建議信顏云芝

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假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)回信。

要點(diǎn)：⑴參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； ⑵看中文書(shū)刊、電視； ⑶學(xué)唱中文歌曲； ⑷交中國(guó)朋友。

注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出。

書(shū)寫(xiě)極差層次不分明（一段式或多段式）3.單詞拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，句型少而單調(diào)課前演練問(wèn)題總結(jié)ProblemsoftheCompositionVerybadhandwritingProblemsoftheCompositionVerybadhandwritingGoodhandwritingGoodhandwritingisveryimportant!一段式或多段式Singlesentencepatterns句型單調(diào)Toomanymistakes

語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤多Clearhandwriting整潔卷面Clearlydivided合理分段Nopointsleft要點(diǎn)不漏Naturallyconnected自然串聯(lián)Nosillymistakes蠢錯(cuò)不犯StandardforaPerfectCompositionGetitpolished!讓作文出彩DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Iwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:

First,

itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Inaddition,

italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.What’smore,youcanalsomakemoreChinesefriends,whowilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourletternexttimeYourssincerely,LiHuapossibleversion:ReadaloudSummary

1.回應(yīng)問(wèn)題(1)I’mverygladtoreceiveyour...(2)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouhavetroublein…2.提出建議及理由(1)Itisimportantto….,as…..(2)Itshouldbeagoodideato…,because….(3)Italsohelpsto…,who/which….3.祝愿寄語(yǔ)(1)Iam

lookingforwardto...(2)Ihopethat...三、Usefulexpressions二、如何更有條理性1、

First,second,third….Finally2、besides;what’smore;inaddition一、書(shū)信格式HiWorried,I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jamie(2014·安徽)為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開(kāi)辟了HEART-TO-HEART專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封回信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示理解并給予安慰。2.提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右。2.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息。3.信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：脾氣，情緒temper1.什么書(shū)信？2.人稱和時(shí)態(tài)？3.建議信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括什么？（1）表示理解并給予安慰（2）具體建議及理由（3）愿望高考鏈接建議信第二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)文章結(jié)構(gòu)Para1.理解和安慰Para2.具體建議和理由Para3.愿望Hi,Worried,

I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearesomeusefultips:First,

itisimportanttotalktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel,asitisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Besides,

itshouldbeagoodideatogooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexercise,whichisaneffectivewaytogetridofyouranger.Inaddition,

italsohelpstoremainoptimisticaboutyourfuture,becauseonlywithapositiveattitudetowardslifecanyouliftyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,Jamie1.理解并給予安慰2.具體建議和理由3.愿望Groupwork

Peer-editing組員互評(píng)打分,附標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1.看顏值：書(shū)寫(xiě)+卷面