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高三第一輪復(fù)習(xí)研討Writing:LettersofInvitation授課人：徐潔Whoarewesupposedtoinvite近五年全國高考作文邀請函出現(xiàn)頻率2019全國卷III邀請英國朋友參加音樂節(jié)2017全國卷II邀請外教參觀中國剪紙藝術(shù)展2017全國卷III邀請留學(xué)生朋友加入校乒乓球隊2016全國卷II邀請英國朋友為攝影展提供作品2015全國卷II邀請外教去老人院陪老人過重陽節(jié)Theinvitationsaremainlywrittento______________________afriend/aforeignteacherguestInvitationtoaforeignteacherDearSir,I'mLiHua,theleaderoftheoreabouttraditionalChineseculture,Isincerelyhoetimeforanartfeast--theChineseeofwhichis"beautyofChina",willtae2to5ontheafternoonofJune21Notonlywillourclub'sworsbedisousartistofthisfieldBesides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveacleareryinvitationI'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimlooingforwardtoyourreplyBestwishes!Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaformal1inapoliteandseriousway2self-introductionifnecessaryInvitationtoafriendDearLily,Longtimenosee!I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotaeetoethingforenvironmentalemberyoushowedmesomeethelasttimeyouvisitedourschoolThisissurelyagoodchanceformoreIfyouwanttojoin,youcansendyourenowifyouhaveanyquestionsHoyousoon Yours, LiHuainformalinacasualanddirectwayWhatshouldbeincludedinaninvitationletterDearLily,Longtimenosee!I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotaeetoethingforenvironmentalemberyoushowedmesomeethelasttimeyouvisitedourschoolThisissurelyagoodchanceformoreIfyouwanttojoin,youcansendyourenowifyouhaveanyquestionsHoyousoon Yours, LiHuaPara1Para2Para3Purposewhatevent/activityDetails—whenwherehowwhy…HoentHoewithusIamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenagercurrentlystudyinginyourschoolOurclassethisSundayinordertohelptheoldthereandenrichourafterschoollifePutthesentencesinaproperorder123456789DearSir,IamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenagercurrentlystudyinginyourschoolOurclassewithusHerearesomedetailsaboutthisactivityWewillleavetheschoolat8:00amandreturnat5:00Besides,therewillbealotoffunactivitiessuchasmaingdumances,whichwillnotonlybemeaningfulbutalsointerestingIhavetheconfidencethatwewillhaveagreattimethereHopefullyyouwilllietheplanandjoinusLooingforwardtoyoureplyandyourdecision Yoursfaithfully, LiHua人稱：時態(tài)：第一、二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時一般將來時點擊輸入關(guān)鍵字12345點擊輸入關(guān)鍵字點擊輸入關(guān)鍵字點擊輸入關(guān)鍵字點擊輸入關(guān)鍵字

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