讀后續(xù)寫品德故事類貧困畫家與違背諾言的女士之間的故事課件高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)品德故事——貧困畫家與違背諾言的女士之間的故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文4續(xù)寫原文Theyoungpainterknewthewomanbrokeherpromiseonpurpose,sohefeltannoyed.Hesaidinafirmvoice,“No,Iwouldprefertokeepthispaintingratherthanbehumiliatedbyyou.Todayyoubreakyourwordandsomedayyoumustpay20timesforit.”“Whatajoke!20timeswillbe40,000!Iwon’tbestupidtopay40,000dollarstobuythepainting!”“Well,we’dbetterwaitandsee,”theyoungartistshoutedtothewomanwholeftangrily.Afterthestimulationofsuchanincident,thepaintermovedoutofthissadplace,studiedunderacknowledgedteachersandworkedharddayandnight.Morethanadozenyearslater,hefinallystartedanewwayandbecamepopularinthecircleofart.However,thewomanhadforgottentheartist’spaintingandwordsthenextday.5段首句Para1：Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.Para2：Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewouldbuyherportraitassoonaspossible.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了一個(gè)靠畫肖像為生的畫家過著貧窮的生活，他為一位女士畫像，結(jié)果女士故意違背諾言，不按約好的價(jià)錢支付費(fèi)用，讓畫家很生氣。十幾年后，畫家終于在藝術(shù)界大受歡迎，決定舉辦一次藝術(shù)展，展覽上畫家把這位女士的畫像掛出來，取名《小偷》，女士得知后趕到，給畫家道歉，最終畫家把畫像還給了她，希望她能做一個(gè)誠實(shí)的女人。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一天，那位著名的畫家決定舉辦一次藝術(shù)展?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫畫家把女士的畫像掛出來，取名《小偷》，消息傳開了，最后傳到了那個(gè)女人的耳朵里。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewouldbuyherportraitassoonaspossible.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“女子匆匆趕到，道了無數(shù)次歉，并承諾會盡快買下她的畫像?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懏嫾沂侨绾螒?yīng)對女士道歉的以及事情的最終結(jié)局。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索舉辦藝術(shù)展——掛出女士畫像，取名《小偷》——女士得知消息——女士趕到——女士道歉——畫家贈畫12續(xù)寫素材13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：【高分句型1】Beforethewomancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftforher,hopingshewouldbeanhonestwomanwithoutvanity.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)【高分句型2】Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.Presentintheexhibitionhallwerecrowdsofcelebritiesandartists.Itwasafeastinthecircleofart.Inthecentrewasapaintingentitled“Thief”,pricedat40,000dollars.Strangelyenough,thewomaninthepaintinglookedjustthesameasthevainwomaninreality.Wordspreadandfinallyitreachedthewoman’sears.Sherecalledtheincidentandthepainter.Itdawnedonherthatthepainterhumiliatedherinthisway.16范文呈現(xiàn)Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewouldbuyherportraitassoonaspossible.Thesuccessfulpainterturnedhisbacktoher,speechless.Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.Thenthepainterturnedaroundandhandedhertheportrait.Beforethewomancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftforher,hopingshewouldbeanhonestwomanwithoutvanity.Anyway,forthepainter,itwasthisincidentthatmadehimwhatheistoday.17范文譯文一天，那個(gè)著名的畫家決定舉辦一個(gè)藝術(shù)展。出席展覽大廳的是一群名人和藝術(shù)家。這是一場藝術(shù)界的盛宴。中心有一幅名為《小偷》的畫，售價(jià)4萬美元。奇怪的是，畫中的女人看起來和現(xiàn)實(shí)中虛榮的女人一模一樣。消息傳開了，終于傳到了那個(gè)女人的耳朵里。她回憶起這件事和畫家。她突然意識到畫家以這種方式羞辱了她。18范文譯文這位女士匆匆忙忙地去了那里，道歉了一百萬次，并承諾會盡快買下她的肖像。這位成功的畫家背對她，無言以對。周圍有很多來訪者，她非常尷尬，尷尬地站在那里，感覺鮮血直流。然后畫家轉(zhuǎn)過身來，把畫