讀后續(xù)寫微技能(一) 喜悅激動情緒描寫 課件 2022屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

——Howtoexpressthefeelings——Happiness&Pleasure&Excitement高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)之讀后續(xù)寫微技能（一）01Leadin02UsefulExpressions03Writing04EmotionalInspirationStep1:Leadin高考真題鏈接(2022新高考1.讀后續(xù)寫)Tomyjoy,Davidslowlyrosetohisfeet./Seeinghisconfidentsmiles,Isighedinrelief.(2021新高考1.讀后續(xù)寫)Thetwins

were

filled

withexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.(2020新高考1.讀后續(xù)寫)Smiling,shesaid,“YoumaysendittohimeverySaturdaymorning,ifyouarewillingtomakepopcornforhimyourselves.John,willyouagreetoberesponsibleforthework?”“Absolutely!”repliedJohn,excitementshininginhiseyes.

____________________________________________________________________________________GuessingGameHowdotheyfeel?happy/pleased/delighted…shocked/amazed/surprised…angry/annoyed/mad/…Feelingsshownthrough:MentalresponsesPhysical

actionsFacial

expressionsStep2:UsefulExpressionspleasureMentalresponsesUsefulWordsNouns/

Verbs

:Adjectives/

Adverbs:

joyexcitementamusementdelight(vt.&n.)happinessthrill(vt.&n)……h(huán)appy,cheerful,delighted,pleased,amused,joyful,merry,overjoyed,excited,thrilled…h(huán)appily,joyfully,merrily,excitedly…pl_____eh____nessme__lych___fulde____edth____djoy___lyover___edTestyourmemory:completethewordsaccordingtothehintsUsefulphrasesbrightenedsb’sheart使某人心情愉快bewildwithjoy/delight/happiness欣喜若狂ingoodmood心情好asenseofjoyandhappinesssweptover/floodedoversb一種喜悅和幸福的感覺涌上心頭inhigh/cheerfulspirits興高采烈beoverthemoon欣喜若狂besopleasedthatone’sheartsang心花怒放Practice:Completetheblanks在橫線中續(xù)寫相應(yīng)的情感描寫，可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容，使文章前后連貫。(2021新高考.讀后續(xù)寫改編)Iamamotherofthetwinswhoareonlyfiveyearsold.TodayisMother’sDay,andtheypreparedbreakfastformethismorning.Atthesightofthemeal,I____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.ThiswasthebestgiftIhaveeverreceived.felthappyfeltdelightedwasoverthemoonwaswildwithjoy/delight/happinesswassopleasedthatmyheartsangUsefulexpressions1one’shandstrembledwithexcitement手激動得發(fā)抖dancedfor/withjoy手舞足蹈gaveajumpintheair高興地蹦跶gaveathumbs-uptosb朝某人豎起大拇指Physicalactionsjumpedfor/withjoy高興地跳起來hummedandskippedlikeabirdintheforest.（明喻）像小鳥在森林里一樣哼唱跳躍Whichonedoyoulike?Why?(15分作文)Hewasveryhappytohearthisnews.(22分作文)Hearingthisnews,hejumpedupandranhappilyaroundtheyard.(15分作文)Whensheopenedtheuniversityoffer,shefeltsoexcited.請你來寫：Whensheopenedtheuniversityoffer,she___________________________________________________________.Practice:Comparethesentences________________________(24分作文)Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedtheuniversityoffer.Smilingexpressions：FacialexpressionsWords：grin咧嘴笑beam眉開眼笑giggle咯咯地笑chuckle輕輕地笑（以免打擾別人）Phrases：abrightsmile燦爛的笑容withasmileshininglikeadiamond笑容燦爛如鉆石beallsmiles笑容滿面grinfromeartoear咧著嘴笑roarwithlaughter瘋狂大笑burstwithlaughter開懷大笑Matching：laughbeamgiggleabrightsmilewithasmileshininglikeadiamondroarwithlaughtergrinfromeartoearburstwithlaughter瘋狂大笑咯咯地笑大笑眉開眼笑笑容燦爛如鉆石燦爛的笑容開懷大笑咧著嘴笑Otherexpressions：Facialexpressionsone’seyesshone/twinkled/sparkedwithexcitement某人眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒one’seyeswerefilledwithwarmexcitedtears熱淚盈眶tearsofjoy喜極而泣one’sfacebrightened某人的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩withabig/brightsmileappearingon/spreadingacrossone’sface某人臉上綻放出大大的笑容(2022新高考1.讀后續(xù)寫)看著他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悅。(2020新高考1.讀后續(xù)寫)David眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。Practice:TranslatethesentencesDavid’seyesshone/twinkled/sparkedwithexcitement.Atthesightof

his

confidentsmile,asenseofjoysweptover/floodedoverme.

Step3:Writing按要求完成以下句子“當(dāng)看到她最好的朋友朝她走來，她非常興奮。”（2021.徐州模擬）（1）先嘗試用簡單概括，將意思表達(dá)清楚。___________________________________________________________________（2）在概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。_________________________________________________________________________（神態(tài)描寫十情感名詞，熱淚盈眶）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________（神態(tài)描寫＋情感名詞，滿臉喜色，雙眸發(fā)亮）Whenshesawherbestfriendcomingtowardsher,hereyeswerefilledwithwarmexcitedtears.

Whenshesawherbestfriendcomingtowardsher,herfacebrightenedandhereyesshone/twinkled/sparkedwithexcitement.

Whenshesawherbestfriendcomingtowardsher,shewasveryexcited/thrilled.(Mentalresponses+Facialexpressions)1、

她控制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅，激動地抱住了她的朋友。（2021.徐州模擬）2、高興又期待，她盯著路的盡頭，希望她的好友能早點出現(xiàn)。(2021.徐州模擬)Translatethesentences(Mentalresponses+Physicalactions)Shecouldnotcontrolherjoy/happiness/delightandgaveabighugwithexcitementtoherfriend.Delightedandhopeful,shestaredattheendoftheroad,hopingherclosefriendwouldcomeearlier.續(xù)寫微作文（2021.徐州模擬）請根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，嘗試?yán)m(xù)寫一個正在等待與老友重逢以及終于等到老友的情節(jié)。側(cè)重人物高興和激動的情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫。（詞數(shù)70左右，注意同義詞替換，避免重復(fù)）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching.________________

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Goldensunlightdancedinfloatedintheair.Shestaredattheendoftheroad,hopingherclosefriendwouldcomeearlier.Itseemedasifshehadbeenstandin