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Error-simplestructureComplexstructure; Today’smegatrendofGrequiresyoungergenerationtospeaklanguagesthatisbeyondtheirmothertongue,tointroducemoreopportunitiesintheirlife;accordingly,itisindispensabletoavoidbringingunnecessarystresstochildrenwhiletheygetbenefitsfromsuchanidea.Tobeginwith,Childrentendtoexhibitstrongabilitiesoflearningasecondlanguageatearlystageoflife.Intermsof…memorization,imagination,imitationandOnthecontraryanadult’spronunciationislikelytobeaffectedbytheirmothertongue/accentiftheyonlystartlearningaforeignlanguageatlaterphaseoflife;階段；Asaresult,theearliertheystarthavinganexposuretoasecondlanguage,themoreproductivethelearningprocesswillbe.解釋；舉例強調(diào)對比反證效果Additionally,younglearnersareinclinedtospendmoretimeandenergyonacquiringanotherToillustrate,kidstendtomasterskillsofalanguagethroughngavarietyofactivities,includingyinggames,singingsongs,performingonstageorreadingcomicbooks,watchingcartoons;Incontrasttoadults,theydon’thavetobebotheredbypressurefromdailyAccordingly,theirfocuscanbeonstudying./languagecanbeimpressiveintheirMorespecifically,itispossibleforchildrentobeconfusedifthereisalackofguidanceandLikewise/similarly,excessiveamountofstresswill einevitablycommonforkidsiftheyarerequiredtostudytoomuchforeignlanguageapartfromcompulsorylearning.Basedonysisabove,itcanbeconcludedthataneffective/systematiclearningofalanguagerequireswisenningandsupervisionfromboth..andToensurethatournextgenerationcansecure/envisionabrighterfuturewithedge/advantageofToday’smegatrendof…requiresthenextgenerationtospeakonemorelanguagethatisbeyondtheirmothertongue,whichwillintroducetremendousopportunitiesintheirlife. ofAccordingly,whilechildrenareencouragedtomakesuchaneffort,itisindispensablethat ofIngeneral,IbelievetheadvantagesoutweighdisadvantagesinthisInitially,childrenarebelievedtoexhibitunbelievable/exceptionalcapabilitiesintermsofacquiringasecondlanguageatearlystageoflife;Includingmemorization,imagination,imitationandConversely/alternatively,one’spronunciationwillinevitablyimpactedbyhisaccentwhentheystartlearningatlaterstage/phaseoflife.Consequently,theearliertheycommence,themoreproductivetheprocesswill此外，小孩子們能夠花的時間來學(xué)門外語becommittedto ng/bedevotedtodoAdditionally,childrenarecommittedtospendingmoretimeonstudyingaforeignlanguage.Byngactivitieslikeyinggames,travelingorreadingoriginalnovels;asaresult,theimpressioncanbetotallylastingintheirmind./languagecanbedeeplyrootedintheirmind;Comparedwithadults,theyaresparedfromdailychoreslikework,marriageorAdmittedly/neverthelessitisunfairifwefaitorecognizeitspotentialrisks/threats2不足Morespecifically,itwillinadvertentlyresultinconfusionbetweennativelanguageandforeignlanguageifitlacksdirectionandguidancefromparentsorteachers.Likewise/similarly,childrentendtobearstressiftheyarerequiredtoexertextraSpendexcessiveamountoftimeLookingatprosandconsabove/basedonysisabove,itcallsforajointeffortby…and…show/demonstrateconsideration,wisenningandsupervisiontoguidesecureabrighterToensure/guaranteethateverychildcansecureabrighterfuturewithanedgeofforeignImsendingyououtLikesheepintowolvesBeassmartasserpentBeasinnocentasdovesPeoplenowadaysaresurroundedbyallkindsofadvertising.Advertisingaffectswhatpeoplethinkisimportantandsometimeshasanegativeinfluenceonpeople’slives.towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?分析：這里的題目出現(xiàn)towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree可以定義為argumentation論證題，觀點相，建議寫成7/3分五段式，其中7分支持給人們生活帶來的好處，3分讓步存在的弊端7分支 7分支 3分讓步劣勢觀點+支持句Foreachparagraph,centralsentenceexampleexperienceevidenceto Helpsusmake Informationis 2. Opensupthe Keepsprices Annoyingadson 3.influence Adsthesedaysaremore putpressureon Socialmedia 社交的植 Incentives途徑(7分支持公益能夠更好地教育和引大眾（7分支持虛假和網(wǎng)絡(luò)詐騙（3分7分支持–給生活帶來的好 ,反證：否則消費者不得不花時間和精力去比較不同的產(chǎn)品（comparingbrandsbytheir protectsociallyvulnerablegroups）舉例：例如一個叫做WildAid的非組織就用名人效應(yīng)號召人們保護珍稀動物(raiseawarenessofprotectingendangeredspecies) 舉例：包括了虛假信息，網(wǎng)絡(luò)詐騙，夸張的功效，內(nèi)容不實等問題（misleadinginformation,overratedfunctionality,falsecontent）效果：需要嚴刑峻理行業(yè)去保障消費者的權(quán)益（en morestringentIntroductionTodays’advertisinghasgreatlyposedimpactsinmanyaspectsintermsofconsumers’wayofthinkingandbehaviors.時代背景Today’sadvertisinghasimpactedourlivesinevitablyinmanyaspectsintermsofconsumptionbehaviorandbusinessconductionpattern.最佳局面/判斷原則everyonewins；Thebestscenarioforadvertisingistofacilitatelivesrather/otherthanthe個人觀點accordinglyadvertisingisbelievedtocarrymoremeritsthanBodyparagraph1(oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisOneofthemostsupportingargumentsisthatadvertisingisbothreliableandefficientforinformingconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetowastetimeandenergysearchingforinformationandmakingcomparisonsamongbrandsifthereareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsitesads.That'swhyconsumersnowincreasinglyrelyonemergingwaysofadvertisingsuchassocialnetwork,ornewmediatoabsorbinformationwhentheyneedtomakeapurchasingdecision.BodyparagraphBesides,publicserviceannouncementsservesanessentialpurposeineducatingandraisingpublic’sawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforthesociallyvulnerablegroups.Toillustrate,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationnamedWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,showinghowpublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferencesavingendangeredBodyparagraphAdmittedly/nevertheless,irresponsibleadvertisingbringsabout/introducesaseriesdisturbancestobothindividualsandandincludingmisleadinginformation,overratedfunctions,inappropriatecontentorevendefraudingmoneyontheinternet.Therefore,ernmentsneedtomakemorestringentlegislationstoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.Conclusion綜述：(determiningtheprosandLookingatprosandcons,itisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmore明天會更好：(meanwhile)給出解決方案becenteredby…,andbesupplementedby…toAttheme ,thisindustryisoughttobewellregulatedandcontrolledtoensurethatconsumersbenefitfromadvertisingbothefficientlyandproductively. Simon:Theomnipresenceoftoday’sadvertisinghashadinevitableimpactinseveralaspects.Thishasbeenapparenteversinceconsumers’shophabitswerereshapedand1.’swayofconductingbusinesswasrevolutionized.Frommy,theoverallinfluence2.carriesmoremeritsthandrawbacksforthefollowingreasons.Wayne:Theomnipresenceoftoday’sadvertisinghashadaninevitableimpactinseveralaspects.Thishasbeenapparenteversinceconsumers’shophabitswerereshapedandbusinessconductwasrevolutionized.Frommy,thisoverallinfluencecontainsmoremeritsthandrawbacksforthefollowingreasons.WayneWayofconductingbusinessbusinessconductBusinessconduct表示商業(yè)行為，更加簡潔Carryhabits;conductbusiness；berevolutionized Simon:Oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisthatadvertisingisbothreliableandefficientforinformingconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetowastetimeandenergysearchingforinformationand1.makingcomparisonsamongbrandsifthereareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsitesads.2.That'swhyconsumersnowincreasinglyrelyonemerging3.waysofadvertisingsuchassocialnetwork,ornewmediatoabsorbinformationwhen4.theyneedtomakeapurchasingdecision.Wayne:Oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisthatadvertisingisbothreliableandefficientforinformingconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetowastetimeandenergysearchingforinformationandcomparingbrandsifthereareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsiteads.Forthesereasons,consumersnowincreasinglyrelyonemergingtechniquesofadvertisingsuchassocialnetworkingornewermediatoabsorbinformationwhendecidingonapurchase.WayneMakingcomparisonsamongbrandscomparingThat’swhy改為forthesereasons,(trynottousethesewordsinanessay,it’sspokenThat’swhy過于口語化,way過于簡單informationinsufficient=notenough不夠的；TVcommercials電；printedads平；classifiedwebsitesads分；emergingmeansofmedia新興的socialnetworkabsorbinformationmakeapurchasedecisionSimon:Besides,publicserviceannouncementsservesanessentialpurposeineducatingraising1.public’sawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforthesociallyvulnerablegroups.2.Toillustrate,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationnamedWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,3.showinghowpublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Wayne:Besides,publicserviceannouncementsserveanessentialpurposeineducatingandraisingawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforsociallyvulnerablegroups.Toillustratethispoint,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationcalledWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,demonstratinghowthepublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Waynepublic（Thewordpublicisusedtoomanytimesinthisparagraph）Public可以有很多重意思，這里用awareness，即表示公眾的意識ToillustratetoillustratethisShow：ningof……；Nobuying,nokilling conductandpromote ；non-profitorganization ；advocate ；publicserviceannouncement公 ；serveanessentialpurpose；raiseawarenessof…高…；preservetheenvironment；careforsociallyvulnerablegroup ；sharedresponsibility ；boycottresolution ；makeahugedifference ；saveendangered/extinctanimals Simon:Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertising1.bringsaboutaseriesofdisturbancestobothindividualsandsociety,andincludingmisleadinginformation,overrated2.functions,inappropriatecontentoreven3.defraudingmoneyontheinternet.Therefore,ernmentsneedto4.makemorestringent5.legislationstoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbyWayne:Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertisingintroducesaseriesofdisturbancestobothindividualsandsociety,andincludemisleadinginformation,overratedfunctionality,inappropriatecontentorevenfraudulentonlinebehavior.Therefore,ernmentsneedtoenmorestringentlegislationtoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.WayneDefraudingmoneyontheInternetfraudulentonline morestringentLegislationslegislationneverirresponsibleintroducesseriesof…disturbancemisleadinfraudulenbehavior網(wǎng)絡(luò)詐騙；enmorestringentlegislation；protect…from………potentialabusewrongdoerConclusion結(jié)論段Simon:1.lookingatprosandcons,itisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmoremerits.2.Atthe ,thisindustry3.isoughttobewellregulatedandcontrolledtoensurethatconsumersbenefitfromadvertisingbothefficientlyandproductively.Wayne:Determiningtheprosandcons,itisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmoremeritswhilethisindustryshouldbewellregulatedandcontrolledtoensurethatconsumersbenefitfromadvertisingbothefficientlyandproductively.WayneAtthe Beoughttobeshouldprosandconsitisobviousthat……；industryregulateandcontrol;benefitfrom…獲益；UniversitiesandcollegesarenowofferingqualificationsthroughdistancelearningfromtheInternetratherthanteachersintheclassroom.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoverweightthedisadvantages?處，3分讓步面授的必要性 1.Nolearning Canlearn -Lackofcontactwith Noneedto -Noclassroom 2.Lackof Onlinecoursesare -Thesecoursesare Flexibilityto -Usuallyofferedbycheap Time 3.Potential Abilitytofasttrack -Easytoreproducefake 歷Sameflexibilitywithworking -Opportunitiestoscam IncentivesIncentives省時省力（7分支持（3分讓步的效果（7分支持讓的人有可能通過教教育可能會出現(xiàn)詐騙（37分支持–教育的優(yōu)觀點1： (obtainadegreefromoneofthemostrespected觀點2媲美（coaching,in ctionandexercises） 授只是其中目的之一(cultivatingcharacter,interests,capabilitiesandteamworkspirit)on-lineandoff-linefunctions)夠成才(beorientedbytheindividualityofstudents)Introduction今天我們一個網(wǎng)絡(luò)能使我們能隨時跟老師溝通和互動的時代，這也使得教育能Thesedaysweinaworldwheretechnologyallowsustoconnectandin ctwithteachersinstantaneouslyontheInternetfortertiaryqualificationsduetoitsconvenienceandlowcost.個人觀點 ally,Iholdtheopinionthatthemegatrendofdistanceeducationwillstillcarryonintothefuturewithmoreadvantages. Themostsupportingreasonisthatnowlearnersareabletoacceptteachingfromthemostprestigiousuniversitieswithminimizedcosts.Theperfectillustrationmightbethatofaneagerstudentfromaremotevillageinwhoistalented,well-drivenandqualifiedandcanbepromisingtogetadegreefromoneofthemostrespecteduniversitiesintheworldthroughayear-longonlinecoursecurriculumwithonlyaninternetconnectionandaPC.Furthermore,theefficacyandqualitybroughtbyonlinecourseevencanbecomparablewithtraditionalclassroomsaslongasitscurriculumsystemhasbeenpreciselydesigned.Morespecifically,distanceeducationcantheoreticallybesuccessfullyifitcombinesthefunctionsofcoaching,inction,exercisesandQandAsession.Admittedly,wehavetoadmitthatnomatterhowadvancedthetechnology,thereishardlyasubstituteforthenecessityofface-to-faceteachingandoveralldevelopment,效果：(itisadvisablethoughitwillbeadvisableforcollegestoofferamoreflexiblenofcombiningonlinecourseandtheatraditionalclassroom,tofindabalanceofboostingqualityandsavingConclusion綜述：(inInconclusion,itisnecessaryforonlineeducatorstoadoptawiserandmorestudent-orientedprogramtomakesuretheprosperityofstudentswiththeaidofthe ticalRangeandSimon:Thesedaysweliveinaworldwheretechnologyallows1.peopletoconnectandinctwithteachersinstantaneously2.ontheinternetfortertiaryqualificationsduetoitsconvenienceandlowcost. ally,Iholdtheopinionthatthemegatrendofdistanceeducationwillstill3.carryonintothefuturewithmoreadvantages.Wayne:ThesedaysweliveinaworldwheretechnologyallowsustoconnectandinctwithteachersinstantaneouslyviatheInternetfortertiaryqualificationsduetoitsconvenienceandlowcost. ally,Iholdtheopinionthatthemegatrendofdistanceeducationwillcontinueintothefuturewithmoreadvantages.WayneAllowspeoplecanconnect改為allowsustoconnect或者allowsaccessavoidtheOntheinternetviatheCarryoncontinueavoidphrasalverbsintheseessaysthey’retooqualification；themegatrendof……；distanceeducation Simon:Themostsupportingreasonisthat1.nowlearnersareabletoacceptteachingfromthemostprestigiousuniversitieswithminimizedcosts.2.Theperfectillustrationmightbethatofaneagerstudentfromaremotevillagein whoistalented,well-drivenandqualifiedandcanbe3.promisingto4.getadegreefromoneofthemostrespecteduniversitiesintheworldthroughayear-longonlinecoursecurriculumwithonlyaninternetconnectionandaPC.Wayne:Themostsupportingreasonisthatlearnersarenowabletoacceptteachingfromthemostprestigiousuniversitieswithminimizedcosts.Anidealscenariomightbethatofaneagerstudentfromaremotevillagein whoistalented,well-drivenandqualifiedandcanobtainadegreefromoneofthemostrespecteduniversitiesintheworldthroughayear-longonlinecoursecurriculumwithonlyanInternetconnectionandaPC.WayneNowlearnersarelearnersareTheperfectillustration改為anidealscenariomightbethat…(thisdoesn’tsoundsonatural)promisingCanbepromisingisentitledisabletocangetobtain（alwaysavoidtheverbtoget”inanessayit’stoo：themostsupportingreason …;prestigiousuniversity 學(xué)；minimizedcost eagerstudent onlinecoursecurriculum；internetconnection接Simon:Furthermore,theefficacyandquality1.broughtbyonlinecourse2.evencanbecomparablewithtraditionalclassroomsaslongasitscurriculumsystem3.hasbeenpreciselydesigned.Morespecifically,distanceeducationcantheoreticallybesuccessfullyifitcombinesthefunctionsofcoaching,inction,exercisesand4.QandAsession.Wayne:Furthermore,theefficacyandqualityintroducedbyanonlinecoursecanevenbecomparablewithtraditionalclassroomsaslongasitscurriculumsystemispreciselydesigned.Morespecifically,distanceeducationcantheoreticallybesuccessfulifitcombinesthefunctionsofcoaching,inction,exercisesandquestiontime.WaynebroughtEvencanbecanevenItscurriculumsystemhasbeenitscurriculumsystemQandAsessionquestiontime（neveruseabbreviationsinanIELTSessay）efficacybecomparablewith……bepreciselydesigned被Simon:Admittedly,1.wehavetoadmitthatnomatterhowadvancedthetechnology,thereishardlyasubstituteforthe2.necessityofface-to-faceteachingandoveralldevelopment,thoughit3.willbeadvisableforcollegestoofferamoreflexiblenofcombiningonlinecourseandthea4.traditionalclassroom,tofindabalanceof5.boostingqualityandsavingWayne:Admittedly,nomatterhowadvancedthetechnology,thereishardlyasubstituteforface-to-faceteachingandoveralldevelopment,thoughitisadvisableforcollegestoofferamoreflexiblenofcombiningonlinecoursesandaconventionalclassroomtobalancebothqualityandcosteffectiveness.Waynewe（trytochangethesephraseswithadverbs）thenecessity（toomanywordstodescribeapoint）thenecessity在這里多余，可能會造成歧義Itwillbeadvisableitisadvisable…(anothertensetoavoidintheseessaysisfuture,balancebothqualityandcostadmittedly誠然；beasubstituteitisadvisableConclusion結(jié)論段Simon:Inconclusion,itisnecessaryforonlineeducatorstoadoptawiserandmorestudent-orientedprogramtomakesuretheprosper