雅思作文Task2精粹

雅思作文開頭：純粹添加社會背景:Thelate20thcenturywitnessecHheboomofscienceandtechnology,whichgaveriseto/contrlbutestowardsaseriesoftechnologicalinnovations,includingthemobilephone.Oursociety/ChinahasWitnessed-eye-catching/markedeconomicandsocialprogressinthepastXdecades.Theever?a€€elerated_updating~Gfscienceandtechnologycontributestorapidchangesinallaspectsofoureverydaylives.Thishasbeendrivenbytechnologicalandscientificbreakthroughsthatarechangingthewholewayweviewtheworldonanalmostdailybasis....Thishasbeendrivenbythe-aceeteratiei^ef-globalizationandhigMeehwiththeaccelerationofeconomicglobalizationandurbanization,...Withtheeye-catchingpFOQfBSS/advafKeofeconomy/society/livingstandard,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinallaspectsofoureverydaylives.Withtheadventoftheinventionof.../theinformationage/the-age-ofThishasbeendrivenbyteehoologieaPaftekseientifiebFeakthfetighsthatarechangingthewholewayweviewtheworldonanalmostdailybasis.越來越重要：playsanincreasinglysignificant/indispensablerolein...以驚人的速度向前發(fā)展：isadvancingatanever-acceleratedspeedinpresent-daysociety越來越流行：???isincreasinglyprevalentinthecontemporaryworld徹底改變我們的生活：...hasrevolutionizedourlife（負(fù)面背景）問題越來越嚴(yán)重:Theproblemof...isbecomingincreasinglydistuibing/sever^orrisomeXisdeteriorating題干里有背景介紹時(shí)，轉(zhuǎn)換句型可以有以下三種:(1)Atpresent/lnpresent-daysociety/modernsociety/lnthisdayandageInthepastseveraldecades/overthelastseveralyearsIgedacceptedthat..P.S.Itissuggestedthat是一種不指明觀點(diǎn)持有人的提問看法的形式，在論文中極為常見。類似的有：ItisarguedthatItisadvisedthatItisbelievedthat...Thereismuchdiscussion/argument/controversyatpresent(時(shí)間)astowhetherornot/whetherweshould...(3)Itisawell-knownfactthat...//Aisregardedasthe...討論類Discuss文章的開頭：Thereismuchdiscussion/controversyatpresent/inpresent-daysocietyastowhetherweshould/whetherornot...Ithasarousedfiercecontroversyastowhetherornot......isafrequenttopic/issueofdiscussionwhen...e.g.,Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sport,artormusic.Amuchdebatedissueatpresent/inpresent-daysocietyiswhether...Discuss中論述一些人的看法：Some(Many)people,Thosewho...mightarguethat...Numerouspeople=themajorityofpeople認(rèn)為：believe,argue,feel,maintain,claim,thinkHoldtheopinion,areundertheimpressionthat,給出自己的觀點(diǎn)：1）談?wù)撾p方觀點(diǎn)的題目：在轉(zhuǎn)述話題之后，要明確允許第幾種觀點(diǎn)。主要有以下幾種句式：Frommypointofview,Frommyownperspectivelaminclinetowards/holdtheformer/latterview.2.）是否允許某一觀點(diǎn)的題目：在轉(zhuǎn)述話題之后，要明確表示允許還是不允許這一觀點(diǎn)。主要支持/反對態(tài)度:IaminclinetowardsagreeItendtoagreethat...//Overall(Toalargeextent),Iaminclinetowardsagreewith/theopinionexpressed.Overall,Iamopposedtotheopinionexpressed.(3)Overall,Iamoftheopinionthat…isnotjustifiedIbelievethisis,overallapositive(negative)developmentThebenefits/strengths/advantagesofxprevailoveritsshortcomings/drawbacks/downsides/limitations⑹Theirviewcarriescertainbenefits//makesensetoacertainextent原因解決辦法的題目：在轉(zhuǎn)述話題之后，概要說明這一現(xiàn)象的原因和解決辦法。Inviewofsuchadisturbing/severeproblem,attemptsmustbemadeto(toreversethisgtuaikuMkend)inmyopinion.egInviewofsuchalienationwithinfamily,urgentstepsmustbetaken,frommypointofview.Sincebasicscienceisthefoundationofmosttechnologicaldevelopment,somestepsmustbetakentoreversethistrend.address/tackle/copewithAgreeordisagreeIwouldliketobeginbypointingoutthat...AgreeorDisagree第 個(gè)分論點(diǎn)：Still,itshouldbepointedoutthat...Still,IwishtopointoutthatAlso,...Themainconcernisabout...Whatcanbemoredisturbingis...ThisisespeciallytruewhenweconsiderthefactthatItistruethat/Itisnotevenalwaystruethat...Thisargumentmaybetrue提出正方觀點(diǎn)*Ontheotherhand,therearevariousaspectsagainstthesearguments.折中式的套路化句型。(找例句)Agreeordisagree讓步段：inspiteofthis：inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefits(inherentadvantages)associatedwithsth/ofsth.forsb/sth.holdscannotbedenied.inspiteoftheinherentadvantages(obviousbenefits)thatxcarries/associatedwithsth./sth.holdsintheX,itshouldonlybeusedasasupplementarytoolInspiteofthesepossiblebenefits,...Inspiteofthefactthat...yetIamoftheopinionthat...Xalthoughhavesomedrawbacks/downsides/shortcomings,therearemorebenefits/advantagesassociatedwithit.Soitisreasonabletobelievethat—Sth.holds/carriescertainbenefits表原因（也可用于Report）:（l）Thisispartlybecause...（2）Thefundamentalreasonforthis,Ibelieveis...Anotherreasonwhy...dueto...isthate.g.Anotherreasonwhytheincomegapbroadensduetotechnologicaladvancesisthattechnologyisaformofintellectualcapital.結(jié)尾段：Ithinkthemainpointistomakesurethat…!FF€en€lusieM4ake4hejview4hatrweuld_affue4hat???canbebeneficialwhenitisnotregardedasanenditself（3）Onthebasisoftheabovediscussion,itisreasonabletobelievethat---Inconclusion,Ithinkitisalsoimportanttorememberthat..Iqconclusionwithoutsuggestingthat…Ibelieve/Ithink（表反對觀點(diǎn)的結(jié)尾）e.g.Withoutsuggestingthatspaceresearchisentirelyworthless,Ibelieve...Inconclusion,withoutsuggestingthatalltechnologyisnecessarilygood,Ibelieveitisbynomeansworthless.Somyconclusionisthatinspiteof...Personally,Ithinkthat/Iwouldsaythat...Th。mo5toffectiv。moansto….wouldnotbethrough...butbethroughtheprovisiono*（提出建議）表示論證的句型：Wecanfindplentyofevidencetosupporttheviewthat...我們可以找到大量的證據(jù)來支持這一觀點(diǎn)。A.對于Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?可以寫成主要支持略帶反對或者主要反對略帶支持的折中式格式：（1）首段：簡單介紹議題背景+提出自己的觀點(diǎn)（2）支持（反對）（3）支持（反對）（4）讓步（略帶反對或者支持）再次強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀點(diǎn)表明總體支持/但對的態(tài)度，同時(shí)提出1-2句話的合理建議Usingacomputereverydaycanhavemorenegativethanpositiveeffectsonchildren.Doyouagreeordisagree?.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion的考題，要求必須對兩方都進(jìn)行平衡式論證，并且在結(jié)尾段提出自己的看法。對于含有than/outweigh或者形容詞比較級的題目，需要在文章中對雙方都進(jìn)行論文才干有效地證明其中的某一方超過另一方（參考Discussl,2）.基本徹底反對反方，支持正方的寫法：第一段：引出話題第二段：提出反方觀點(diǎn)+反駁第三段：提出正方觀點(diǎn)+論證支持第四段：傾向正方觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)一步深化.相對而言不贊同反方，但反方有一定道理（重點(diǎn)在折中）：第一段：引出話題第二段：涉及反方觀點(diǎn)+分析第三段：提出正方觀點(diǎn)+論證第四段：提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，傾向正方，分析兩種觀點(diǎn)的關(guān)聯(lián)性第五段：讓步+反駁反方論證，總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)*以上兩種均先反方后正方，自己的觀點(diǎn)跟在正方后面.雙方觀點(diǎn)都比較有說服力，但又都不夠完整：第一段：引出話題+提出觀點(diǎn)（指出正方的觀點(diǎn)不夠完整）第二段：分析論證正方觀點(diǎn)第三段：分析論證反方觀點(diǎn)第四段：提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，深化（普通是正反結(jié)合）.兩種觀點(diǎn)都不夠完善，無法徹底允許的情況（指出兩種觀點(diǎn)在某種程度上的合理指出及其局限所在）第一段：引出話題+提出觀點(diǎn)第二段：反駁反方的理由第三段：正方理由的缺陷第四段：總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)，提出自己的折中的看法SnOOassJnlsdoJ?sdJoJassionolsOonaoJno6Jao?paolmoJamona（?Vondaodlaino?VaJimdoJ?on?dJoJassions.Somadaodla?VinA?VisisJnll（!ns?iJiapMVilao?VaJ?Vin入i?isnnJoiJ.**對照論證（結(jié)構(gòu)的平衡性）并緊扣主題。第一段：引出話題，交待問題爭論的焦點(diǎn)：體育明星的高收入是否合理。第二段：提出反方觀點(diǎn)（otherthinkitisunfair.）,并進(jìn)行了相應(yīng)地反駁。分析時(shí)把運(yùn)動(dòng)員的高收入和其他重要行業(yè)人士的收入進(jìn)行了對照：Manypeoplefind認(rèn)為theirrewardsunfair...第三段：提出正方觀點(diǎn):Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustified）,并進(jìn)行論證,加以支持。Thosewhofeelthatsportsstars'salariesarejustifiedmightarguethat...結(jié)尾：傾向正方觀點(diǎn)并有所深化（總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)，指出體育明星掙錢多的合理指出：Personally,Ithinkthat...I?is6anaJoll(qaliavap?Vo?somadaodlaoJaqoJnMi?VOaJ?oin?olan?sJoJins?onOaJoJsdoJ?oJmnsiO'onpo?VaJsoJano?.HoMavaJ'i?issoma?imasOloimap?Vo?on(OVilpOonqa?on6V??oqaOomao6oopsdoJ?sdaJsonoJmnsiOion."反方(或者某一方)的觀點(diǎn)你相對而言不贊同，但它有一定道理的時(shí)候使用。第一段：直奔主題，簡明扼要引出話題(issue)Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sport,artormusic.第二段：涉及作者相對而言不太贊同的觀點(diǎn)（反方）：Obviously,educationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthat…（是建立在的信念的基礎(chǔ)上的.）第三段：提出作者相對照較允許的觀點(diǎn)（正方）：However,somepeoplebelievethatinnatetalentiswhatdifferentiatesapersonwhofromthosewho….**這樣寫的好處是正方觀點(diǎn)和作者自己的觀點(diǎn)在文氣上可以連成一體，是的論證更加充分。第四段：提出自己觀點(diǎn)：音樂、藝術(shù)和體育等的杰出成就往往和天賦有關(guān)。雖然作者有明星傾向，但還是分析了兩種觀點(diǎn)之間的復(fù)雜關(guān)聯(lián)，認(rèn)為先天因素和后天因素不是互斥的。 (But,aswithallquestionsofnatureversusnurture,theyarenotmutuallyexclusive）作者的觀點(diǎn)和論者B體現(xiàn)出部份的折中：Ipersonallythinkthat…**注意提出自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)」T要過分絕對化，徹底傾向于正方觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)尾：通過讓步和反駁論證，總結(jié)了作者的觀點(diǎn)，回應(yīng)了題目的要求：Inconclusion,Iagreethatanychildcanbetaughtparticularskills,buttobereallygoodinareassuchasmusic,artorsport,thensomenaturaltalentisrequired.Somepeoplethinkthatparentsshouldteachchildrenhowtobegoodmembersofsociety.Others,however,believethatschoolistheplacetolearnthis."如果雙方觀點(diǎn)都比較有說服力，但又不夠完整的時(shí)候采用第一段：引出話題，并提出觀點(diǎn)。本文的論題是兒童教育的話題，開頭可以先說明兒童教育應(yīng)該包含的內(nèi)容：Achild'seducationhasneverbeenaboutlearninginformationandbasicskillsonly.Ithasalwaysincludedteachingthenextgenerationhowtobegoodmembersofsociety（話題）.Therefore,thiscannotbetheresponsibilityoftheparentsalone（觀/點(diǎn)）.第二段：針對觀點(diǎn)1（正方）進(jìn)行分析和論證，提出家長扮演的重要角色。采取了概念+解釋說明的論證方法。第三點(diǎn)：針對觀點(diǎn)2（反正）進(jìn)行論證和分析，指出學(xué)校起到更大的作用。結(jié)尾段：呼應(yīng)文章開頭，提出自己觀點(diǎn)，不能僅靠家長和學(xué)校，而是有賴于全社會的共同努力（深化）。Somepeopleprefertospendtheirlivesdoingthesamethingsandavoidingchange.Others,however,thinkthatchangeisalwaysagoodthing.**文章指出兩種觀點(diǎn)在某種程度上的合理指出及其局限所在，從而得出自己的看法。這種寫法比較適合Discuss中兩種觀點(diǎn)都不夠完善，無法徹底允許的情況。第一段：不僅交待事實(shí)，引出話題，同時(shí)提出作者的觀點(diǎn)，表明避免變化是不可能的。第二段：直接反駁反方的理由，并沒有過多分析反方的觀點(diǎn)：Thosepeoplewhobelieve...第三段：指出正方理由的缺陷，指出變化并非綜合變得更好，并沒有論證正方的觀點(diǎn):However,reachingtheconclusionthatchangeisinevitableisnotthesameasassumingthatchangeisalwaysforthebetter.結(jié)尾：總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)，再次提出自己的看法：Inconclusio