高三高三英語課件：書面表達(dá)技巧課件

高考英語：書面表達(dá)技巧2023/6/8書面表達(dá)一、學(xué)生失分的原因1．

由于字亂而失分。以2002年的考題為例Wetookallthethingsweneeded.Forexample,food,map,compass,flashlight,first-aidkitandsoon.Weshouldgotothefeath.Butariverinfrontoftheforest.Sowemustswimmedandputourbagsonapieceofwood.2023/6/8Whenweintheforest,wecouldn’tfindoutthewaytooutoftheforest.Soweusedthecompassandthemap.Finallywegotoutoftheforest.Atthenight,wearrivedatthecompsite.(10分)下面這篇作文書寫時(shí)字體潦草，猜一猜它得了多少分。2023/6/8下面這篇作文書寫時(shí)字體潦草，猜一猜它得了多少分。YesterdaymorningheandIsetoutthesurvivalprogram.Hetookabagwhichhadaknife,clothes,matches,amap,afirst-aidkit,flashlightandbreadwhiletherewereatentandacompassinmybag.Afterclimbingupthehill,wefollowedthemarktoariver.Weusedawoodenfloatingtocarryourbagsandswamacrosstheriver.2023/6/8Werealizedthedirectioneasily.Afteralongwalking,wegotthecampsiteintheevening.WeheldafireandIcookedthesupperwhileLiMingheldthetent.2023/6/8

2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)而失分a/不要認(rèn)為使用長句，復(fù)句就是好文章。例文:LiMingandIstartedoffwhenthesunwasrisingfromtheeast,singinghappily,withourcompass,camp,bread,map,light,matches,knife,clothes,flashlightandfirst-aidkitinourbagsandlookedforwardtothehardtrainingwehadprepareforalongtime.

2023/6/8Weclimbedahill,thenswamacrossariverwithourbagsplacesonapieceofwood.Afterthat,weenteredaforest,IwasjustwonderingwhichwasthecorrectwaywhenLiMingusedthecompassandshowedmetheway.Aftertwohours,wefinallyarrivedatthecampsite,2023/6/8whereIwasinchargeofsettingupthecampwhileLiMingmadeafireandcookedourdinner.Believeitornot,itwasthemostdeliciousmealI’veeverhad!Words:132Sentences:6Wordspersentence:222023/6/8b/雜亂無章，沒有邏輯性。例如：Thenarrowpathledusintoaforest,andverysonwefindourselvessurroudedbytreesthatsoaredintothesky,theirthickleavesblockingalmostallthesunlightandthusmakingthedayhalfnight.Wehelpeachother’shandandwalkedtowardwhatwebelievedwest,yetanhourlater,werealizedwehadbeencirclingaroundthesameplace.Welostourway.2023/6/8C/丟失要點(diǎn)二、對策1．背誦是個好方法2.基本句型的訓(xùn)練1/主語+謂語2/主語+系動詞+表語（adj./n）3/主+謂+賓2023/6/84/主+謂+雙賓語5/主+謂+賓+賓補(bǔ)6/Therebe…3.習(xí)作指導(dǎo)一、抓四個環(huán)節(jié)1．明確要求2．列出要點(diǎn)3．?dāng)U寫成文2023/6/84．查漏補(bǔ)缺二、注意兩個寫作技巧

1．用詞造句要揚(yáng)長避短①IspenttwothousandyuanonthecolourTVset．②IspenttwothousandyuaninbuyingthecolourTVset．③ThecolourTVsetcostmetwothousandyuan．④TwothousandyuanwasspentonthecolourTVset．⑤IpaidtwothousandyuanforthecolourTVset．⑥IusedtwothousandyuantobuythecolourTVset．2．適當(dāng)使用過渡詞2023/6/8④TwothousandyuanwasspentonthecolourTVset．⑤IpaidtwothousandyuanforthecolourTVset．⑥IusedtwothousandyuantobuythecolourTVset．2．適當(dāng)使用過渡詞為了使所寫短文通順、連貫，句子與句子之間過渡自然，適當(dāng)加上一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的過渡詞是很有必要的。常見的過渡詞有：2023/6/8遞進(jìn)型：besides，what'smore，letalone，tosaynothingof，whatwasworse,moreovereven等；解釋型：thatis（tosay），inotherwords，or，inthesameway，等；轉(zhuǎn)折型：however，but，yet，although，otherwise,instead等；列舉型：firstly…secondly…finally，first，atfirst，atlast，next,舉例型：forexample,suchas,thatis,like,等；2023/6/8因果型：because（of），since，as，therefore，so，asaresult，thanksto，thus，owingto，seeingthat等；讓步型：though，although，inspiteof等；時(shí)序型：first…next…andthen…finally，atthesametime，meanwhile，first…then…afterthat…finally等；并列型：and，or，also，aswellas等；2023/6/8時(shí)間型：now，justnow，justthen，afterwards，soon，fiveminuteslater，beforelong，shortlyafterthat，tothisday，soonaftersupper等；強(qiáng)調(diào)型：aboveall，indeed，surely，certainly，ofcourse，afterall，atleast，atmost，firstofall，等；歸納總結(jié)型：inconclusion，inaword，intheend，atlast，finally，tosumup,inshort,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inall,inaword等；2023/6/8轉(zhuǎn)換話題型：bytheway，I'mafraid，inmyopinion，totellthetruth，tobehonest，afterall，infact等。怎樣做看圖作文一、寫作技巧

1．認(rèn)真閱讀文字說明、參考詞語和畫面，確定作文體裁。2．仔細(xì)觀察畫面，抓住題目中心。3．編寫提綱。2023/6/81）描寫的順序；2）段落的安排。二、寫作實(shí)例假若下面圖畫中的學(xué)生就是你，根據(jù)以下六幅圖畫，用英語寫一篇故事。生詞：callingcard名片注意：1．故事須包括所有圖畫的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使故事連貫。2．詞數(shù)100左右。2023/6/8我們可以分三步來寫這個故事。第一步：確定體裁。第二步：確定主題。第三步：編寫提綱。這個故事的提綱為：1）我放學(xué)回家2）我在323路公共汽車站附近撿到一個錢包3）我打開錢包2023/6/84）錢包里有許多錢和一張名片5）我給失主打電話6）我在323路公共汽車站等候失主7）失主前來認(rèn)領(lǐng)錢包8）失主表示感謝2023/6/8Oneday，onmywayhomeafterschool，IfoundawalletneartheNo．323BusStop．Iopenedthewalletandsawlotsofmoneyandacallingcardinit．FromthecallingcardIknewtheowner'sname，addressandtelephonenumber．SoIwenttothepublictelepho