新教材高中英語UNIT2HEALTHYLIFESTYLE表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案新人教版選擇性

UNIT2HEALTHYLIFESTYLE描述生活方式本單元要求給編輯寫一封描述生活方式的信件，符合正式書信的寫作范疇。[基本框架]1．開頭(thebeginning)——寫信目的2．主體(thebody)——詳細(xì)介紹自己的生活方式3．結(jié)尾(theending)——表達(dá)謝意[常用詞塊]1．bebeneficialto對……有益2．liveahealthylife過著健康的生活3．sortout整理；歸類4．5．6．contributeto有助于[常用語句]★精彩開頭1．I'mwritingtoyoutotellyousomethingaboutahealthylifestyle.我寫信給你是想告訴你一些關(guān)于健康的生活方式。2．Iwanttosharesomethingaboutmylifestylewithyou.我想和你分享一下我的生活方式。3．Iamwillingtoofferyousometipsaboutlivingahealthylife.我愿意給你一些關(guān)于健康生活的建議?！镎募丫?．Exerciseisbeneficialtoourhealthandwe'dbetterrunforhalfanhoureveryday.運動有益于我們的健康，我們最好每天跑步持續(xù)半小時。2．What'smore，weshouldcombinestudywithpleasure.更重要的是，我們應(yīng)該把學(xué)習(xí)和快樂結(jié)合起來。3.Wecandoalotinourdailylifetoachievethegoalofalowcarbonlife.我們可以在日常生活中做很多事情來實現(xiàn)低碳生活的目標(biāo)。★余味結(jié)尾1．Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanacceptmysuggestion.如果你能接受我的建議我將不勝感激。2．Tryyourbestandyouwillliveahealthierlife.努力吧，你會過上更健康的生活。3．It'ssomethingaboutmydailylifestyle，thanksforyourreading.這是我日常生活的一部分，謝謝你的閱讀。假定你是李華，根據(jù)下面提示用英語給報社編輯寫一封信。內(nèi)容如下：1．許多青少年不注重健康問題的現(xiàn)象及導(dǎo)致的危害；2．簡述你的看法，提出你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearEditor，Asweallknow，healthisveryimportant.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua【學(xué)生習(xí)作】DearEditor，Asweallknow，healthisveryimportant.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.Manyteenagersdon'tpayattentiontotheirhealth.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchTV，playgamesandchatontheInternet.Firstly，thismaymakethemtogetnear-sighted.Secondly，theirbodiesbecomeweaker.Thirdly，theywilllosethechancetocommunicatewithothers.Theyshouldplaysomesportsandhaveahealthylifestyle.Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua[點評]1.要點雖然齊全，但內(nèi)容不夠豐富，字?jǐn)?shù)不足80字。2.高級詞匯和高級句式的運用太少，句式太簡單，且不夠多樣。3.文中出現(xiàn)了一些簡單的語法錯誤。如spendtime(in)do，makethemtoget等。4.銜接不夠順暢，意義不連貫，未達(dá)到預(yù)期目的?！旧褡魑摹緿earEditor，Asweallknow，healthisveryimportant.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.However，manyteenagersdon'tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth.AndtheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV，playinggamesandchattingontheInternet，whichisbadfortheirhealth.Firstly，thismaymakethemgetnear-，theirbodiesbecomemuchweaker.Thirdly，theywilllosethechancetocommunicatewithothersfacetoface.Inmyopinion，theyshouldspendlesstimeinfrontoftheTVorthecomputer.Goouttogetmuchexercise，playsomesportsandhaveahealthylifestyle.Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua假如你是中學(xué)生李華，請你給某報社編輯寫一封信，指出健康的重要性，并針對“如何保持健康”給出自己的建議。信的內(nèi)容需包含以下信息：1．健康的重要性；2．給出健康的方法，如：避免含糖高、脂肪高的食物；摒棄不良習(xí)慣；多鍛煉等。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearEditor，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【參考范文】DearEditor，F(xiàn)itnessisfarmoreimportantthananythingelse.Howcanwekeephealthy？Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly，weshouldkeepabalanceddiet，whichisgoodforourhealth.Weshouldtrytocutoutfoodscontaininglotsofsugarandfat.What'smore，wehavetoquit