2023年高考讀后續(xù)寫話題分類寫作技巧與高級(jí)詞句-家庭關(guān)系、社會(huì)關(guān)系人與社會(huì)

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家庭關(guān)系社會(huì)關(guān)系（人與社會(huì)）

2023年高考讀后續(xù)寫話題分類寫作技巧與高級(jí)詞句

【讀后續(xù)寫】

1.（2023?全國?高三專題練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整

的短文。

AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.

HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrench

toastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeff

knewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.They

decidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadethe

Frenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesinto

theeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.Everythingwasgoing

smoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jenna

threwtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoit

cookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridge

boiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthe

stovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheponidge.But

Jeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshe

caughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

【答案】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father'sappearingwaslikea

saviortothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.

Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeyto

success.Itwasallrightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousand

perfectbreaklastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforher

thatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn'texpect.The

childrensaidloudly,uHappyMother'sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以母親節(jié)為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動(dòng)手，

做起飯餐來，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗的故事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了?！翱芍?，第一段可描寫他們的父親指

導(dǎo)幫助他們準(zhǔn)備早餐。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這對(duì)雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親?！翱芍?，第二段可描寫母親收到孩子

們的禮物早餐，非常感動(dòng)。

2.續(xù)寫線索：指導(dǎo)——積極——獻(xiàn)禮——感動(dòng)

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①幫助：help/assist

②完成：finish/complete

③擁抱：hug/embrace

情緒類

①高興：happy/delighted

②感動(dòng)：moved/touched

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess,（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性

定語從句）

[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.（固定短

語notonly…but（also）和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）

2.（2022?遼寧盤錦?盤錦市遼東灣實(shí)驗(yàn)高級(jí)中學(xué)（遼寧省實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)遼東灣分校）?？寄M預(yù)測）閱讀下面材

料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Myjobisjustoneoftheessentialjobs,asanitation（衛(wèi)生系統(tǒng)）engineer,notaglamorousone,butis

consideredthealternative.Ofcourse,Ineverregarditasanashamedtasktobeinmyposition.Aboutthesecond

weekofthelockdownbecauseoftheCovid-19,1washavingtroublefindingasanitizingspray（1肖毒噴霧）formy

truck.Thenextmorningonmywaytoworkat4a.m.,Istoppedatoneofthefewstoreswhichwereopenthatearly,

hopingtopurchasesome.However,itwasonlyopenforthepoliceandmedicalpersonnel."Lookatmyvest

please,1beggedtotheclerk,"I'mnotjustbuyingitformyself.^^"I'mmorethansorry,sir.Butthisisjustthe

regulation,andIreallycan'thelp."repliedthesmilinggirl.AsIturnedtoheadbacktomycarwithdisappointment,

Inearlybrokedown.

Comingoutofthestore,mystomachbegantocallforenergysupport.Istoppedata7/11andorderedan

everythingbagel（硬面包）withcreamcheesetosatisfymypoorstomachandmyemptyheart.Itwastoastywarm,

andIcouldn'twaittodigin.ButasIleftthestorewithalittlejoycomingsweetlyfromthebagel,Inoticedascene

thatanoldmanwassittingatthebusstop,inrags.Knowingthatitwouldprobablybehisonlywarmmealofthe

day,Igavehimthebagelwithoutanyhesitation.JustwhenIwasreadytoturnaroundforanothersamebagel,

somethingwarmingmyheartcameintobeing.Anothercustomer,agentlelady,fromthe7/11offeredmehalfofher

bagel.<4Weeveryoneshouldbetakencareofatsomecertainmoment.^^shesaidwithatendersweetvoiceasI

smiledtothankhersincerely.IwasdelightedbecauseIrealizedthatinonewayoranother,wewerealllooked

after.

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

SoIdecidedtogobacktotheformerstoretotrymyluckagainforthespray.

JustbeforeIgaveup,alocalpolicemanwasheadingintothestore.

【答案】So/decidedtogobacktothefannerstoretotrymyluckagainforthespray.Themorningsunlightwas

brightbuttenderasIwasdrivingbacktothestore.Hopingforamiracle,Ipulledupatthestoreandinchedcloseto

it.ButitwaswhenIgotthesamereplyasbeforethatIwasannoyedagainbythestrictrule.uPlease!Thereisn'tan

angelallthetimearoundyou.^^Iwhispered.Butallhopewasnotlostforme.

JustbeforeIgaveup,alocalpolicemanwasheadingintothestore.Instantlyhecamein,thepoliceman

spottedmyvestandaskedmewhichcompanyIworkedfor,thencontinuedtothankmeforbeingoutthere.I

repliedthatitwasthepolicewhodeservedthanks.WhenaskedifIneededhishelp,Itoldhimmytrouble.Hewent

intothestore,purchasedthesprayandbroughtitouttome,drivingawaywithouttakinganymoney.Again,I

believedthatwewerealllookedafterinonewayoranother.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者是一名衛(wèi)生系統(tǒng)的工程師，疫情期間想為自己的卡車買一個(gè)

消毒噴霧，卻因?yàn)椤爸荒苜u給警察和醫(yī)護(hù)人員”的規(guī)定，被拒絕。走出商店，他為自己買了點(diǎn)充饑的硬面包,

看見公交站臺(tái)一個(gè)衣衫襤褸的老人，就毫不猶豫地把面包給了他。正當(dāng)他準(zhǔn)備重新買一個(gè)面包時(shí)，一位溫

柔的女士主動(dòng)把自己的面包分享給他一半，并說：“特殊時(shí)期，我們應(yīng)該互相照顧?！?/p>

【詳解】I.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我決定回之前的商店再去試試運(yùn)氣買消毒噴壺”可知，第一段可描寫作者在商店買噴壺

被拒絕。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“他剛要放棄，一位警察走進(jìn)了店里”可知，第二段可描寫警察為作者買消毒噴壺。

2.續(xù)寫線索：開車前往商店——再次被拒絕——與警察對(duì)話——警察買噴壺——感悟

3.詞匯激活:

行為類

①停車：pullup/stop/park

②緩慢移動(dòng)：inch/creep

(3)一...就：instantly/immediately/assoonas/themoment/theinstant

④看見：spot/see/notice

情緒類

①生氣的：angry/annoyed/upset/furious

②感謝：thanksbfor/showone'sappreciation/showone'sgratitude/begrateful

［點(diǎn)睛］［高分句型1］Hopingforamiracle,Ipulledupatthestoreandinchedclosetoit.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

［高分句型2］ButitwaswhenIgotthesamereplyasbeforethatIwasannoyedagainbythestrictrule.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）

［高分句型3］WhenaskedifIneededhishelp,Itoldhimmytrouble.（狀語從句中的省略）

3.（2022秋?湖南長沙?高三長郡中學(xué)?？茧A段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Alicehadjustbeenappointedinthemultinationalbank.Afteronemonthofseveretraining,todaywasherfirst

daytogotowork.

Shegotupabitearlierthanusual,anddecidedtoskiphergymworkoutasshedidnotwanttoriskbeingtired

orgettinglatetoherofficeonherfirstday.Shewentthroughhermorningroutineandspentalotoftimein

selectingwhattowear.Noneofherdressesseemedtoappealtoher-theywereeitheralittletoocasualortoodull

andshedefinitelywantedtomakeanimpressionrightfromthestart.Finallyshesettledonthewhiteembroidered

（刺繡的）dress.

Shewavedbyetohermomandsetoffcheerfullytowardsthebusstop.Butshesawabusleavingthestopjust

asshecrossedthestreet.Nowshewouldhavetowaitforagood15minutes.15minutespassedandthen30

minutesandtherewasnosignofthebus."Itmustbestuckinheavytraffic”,akindladywhowasalsowaitingfor

thebustoldher.Hearingthat,Alicegotanxious.Shehadtoreachherofficeontime.Thenshesawataxi

approachingbutwhenshetriedtostopit,thetaxidriverspedbywithouteventakingaglanceather.Alicewas

wonderingwhatshecoulddo.

Itwasthenthatacarstoppednearherandamanwavedtoher.Thedriveraskedherwhereshewasgoingand

afterAlicetoldhimthatshewasgoingtothebankatNarimanPoint,themansaid"Oh,myofficeisinthenearby

building.CanIgiveyouaAlicehesitatedforamomentandgotintothecar.Theyexchangednamesand

begantotalkforawhile.Thenthedriverswitchedontheradioandwasabsorbedinthesong.Alicelookedoutof

thewindowandimaginedherfirstdayatwork,worryingwhethershewascapableofthenewjob,andifshecould

getalongwellwithhercolleagues.Afterabouttenminutes,Alicerealizedtheywerenotonthefamiliarroutetoher

office.

注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

Paragraph1:

Shebegantoworrythatshemightgetintothecarofabadman.

Paragraph2:

ThenthecarturnedaroundacomerandAlicesawthetallbuildingwhereherofficewasunexpectedly.

【答案】ParagraphI:

Shebegantoworrythatshemightgetintothecarofabadman.Sosheaskedcautiouslywhethertheywere

goingtoherbank.Thedriversaidthattheytookanewshortcut,astherewasusuallyheavytrafficontheotherone

atthishour,andcontinuedhissong.ThatmadesomesenseandAlicedidn'tsayanythingmore.Anotherfifteen

minutespassed,andtheroadwasevenstrangerforher.ThatmanwasdrivingspeedilyandAlicebecamemoreand

moreanxious.Shedecidedthatwhenthecarnextstoppedatthetrafficlights,shewouldjumpout.

Paragraph2:

ThenthecarturnedaroundacomerandAlicesawthetallbuildingwhereherofficewasunexpectedly.She

breathedasighofrelief.Withinminutes,theyreachedthegateofthebuilding."Hereweare!"thedriverpulledup

andsaid.Alicegotoutofthecar,herfaceturningred.Shefeltquitesorryforhavingdoubtedthedriver.She

believedtherewereindeedmorekindpeopleintheworld.Shesaid,"Thankyouverymuch!*',withabigsmile,and

hurriedtoherofficewithgreatexpectation.Sheknewshewouldhaveagoodday.

【分析】本文以人物為線索展開。講述了剛剛被任命到跨國銀行的女孩Alice,順利通過嚴(yán)苛的訓(xùn)練，即將

走上工作崗位。在第一天上班路上遇到交通擁堵，未能及時(shí)搭上公交車，情急之下搭上一位陌生人的順風(fēng)

車，在對(duì)司機(jī)的信任與懷疑中糾結(jié)，并在最后及時(shí)到達(dá)公司的事情。

【詳解】段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她開始擔(dān)心自己可能上了壞人的車。”可知，第一段可描寫女孩Alice認(rèn)為自己可能遇

到壞人的忐忑的心理活動(dòng)，以及判斷司機(jī)是壞人的線索。

②有第二段首句“然后汽車拐了個(gè)彎，愛麗絲看到了她辦公室所在的高樓。”可知，第二段可描寫峰回路轉(zhuǎn)之

后，Alice的欣喜之感。另外，對(duì)于懷疑司機(jī)的愧疚之感以及對(duì)司機(jī)的感激之情。

續(xù)寫線索：被任命——選衣服——交通擁堵——搭順風(fēng)車——懷疑——擔(dān)憂——感謝

詞匯激活

行為類

①?zèng)Q定：decide/settleon

②看：see/look/takeaglanceat/glanceat/stareat/glareat

③擔(dān)憂：get/becomeanxious/worry

情緒類

①開心cheerfully>say...withabigsmile/do...withgreatexpectation

②如釋重負(fù)：breath/heaveasighofrelief/feelasenseofrelief

【點(diǎn)睛】［高分句型1］Itwasthenthatacarstoppednearherandamanwavedtoher.（Itwas…that…為強(qiáng)調(diào)句）

［高分句型2JAlicegotoutofthecar,herfaceturningred.（turning為非謂語動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語）

［高分句型3］Alicelookedoutofthewindowandimaginedherfirstdayatwork,worryingwhethershewascapable

ofthenewjob,andifshecouldgetalongwellwithhercolleagues.（worrying為非謂語動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語）

4.（2022,江蘇南通?海安高級(jí)中學(xué)校考模擬預(yù)測）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

“MeetonemoreandI'lldefinitelyaskafavour.^^Ginathought,lookingupatthestreetlights,everything

immersed（沉浸在）inthedarknight.44Alas!ThisunluckyShesaidtoherself,helpless.

Behindhercamethejinglingofbicyclebells.HardlyhadGinaletout"ah"whenacyclingyoungmanswept

past.

“Why,thecyclistwasback?”Ginawhisperedtoherself.Theyoungmansuddenlyreturnedandwasalreadyin

frontofGinabeforesheknewit.Gina'sheartwaspoundingunderhightension.44Whatwillhedoonsuchadark

night?^^“Calledmejustnow?”Theyoungmangotoffhisbike.Ginashookherheadrepeatedlybutgently.Astrong

senseofself-defenseovercameherandsherefusedtosayyes.

"Somethingwrongwithyourbike?"Apairofsmilingeyesmethers.Ginabecamesomewhatcalm."Thefront

tirehasgonesheresponded,headdown,arayofhopearising."Well,Ican'thelpitwithnotools."Theyoung

manmanagedasmile.Gina'sheartsankagain.4€Doyoulivefar?”theyoungmansearchedherfaceforananswer.

“Me?”sheasked,keepingpushingherbikeforward."Well,ontheleftsideofthestreetendisarepairshop.Wish

youluck!”Withthesewords,theyoungmanrodeaway.Ginaalmostburstintotears."It'salmostmidnight.Where

canIfindarepairshop?Aliar."Shestartedtohatetheyoungman.

Almostattheendofthestreet,Ginacouldn'thelpbutlookup.Nearthesidewalk,therewasreallyashopwith

thelightstillon.

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Shepausedhesitantly,andoutoftheshopcameagirlinhertwenties.

Withthehelpoftheyoungmanandthegirl,thetirewassoonrepaired.

【答案】Shepausedhesitantly,andoutoftheshopcameagirlinhertwenties.6€Hi,there!Comeoverhere.9,thegirl

wavedtoGina.Ginasuddenlylitup,fearentirelygone.Ayoungmancameout.Ginabecameshocked,recognizing

itwastheyoungmanshehadiustcomeacross.4€Mybrothercamebackfromwork.Hetoldmetowaitforyou

here."Thegirlspokehappily.Ginasmiledgratefullyandthankedthemsincerely4tNothing,mybrotherwasafraid

youdidn'tdaretocomeandiustletmeupheretogreetyou."Thegirlreplied.

Withthehelpoftheyoungmanandthegirl,thetirewassoonrepaired.*4HowmuchdoIoweyou?"Gina

asked.ttMoney?^^Theyoungmansmiledwithabigdirtyhandstretchingout."Fiftydollars.,,tTifty?^^Feelingso

shocked.Ginahadtosearchherpurse."Brother...”,criedthegirlinaloudvoice.€lStopkidding!”Shewentclose

toGina,"Don'tworry,hewasjustkidding.Wedon'trunarepairbusiness.Infact,wewerejustherewaitingto

repairyourbike.”

【分析】所給文章講述Gina夜晚獨(dú)自一人在路上很無助，因?yàn)樗淖孕熊囕喬牡暨@時(shí)過來一位年輕

人問她是否需要幫助，Gina由于害怕沒有接受。年輕人只告訴她馬路左邊盡頭處有一家修理鋪，便離開了。

Gina認(rèn)為他在說謊，但還是忍不住朝那個(gè)方向看了看，好像真的有一家店鋪還亮著燈。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她遲疑了一下，一個(gè)二十多歲的姑娘從商店里走了出來?！翱芍谝欢慰擅鑼慓ina

鼓足勇氣走到店里尋求幫助的經(jīng)過。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“在年輕人和女孩的幫助下，輪胎很快就修好了。”可知，第二段可描寫Gina得到幫助

后表示感謝并且對(duì)年輕人為他人著想的品質(zhì)所感動(dòng)。

2.續(xù)寫線索：走進(jìn)店里——幫助修理——說出真相——感謝

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①遇見：comeacross/encounter

②回來：comeback/return

③尋找：search/lookfor

情緒類

①開心起來：lightup/cheerup

②震驚：shocked/astounded

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Ginabecameshocked,recognizingitwastheyoungmanshehadjustcomeacross.（現(xiàn)在

分詞作狀語；省略that的賓語從句；省略關(guān)系代詞的定語從句）

[高分句型2].Nothing,mybrotherwasafraidyoudidn'tdaretocomeandjustletmeupheretogreetyou.（省略

that的賓語從句）

5.（2023?安徽黃山?一模）閱讀下面文章，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整短文，

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Baskinwasa20-year-oldsophomoreattheUniversityofSouthCarolinawhoseparentsransmallrestaurant.

Ashewastheonlycollegestudentinhisfamily,hisfamilytriedtheirbesttosupporthim.Baskinalwaysworkedas

awaiterintherestauranttolightenhisparents'burdens.Hewassohardworkingthatmanycustomerspraisedhis

hospitableservice.Hisparentsalsoappreciatedandtrustedhimalot.

Itwasabusynightattherestaurant.Afterafewguestswalkedinandsatdown,theyorderedabottleofthe

ChateauPichonLonguevilleComtesse2001-avaluablewineworthalmost€6,000.

Havingtoserveanothertable,Baskinthenaskedaworkmatetofetchthebottle.However,sincetheemployee

wasnew,sheaccidentallytookthewrongbottleofwine.Insteadofthewinethatwasorderedbythecustomers,she

servedtheChateauPichonLonguevillePomerol2001,whichcostabout€5,000.Asthebottlesandnameswere

similar,noonenoticedthemistake.

Baskindidn'trealizethemistakeuntilthecustomerswantedtoorderasecondbottleafterfinishingthefirst

one.Hecheckedtheorderquicklyandunderstoodwhatwaswrong.Hecleverlysuggestedtheyorderadifferent

one,withoutlettingthemknowwhathadhappened,whichcouldgivehimtimetothinkabouthowtosolvethe

problem.

Everythingseemednormal,butBaskinwaslostinthought.nWhatshouldIdotosolvethisproblem?"he

askedhimself.Ifhedidn'ttellthecustomersthemistake,hecouldkeeptheextra€1000secretly.Ashewasalsothe

cashieroftherestaurant,noonewouldknowwhathappened.€1000wasthetuitionfeeforthewholeschoolyear

andhisparentsneedn'tworkhardtoearnmoneyforhim.Orhecouldusethemoneytobuyhisfavoritelaptop

whichhisparentscouldn'tafford.Thisextramoneywasreallyahugetemptationtohim.Butinthisway,hewould

losehishonestyanddignity.

Paragraph1:

Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.

Paragraph2:

Whenthecustomerscametopaythebill,withfather'sadviceinmind.Baskindecidedtodotherightthing.

【答案】Possibleversion:

Paragraph1:

Whilehewasstrugglingwithhisoptions,hisfathercameover.Seeinghismixedexpression,hisfatherasked

himwhatwashappening.Baskincouldn'thelptellinghimthetruth.Hisfatherlistenedattentivelyandgavehis

advice.HetoldBaskinheshouldtellthetruthandadmithismistake.Baskinthoughtthecustomersprobably

wouldn'tnoticethemistakeastheywerenotpayingtoomuchattention.Hisfathersaidthatheshouldalwaysbe

honestandthatwayhewouldalwaysbetrusted.Baskinnoddedseriously.

Paragraph2:

When/hecustomerscametopaythebill,withhisfather'sadviceinmind,Baskindecidedtodotherightthing.

Heexplainedthesituationtothecustomersandapologizedsincerelyfortheerror.Thecustomersweresurprisedat

thisandsaidtheyhadn'tnoticedthemistakeatall.Instead,theysaidthatthewinetheywereservedstilltastedvery

goodandfinishedbygivinghimalargetip.ToBaskin'srelief,hisfatheralsoforgavehimforhismistake,saying

thatnoharmhadbeendoneandthecustomersweresatisfiedwiththeserviceThinkingback,Baskinwasgratefulto

hisfatherforsuchgoodadviceandalsolearnedanimportantlifelesson.

【分析】本文是一篇記敘文。Baskin是一個(gè)為學(xué)費(fèi)在飯店打工的大二學(xué)生。一次工作當(dāng)中的疏忽把6000塊

的酒誤上成了5000塊的紅酒。由于無人察覺這個(gè)失誤，他有機(jī)會(huì)將一千元的紅酒差價(jià)據(jù)為己有，但又無法

忍受內(nèi)心道德的譴責(zé)，這時(shí)父親走過來了。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“正當(dāng)他苦苦思索如何選擇的時(shí)候，他的父親走了過來。“我們得知，父親指導(dǎo)了Baskin

如何處理這件事情。所以第一段建議主要通過語言和動(dòng)作描述Baskin和父親之間的互動(dòng)，即父親如何勸說

他跟客人說出事實(shí)。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“顧客們來結(jié)賬時(shí)，巴斯金心里想著爸爸的建議，決定做正確的事。“可知，第二段主要

描寫B(tài)askin在父親的指導(dǎo)下如何解決這一問題。解決方法可以寫向客人說明事實(shí)并道歉。升華可以寫誠實(shí)

和自尊擁有任何事物無法比擬的價(jià)值。只有誠實(shí)才能獲得內(nèi)心的平靜。體現(xiàn)人與自我和正確價(jià)值觀的主題

滲透。

2.續(xù)寫線索：困惑——求助——真相—解釋—滿意

3.詞匯激活（一個(gè)詞匯要寫出相近的表達(dá)）

行為類

承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤：admithismistake/accepthismistake

道歉：apologizedsincerely/makeasincereapology/saysorryto

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型寫范文中的就可以，至少2個(gè)高分句型】

［高分句型11Seeinghismixedexpression,hisfatheraskedhimwhatwashappening.（現(xiàn)在分詞作時(shí)間狀語，且

句中使用what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

［高分句型2JBaskinthoughtthecustomersprobablywouldn'tnoticethemistakeastheywerenotpayingtoomuch

attention.（句中使用as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）

［高分句型3］ToBaskin'srelief,hisfatheralsoforgavehimforhismistake,sayingthatnoharmhadbeendoneand

thecustomersweresatisfiedwiththeservice（現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，且句中使用that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

6.（2021秋?全國?高三專題練習(xí)）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

AworriedcallcameintoJimmyGill'sbarthispastMarch.Anewlymarriedwomanwhohadspentthe

afternoonatthebeachbarcouldn'tfindherwallet.Shedidn'tcareaboutherID,creditcards,or$150incash-but

herweddingringwasputinside.

Gilldidn'tliketheideathatatheftcouldhaveoccurredathisplace.Sohesetouttofindthewallet.Hespent

hoursscanningfootage（影片片段）from16differentsurveillance（監(jiān)控），cameras,watchingthewoman'severystep

inthebaruntilshewenttositonabenchoutsideandleftwhenherridearrived.Withinminutes,ayoungmanina

jacketapproachedthebench,putsomethinghurriedinhispocket,andwalkedoff.Gillpostedacliponthebar's

Facebookpage."Ididn'twanttoaccusehim,“hesaid.4tIjustaskedifanybodyknewwhotheguywas.”

Withinhours,Gillgotatextfrom17-year-oldRiversPrather,who'dheardaboutthepostfromoneofhis

friends.PratheradmittedhavingtakenthewalletandtoldGillhe'ddoneitbecausehehadn'teatenintwodays.He

saidhesawtheringbutthoughtitwasfake,sohetookthemoneyandthrewthewalletoffthedock（碼頭）intothe

ocean.Thenheboughtasandwich.

Gill,unsurewhetherhebelievedPrather,toldtheteentomeethimatthedock.There,theygottotalking,and

Pratherrevealedthathewasn'tgettingalongwithhisfamilyandhadbeenlivinginthewoodsforaweek.Gill,a

fatheroftwowithanotherontheway,lookcloselyatPrather-hissmallbuild,hispalecheeks-andsawhimforwhat

hewas:moreofakidthanacriminal.

Butthepolicewerealreadyonthecase,andbecauseofthemissingring,Prathercouldbefacingcharges.4tHe

wouldbegoingtojail,“Gillsays.44Ihadtohelphimsomehow.^^

注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Para1:

Thenextday,Gillhiredtwodiverstosearchthewaters.

Para2:

Suddenlyadivercameoutofthewater.

【答案】Thenextday,Gillhiredtwodiverstosearchthewaters.Apolicewaswaitingforthemthere.Acrowdhad

togethertowatchthetwodiverssearchinthestrongcurrent.Morethananhourpassedwithnosignofthering.

Gillgrewworried,especiallywhenthepolicebeginquestioningPeter,tryingtogethimtoadmitkeepingthering.

Suddenlyadivercameoutofthewater.Inhishandwasthewallet,andinsidewasthering.Cheersbrokeout

inthecrowd.WhenGillcalledthewallet'sowner,thewomanburstintotears.Shewasmorethandelightedand

promptlydroppedthechargeagainstthePratherforstealingthering.Butitwasn'toverforGill.He'dbeentroubled

aboutPrathersleepinginthecoldwoods.GillknewhishomewasbigenoughtogivePratheraplacetoliveinfora

while.Hetoldtheteenhecouldstaywithhisfamilyuntiltheboygotonhisfeetagain.

【分析】這篇續(xù)寫以故事情節(jié)發(fā)展為線索，海灘酒吧的老板Gill接到投訴，一位女士的錢包被偷，里面有

她的訂婚戒指。Gill查了酒吧的監(jiān)控，找到了線索，并將視頻片段傳到網(wǎng)上，想通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)的力量找到拿走錢

包的人。幾小時(shí)后，一個(gè)叫Prather的17歲少年主動(dòng)聯(lián)系了他。兩人見面后，Prather講述了拿走錢包的緣

由，作為兩個(gè)孩子的父親，Gill決定不追究其責(zé)任，覺得Prather更是一個(gè)孩子。但警察正在跟蹤此案，Prather

有可能面臨嚴(yán)重的指控。Gill決定幫助這個(gè)少年，他請(qǐng)了兩個(gè)潛水員去Prather扔錢包的地方搜尋。

【詳解】段落續(xù)寫：

由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二天Gill請(qǐng)了兩個(gè)潛水員去Prather扔錢包的地方搜尋?！笨芍谝欢蚊鑼憹撍畣T在水

里搜錢包的情況，以及岸上等待搜尋結(jié)果的警察、Gill和Parther的情況。

由第二段首句內(nèi)容“突然，一個(gè)潛水員露出水面可知第二段描述搜尋情況，按照讀后續(xù)寫積極向上的導(dǎo)向，

應(yīng)該是找到了戒指，Prather免除指控。

續(xù)寫線索：潛水員搜尋——一直沒搜到——警察審問Prather—潛水員搜到戒指——失主解除指控一Gill

繼續(xù)幫助Prather

詞匯激活

行為類

①.審問：question/interrogate

②.撤銷指控：dropthecharge/cancelthecharge

③.恢復(fù)：getononeselffoot/recover

④.突然大哭：burstintotears/burstoutcrying

情緒類

①.擔(dān)心：beworriedabout/troubleabout/grewworried

②,開心：morethandelighled/extremelyhappy

【點(diǎn)睛】［高分句型1］Gillgrewworried,especiallywhenthepolicebeginquestioningPeter,tryingtogethimto

admitkeepingthering.

（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作的伴隨狀語）

［高分句型2JHetoldtheteenhecouldstaywithhisfamilyuntiltheboygotonhisfeetagain.

（運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語從句；運(yùn)用了until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

7.（2021秋?全國?高三專題練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫一段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完

整的短文。續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。

Windwhistledroundthecornerofthehouse,thunderrolledandrainbeatagainstthewindows-notanight

tobeoutsidebutrathertositbythefire.Thankstothesolidwallsandroofoverhead,IcouldimagineDr.

Frankenstein'sfrighteningcreationwanderingonsuchanight.Iwasalone,myhusbandawayandthenearest

neighboraquartermilesdowntheroad.Alone,thatis,exceptforLassie,ahairy,blackandwhitedog,whosatwith

herheadonmylap,herintelligent,browneyesgazingupatmeasiftosay,don'tworry,we'llbeallright.

Throughtheyearsshewaswithus,sheprovedtimeandtimeagaintobeasuperbjudgeofcharacter.Wenever

knewifitwasaresultofhersenseofsmellorsound-but,whateveritwas,shedefinitelypossessedatalentwe

humanslacked.Onfirstmeetingshewouldeitherwagthetipofhertailacoupleoftimestoindicatethatthevisitor

wasacceptable,orslightlycurlhertoplip,exposinghersharpteethwhichtoldyoutobealert.Alwaysaccurate,her

giftwasnevermoreobviousthanonthisnight.

Thedoorbellrang.Idecidednottoanswerit.Itrangagain,muchlongerthistime.Whoeverwastherewasnot

goingaway.StillIhesitated.Onthefourthring,withLassiebymyside,Ifinallyansweredthedoor.Myheartbeat

fastandmymouthwentdry,forthere,stoodthemonsterhimself.Atwistedbodyunderaheavyovercoat,one

shoulderbumpedhigherthantheotherandhisheadleanedslightlyforwardandtooneside.

“MayIuseyourphone?^^Thevoicecamefromsomewherebackinhisthroatand,althoughtherequestwas

polite,histonewasrude.

Reachinginhispocketandproducingapieceofpaper,hehandedittome.Irefusedtotakeit.Believinghe

mighttryandforcehiswayin,IlookedatLassietoseeifshewasreadytodefendthehome.

Surprisingly,shesatbymyside,thetipofhertailwagging.

【答案】Apossibleversion：

TherewasnodenyingthatItrustedherjudge,basedonpastexperience.Unwillingly,Isignedtothestranger

intothehallwayandpointedtothephone.Hethankedmeashepickeditup.Unashamed,Istoodandlistenedtothe

conversation.Fromhiscomments,Ilearnedhiscarhadbrokendownandheneededsomeonetorepairit.Lassie

alwaysfollowedanyoneshemistrusteduntiltheyleftthehouse.Tonightshepaidnoattentiontoourvisitor.Instead,

sheranbackintothelivingroomandcurledupbythefire.Finishinghiscall,themanpreparedtoleave."Pmsorry

ifIfrightenedyou.IknowIlookstrange.Andthanksagainfbrtrustingandhelpingme“hesaidwiththesewords,

thestrangerheadedoutintothenight.

【分析】本文以一個(gè)風(fēng)雨之夜為線索展開，講述