高中英語選修7-1建議信課件

寫一封建議信建議信是生活中常見的一種應(yīng)用文體,是寫信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議或忠告。建議信可以寫給個(gè)人,也可以寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)。信的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、表達(dá)期望等。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。寫一封建議信1【策略點(diǎn)撥】Ⅰ.技巧點(diǎn)撥1.布局謀篇。建議信的正文一般分為三段。第一段通常是寫作意圖,寫信人陳述寫信原由,簡單介紹自己第二段通常先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后指出需要改進(jìn)的地方并提出具體的建議或忠告。第三段通常是再次提出希望，希望對(duì)方給予答復(fù)。2.銜接與過渡。具體的建議一般用firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobeginwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等連接詞作為過渡語?！静呗渣c(diǎn)撥】2Ⅱ.常用句式開頭：Iamwritingwithmysuggestionabout…Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon…andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestions.正文：Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif….Inthisway,…Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat….Bydoingso,…

IfIwereyou,Iwould…because…結(jié)尾Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.Itrustyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.Ⅱ.常用句式3

【實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練】假定你是李華，你所在的城市要修建一個(gè)文化廣場aculturalsquare?？紤]到殘疾人的需要，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給負(fù)責(zé)該項(xiàng)目的英國設(shè)計(jì)師史密斯先生寫一封建議信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.臺(tái)階step一側(cè)應(yīng)設(shè)坡道slope，方便輪椅wheelchair通行；2.廠場內(nèi)設(shè)盲道sidewalksfortheblind，方便盲人通行；3.應(yīng)設(shè)計(jì)殘疾人disabledpeople用衛(wèi)生間toilet。注意：詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)).2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緦?shí)戰(zhàn)演練】4【必備詞匯】1.文化廣場aculturalsquare2.坡道slope3.輪椅wheelchair4.盲道sidewalksfortheblind5.殘疾人disabledpeople6.衛(wèi)生間toilet7.方便的handy8.為了某人的方便fortheconvenienceofsb.9.方便某人進(jìn)入withgoodaccessforsb.10.考慮takesth.intoconsideration/account【必備詞匯】5Step1審題謀篇體裁①_______話題②___________________時(shí)態(tài)③___________人稱④_____________段落布局開頭:點(diǎn)明主題-即說明寫信目的主體:對(duì)修建文化廣場提出具體建議結(jié)尾:表達(dá)態(tài)度建議信對(duì)修建文化廣場提出建議一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第一、三人稱Step1審題謀篇體裁①_______話題②____6Step2遣詞造句Howtostart—thepurposeoftheletterWhatisthebackground?修建一個(gè)文化廣場aculturalsquare。Ihaveheardthat…2.Whydoyouwritetheletter?考慮到殘疾人的需要，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給負(fù)責(zé)該項(xiàng)目的英國設(shè)計(jì)師史密斯先生寫一封建議信Consideringtheneedsof…,Iwouldliketo…Or:Iamwritingtoaskifyou…(考慮到了殘疾人的需要）Step2遣詞造句Howtostart—thepu7Step2遣詞造句Howtospread—thesuggestionstobegivenSuggestion1

臺(tái)階step一側(cè)應(yīng)設(shè)坡道slope，方便輪椅wheelchair通行aslopeshould…fortheconvenienceof…Suggestion2廠場內(nèi)設(shè)盲道sidewalksfortheblind，方便盲人通行itisnecessaryto…Suggestion3應(yīng)設(shè)計(jì)殘疾人disabledpeople用衛(wèi)生間toiletitwouldbehandytoprovide…with…Aconclusion—whyshouldwedoso?If…withgoodaccessfor…,Iamsure….Step2遣詞造句Howtospread—thes8Step2遣詞造句Howtoconclude-感謝與愿望Ihope…/Itrust…

Step3聯(lián)句成篇在適當(dāng)位置加上過渡語firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobeginwith,then,later,lastbutnotleastStep2遣詞造句9DearMr.Smith,

IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudent.Ihaveheardthataculturalsquareistobebuiltinourcity.Consideringtheneedsofdisabledpeople,Iwouldliketomakesomesuggestions.

Firstofall,aslopeshouldbebuiltbesidethestepsfortheconvenienceofdisabledpeopleinwheelchairs.Second,itisnecessarytodesignsidewalksfortheblindinthesquare.Lastbutnotleast,itwouldbehandytoprovidedisabledpeoplewithspecialtoilets.Ifthingsinthesquarearedesignedwithgoodaccessfordisabledpeople,Iamsuremanypeoplewillbepleasedtogothere.

Ihopeyouwilltakemysuggesti