作文2Changesinme文檔資料

composition-changesinme【題目】寫(xiě)一篇以前你是什么樣子的，現(xiàn)在的你是什么樣子的短文?？梢杂靡韵绿崾驹~，不少于5句話。(quiet,active,short,tall,thin,strong,gocycling,ice-skate,...)一、審題：以前——一般過(guò)去時(shí)（過(guò)去式）現(xiàn)在——一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（原形）以前：before,3yearsago,then,atthattime現(xiàn)在：now二、選擇標(biāo)題。ChangesinmeThenandNowBeforeandNow列表過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在對(duì)比，一一對(duì)應(yīng)。可以從外貌、性格、能力、愛(ài)好等方面作對(duì)比。列3點(diǎn)最佳。三、寫(xiě)作1、分3段。Before,I'mcouldn'tgocycling.Now,I'mcanrideabike.be動(dòng)詞用法：(1)是(2)be＋形容詞(…的)(3)be＋動(dòng)ing(4)begoingto+動(dòng)原(表將來(lái))不能加be動(dòng)詞的情況。(1)動(dòng)詞原形。l'mliketogoice-skating.(2)動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式。I'mrodeahorselastweekend.四、開(kāi)頭1.Hi,everyone.I'mAmy.I'm12yearsold.I'mdifferentnow.2.Changesarearoundme.3.Changesarewithme.4.Everythingischanging.Metoo!五、中間。（一）外貌對(duì)比1.（身高）Before,Iwasshort.Now,I'mtallerthanbefore.2.（體重）Before,Iwasthin.Now,I'mstrongerthanbefore.3.（身高＋體重）Before,Iwasshortandthin.Now,I'mtallerandstrongerthanbefore.4.（頭發(fā)）Before,Ihadshorthair.Now,Ihavelonghair.5.（眼鏡）Before,Ididn'twearglasses.butnow,Iwearglasses.二、性格對(duì)比quiet-active,shy-funny,strict-friendly/funny,（not）hard-workingatschool,(not)helpfulathome/school(1)Before,Iwasquiet.Now,I'mveryactiveinclass.Ialwaystalkwithjoy.(2)OnceIwasn'tanactivegirl.Ididn'ttalkalot.Now,Italkmorethanbefore.Ialwaystalkwithjoy.過(guò)去、現(xiàn)在寫(xiě)一句也可以。寫(xiě)你不會(huì)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)的。三、能力對(duì)比(couldn't/can+動(dòng)原)1.Before,Icouldn'tgocycling.Now,Icanrideabike.Irideabikeeveryday.(Ilikeitverymuch.)(I'mgoodatridingabike.)gocycling=rideabikeice-skate=goice-skating(球類)playbadminton(樂(lè)器類)playthepianodosports=playsportscleanmyroom=dothecleaningwashmyclothescookdokungfumakeasnowmanswim=goswimming四、愛(ài)好對(duì)比didn'tlike/like+動(dòng)ing+to+動(dòng)原liked/don'tlike+動(dòng)ing+to+動(dòng)原1.Before,Ididn'tlikewinter.Ithoughtitwastoocold,andIcouldn'tgocycling.NowIliketoice-skate,soIlikewinter.(spring,summer,autumn,winter)2.(music,sports,English,maths)Before,Ididn'tlikemusic.Becauseitwastoohard(困難).Now,Icanplaythepiano.SoIlikemusicverymuch.五、tips1、可以把外貌、性格、能力、愛(ài)好相結(jié)合，寫(xiě)作更出彩。2、高級(jí)詞匯、高級(jí)句子可以為你的作文增加光彩。3、但是，如果你不確定寫(xiě)地對(duì)不對(duì)，還是改用一般的詞匯、一般的句子吧。因?yàn)殄e(cuò)詞、錯(cuò)句會(huì)扣分，而且很嚴(yán)重。4、過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在對(duì)比，以三個(gè)為宜。如果句子足夠多，兩個(gè)也可以。5、寫(xiě)作一般不少于5句話。不多于10句話。6、不要通篇都是Before,...Now,...Before,...Now,...Before,...Now,...寫(xiě)作并不是造句子。7、表示過(guò)去，可以用before,then,atthattime,3yearsago時(shí)間可以放句首，也可以放句末。放句首，需要加逗號(hào)，放句末則不需要。六、范文(一)ChangesinmeHello,everyone.I'mAmy.I'mdifferentnow.3yearsago,Iwasshortandthin.Icouldn'trideabike.Now,I'mtallerandstrongerthanbefore.SoIcancycling.Ilikeitverymuch.Whatabigchange!ThenandNowEverythingischanging.Metoo!Before,Ihadshorthair.Butnow,Ihavelonghair.OnceIwasn'tanactivegirl.Ididn'ttalkalot.Now,Italkmorethanbefore.Ialwaystalkwithjoy.Changesarewithme.BeforeandNowHi,mynameisMike.Changesarewithme.3yearsago,Ididn'twearglasses.Iwasquietinclass.Atthattime,Ididn'tlikemusic.Ithoughtitwa