstand.Inaddition,letmeapologizeforanyinconvenienceImayhavecaused.Ishallfeelobligedbyareplyatyourearliestconvenience.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.期盼回信Ilookforwardtoyourprompt（即時的）response.Lookingforwardtoapromptreply.Iexpecttohearfromyouverysoon.Ihopetoreceiveyourreplyshortly.Iamalreadyeagerlyawaitingyourreplytothisfirstletter.潤色文章：原則用詞老辣——核心動詞。平時積累近義詞及其例句用句經(jīng)典It作形式主語、賓語Therebe被動句強調(diào)句虛擬語氣名人名言錯誤平行方面：在n個并列的句子中，若出現(xiàn)相同相近，相反，相對的概念時，要求用一致的語法結構基本表達越來越：beincreasingly+adj.，beontherise，agrowingnumberof人們認為：itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat許多問題：ahost/numberofproblem引起人們注意：claimcall/attractgeneral/public/worldattentiontosth.意識到：thereisagrowingawareness（知道）/realizationof/that，awakensb.Tothefact/danger適應新的形勢/變化：adapt/adjust/accommodate（使適應）oneselftonewenvironment/change接觸各種思想/經(jīng)歷：beexposedtonewideas/experiences/problems接觸社會：comeintofrequent/closecontactwiththeworld/society獲得成功：achieve/accomplishsuccess提出觀點/建議：advance/putforward/comeupwiththearguments/ideas/suggestions作出努力：maketremendous（極大的）/persistent（持久穩(wěn)固的）/sustained（持續(xù)不變的）efforttodosth.，takegreatpainstodo（withwork/study）影響學習：interferewithstudies/work產(chǎn)生影響：have/exertaprofound（深刻的）influenceonlife/personality，haveadramatic/undesirable（令人不快的）effecton較好地駕馭生活：beabetterpilotofone’slife剝奪機會/權力：depriveoneselfofthechance/right/opportunity取代：substitute（替代）for/taketheplaceoftheoldway采取措施：takeeffectivesteps/measuresto控制我們的環(huán)境：take/gainincreasingcontroloverourownenvironment躲避危險/挑戰(zhàn)：shy（躲避）/runawayfromthedangers/challenge滿足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodatethedemandof補償損失：compensatefor/makeupfortheloss/damage解釋某現(xiàn)象：accountfor/explainthephenomenon對……很好的了解：haveabetterunderstanding/appreciationof，haveanewperspective（觀點）on，provide/gainaninsightinto把某因素考慮進去：takesth.intoaccount（consideration），givemuchthoughtto品位人生/自由青春：savorthelife/freedom/youth培養(yǎng)對……的信心：develop/fosterone’sinterest/confidencein經(jīng)歷變化/困難/艱險：undergo/experiencegreatchanges/hardships/experience表現(xiàn)出自信心等：projectone’sconfidence/feeling/image生活充滿不公正的地方：lifeisfullofminorirritation/injustice追求學習/職業(yè)：pursueone’sacademic（理論的）interest/professionalcareer學習知識/技術：pursue/acquireknowledge/technology/skill被看作學習的……榜樣：beheldupasagoodexample交流經(jīng)驗/知識：shareexperience/ideas/problems/knowledge發(fā)揮/起到重要作用：playan（important/active/great）role/part逃學/缺課：skipschool/aclass/ameeting/alecture知識/經(jīng)驗豐富：richinknowledge/experience確立/追求目標：set/pursueagoal/higherstandard到達目標：achieve/accomplish/stainthegoal/aim/object克服困難：overcomeobstacles/difficulty面臨危險/困難：beconfronted/facedwith/inthefaceofdanger/difficulty阻礙了成功：standinthewayofsuccess，beanobstacle（障礙）/barriertosuccess/growth阻礙了發(fā)展：hamper/impede/stuntthedevelopmentof持傳統(tǒng)的看法：holdconventionalwisdom發(fā)表看法：voice/expressone’sopinion持相反/合理的觀點：taketheopposite/freshview揭穿某種一貫的說法：shatterthemythof求得幫助：enlistone’ssupport/help縮小差別：bridge/narrow/fellthegap/gulf（betweencityandcountry）把成功/錯誤歸咎于：attribute/ownthesuccess/failureto對……重要：beindispensable/important/vitalto施加壓力：put/exertaacademicpressureon重視：assign/attachmuchimportance/significanceto強調(diào)：place/putmuchemphasis/stress/valueon把注意力集中在：focus/concentrateone’sattention/efforts/thoughtsupon提供機會/信息：provide/offer/furnishanopportunity/informationforsb.抓住機會：grab/seize/taketheopportunity得到機會：enjoy/gainaccesstoaopportunity/likelihoodthat有可能：thereis（little/much）possibility/likelihoodthat，chances/theodds（可能的機會）arethat展開競爭：competeagainst/withsb.fortheprize/position/control/themasteryof開展運動：conduct（carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage）avigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising）對我很有/沒有什么意義：makemuch/littlesensetome帶來無窮的幸福/滿足：beasourceofhappinesssatisfaction/contentment（滿意）/pride/complaint獻身于：devote/dedicate/commitoneselftoacause/career大不（沒什么）兩樣：makemuch（little/no）difference真正重要的是：whatreallymatters/accountsis……改變生活旅程：change/alterthecourseoflife建立在大量的學習/實踐上：buildontremendousamountofstudy/practice進行調(diào)查/執(zhí)行任務：conduct/carryoutanstudy/task/experiment辭去工作/學習：leave/quitone’sjob/work/school參加考試/競賽等：enter（for）theexamination/contest,race參加活動/討論：takepart/participate/beengagedinsports/activities/discussion影響思想/態(tài)度/時間的形成：shapeone’sthinking/attitude進入大學/社會/家庭/勞動力市場/職業(yè)：enteraschool/college/society/theworkforce/professionals實現(xiàn)自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieveone’sdream（hops/wish/desire）減輕壓力/緊張：reduce/alleviate/relievethestress/pressure/tension提高社會地位：enhance/improve/upgradesocialstatus/position/standingrisetothepositionofleadership提高技術/能力：sharpen（increase/improve/enhance/boost）one’smetalskill/ability加快/促進發(fā)展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boostthedevelopmentof隨著生活節(jié)奏的加快：withthequickeningpace/rhythm/tempoofmodernlife/society開闊眼界/興趣：broadenone’sinterest/outlook，expand（broaden/enlarge）one’smentalhorizons有助于了解/發(fā)展/宣傳/解決：contributemuch/little有助于解決問題：goalongwayto（towards）solvingtheproblem迷戀名利/分數(shù)：beobsessed/preoccupied（全神貫注的）withgrades/fame/fortune把時間花/浪費在：spend/wastetimedoingsth.，putinhoursdoingsth.利用機會/技術：make（full/better）useof/takeadvantageofopportunity/time，tap/harnesstechnologypotential/skills/talent把知識/經(jīng)驗運用到……：apply/putthetheory/knowledge/experience……取得進步：makemuchprogress/strides/ginsin充分發(fā)揮潛力/能力：developone’sability/potentialtothefull，givefullplaytoone’sability充滿激情/渴望：haveaburningdesire/agreatpassionfor起承轉(zhuǎn)合起：now，nowadays，atpresent，first，firstly，firstofall，inthefirstplace，inrecentyears，recently，Itgoeswithoutsayingthat承：second，secondly，then，besides，indeed，still，third，thirdly，moreover，furthermore，certainly，obviously，truly，especially，particularly，inaddition，whatismore，whatisworse，forexample，forinstance，infact，inotherwords，atthesametime轉(zhuǎn)：however，nevertheless，otherwise，yet，but，or，whereas，inspiteof，instead，ontheotherhand，incontrast，onthecontrary，conversely合：therefore，thus，hence，inshort，inrief，inaword，inconclusion，asaresult，asaconsequence，consequently，aboveall，atlast，finally，eventually，afterall，tosumup，ingeneral，generallyspeaking，onthewhole，ashasbeennoted，asIhavesaid30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞：1.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good3:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表語，可以有belessimpressive代替eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替many.注：用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.5:asliceof,quietafew,several代替some6:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)7:affair,business,matter代替thing8:shared代common9.reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit）10:formypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代替moreandmore(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.12.littleifanything,或littleornothing代替hardly13..benefitialrewarding代替helpfulbebeneficialof14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very16.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable...代替necessary,inevitable17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin18.captureone'sattention代替attractone'sattention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth23.desire代替want.24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto25.bearinmindthat代替remember26.enjoy,possess代替have(注意process是過程的意思)27.interaction代替communication28.frownonsth代替beagainst,disagreewithsth29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替forexample30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,代替nearlyimpossible作文過關技巧句型1．表示原因

1）Therearethreereasonsforthis．

2）Thereasonsforthisareasfollows．

3）Thereasonforthisisobvious．

4）Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek．

5）Thereasonforthisisthat．．．

6）Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat．．．

2．表示好處

1）Ithasthefollowingadvantages．

2）Itdoesusalotofgood．

3）Itbenefitsusquitealot．

4）Itisbeneficialtous．

5）