六級(jí)作文復(fù)習(xí)資料

知識(shí)篇第一部分：天龍八部1.

描述類經(jīng)典句用法：...很重要，...很必要句型：_______playsanextremelyimportantrole.____isofutmostimportance.Nothingismoreimportantthan_______.替換詞：important可以替換詞匯：significant（意義深遠(yuǎn)的）essential（關(guān)鍵的）indispensable（不可替代的）pivotal（中樞作用的）key（關(guān)鍵的）等等。注意：indispensable不可替代，本身就代表了非常重要，所以千萬不要寫extremelyindispensable.變通：我們也可以換成其他意思，比如itisofgreatnecessitytodosth.表示做...非常必要比如playarole/part也可以表示扮演著重要的角色。結(jié)合經(jīng)典開頭：Thereislittledoubtthat…Itcannotbedeniedthat…Itisbeyonddoubtsthat…Itisgenerallyacceptedthat…Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat…Ithasbeenwidelynotedthat…Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…綜合版：(1)

閱讀經(jīng)典書籍非常重要Itisgenerallyacceptedthat

nothingcan

playamoreindispensablerolethan

readingclassicbooks.(2)

從網(wǎng)絡(luò)中獲取信息很重要，但是閱讀傳統(tǒng)書籍也很必要。Itisveryimportantto

acquireusefulinformationonline,but

itisstillofgreatnecessityto

readtraditionalbooks.(3)

眾所周知，大學(xué)在人的培養(yǎng)中扮演者基礎(chǔ)的作用，并為高等教育提供了平臺(tái)（大學(xué)排名MyViewonUniversityRanking）。Ithasbeenwidelynotedthat

university

playsafundamentalrole

inone’scultivationandprovidesaplatformforhighereducation.(4)

機(jī)器人可以展示出人工智能，慢慢進(jìn)入到我們的視野，并扮演著越來越重要的角色。Robots,whicharecapableofexhibitingartificialintelligence,haveemergedintoourvision,and

tendtoplayanincreasinglyimportantrole

inourlife.(5)創(chuàng)新對于一個(gè)國家發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)至關(guān)重要。如果中國想要在世界舞臺(tái)扮演其地位，那么我們必須提倡獨(dú)創(chuàng)性，激發(fā)創(chuàng)造力，鼓勵(lì)創(chuàng)新。Itgoeswithoutsayingthatinnovation

playsakeyrole

indevelopingnationaleconomy.Ifourcountrywouldliketoplayitsroleintheworldarena,weshouldpromoteoriginality,inspirecreativityandencourageinnovation.（還記得嗎，后面這句就是我微博上#寫作素材日積月累##優(yōu)格課堂#中的句子?。?.

見證類經(jīng)典句用法：在某時(shí)某地發(fā)生了...（該句型實(shí)際解釋為：...見證了...）句型：…witness…（用時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)做主語）過去幾年里，越來越多的父母把孩子送到藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。（改寫成：過去幾年見證了越來越多的父母把孩子送到藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。）Thepastseveralyearshaswitnessedanexponentialincreaseinthenumberofparentswhowishtosendtheirkidstoartclasses.替換詞：exponential表示上升的程度，可以替換成dramatic/sharp/considerable/striking綜合版：（1）過去幾年見證了中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的騰飛/過去幾年見證了歐洲經(jīng)濟(jì)的衰退。Thepastfewyears

haswitnessed

aburgeoningeconomyinChina.Duringthepastseveralyears,China

haswitnessed

arapideconomicdevelopment.China

hasexperienced

arapideconomicdevelopmentinrecentyears.（替換）Europe

hassufferedfrom

agreatfinanciallossinrecentyears.（替換）注：thepastseveralyears后面接has和have均可。一方面，一段時(shí)間后面用has沒有問題；另一方面，用have也可以，表示這幾年年年都見證了。（2）練習(xí)：近幾年來，中國見證了信息的爆炸。China

haswitnessed

thegreatinformationexplosionduringthepastseveralyears.（3）近年來在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文的現(xiàn)象。Thepastseveralyears

havewitnessed

athought-provokingphenomenonthatwestudentspayverylittleattentiontothestudyofChinese.6.

使動(dòng)類經(jīng)典句用法：...使得...句型：enable/allow/rendersb.todo…追求物質(zhì)主義使得我們拋棄希望，放棄夢想，沉浸在物質(zhì)世界的快樂中。Thepursuitofmaterialism

enables/allowsoneto

abandonhishope,giveuphisdreamandindulgehimselfinthepleasureofthematerialworld.綜合版：（1）網(wǎng)絡(luò)能讓我們更有效的溝通。TheInternet

allowsusto

communicatemoreeffectively.（2）虛心使人進(jìn)步（驕傲使人落后）。Modesty

enablesoneto

goforward.(Conceitmakesonelagbehind.)（3）抵制誘惑可以讓我們培養(yǎng)好習(xí)慣。Resistingtemptation

allowsoneto

developgoodhabits.補(bǔ)充經(jīng)典句型：offer

sb.

sth.

/

offer

sth.

to

vide

sb.

with

sth.

/

providesth.

to

sb.bringsb.sth.物質(zhì)世界能給我們提供快樂的幻覺，而精神世界能給我們提供生活真正的樂趣。Materialworldcould

offerus

theillusionofhappiness,whilespiritualworldcould

provideuswithrealpleasureforlife.閱讀能給我們提供知識(shí)。Readingcan

provideuswith

sufficientknowledge.因特網(wǎng)能給我們帶來很多便利。TheInternetcanbringusmuchconvenience.7.

引出類經(jīng)典句用法：...成為了...重要的社會(huì)問題句型：(1)…h(huán)asarisenasoneof…（很適合開頭句）孩子的教育已經(jīng)成為最重要的社會(huì)問題之一。Children’seducation

hasrecentlyarisenas

oneoftheessentialproblems.(2)...hasbecomeoneof...環(huán)境保護(hù)問題已經(jīng)成為了對于政客和科學(xué)家同等關(guān)鍵的議題。Theenvironmentalprotection

hasbecomeoneofthekeyissues

forpoliticiansandscientistsalike.(3)...emergeintoone'svision進(jìn)入到...的視野里環(huán)境問題進(jìn)入到了我們的視野中。

Theissueofenvironmentalproblemhasemergedintoourvisioninrecentyears.綜合版：（1）信息真?zhèn)谓鼇沓蔀榱艘粋€(gè)重要的問題。Thecredibilityofinformation

hasrecentlyarisenas

oneoftheheatedtopics,ascanbefoundinthecolumnsofmanycitynewspapers.（2）信息安全近來成為了一個(gè)重要的問題。Theissueofinformationsecurity

hasrecentlyarisenas

oneoftheheatedtopics.此句配合第二步衍生句，可以作為引出主題的句子。8.

趨勢類經(jīng)典句用法：越來越…句型：Moreandmorepeople…Anincreasing/Agrowingnumberofpeople…Peopleinmountingnumbers…注意：inmountingnumbers里numbers有s！而agrowingnumberof里number沒s！綜合版：（1）越來越多的人開始重視如何有效處理信息。Peopleinmountingnumbers

arepayingmuchattentiontohowtoprocessinformationeffectively.（2）隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程越來越受大學(xué)生的歡迎。Withthepopularityofinternet,onlinecourseshavegradually

emergedintoourvision

andbecome

increasingly

prevalentamongcollegestudents.衍生1：趨勢類有些非常好的句型值得大家學(xué)習(xí)，意思是“傾向于”，可以翻譯成“容易”。引子：冬天容易著涼。Inwinter,onetendstocatchcold.(1)

…tendto…(2)

…belikelyto…(3)

…beinclinedto…比如：(1)

如今大學(xué)畢業(yè)生更想找一份好工作。Nowadays,collegeundergraduatestendtoseekadecentjob.(2)

過去人們認(rèn)為經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展必定會(huì)導(dǎo)致環(huán)境污染。Inthepast,peoplewerelikelytobelievethatrapideconomicdevelopmentwillinevitablyleadtoenvironmentalpollution.(3)

我更傾向于喜歡前者/后者Iaminclinedtobeinfavoroftheformer/thelatter.(4)笑容能規(guī)避沖突，消除分歧，縮短人和人之間的距離。Asweetsmiletendstoavoidtheconflict,ironoutthediscriminationandshortenthedistancebetweenpeople.衍生2：趨勢類還有一個(gè)短語叫“必定會(huì)”，可以翻譯成“一定…”…beboundto…競爭的社會(huì)勢必會(huì)導(dǎo)致找工作的壓力Acompetitivesocietyisboundtomakefindingajobmuchdifficult.總結(jié)：其實(shí)天龍八部就是教大家如何模仿句型，學(xué)有余力的同學(xué)可以繼續(xù)進(jìn)行句型仿寫的積累，以下舉幾個(gè)例子。1.

owe/attributeAtoB

將A歸因BManypeopleowetheirsuccessnottoformalschoolingbuttoself-education.很多人并不將他們的成功歸結(jié)于正式教育。

2.

dedicate/devoteoneselfto致力于…Ithinkitisverynobleforhimtodedicatehimselftopublicservice.我覺得他將自己投身于公共服務(wù)這件事非常地高尚。

3.

stem/resultfrom…

源于…Thepressureoffindingajobamongcollegestudentsstemslargelyfromthepopulationexplosion.大學(xué)生尋找工作的壓力很大程度上來源于人口膨脹。

4.

leadto/resultin/giveriseto導(dǎo)致…Technologicaladvancescanleadtomoreefficientusesofnaturalresourcesandsustaineconomicgrowth.科技的發(fā)展可以使我們更有效率地使用自然資源以及維持經(jīng)濟(jì)增長。

5.

intermsof…在某一方面…Tourismisbecomingaglobalindustry,anindustrywhichrankssecondtononeintermsofsizeandglobalinfluence.旅游業(yè)已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)世界產(chǎn)業(yè)，一個(gè)就規(guī)模和全球影響而言都獨(dú)一無二的產(chǎn)業(yè)。第二部分：經(jīng)典背景句（上過課的同學(xué)知道，我們把他成為wnwdwslm句）注：今年從6.5日開始，我每天會(huì)在微博上更新一個(gè)句子，使得大家循序漸進(jìn)背誦。我會(huì)在發(fā)完十句后發(fā)一個(gè)匯總貼，并配上音頻。以下句子僅供參考。這些句子一般用在引出主題或者觀點(diǎn)前，加上背景。比如：人民生活水平顯著提高，因此網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來越重要。網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來越普及（TheInternethasplayedanincreasinglyimportantrole.）是觀點(diǎn)或者主題，前面可以加上背景，比如隨著改革開放，人民的生活水平有顯著提高（Withthereformandopening-upinrecentdecadesinChina,people’slivingstandardhasbeenverymuchimproved.

）連在一起：Withthereformandopening-upinrecentdecadesinChina,people’slivingstandardhasbeenverymuchimproved.TheInternethasplayedanincreasinglyimportantroleinoursociety.1.Withthereformandopening-upinrecentdecadesinChina,people’slivingstandardhasbeenverymuchimproved.

隨著改革開放，人民的生活水平有顯著提高。2.Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandsociety,competitionisincreasinglyfierce.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)和社會(huì)的發(fā)展，競爭越來越激烈。3.Itiswell-knownthatweexistinadynamicworldwithvariousdifficulties.Wecandonothingbutfacethem.Attitudeisthekeypointtotakethefirststep.眾所周知，我們生活在一個(gè)存在很多困難的動(dòng)態(tài)的世界里，我們只能面對他們。態(tài)度是邁出第一步的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)。4.

Smartphoneshavepenetratedeveryaspectofdailylife.智能手機(jī)已經(jīng)滲透入日常生活的方方面面。5.Withtheacceleratedpaceofcontemporarylife,people’sworkandlifeareincreasinglystressful.

隨著當(dāng)代生活的節(jié)奏加快，人們的工作和生活壓力越來越大。6.

Resourceexhaustion,environmentdegradation,and

agingpopulationconstitutethethreemajornationalissuesconfrontinghumanbeings.資源耗盡，環(huán)境惡化，和老齡化人口組成了人類面臨的三大問題。7.

Lifeistenpercentwhatyoumakeitandninetypercenthowyoutakeit.Thevalueoflifeliesnotinthelengthofdays,butintheusewemakeofthem.Sohavingrightvaluesinlifeisveryimportantforus,especiallyyoungsters.生活的10%在于你如何創(chuàng)造它，90%在于你如何接受它，生活的價(jià)值不在于天的長度，而在于我們的利用，因此具有正確的價(jià)值觀非常重要，尤其對于年輕人。第三部分：六脈神劍（起承轉(zhuǎn)合獨(dú)評(píng)）我把六脈神劍總結(jié)為四個(gè)問題，更便于閱讀。1.

“兩點(diǎn)”怎么表述？Firstly,…

Secondly,…Tobeginwith,…

Furthermore,…Ontheonehand,…

Ontheother,…Inthefirstplace,…

Besides,…2.“順接”和“轉(zhuǎn)接”怎么表述順接：asaresult

/

asaconsequence/

consequently/

thus/hence/therefore轉(zhuǎn)接however/nevertheless/nonetheless3.“總結(jié)”怎么表述總結(jié)inconclusion,allinall,inaword簡而言之inshort,inbrief,tosumup如前所述ashasbeenmentionedabovegiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined4.“個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)”怎么表述inmyeyesasformefrommyperspectiveasfarasIamconcernedTomyknowledgeFrommylevelofunderstanding附贈(zèng)六脈神劍完整版：啟部：用于引導(dǎo)第一點(diǎn)首先：1.first,firstly,firstofall;2.tobeginwith,tostartwith;3.inthefirstplace,firstandforemost一方面：1.ontheonehand(ontheother);2.foronething(foranotherthing).承部：承接前面觀點(diǎn)其次---second,secondly,third,thirdly進(jìn)一步---furthermore,what’smore,moreover此外---besides,inaddition結(jié)果---consequently,asaconsequence/result,thushencetherefore,onthisaccount,inlightofthis轉(zhuǎn)部：轉(zhuǎn)折語義相反技巧1：but改although/inspiteof/despite如：Selectingtheirfavoritelecturerdoesbringgreatbenefitstostudents’study,butitalsocauseanumberofproblems.Althoughselectingtheirfavoritelecturerdoesbringgreatbenefitstostudents’study,italsocausesanumberofproblems.Inspiteof/despiteitsgreatbenefitsforstudents’study,selectingtheirfavoritelecturerdoescauseanumberofproblems.注：很多老師建議but改成inspiteofthefactthat.那么那些老師有興趣去看看GMAT語法，這種寫法叫wordy或者redundancy（冗長，累贅）。但是如果改成inspiteofthis，那還可以。不過前面需要句話句掉。技巧2：but改yet/while/whereas如：Manypeoplearguethatthespringfestivalgalashouldnotbecancelled,butothersadoptacompletelydifferentview.Manypeoplearguethatthespringfestivalgalashouldnotbecancelled,whileothersadoptacompletelydifferentview.此外還可以用：不幸地：sadlyunfortunately相反地：onthecontrary,bycontrast,conversely事實(shí)上：asamatteroffact,infact然而：nevertheless,nonetheless合部：小結(jié)上文中段落的內(nèi)容總結(jié)：inconclusion,allinall,inaword簡而言之：inshort,inbrief,tosumup如前所述：ashasbeennoted/mentionedabovegiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlinedtakingintoaccountalltheabovefactors(后面主語用I)獨(dú)部：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)標(biāo)志詞personallyspeaking可以用inmyeyes,asforme,asIseeitinmyopinion可以用frommyperspectivefrommypointofview可以用asfarasIamconcerneditseemstomethat可以用fromwhereIstand,mystanceisthat…評(píng)部：在觀點(diǎn)前可以加一些副詞來評(píng)價(jià)Interestingly,surprisingly,moreimportantlyEspecially,particularlyUndoubtedly,apparently,evidently,obviously,conceivably等等應(yīng)用篇大家可以看下天龍八部和六脈神劍的威力注：今年我們有一個(gè)新的內(nèi)容，增設(shè)真題練習(xí)，會(huì)用我們教授的套路給大家講解，我微博和微信號(hào)會(huì)時(shí)時(shí)更新，千萬不要錯(cuò)過了。應(yīng)用范例1：2011年12月Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.參考：NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill

Asahumoroussayinggoes,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Thissayingintendstoinformusthatastrongwillplaysanextremelyimportantroleinachievingsuccess（主題）.

Why,youmaywonder,isastrongwillsoessentialforsuccess.Tobeginwith,withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,people’slivingstandardhasbeenverymuchimproved.However,competitionisincreasinglyfierce.Astrongwillenablesustoconcentrateonourworkandcompetewithothersevenindifficulttime.Furthermore,itiswell-knownthatweexistinadynamicworldwithvariousnewchanges.Astrongwillalsoallowsustopersistontheroadwechoose.

GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined,Ipersonallyarguethatitisastrongwillthatexertsapositiveimpactonsuccess(學(xué)會(huì)變換句式).AsfarasIamconcerned,ifonemakesfriendswiththosewhohavestrongwills,heismorelikelytosucceedinthefuture.

應(yīng)用范例2：2016年6月六級(jí)?Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonlivinginthevirtualworld.Trytoimaginewhatwillhappenwhenpeoplespendmoreandmoretimeinthevirtualworldinsteadofinteracting