高中英語人教版一輪學(xué)案選擇性Unit5Poems

選擇性必修第三冊(cè)Unit5Poems主題語境：人與社會(huì)(詩歌)【話題詞匯】n.文學(xué)n.杰作n.詩n.(總稱)詩n.抒情詩n.散文；文章；隨筆vt.描寫，敘述n.描述，描寫n.草稿，草案vt.起草，草擬adj.原創(chuàng)的n.原作vt.出版，發(fā)行vt.翻譯adj.經(jīng)典的，古典的n.文學(xué)名著，經(jīng)典著作adj.興奮的，激動(dòng)的adj.令人興奮的；刺激的adv.完全地【話題短語】avividdescriptionof生動(dòng)描述……literature/works古典文學(xué)/作品3.one'smasterpiece某人的杰作4.best-lovedandworld-famous最受喜愛和聞名世界的5.highly-respectedandwell-known備受尊敬和著名的sb.happiness給某人帶來愉悅enthusiasticabout...對(duì)……充滿熱情thetraditionalChinesestyle按照中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)風(fēng)格one'sattention引起某人的注意aprizeto...授予……獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)【話題佳句】poemswidelyenablesmetohaveachancetobroadenmyhorizons.廣泛閱讀詩歌使我有機(jī)會(huì)開闊視野。2.ItisthepoemSongofthePartingSonthatmademeinterestedinpoetry.是《游子吟》這首詩使我對(duì)詩歌產(chǎn)生了興趣。classicworksnotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.一些經(jīng)典作品不僅給我們帶來歡樂和興奮，而且鼓勵(lì)我們批判性地思考?！驹掝}練習(xí)】showsusastrongpowerandmakesusfeelsubtleemotion.詩歌給我們展示了一種強(qiáng)大的力量，使我們感到微妙的情感。,manyfamouspoetsinancientChinaandtheirgreatworksarestillinfluencingus,amongwhomLiBai,DuFuandBaiJuyiaremyfavouriteones.如今，中國(guó)古代許多著名詩人及其偉大作品仍在影響著我們，其中李白、杜甫、白居易是我最喜愛的詩人。Ⅰ.重點(diǎn)單詞1．________________n.心情2．________________n.百姓；民謠adj.民間的；民俗的3．________________n.核心；(水果的)核4．________________n.鉆石；菱形5．________________n.偏見6．________________n.格式；版式7．________________adj.業(yè)余的n.業(yè)余愛好者8．________________adj.空白的；無表情的9．________________adv.復(fù)雜的10．________________adv.首要的；占支配地位的11．________________adj.精美的12．________________adj.各自的；分別的13．________________n.花朵；開花期vi.盛開；綻放14．________________n.版本；說法15．________________n.截止日期；最后期限Ⅱ.拓展單詞1．________v．相一致；符合→________n.通訊記者→________n.通信聯(lián)系2．________v.變化→________n．變體→________adj.各種各樣的→________n.多樣性3．________adj.天真的→________n.天真→________adv.天真地4．________adj.同情的→________n.同情→________adv.同情地5．________vt.&n.比賽；競(jìng)爭(zhēng)→________n.參賽者→________adj.爭(zhēng)論的；可爭(zhēng)的6________n．戲劇→________adj.戲劇的→________adv.戲劇性地7．________n．種族→________adj.種族的→racialismn.種族主義8．________n．悲傷→________adj.悲傷的9．________v．理解；包含；由……組成→________n.理解力；領(lǐng)悟力→________adj.綜合的；廣泛的；全面的10．________v.看護(hù)；照料；n.護(hù)士→________adj.幼兒園教育的→________n.護(hù)理；照料聯(lián)想拓展“al”為后綴的形容詞速記①racialadj.種族的②digitaladj.數(shù)碼的③historicaladj.歷史的④physicaladj.身體的⑤mentaladj.精神的⑥vitaladj.重要的⑦essentialadj.最重要的；不可缺少的；本質(zhì)的-d/-de結(jié)尾動(dòng)詞變名詞后綴為-sion①prehend→prehension②decide→decision③explode→explosion④conclude→conclusion⑤persuade→persuasion⑥expand→expansion⑦collide→collisionⅢ.核心短語1．________________由……組成2．________________用光3．________________作詩4．________________尤其5．________________講得通；有意義6．________________包括7．________________長(zhǎng)度靈活8．________________盡管9．________________集中于10．________________給某人帶來巨大成功11．________________試試；執(zhí)行12．________________緊抓聯(lián)想拓展“in＋名詞”短語小結(jié)①inhand在手頭；可供使用②inreturn作為回報(bào)③inshock震驚④inrelief松一口氣；如釋重負(fù)⑤indisguise偽裝⑥indefence防御；防守⑦inadvance事先；提前⑧inparticular特別⑨inshort/brief總而言之無被動(dòng)語態(tài)的動(dòng)詞短語聚焦①consistof由……組成②belongto屬于③datefrom/backto追溯到④etrue變成現(xiàn)實(shí)⑤takeplace發(fā)生⑥breakout爆發(fā)Ⅳ.重點(diǎn)句型1．-ing作方式狀語Itiseasytowriteand,likethecinquain,cangiveaclearpictureandcreateaspecialfeeling,________________.這種詩易創(chuàng)作，而且就像五行詩一樣，僅僅幾個(gè)字，就可以展現(xiàn)一幅清晰的圖片和創(chuàng)造一個(gè)特別的感覺。2．“with＋賓語＋賓補(bǔ)”復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)________________________，studentsmayeventuallywanttowritepoemsoftheirown.因?yàn)橛腥绱硕嗖煌愋偷脑娍梢赃x擇，學(xué)生們最后可能都想寫他們自己的詩歌了。3．表語從句Thereasonis________________________________.原因是他們能感受到愛的溫暖，而且享受到童年的純真。高頻考點(diǎn)探究Ⅰ.核心詞匯1．prehensionn．理解力；包含【典型例句】Whenyouarereading,placemorefocusonthecorrectpronunciationofthewordsyouarereadingratherthanprehensionofeachword.當(dāng)你朗讀的時(shí)候，把精力主要集中在你所讀的每個(gè)單詞的正確發(fā)音上，而不是理解每個(gè)單詞上。(1)beyondprehension令人費(fèi)解havenoprehensionofsth.對(duì)某事不理解areadingprehension一篇閱讀理解(2)prehendvt.(多用于否定句)理解；領(lǐng)悟(3)prehensiveadj.綜合的；廣泛的aprehensivestudy全面的研究a1st-classprehensiveuniversity一所一流的綜合性大學(xué)【練透考點(diǎn)】單句語法填空①DrJohnsonundertookthetaskofwritinga________(prehend)Englishdictionarylastyear.②IdidpracticealottoimprovemyEnglish,forexample,doinglotsofreading________(prehend)exerciseseveryday.③Theinfinitedistancesofspacearetoogreatforthehumanmind________(prehend)．④Heissucha________manandalwayshas________onthosehomelessanimalsbutsometimeshecanbe________tothosehedoesn'tlike.(mercy)2．sympathyn．同情；慰問；贊同【典型例句】Weshouldexpresssympathyforthepeoplewhoareunlucky,whethertheyarefamilymembersorpletestrangers.我們應(yīng)該對(duì)不幸的人表示同情，無論他們是家人還是完全陌生的人。(1)express/feelsympathyforsb.向某人表示體恤；對(duì)某人感到同情havenosympathyfor不同情insympathywith支持outofsympathywithsb./sth.不贊成，不支持(某人或事物)(2)sympatheticadj.同情的；贊同的needasympatheticear需要訴苦【練透考點(diǎn)】單詞拼寫/單句語法填空①Tobeapopularstudent，wemustshowourrespect，concernand________(同情)forothers.②Idon'thavemuchsympathy________her—Ithinkshe'sbroughthertroublesonherself.③Totrulybe________(sympathy),youmustbeabletoseebeyondyourownpaintobewitnesstothepain.④Askherwhathappenedandlisten____________(sympathy),andattentively.3．blankadj.空白的；空虛的；單調(diào)的n.空白；空虛；空白表格vt.使……無效；使……模糊；封鎖【典型例句】Unsteadilyhemountedthestage,adjustedthemicrophone,coughed,andwentpletelyblank.他搖搖晃晃地走上講臺(tái)，調(diào)好麥克風(fēng)，咳嗽了幾聲，接著腦子就一片空白。(1)one'smindgoesblank腦子一片空白＝one'smindisablankablankrefusal/denial斷然拒絕/否認(rèn)(2)fillintheblanks在空白處填寫(3)blankout遮掩；抹去記憶【練透考點(diǎn)】單句語法填空①Isawheronthebusthismorning,butshetotally________(blank)me.②Mymindwas________blankandIcouldn'trememberhername.③Shestared________(blank)intospace,notknowingwhattosaynext.【佳句背誦】Beforegettingintothecar，IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor'sorders.ButonceIstartedthecar，mymindwentblank.在上車之前，我覺得我已經(jīng)學(xué)會(huì)了教練教授的指令，但是我一上車，我覺得我的大腦一片空白。4．variationn.變化；變體；變奏曲【典型例句】Thesurveyfoundawidevariationinthepriceschargedforcanteenfood.這項(xiàng)調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)不同的餐廳出售食物的價(jià)格存在很大的差別。(1)varyv.改變，變更varyfrom...to...從……到……不同varyinsth.(大小、形狀等)不同varywith...隨……變化/改變varybetween...and...從……到……轉(zhuǎn)變(2)varietyn.變化，多樣性，種類avarietyof各種各樣的＝manyvarietiesof＝variouskindsof(3)variousadj.各種各樣的forvariousreasons因?yàn)楦鞣N原因【練透考點(diǎn)】單句語法填空①Theexhibitionnotonlyshows________(vary)papercutsindifferentregions,butalsopresentstousthehistoryanddevelopmentofpaper-cuttinginChina.②AsinChina，theclimateinCanada________(vary)dependingonthearea.③Inthebotanicalgardenwecanfind________(vary)ofplantsthatrangefromtalltreestosmallflowers.【佳句背誦】It'suptotheteachertoprovideavarietyoftypesofinformationintheclassroom.教師負(fù)責(zé)在課堂上提供各種各樣的信息資源。Ⅱ.核心短語5．bemadeupof組成，構(gòu)成(多用于被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu))【教材原句】Anothersimpleformofpoemthatamateurscaneasilywriteisthecinquain,whichismadeupoffivelines.另外一種初學(xué)者容易寫的簡(jiǎn)體詩是由五行組成的，叫作五行詩。(1)makeup組成；化妝；彌補(bǔ)；編造(2)make其他短語makeupone'smind下定決心bemadeof由……制成(看出原材料)bemadefrom由……制成(看不出原材料)makeout分辨出，勉強(qiáng)認(rèn)出，理解makethebest/mostof充分利用makeit做成功【練透考點(diǎn)】(1)寫出makeup在句中的意思①Insomelanguages,100wordscanmakeuphalfofallwordsusedindaily②Hetookmeasurestomakeuphisfault,whichreceivedour③Thebeautifulmaidenwhosavedhislifeisjustabeautifulfairytalemadeupbyhim,all④Shewasbeautifullymadeup,beautifully(2)用make的相關(guān)短語填空①Thankstoyourencouragement，Imadecontinuousprogressinmath,andfinally________________tostudyitintheuniversity.②It'snaturaltohavedreamsofsuccessandfamebutonlyafewpeopleinthisworldactually____________.③Withalittleimagination,youcancreatenewchallengesand________________thejobyouhave.④IcouldhearvoicesbutIcouldn't________________whattheyweresaying.6．makesense講得通，有意義【教材原句】Thepoemsmaynotmakesenseandevenseemcontradictory.這些詩似乎是講不通并且是矛盾的。(1)makenosense講不通，沒道理(2)inasense在某一方面；就某種意義來說innosense決不(3)monsense常識(shí)Thereisno/littlesenseindoingsth.做某事沒道理(4)asenseofhumour/responsibility幽默/責(zé)任感【練透考點(diǎn)】(1)單句語法填空①Didyoumakesense________whattheteachersaidjustnow?②________nosenseshouldyouloseheart;keeptryingandyouwillmakeitsoonerorlater.③In________sensewinningtheWorldCupmadeArgentinafamousintheworld.(2)完成句子①利用你的常識(shí)。如果一個(gè)報(bào)告看起來太好而顯得不真實(shí)，很可能就是不真實(shí)。________________________.Ifareportseemstoogoodtobetrue,probablyitis.②在我看來，現(xiàn)在為這事苦惱是沒有意義的。AsfarasI'mconcerned,________________.(3)一句多譯她所提到的如此令人困惑以致于他們幾乎不能理解它。Whatshereferredtowassoconfusingthattheycouldhardly________________it.Whatshereferredtowassoconfusingthattheycouldhardly________________it.7．holdfast堅(jiān)守；遵守；緊緊抓住【典型例句】Wecanonlytrytoholdfasttotheage-oldvaluesofhonesty,decencyandconcernforothers.我們只能努力堅(jiān)守那些古老的價(jià)值觀：誠(chéng)實(shí)、正派、關(guān)心他人。(1)holdfasttosth.堅(jiān)持；堅(jiān)守(夢(mèng)想，信念……)holdfast緊緊抓?。粍e放手(2)holdon別掛；堅(jiān)持?。宦犚幌耯oldup舉起；阻止holdback躊躇；阻止holdout維持；堅(jiān)持holdoff推遲；戰(zhàn)勝(3)holdone'sbreath屏息；屏氣sb.holdsthebelief/viewthat...某人堅(jiān)定地認(rèn)為……h(huán)oldaconference/sportsmeeting舉辦會(huì)議/運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)holdapositiveattitude持有一個(gè)積極的態(tài)度【練透考點(diǎn)】單句語法填空①Canyouhold________forasecond?I'llseeifhe'shere.②Believeinyourself，holdfast________yourdreamandnevergiveup，andyouwillsucceedsoonerorlater.③Sowedon'thold________muchhopethattheywillrespondpositivelytothelatestfindings.④Doyouthinkthatmixed-abilityclasseshold________thebetterstudents?⑤Thefootballmatchhadtohold________forabouthalfanhourbecauseofadrivingrain.Ⅲ.典型句式精析8．Thereasonswhy...【教材原句】Therearevariousreasonswhypeoplewritepoetry.人們寫詩有各種各樣的原因?！揪涫椒治觥?1)其常見的基本句式：Thereasonwhy/forwhichis/wasthat...，意為“……的原因是……”，why在定語從句中作狀語。(2)reason當(dāng)先行詞時(shí)，且關(guān)系詞在定語從句中作主語、賓語或表語，一般用that/which引導(dǎo)定語從句，作賓語時(shí)，還可以省略?！就卣寡由臁烤湫捅容^：(1)This/Thatiswhy...為表語從句的常用句型結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“這/那就是為什么……”(2)This/Thatisbecause...“這是因?yàn)椤?，because從句表示原因。(3)Thereasonwhy...is/wasthat...“……的原因是……”，why引導(dǎo)定語從句，that引導(dǎo)表語從句，注意此時(shí)表語從句用that引導(dǎo)，而不用because?！揪毻缚键c(diǎn)】單句語法填空/單句寫作①Thereason________theinjectionneedsrepeatingeveryyearis________thevirusoftenchanges.②Fromspace,theearthlooksblue.Thisis________aboutseventy-onepercentofitssurfaceiscoveredbywater.③Tomwasverylazy.Thatwas________heneverachievedanythinginhislife.④那就是我申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位的原因。________________________________________________________________________⑤湯姆開會(huì)遲到的原因是他病了。________________________________________________________________________9．“with＋賓語＋賓補(bǔ)”復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)【典型例句】Withsomanydifferentformsofpoetrytochoosefrom，studentsmayeventuallywanttowritepoemsoftheirown.因?yàn)橛腥绱硕嗖煌愋偷脑娍梢赃x擇，學(xué)生們最后可能都想寫他們自己的詩歌了?！揪涫椒治觥俊皐ith＋賓語＋賓語補(bǔ)足語”稱為with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，可位于句首或句尾，常作時(shí)間、原因、方式、伴隨狀語，亦可作后置定語。結(jié)構(gòu)如下：(1)with＋賓語＋doing(doing表主動(dòng)或正在進(jìn)行)(2)with＋賓語＋adj.(adj.表狀態(tài))(3)with＋賓語＋adv.(adv.表狀態(tài))(4)with＋賓語＋done(done表完成或被動(dòng))(5)with＋賓語＋介詞短語(6)with＋賓語＋todo(todo表將來，有時(shí)用主動(dòng)形式表示被動(dòng)意義)【練透考點(diǎn)】單句語法填空/完成句子(用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))①Withtime________，theyhavegrownintobigboysandbiggirls.(pass)②Withtenminutes________，you'dbetterhurry.(go)③“Ithinkwecanleave________ourheadsheldhigh，”Katesaid.④問題解決了，質(zhì)量也提高了。________________________，thequalityhasbeenimproved.⑤吉姆專心致志地聽著講座，所有注意力都集中在上面了。Jimwaslisteningattentivelytothelecture,________________________.⑥他夾著一大本書，走出了圖書館。Hecameoutofthelibrary,________________________________________.Ⅰ.高考能力同步化——單句語法填空/單詞拼寫1．[2020·江蘇卷]Idon'treallyunderstandeverylinehe________(recite),butIbelievehetrulylovesthepoemshimself.2．[2019·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ]Itturnsoutthatjustlookingatgreen，growingthingscanreducestress，lowerbloodpressure，andputpeopleintoabetter________(情緒)．3．[2020·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ]Hisfriends________(tease)himaboutbabysittinghissisterandhisinterestswerefardifferentfrommine.4．[2020·新高考全國(guó)Ⅰ卷]HisjudgmentandreferencesaredecidedlyAmerican,aswellashis________(精致的)stomach.5．[2019·天津卷]AsIwasunabletoseethroughtheoutersurfaceofthetofu,thesepeopleareunabletoseethroughthesurfaceof________(偏見)．6．Chinesepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemofinternationalterrorismandshowsympathy________thecountriesandpeoplethathavesufferedfromtheterroristattacks.7．Finally,I'dlovetoexpressmyheartfulthankstomytutor,whohas________(polish)everypageofmydraft.8．Thefinalwasclosely________(contest)withbothteamsshowingexceptionalperseverance.9．Graydescribesin________(drama)andspellbindingdetailthelivesofthesefiveladies.10．Toour________，wecouldsensethattheywere________atthebadnews.(sorrow)Ⅱ.必備知識(shí)試題化——完成句子1．________________________，hewon'thavetimetogoshoppingthismorning.有那么多文章要寫，今天早上他沒有時(shí)間去買東西了。(with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))2．________________________.Youmusthave________someimportantinformationwhilecopyingit.我看不懂這篇文章。當(dāng)你抄寫的時(shí)候，你一定是落下了一些重要信息。3．HisinitialrequirementsarethatstudentsshouldspeakgoodPutonghuaand________________________________________________________________________.他最基本的要求是學(xué)生應(yīng)該講一口流利的普通話，尤其是對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣。4．________________________________peoplearefondofandobsessedwithpoetry.因?yàn)楦鞣N各樣的原因，人們喜歡詩歌并對(duì)詩歌著迷。5．etoseeme________________________________.你什么時(shí)候方便，就請(qǐng)來看我。Ⅲ.教材語篇高考化——語法填空閱讀下面短文，在空白處填入1個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。Somepoemstellastoryordescribesomethinginaway(give)thereaderastrong(impress).trytoconveycertainemotions.Poetsusedifferentformsofpoetrytoexpressthemselves.Forexample,thelanguageofnurseryrhymesisconcretebut(imagine),andtheydelightchildrentheyhavestrongrhythmandalotofrepetition.Andlistpoemshaveaflexiblelinelengthand(repeat)phraseswhichgivebothapatternandarhythmtothepoem.Anothersimpleformofpoemisthecinquain,ismadeupoffivelinesandcanconveystrong(feel)injustafewwords.HaikuisaJapaneseformofpoetrythatismadeupof17syllables.AndofcoursethereareTangpoemsfromChinawhichyoumayenjoyparticular.Withsomanydifferentformsofpoetrytochoosefrom,studentsmaywanttowritepoems10.________.[2017·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ]假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：(1)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；(2)內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；(3)課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearLeslie,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaStep1斟酌打磨豐富句式1．精挑細(xì)選——核心詞匯想周全①________________在漢語學(xué)習(xí)上取得進(jìn)步②________________體現(xiàn)了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化③________________體味漢語之美④________________課前做好充分準(zhǔn)備⑤________________對(duì)……有個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單了解2．遣詞造句——句式升級(jí)是亮點(diǎn)句式翻譯：課堂上，你將主要學(xué)習(xí)唐詩。它反映了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化，深受中國(guó)人的喜愛。①Intheclass,youwillmainlylearnTangpoetry.ItreflectstraditionalChinesecultureandisdeeplylovedbyChinese.(定語從句)→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②當(dāng)你學(xué)習(xí)唐詩時(shí)，你可以領(lǐng)略中國(guó)的美。WhenyouarelearningTangPoetry,youcanhaveatasteofthebeautyofChinese.(狀語從句省略)→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step2邏輯銜接連句成文DearLeslie,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua讀后續(xù)寫專題之六精彩結(jié)局韻味無窮一、立意和結(jié)尾的重要關(guān)聯(lián)性。讀后續(xù)寫能否拿高分某種意義上說全在于立意(theme)，而立意又在于能否給出一個(gè)好的結(jié)尾。但好的結(jié)尾絕對(duì)不能形成一套模式，而是要仔細(xì)審題，主題要量身定制。讀后續(xù)寫的文本分析一個(gè)重要的考量就是：writingpurpose。二、續(xù)寫結(jié)尾的重要性。小說結(jié)尾有很多種結(jié)尾方式，有的以故事結(jié)局為結(jié)尾，有的以景物描寫做結(jié)尾，還有的以哲理性語言結(jié)尾等。在讀后續(xù)寫中，結(jié)尾發(fā)揮著至關(guān)重要的作用。除基本的揭示故事結(jié)局外，結(jié)尾還應(yīng)與前文伏筆照應(yīng)，使人覺得在情理之中；與前文形成對(duì)比，點(diǎn)明主旨，主題。在人物形象塑造上，結(jié)尾應(yīng)表現(xiàn)人物的心理、性格、品質(zhì)、經(jīng)歷、命運(yùn)、能力等。在故事情節(jié)上，小說的結(jié)尾還可以照應(yīng)標(biāo)題和開頭，使小說結(jié)構(gòu)完整。三、如何立意。在文章前幾段仔細(xì)尋找立意點(diǎn)，仔細(xì)尋找作者的寫作目的。寫作目的千萬不要主觀生造，而要在材料中找到定位句，這個(gè)句子一般是觀點(diǎn)句。這就涉及到讀者如何去區(qū)分觀點(diǎn)和事實(shí)了。簡(jiǎn)化為：第一步：找觀點(diǎn)句，選擇一個(gè)來作為theme的基礎(chǔ)；第二步：根據(jù)情節(jié)發(fā)展去構(gòu)思末句，通過末句來照應(yīng)觀點(diǎn)句，兩種方法：支持觀點(diǎn)句，并深層次升華；反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)句，突出強(qiáng)烈的反差。Aboutahalf-milebehindourMinnesotafarmlayapond.Insummer,mybrotherHarryandIwouldrunthroughastandofoaktreestoskipstonesthere.Thepondworeacollarofblackmud.Itwasnotaplaceforswimming.Inlatesummer,thepondwouldbecoveredbyagreenandbubblyscum(起泡的浮渣).Sometimesastrong,unpleasantsmellrosefromit.Westayedaway.Whenwintercame,thepondwasonceagainaninvitingplace.Onedaywhenicecoveredit,Harrysaidtome,“Trywalkingacross.”Theicelookedsolid.Nowatershowedthroughit,butIhesitated.“Goahead.”Harryurged.“Tryit.You'relighterthanIam.Iftheiceholds,wecanrunandslidecarefullyonit.It'llbefun.”IwantedtopleaseHarry,andIthoughtaboutthefunofalongslideontheice.Ibegantoslideacrossthepond.Inthemiddleofthepond,theicegavewaywithasuddencrack(裂縫)!Istretchedout(伸展)myarms.ThenextthingIknewIwashangingontotheedgeofaholeintheicebyarmsoutstretchedontheice.FrommyshouldersdownIhunginicywater.Ithoughtofthebottomofthepond.Iknewitwouldbeblackandawfuldownthere,fullofmudandmayberottingcreatures.Itriedtoclimboutofthehole,butwhenIgotakneeontheice,itbrokelikewindowglass.AgainandagainItriedtogetout.Againandagaintheicebrokeintopieces.Theholewidened.Iwaswearingacoatofheavymaterial.Asitbecamepletelywet,itdraggedmedown.Iwastiredofthestruggleandrestedwithmyarmsstretchedoutontheice.IlookedatHarryonshore.Heseemedrootedtothespot.“Ican'tgetout！”IscreamedwhenIcaughtsomebreath.注意：1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Harryturnedandranfromthe__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThemomentIcrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing,mumrushedover.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________立意技巧：觀點(diǎn)句有三個(gè)：Itwasnotaplaceforswimming.Whenwintercame,thepondwasonceagainaninvitingplace.IwantedtopleaseHarry,andIthoughtaboutthefunofalongslideontheice.其它句子基本都屬于fact，并不適合作為立意的發(fā)散點(diǎn)。到底哪一句適合theme呢？第一句，對(duì)應(yīng)結(jié)尾即是：直到那一刻，我們終于明白了為什么它不適合游泳，也明白了大人們的警告的真正含義。(Notuntilthendidwerealize...)第二句，對(duì)應(yīng)結(jié)尾即是：雖然僥幸逃過一劫，但是我不得不說，那個(gè)池塘還是吸引著我們，孩子的好奇心大人們是不懂的啊。(anarrowescapecannotdenythefactthat...)第三句，對(duì)應(yīng)結(jié)尾即是：我終于明白了，我以后再也不能為了取悅他人去做一些冒險(xiǎn)的事情，這難道就是成長(zhǎng)的代價(jià)嗎？無論哪一種結(jié)尾，都會(huì)讓人感到有理有據(jù)，都是立意好的作文。范文賞析：Heturnedandranfromthepond.Staringathisfamiliarfigureoutofsight，Iwondered:“Isherunningforhelp,orisherunningawayandleavingmeslidingtothebottom？”Dismayandscarebeatmeoutofbreath.Theicywaterpiercedmyskinwithneedle-likechill.Iwasanxioustoclimboutbymyself,butcountlesspreviousfailuresfrozemefromstrugglingagain.Afterwhatseemedtobecenturiesoffruitlesswaiting,Iwasonthevergeofatthatmoment,heredashedHarywithalarge,black,V-shapedoakbranch.Floppingtohisstomach,hepushedthebranchbeforehimandwriggledtowardme.Themomentaslendertopbranchwaswithinreach,IgrabbeditimmediatelyandwaseventuallydraggedoutoftheicywaterbyHarry.Whatanarrowescape!Westumbledhome,withmyclothesdripping(滴水)andmyovershoessquishing(發(fā)出嘎吱聲)andsquirting(噴出)water.Icrashedthroughthekitchendoor,sobbing，mumrushedover.Unbuttoningmycoat，andstripping(脫去)myclothesfromme,shegavemeaquickbathandthennimblywrappedathickblanketovermetostopmyteeth-chatteringchill;meanwhileshegavemeacupofmilktowarmmetearfullyplainedtoheraboutallthathadhappenedandHarrywaslecturedaboutgettingayoungersiblingintosuchaheaddrooping,Harrymurmuredanapologytome.Iwastemporarilyfortedandrelievedbutinfact,thepondwasstillapermanenttemptationtoyoungHarryandme，especiallywhenwintercameagain.四、結(jié)尾的方式1．首尾呼應(yīng)結(jié)尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，深化主題，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。但是注意一點(diǎn)，不要照搬開頭的句子，要變化句式或者用詞來表達(dá)相同的主題。高考鏈接——(1)2017年浙江高考題開頭：Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.這篇讀后續(xù)寫的開頭寫到我有一個(gè)快樂有趣的童年都是因?yàn)橛幸粋€(gè)善良有愛但是健忘的媽媽。那么續(xù)寫結(jié)尾的時(shí)候可以回到文章的開頭再次重申媽媽的性格，來深化主題。結(jié)尾：Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful，shewasstillakindandnicemom.(2)2018年浙江高考題開頭：Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.結(jié)尾：NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.(3)2016年浙江高考題開頭：AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.結(jié)尾：Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious(搞笑的)experience.2．主題升華為了點(diǎn)明記敘內(nèi)容的意義，作者常常在記敘文的結(jié)尾，融入自己的觀點(diǎn)和評(píng)價(jià)。精彩的結(jié)尾，可以凸顯文章的主題，升華事件的意義，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。(1)引用名言警句(2)自己組織哲理性語言注意：不可生搬硬套名言警句，一定要具體文本具體分析。例子1：Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehas_beauty,_brains,_andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,IwouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbea_famous_dancer.Someday,when_I_am_older_andhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.(母愛的深遠(yuǎn)影響)例子2：“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon，”theteacheranswered.“First,you'vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asaproverbsays,‘Everycoinhastwosides.’Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairtoeveryone.”(借用名言警句來升華主題)樂觀積極的名言警句(1)Withoutthedark,youwouldneverseethestars.沒有黑夜，你將永遠(yuǎn)無法看到星星。(2)Thepessimistseesdifficultyineveryopportunity.Theoptimistseesopportunityineverydifficulty.悲觀主義者在每個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)里看到困難，樂觀主義者在每個(gè)困難里看到機(jī)會(huì)。(3)Don'tcrybecauseit'sover,smilebecauseithappened.不要因?yàn)榻Y(jié)束而哭泣，要微笑，因?yàn)樗?jīng)發(fā)生過。(4)Youwillneverfindarainbowifyouarelookingdown.如果你低著頭，是看不到彩虹的。(5)Bethankfulforwhatyouhave;you'llenduphavingmore.Ifyouconcentrateonwhatyoudon'thave,you'llnever,everhaveenough.感激你所擁有的，最終你會(huì)得到更多。如果你總是對(duì)那些沒有得到的東西耿耿于懷，那么你永遠(yuǎn)也不會(huì)滿足。面對(duì)挫折的名言警句(1)Manisnotmadefordefeat.Amancanbedestroyedbutnotdefeated.人不是為失敗而生的。人可以毀滅，但不能被打敗。(2)Whatdoesn'tkillmemakesmestronger.殺不死我的會(huì)讓我更強(qiáng)壯。(3)Stormsmaketreestakedeeperroots.暴風(fēng)雨讓樹木扎根更深。(4)Strengthdoesn'tefromwhatyoucando.Itesfromoveringthethingsyouoncethoughtyoucouldn't.強(qiáng)大并不來自于你能做到什么，而來自于你克服了自己曾經(jīng)認(rèn)為不可戰(zhàn)勝的艱難險(xiǎn)阻。(5)Dreamsthatseemimpossiblecanberealizedwithdeterminationandpersistence,nomatterwhattheoddsare.看似不可能的夢(mèng)想可以通過決心和堅(jiān)持來實(shí)現(xiàn)，不管實(shí)現(xiàn)的可能性有多大。關(guān)于愛的名言警句(1)Onlybylove,lifeiskepttogetherandmovesforward.只有靠愛，生命才能維系在一起，不斷前進(jìn)。(2)Trueloveistogiveeverythingtoeachotherwithoutaskingforanythinginreturn.真正的愛情是給予對(duì)方一切而不求任何回報(bào)。(3)Itislovethatmakestheworldgoaround.是愛讓世界轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)。(4)Wherethereisgreatlove,therearealwaysmiracles.哪里有真愛存在，哪里就有奇跡。3．對(duì)話收尾(1)Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.“Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe'sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact，”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid，“Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”(2)WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina'sfamilyhadmovedtoabiggerapartment.“I'veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs'loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus，”saidNina，“Iwouldnevergivethiskindoffriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.They_needourloveandcare.”4．自然結(jié)尾AsIwalkedhomeonefreezingday,Istumbledonawalletinthestreet.IpickeditupandlookedinsidetofindsomeidentificationsoIcouldcalltheowner.Butthewalletcontainedonlythreedollarsandaletterthatlookedasifithadbeeninthereforyears.TheenvelopewaswornandIcouldreadonlythereturnaddressonit.Iopenedtheletter,hopingtofindsomeclue.ThenIsawtheletterwaswrittenalmost60yearsago.Itwasinabeautifulhandwritingwithalittleflowerintheleft-handcorner.ItwastoayoungmannamedMichael,sayingthatthewritercouldnotseehimanymorebecausehermotherforbadeit.Evenso,shewrotethatshewouldalwayslovehim.Itwassigned,Hannah.Itwasabeautifulletter,buttherewasnowayexceptforthenameMichael,thattheownercouldbeidentified.Aftersearchingforthereturnaddressontheenvelope,IfinallyfoundthatHannahwasnowinanursinghome.Idroveovertothenursinghome.Anurseandaguardgreetedmeatthedoor.Wewentuptothethirdfloorofthelargethedayroom，thenurseintroducedmetowasasweet,silver-hairedoldladywithawarmsmile.Itoldheraboutfindingthewalletandshowedhertheletter.Thesecondshesawtheenvelopewiththatlittleflower,shetookadeepbreathandsaid,“Youngman,thisletterwasthelastcontactIeverhadwithMichael.”Shelookedawayforamomentdeepinthoughtandthensaidsoftly,“IlovedhimveryIwasonly16andmymotherfeltIwastoo,hewassohandsome.HelookedlikeSeanConnery,theactor.Ifyoushouldfindhim，tellhimIthinkofhim，”shehesitatedforamoment,almostbitingherlip，“tellhimIstilllovehim.”IthankedHannahandsaidgoodbye.ItooktheelevatortothefirstfloorandasIstoodbythedoor，theguardthereaskedifIhadanyinformationfromHannah.Itoldhimshehadgivenmeaclue.注意：1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Itookoutthewallet,whichwasasimplebrownleathercasewithredlacingonthe_____________________________________________________