高考英語書面表達(dá)高分寫作指導(dǎo)課件

英語書面表達(dá)高分寫作指導(dǎo)BeautifyyourComposition書面表達(dá)在評(píng)閱時(shí)遵循三原則語言第一位(語言高級(jí))內(nèi)容第二位(要點(diǎn)齊全)結(jié)構(gòu)第三位(文章分段)漂亮、地道高考作文的美語言第一位(語言高級(jí))一、高級(jí)詞匯和句式二、修辭手法三、有效的連詞四、名人名言或諺語1.高級(jí)詞匯短語詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少,也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝,文靠詞裝

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原則。3、避免重復(fù)原則

4、后、高、長(zhǎng)原則—

后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。四項(xiàng)原則

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.

2、地道原則［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.3、避免重復(fù)原則［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.

4、后高長(zhǎng)原則—后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯。

原詞替換詞

hard

very

payattentionto

happy

moreandmoreDiligentlyratherextremelyattachimportancetodelightedenjoyabletheincreasingnumberofAdj.聰明的、腦筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Cputersareofgreatimportanceinourlife. 5、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯：Asaresult,theplanfailed.(一般)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.(一般)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高級(jí))Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme(高級(jí))ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高級(jí))ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent….(高級(jí))Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.(高級(jí))Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般)Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯：2.句式多樣,文章增“靚”使用較豐富的句式：運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少,從而使整篇文章因此而生輝

他昨天下午來的。1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.2.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.3.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.4.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.思考：什么樣的作文會(huì)成為一篇好作文

無遺漏信息點(diǎn)(審題)篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞句式多樣地道的高級(jí)詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~組思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？

強(qiáng)調(diào)句倒裝句

with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)advancedsentences定語從句名詞性從句非謂語動(dòng)詞常用諺語被動(dòng)句…化腐朽為神奇十式一、將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為并列句。

操作難度★★寫作效果★★Igotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchtheearlybus.(一般)Igotuplatethismorning,otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus.(高級(jí))Ifyougothroughthegate,you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(一般)Gothroughthegate,andyou’llfind….(高級(jí))Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.(高級(jí))Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(一般)二、主動(dòng)句與被動(dòng)句的互換。

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★Thegovernmentshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.三、將陳述句改為感嘆句。

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★1.Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!2.Sheisaclevergirl．Whataclevergirlsheis!四、將陳述句改為倒裝句。

操作難度★★★★寫作效果★★★★1.Wedidnotrealizeourmistakesuntilatthattime.Notuntilatthattimedidwerealizeourmistakes.五、將簡(jiǎn)單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句。

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★★1.Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents.Itis

throughhardwork

thatourmoneyisearnedbyourparents.六、將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為復(fù)合句。

操作難度★★★★★寫作效果★★★★★1.同位語和同位語從句(常用于描述人物、地點(diǎn)等介紹性文段)1)LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.HewonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.(用同位語改寫)

,

,wonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.

2.定語從句(限制性/非限制性)1)The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing,anditssloganisOneWorld,OneDream.The2008OlympicGames,.WhosesloganisOneWorld,OneDream,willbeheldinBJ3.主語從句Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.

mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.Whatimpressedme【推薦句型】：Whatsurprises\astonished\satisfied\impressedmeisthat…WhatIwouldliketosuggest\advise\putforwardisthat…Whatmattersmostisthat…WhatIlearn\concludefromthestoryisthat…4.表語從句

【推薦句型】：

…isnolongerwhatitusedtobe.我的家鄉(xiāng)不再像以前那樣了。Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.5.狀語從句【推薦句型】

結(jié)果、程度so…that…;such…that…讓步nomatterhow\what\when\where….=whatever,however,whenever,wherever時(shí)間…wasdoing…when…七、將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句

操作難度★★★★★寫作效果★★★★★Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings,whicharousespeopletothinkdifferently八、It作形式主語或形式賓語句型

操作難度★★★寫作效果★★★1.Youpretendtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.It’snogood.

It’snogoodpretendingtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.九、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)代替狀語/定語從句

操作難度★★★★★寫作效果★★★★★Ifyouworkharder,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.

,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.Workinghard

十、with引導(dǎo)的短語或者復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

操作難度★★★★寫作效果★★★★★With+賓語+adj./adv./介詞短語/todo\doing\done常用句型withapopulationof….withatotalareaof…withalonghistoryof…years1)這個(gè)地區(qū)占地2000平方千米,人口10萬。Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers,

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withapopulationof100,000.

一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧四、從句不如分詞傲高級(jí)句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣四“不如”謄寫規(guī)范不要少

修辭的使用在書面表達(dá)中算作很大的亮點(diǎn),在高中階段很少有學(xué)生會(huì)注重修辭的應(yīng)用。雙重否定也是種修辭,而且對(duì)于考生來說,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中設(shè)計(jì)雙重否定的句子。就變成了亮點(diǎn)句,起到強(qiáng)調(diào)作用。一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.

倒裝是一種最簡(jiǎn)單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式,足以應(yīng)對(duì)書面表達(dá),如何應(yīng)用倒裝,有很多方法和技巧。Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧英語中經(jīng)常用被動(dòng)語態(tài),漢語經(jīng)常用主動(dòng)語態(tài);英語中經(jīng)常用是事物或形式主語開頭,強(qiáng)調(diào)一件事發(fā)生在什么人身上,而漢語經(jīng)常用人稱開頭強(qiáng)調(diào)一個(gè)人發(fā)生了什么事。所以使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)符合英語的習(xí)慣,如