讀后續(xù)寫思維方向?qū)＞?03) 高三英語一輪復習

注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好。Beforeourwedding,myfiance(未婚夫)andIwereveryexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthouse.So,wetooklookatseveralhouses,yetasourfundswerelimited,noneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionofthehousesoundedverywonderful,thepricewasbeyondourrange,sowedeclined.However,shekepturgingustohavealookatleast.Wefinallyagreedandwenttotakealook.Itwaslovelyatfirstsight.Itwassmallbutcharming,overlookingaquietbeautifullake.Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,akindandhospitableelderlycouple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessofthemarriagewithinthathouse.Itwasexactlythehousewewanted!Perfectasitwas,thepriceremainedmuchtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wecouldsitbythelake,lookingatthehouseanddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadeanoffer,whichwasfarbelowtheaskingprice.Asthepricewassolow,wewereafraidthattheywouldlaughitoff.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwasalsomuchmorethanwecouldactuallyafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerofferedamuchhigherprice.Evenso,wemadeupourmindstotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichwasstillthousandsofdollarslessthantheotherbuyer'sbid.Weknewit,yetwedecidedtohaveatry.Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.Paragraph1:Wewenttotheowners'home,onlytofindtheotherbuyervisitingtheownerstoo..Paragraph2:Theownerlookedatusandsaid,''Idecidetosellmyhousetoyou!【參考范文】Wewenttotheowners'home,onlytofindtheotherbuyervisitingtheownerstoo.Hesaidthe

priceheofferedwasmuchhigherthanours,hebeggedthe

ownerstosellittohim,thentheowneraskedthebuyer,''whydoyouwantthishouse?''Thebuyersaid''Becauseit

isnearthecity.Iwanttobuyitforinvestment.Icanrent

ittoearnmoney...''theownerthoughtforawhileand

thenlookedathimandsaid.''I'msorry,sir.Ican'tsellmy

housetoyou,becauseIamlookingforsomeonewhotruly

lovesmyhouse,notjustformoney.''Theownerlookedatusandsaid,''Idecidetosellmyhousetoyou!Thenheexplained:He'dseenussittingby

thelakeallthosetimes;heknewhowmuchwelovedthe

placeandthatwedappreciatetheyearsofworktheyhad

putintotheirhome;herealizedhewouldtakealossby

sellingittous.butitwasworthwhile;wewerethepeople

theywantedtolivethere.Hetoldustoconsiderthe

differenceintheprice''anearlyweddingpresent.''That's

howwefoundourhomeandhowIlearnedthatwhen

peoplearekind,theyarenotstrangers,onlyfriendswe

haven'tyetmet.【文章概要】本篇主要講述了作者和丈夫去購買新婚用的房子。他們看上了一套房子，但中介告訴他們有人比他們的出價更高。抱著試一試的態(tài)度，他們決定和房子的主人見上一面?！驹斀狻坷m(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一部分的開頭是：我們?nèi)チ朔繓|家里，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)另一個買家也在。所以可以接著寫：他說自己的出價更高，并要求房東把房子賣給他。然后房東問他買房的原因，他說是因為想把房子當作投資。房東思考了一下說，不能把房子賣給他，因為他們要找的是愛房子的人，而不是把它當作投資，用來掙錢的人。第二段開頭是：然后房東看著我們說：“我決定把房子賣給你。”所以可以接著寫，房東說：他看見我們最近常常坐在湖邊，知道我們非常愛這套房子，也相信我們會欣賞他們在這套房子中投入的精力。所以他決定低價把房子賣給我們。至于那些不夠的錢就當作是提前給我們的結(jié)婚禮物。我們就這樣找到了喜愛的房子，也明白了一些道理。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的基礎時態(tài)為一般過去時,由于本篇文章多角色，需要注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換heshei。高級詞匯表達：wedappreciate從句使用主從復合句，如：Ican'tsellmy

housetoyou,becauseIamlookingforsomeonewhotruly

lovesmyhouse,notjustformoney.who引導定語從句，That's

howwefoundourhomeandhowIlearned注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好。ThecostofasmileKathywasayoungwomaninher20’swhoworkedinasmallrestaurantasawaitress.Oneday,asshewentabouthershiftwithherusualangrylook,akindoldmanwalkedinandsatdownatthecounter.Hereadthemenuandpolitelytoldherwhathewanted.Kathytookhisorderandyelled,“Yourfoodwillbereadysoon.”Assheturnedtoleave,themansaid,“Asmilecostsnothing”.Kathyrolledhereyesathimandwalkedaway.Shebroughthisorder,clearedhisplates,andgavehimthebill,forwhichheleftanicetip.Eachtimetheoldmansawher,hesmiledandthankedher.Thisonlymadeherangrier.Aweekwentby,andeverydaythemancameforlunchandthesamethinghappened.AndeachtimeKathytookhisorderhewouldsay,“Asmilecostsnothing.”Butaweeklater,Kathypickedupamenu,wrotethewords“1SMILE…$20"atthebottom,andplaceditonthecounterforthekindoldmantosee.Hecame,andKathywaitedforhisreactionashereadthemenu.Theoldmanorderedhisusualandadded,“…andasmile,ifyoudon’tmind”.Kathywassosurprised.Shelaughedoutloud,“Now,now…”Themanjokinglyscolded.“Iorderedasmile,notalaugh”.SoKathyputonabrightsmileandsaid,“Comingrightup,sir.”Andtohersurprise,heleft$20tip!Afewyearswentby,andthetwobondedlikefamily.Charlie,thekindoldman,wasaretiredmanagerwhosewifepassedawaylongago.Hespentmostofhistimeathome,withtheexceptionofhisfrequentrestaurantvisits.EverydayKathyspentherbreaktalkingtohim.Paragraph1:Onedayhedidn’tcometotherestaurant.Paragraph2:Severaldaysafterthefuneral(葬禮),Kathyreceivedaveryimportant-lookingletterinthemail.【參考范文】Onedayhedidn'tcometotherestaurant.Kathycouldn'tconcentrateonherworkthewholeday.Evenwhentherestaurantwasgoingtoclose,Charliedidn'tshowup,andshewastrappedinanxiety.Afterwork,KathyhurriedtoCharlie'shome,onlytobetoldbyhisneighborsthathehadpassedawaylastnight.Notuntilthendidsheknowthathehadfoughtagainstcanceraloneduringthepastyears.Kathycouldn'ttrustherearswhensheheardthis.AtCharlie'sfuneral,thehappymemorieswithCharliekeptflashinginhermind.Severaldaysafterthefuneral,Kathyreceivedaveryimportant-lookingletterinthemail.Sheopenedtheletterwithherhandsshakingslightly.Atthesightofthefamiliarhandwriting,tearswelledupinKathy'seyes.Charlieexpressedhisgratitudeforhercompanytheseyears.ItsuddenlydawnedonKathythatwiththehelpofCharlie,shetransformedfromthepreviousangry-lookingwaitresstoasmilinggirl.Onlythendidsherealizethetruemeaningofsmile:bringotherswarmthandcompany.【文章概要】文章主要講述了Kathy是個愛生氣的女服務員，某天一位老人來餐館吃飯