初中寫作技巧指導(dǎo)課件

初中寫作技巧指導(dǎo)天紅中學(xué)韓全英初中寫作技巧指導(dǎo)天紅中學(xué)韓全英新課標(biāo)要求1.能根據(jù)寫作要求，收集，準(zhǔn)備素材；2.能獨(dú)立起草短文、短信等，并在教師德指導(dǎo)下進(jìn)行修改；3.能使用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系；4.能簡單描述人物或事件；5.能根據(jù)所給的圖是活表格寫出簡單的段落或操作說明新課標(biāo)要求1.能根據(jù)寫作要求，收集，準(zhǔn)備素材；中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（13-15分）信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。第二檔（10-12分）信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語言錯誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。第三檔（7-9分）能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語言錯誤較多，但句子基本可讀。第四檔（4-6分）只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語言錯誤多，只有少量句子可讀。第五檔（1-3分）只能傳達(dá)個別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個別句子可讀。中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（13-15分）影響作文分?jǐn)?shù)的因素：1題目要求、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2句子準(zhǔn)確、通順；3層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；4拼寫、語法等錯誤；5卷面整潔度；影響作文分?jǐn)?shù)的因素：作文話題計(jì)劃安排型作文（記敘文類）圖表、數(shù)字比例型說明利弊型不同觀點(diǎn)型解決問題型幾種文體的結(jié)合，是近幾年來的一種趨勢，要特別注意作文話題做題步驟：1審題：審清作文體裁（類型）時態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié)；2列提綱（文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內(nèi)容；3串連：恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部分銜接自然。4寫作：在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)；5復(fù)查：2遍--1遍看查拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等問題；2遍不出聲讀查，檢查語句是否通順、連貫等；6謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。做題步驟：計(jì)劃安排型作文——談假期安排

1:（綜述）（graduatefrom…,）holidayiscoming,planforthisholiday...

2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;

Secondly,visittouristattractions;

Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.

3:IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday./I’mlookingforwardtothecomingholiday./Ican’twaittoenjoymysummervacation.計(jì)劃安排型作文——談假期安排

暑假將至，同學(xué)們就自己暑假生活安排進(jìn)行了交流。請你用英語介紹有關(guān)情況以及自己的暑期計(jì)劃。

內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1.有的同學(xué)打算外出旅游，放松一下。

2.有的同學(xué)計(jì)劃在家中多讀書，為將來的學(xué)習(xí)做準(zhǔn)備。

3.有的同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備參加體育鍛煉，保持身體健康。

4.談?wù)勛约旱氖钇诎才拧?/p>

暑假將至，同學(xué)們就自己暑假生活安排進(jìn)行了交流。請你用Summervacationiscoming.Wehavedifferentplansforit.

Whilesomeofmyclassmatesaregoingtovisitsomeplacesofinterest,somearenotgoingout,instead,theyaregoingtodomorereadingandprepareforthefuturestudies.Atthesametime,somewanttodomoresportstokeepfit.IplantogotoBeijingtoseetheOlympicGames.Becauseit’sagoodchancetomakemorefriendsandknowmoreabouttheOlympicGames.

Iamsurewe’llhaveameaningfulholiday.Summervacationiscoming.We敘事文常用的句子間連接詞：

Atfirst/atlast/intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…Toone’ssurprise/joyinaword/inallatthesametime/attimes/onceinawhile/sothat…luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…敘事文常用的句子間連接詞：Atfir常見的作文類型模板：1書信(經(jīng)常和其他類型一起使用)Dear...,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Bestwishes! Yours,

Lucy

常見的作文類型模板：1書信(經(jīng)常和其他類型一起使用)Da

書信開頭常用語

Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearfromyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?

I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…/I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...

Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.

Thankyouforinvitingmeto….a書信開頭常用語Iamverygladtorb書信結(jié)尾常用語

Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.b書信結(jié)尾常用語Bestwishes(to/for2圖表、數(shù)字比例型

（提出討論或調(diào)查的事實(shí)）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.

（表達(dá)出不同看法或觀點(diǎn)）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表達(dá)個人看法）

Asastudent,Iagreeto…2圖表、數(shù)字比例型（提出討論或調(diào)查的事實(shí)）Lastw初中寫作技巧指導(dǎo)課件Ourschoolhasmadeasurveyabouthowlongmiddleschoolstudentscanfixtheirattentioninclass.

Theresultshowsthatonly40%ofthestudentscandrawtheirattentiontotheirclass,whiletherestofthemcannotconcentrateonthelesson.30%think

theproblemiscausedbyallkindsofnoisesintheclassroom.

Theotherpartofthestudentconsiderlackofsleepandtirednessasthemajorreasons.

Therefore,weadvisethattheclassroomshouldbebrightandtheairinsideshouldkeepfresh.t

Asforstudents,theyshouldtrytheirbesttobeactiveinclassinordernottobedisturbedbyothers.Duringthebreaks,theycantakesomeexerciseorhavealittlerestintheclassroom.Ourschoolhasmadeasurveya3說明利弊型Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,優(yōu)點(diǎn)1…Besides,優(yōu)點(diǎn)2…

However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,

缺點(diǎn)1…Ontheotherhand,缺點(diǎn)2…

Inmyopinion,個人觀點(diǎn)…3說明利弊型Nowadays…isbec隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)（economy）的發(fā)展，越來越多的人購買了手機(jī)，現(xiàn)在不少初中生也開始使用手機(jī)。手機(jī)在帶來便利的同時，也帶來很多的問題。請寫一篇英語文章，闡述一下初中生使用手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)（economy）的發(fā)展，越來越多的人購買了手機(jī)，現(xiàn)參考作文：

Cellphoneshavebecomemoreandmore

popularinchinathesedays.Whereveryougoyoucanseepeopleusingcellphones,evenmanyschoolstudents,havecellphones.

Cellphoneshavebroughtpeoplealotofbenefits,themostimportantisthattheyareconvenient.Withcellphones,theycankeepintouchwithanybodytheywant.Furthermore,theycanuseittotakephotosandotherthings.

However,cellphonescanalsobringpeopleproblems.Themostseriousistheelectricwaveradiation(輻射).It'sharmfultousers'brains.Anotherproblemisthatwhenpeoplearehavingaclass,theringofthecellphonemayinterruptothers.

SoIthinkstudentsshouldusecell

phonesaslittleaspossibleandturnthemoffwhentheyarehavingclasses.

參考作文：

Cellphoneshavebecome4不同觀點(diǎn)型

Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾問題.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.

Somebelieve…正方觀點(diǎn).First,原因1…Besides,原因2…

Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方觀點(diǎn).Ontheonehand,

原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…

Asforme,個人觀點(diǎn)…4不同觀點(diǎn)型Wemadeasurvey上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論?，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。

注意：1．短文須包括寫作提示和表格中所列的全部內(nèi)容；

2．時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范;3．詞數(shù)80-100個左右。

討論結(jié)果:25人表示同意

理由:1.這樣很方便2.能節(jié)約上學(xué)途中的時間

35人表示不同意1.年齡太小，騎電動自行車不安全2.早上交通擁擠，騎電動自行車也快不起來

生詞提示：electricadj.電動的whetherconj能否

上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論?，F(xiàn)在參考作文：

Lastweek,ourschoolhadadiscussionaboutwhetherjuniorstudentscouldrideelectricbicyclestogotoschool.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.

25studentsofourclassagreedwithit.

First,theysayitwasconvenientforthem.

Besidesitcouldtakelesstimetogotoschool.

While

theother35studentsdidn’tagreewiththem.Theysaiditwasnotsafeforthejuniorstudentstogettoschoolbyelectricbicycles.

Ontheonehand,

theyweretooyoung.Ontheotherhand,

inthemorningthetrafficwasverybusyandthestudentscouldn’trideelectricbicyclesquickly.

Asforme,studentshadbetternotrideelectricbiycyclestogotoschool.參考作文：

Lastweek,ourschoolha5解決問題型

Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.

Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…

Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.5解決問題型Recently,the…prob今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕,環(huán)境問題成為人們最為頭疼的問題之一,保護(hù)環(huán)境，刻不容緩。請以“Howtoprotect/saveourenvironment/world?”為題寫一篇短文根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴(yán)重

2.砍伐森林嚴(yán)重

3.大氣污染嚴(yán)重

4.白色垃圾等。

今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕,環(huán)境問題成為人們最為頭疼的問題之一,

Howtosaveourenvironment?

Theenvironmentalpollutionisworseandworsetoday.Notonlydoesthepolutionaffectourlivesandhealthitalsohasagreataffectioninthefuture.Inordertoliveabetterlifeweneedprotectourworld.

Firstly,weshouldn'tthrowawayrubbish

everywhere.Wewanttorecyclereducereusethings.Secondly,don'twastethings.Thissavesmoneyandreducespollution.

Then,use

thingsforaslongaspossible.Wedon'tuseplasticbags.FinallyWemusplantmoretreesandstopthepeoplecuttingthem.

Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontoreducethepolution,ourworldismoreandmorebeautiful.Howtosaveourenv議論文常用連接詞 表示總結(jié)的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…h(huán)avegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;表達(dá)個人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ing