上課英語二強(qiáng)化寫作

一、圖表描述+（圖表總結(jié)）二、具體意義+原因三、預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì)（+建議措施+憧憬未來圖表描述：如表所示，基本如表所示，Asisindicatedinthegraph→線狀圖linebar餅狀圖pie添加修飾：subtlyindicated微妙地揭示了，clearlyindicated清晰地揭示了eg.asisclearlyindicatedinthepie基本thenumbersof+變化+程度+范number→figure(s),amount總量rate速率，proportion比例份額，percentage百分比：名詞，-tionity總=分疊A總=Bandeg.總：在發(fā)展中國家和發(fā)達(dá)國家的定thenumbersof subscriptionindevelocountriesanddevelopedonesthenumbersofmpsindevelocountries;thenumbersofmpsindevelopedcountries;(be動(dòng)詞，實(shí)義動(dòng)詞（是：is,wasare占：representaccount由…becomposedofAsisindicatedinthebarchart,thenumberofAwas5in1990.Asisindicatedinthepiechart,theproportionofAaccountsfor40%.ThenumberofAiscomposedofB,CandD.ThepiechartiscomposedofB,CandD.eg.2015.春節(jié)消費(fèi)consumption/cost/expenseinSpringFestivalgift,traffic,→ThenumbersofconsumptioninSpringFestivalarecomposedofgift,trafficand上升：increaserisegrow下降：decrease,decline,diminish,fall,→ ecease, ecine, iminishe,e,escened變化程度：不同地 范圍：fromtofrom1tofrom1990tofrom1in1990to10infrom1900intheyearof1990to1990intheyearof2000圖表描述第一段=引出圖表+圖表如表所示 完整的描述句Asisindicatedinthechart,（Thechartprovidesinformationabout….chartprovide→present,show,indicate,eg.2007.表格呈現(xiàn)了中國某城市的交通事故trafficaccidentina city數(shù)Thetablepresentsinformationabouttrafficaccidentina 圖表比較了…和Thechartcompares…with….eg.1999. thegrowthrateofU.S.物種的速theextinctionrateof→ThelinechartscomparetherateofU.S.populationwiththe圖表展示了在…方面的不同之處。 eg.2010.柱狀圖，定柱狀圖展示了定制在發(fā)達(dá)國家和發(fā)Thebarchartshowsthedifferences phonesubscriptioninbothdevelocountriesanddeveloped圖表展現(xiàn)了…Thechartshowshow…changes(in…圖表圖表總結(jié)(可省略→asthegraphseemstobe,themeaningbehinditisasdeepasocean.Isolatedasthefiguresseemtobe,asamatteroffact,theyareconnectedtooneanotherclosely.Despitealittle ,thereisadeeperconnotationbehindthegraph.→Thedraftsman’srealpurposeisnotthestatistics,buttoleadustofindtheAsamatteroffact,whattheauthortriestoshowusismorethanstatistics.趨勢(shì)上升的/下降的。Althoughthenumberof…（詞）varies,thewholetendencytendstobe變量一。關(guān)聯(lián)詞，變量二。 And…duringthesame相同：Likewise相反：However,yet,but,ironically,unfortunay,incontrast,ontheflatsteadyThenumberof…isflat.Thenumberof…remainssteadyat…線狀圖：line線狀圖反映了A的信息具體而言TobespecificA的數(shù)據(jù)從的上升到 aboutA.Tobespecific,thenumberofAincreasesfrom1in1990to50in2000.Asamatteroffact,whattheauthortriestoshowusismorethanstatistics.AB具體而言，A的數(shù)據(jù)從 的緩 B5duringthesameperiodThelinechartscompareAwith increasesslowlyfrom1in1990to10Yet,thenumberofBrisessignificantlyfrom5to100duringthesameperiod.Meanwhile,thenumberofCisIsolatedasthefiguresseemtobe,theyareconnectedtooneanotherclosely.第四種：兩個(gè)單線同時(shí)下降（C不變decrease,fall,（C不變A，BCA199012000B與此同時(shí)，C informationaboutA,Band increasesignificantlyfrom1in1990to100inYet,thenumbersofBdecreasesharplyfrom100to1duringthesameperiod.Meanwhile,thenumberofCremainssteadyat50.Isolatedasthefiguresseemtobe,theyareconnectedtooneanotherclosely.ABCA199012000然而，B50C的數(shù)據(jù)變化不定，（廢ThelinechartprovidesinformationaboutA,BandC. increasessharplyfrom1in1990to500in2000.to10duringthesameperiod.Meanwhile,althoughthenumbersofCvary,thewholetendencytendstobeIsolatedbar該柱狀圖展示了詞從1990年2010年的變化。Thechartshowshow…changes.A1990A2010100.（廢ThebarchartshowshowAchangesfrom1990to2010.Tobespecific,thenumberofAwas5in1990. significantlyfrom10in2000to100inIsolatedA具體而言A的數(shù)字從 在此之后afterwhich它it陡然2010廢Tobespecific,thenumberofAincreasedslowlyfrom5in1990to10in2000,afterwhichitrosesharplyto100in2010.（廢ThebarchartshowshowAchangesfrom1990to2010.Tobespecific,thenumberofAdecreasedsharplyfrom100in1990to10in2000,afterwhichitdescendedslowlyto5in2010.Isolatedasthefiguresseemtobe,asamatteroffact,theyareconnectedtooneanotherclosely.ABA199052010然而，B199010緩慢2010100.ThebarchartcomparesAwithTobespecific,thenumberofAincreasessteadilyfrom5in1990to15in2010.Yet,thenumberofBrisesslowlyfrom10in1990to15in2000,afterwhichitascendssharplyto100inIsolated…（突出明顯變化ThebarchartcomparesAwithTobespecific,thenumberofAdecreasessteadilyfrom15in1990to5in2010.Yet,thenumberofBdeclinessharplyfrom100in1990to15in2000,afterIsolated…,A，BCA200052010然而，B100與此同時(shí)，C15（廢Thebarchartshowsthedifferencesin/aboutA,BandC. increasesslowlyfrom5in2000to10inYet,thefigureofBdecreasessharplyfrom100to10duringthesameperiod.Meanwhile,thenumberofCremainssteadyat15.…餅狀圖pieBA具體而言，B20%（廢ThepiechartpresentsthepercentageofBinA. accountsfor20%.…（increaseBA中的份額變化19902010（theproportionofBinA）3.（廢ThepiechartshowshowtheproportionofBinAchangesfrom1990to2010. increasesfrom20%to40%.…AB具體而言，A199020%201040%B4.（廢ThepiechartsshowthedifferencesofproportionbetweenAandB. increasesfrom20%in1990to40%to60%duringthesameperiod.…如餅狀圖所示，AEcanfindthatthebiggest/smallestonewhich（（廢Asisindicatedinthepiechart,theamountofAiscomposedofB,C,DandE.Tobespecific,theproportionofB,C,DandEaccountsfor40%,20%,20%20%Whentakingacloserlook,wecanfindthatthebiggestoneisBwhichstandsfor…*更仔細(xì)地看最大的變化是…（突出點(diǎn)Whentakingacloserlook,onecanfindthebiggestdifferenceis… Thebarchartpresentsinformation phonesubscriptioninbothdevelocountriesanddevelopedones.或ThebarchartcomparesthenumbersofphonesubscriptionincountrieswiththoseindevelopedTobespecific,thenumberindevelocountriesincreasedslowlyfrom0.5billionin2000to0.7billionin2002,afterwhichitrosesignificantlyto4billionin2008.Meanwhile,thenumberindevelopedto1billion.Whentakingacloserlook,onecanthatthenumberofAisbiggerthanthatofBin2003.… aboutA,BandC.Tobespecific,theproportionautosincreasesfrom25%in2008toinBut,thepercentageofJapanesecarsdecreasesfrom33%to25%duringthesameperiod.MeanwhilethenumberofAmericancarsremainssteadyat13%.…Thetablepresentsinformationaboutstaff’sdissatisfactioninaTobespecific,thepercentageofdissatisfactioninthreegroupsofstaffsagedunder40,staffsagedbetween41and50,andstaffsagedabove50is33%,54%and60%respectively.Whentakingacloserlook,onecanfindthebiggestproportionofdissatisfactionisgroupagedbetween41and50standsfor中間段：原因論交代現(xiàn)象+引出原因+具體原因+引出后果+具體象（：…詞或句） （：…詞或句）清晰地indicate,showprevalenteg.2013在校大學(xué)生現(xiàn)象：越來越多的在校大學(xué)生做。anincreasingnumberof越來越多的大學(xué)生collegestudent做takepart-timeInfact,thisseeminglysimplechartsubtlydisclosesaprevailingphenomenon：anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentsaretakingpart-timejobs.eg2011.lowqualityofforeignautosforeignautosoflow的。Infact,thischartisaminiatureofaprevalentphenomenon.Isthisjustwhattheauthortriesto lus?Certainlynot.Whatexactlycontributestothisphenomenon?It’sathought-provokingeg.2012.到底什么導(dǎo)致了員工不滿意呢？staff’sWhatexactlycontributestostaffs’dissatisfaction?It’sathought-eg.2014進(jìn)程urbanizationdevelopmentofcitiesmetropolis大都會(huì) phenomenonemerge? intobeing presentsituation,itisnecessarytooutthecausesbehind中：prosandTwofundamentalfactors,inmymind,couldaccountforthissocialToaccountforthistrend,peoplehavecomeupwithavarietyofreasons. influenceonit.首先,…Firstly,…mightcausethe第二點(diǎn)原因是Thesecondreasonisthat此外 Moreover,…→也許，主要原因是Perhaps,theprimaryreasonisthat最重要的是Primarily,/Mostimportantly,因此,Asaresult,Asaconsequence,Consequently,…Thereseemtobemorethanonedirectorindirecteffectsonthistopic,whichnoneofuscanfailtonotice.2010.的流行thepopularity2011.foreignautosoflowquality如果我們的話，上述問題將會(huì)產(chǎn)生嚴(yán)重。Ifwekeepturningablindeyetoit,theproblemmentionedabovewillgeneratesevereconsequences.(suchas…)虛擬語氣（6個(gè)格子）Weretherenosuchthing,neverwouldwetastethehappinessoflife.：如果情況，昂貴代價(jià)Werethesituationtocontinue,wepayahigh..如果壞的Weretherenosuchthing,neverwedoHowever,weretheoppositefacetofthissituationtocontinue,wewouldpayahighprice.2013.如果沒有part-timejobs，們無法獲取工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)obtainworking→Weretherenopart-timejobs,wouldweobtainworkingexperience.forexample,for、、社會(huì)、個(gè)負(fù):可能不恰當(dāng)?shù)乜浯罅诉@件事。Themassmediamightinappropriayexaggeratetheissue.massmedia→advertisementeg.2015excessive禮品消費(fèi)theissue→functionofgiftsAdvertisementmightinappropriayexaggeratetheeffect/functionofgift,suchas“…”.正大眾如廣播電視和網(wǎng)絡(luò)適Themassmedia,suchasradio,evisionandInternet,mightappropriayadvocateandencouragethisissue.eg.2013鼓勵(lì)在校大學(xué)生encourageundergraduatestudentstotakepart-timejobsAlackoflawsandregulationstocontrol…leadstotheexpandingtrendof….eg.2011.qualityofforeignautoscaraccidentsAlackoflawsandregulationstocontrolqualityofforeignautosleadstotheexpandingtrendofcaraccidents.正：正是相關(guān)的執(zhí)行促使這一Itistheenmentofrelevantlawandregulationthatmakesthissurprisingtrendcomeintobeing.eg.2013進(jìn)社會(huì)缺少對(duì)…的關(guān)注導(dǎo)致了Alackofdueattentionon…leadsto對(duì)…的過多關(guān)注導(dǎo)致了Toomuchattentionon…leadstoeg2014.對(duì)城市建設(shè)的過多關(guān)注導(dǎo)致了cityunbalanceddevelopmentof→Toomuchattentiononconstructionleadstounbalanceddevelopmentofeconomy.2015.packaging的過多關(guān)注導(dǎo)excessive禮品消費(fèi)。excessiveconsumptionofgiftscost/expenseToomuchattentiononouterappearance/packagingleadstoexcessiveconsumptionofgifts.正：對(duì)…的關(guān)注促進(jìn)了 的發(fā)展Dueattentionpaidto…h(huán)asstimulatedtherapiddevelopmentof….eg.2010.high-tech了的迅速發(fā)展 負(fù)：個(gè)人缺乏…的意識(shí)導(dǎo)致了Alackoftheconsciousnessof…resultsin…eg.2012.self-promotiondissatisfactionaboutsalaryandwkAlackoftheconsciousnessofself-promotionresultsindissatisfactionaboutsalaryandworkingenvironment.正：個(gè)人已經(jīng)提高了…Thepublichasenhancedtheconsciousnessof….eg.2013.→improve/promote 交代現(xiàn)象+引出原因+具體原因+引出結(jié)2010.在發(fā)展中國家和發(fā)達(dá)國家Infact,thisisaminiatureofaprevailingphenomenon.Whatexactlycontributestothepopularityof phones?It’sathought-provokingquestion.Primarily,dueattentionpaidtotechmightcausethisexpandingThereseemtobemorethanonedirectorindirectresult,whichnoneofuscanfailtonotice.Forexample,oceansofsmartfloodintoourdailyIsthisjustwhattheauthortriestolus?Certainlynot.Twofundamentalfactors,inmymind,mightaccountforthisphenomenon.Firstandforemost,alackofresultinthedissatisfactionaboutsalaryandworkingenvironment.Inaddition,alackofdueattentionpaidtostaff’spsychologyleadstothisTheproblemmentionedaboveisboundtogeneratesevereconsequences,ifwekeepturningablindeyetoit.Forexample,anincreasingnumberofstaffsleavetheirposition. Tosummarize;Byandlarge;Tosumup;AllinallConsideringeveryaspectofthisissue,I,asmostofotherswilldo,safelyaconclusionthatAnyhow,whetheritispositiveornegative,onethingiscertainthat…假設(shè)：如果這個(gè)好/壞的事情繼續(xù)發(fā)Iftheexciting/disturbingthingcontinues,itwillbegoingonforthebetter/worse.減少，而且我認(rèn)為短時(shí)間內(nèi)這種趨勢(shì)Nowadays,thereisagrowing/decreasingtendencyforpeopletodosth.,whichIbelievewillnotchangeinashorttime.需要充分…Toreversethistrendisnotapieceof2)+3)eg.2013大學(xué)生：students做takepart-timejobs的Anyhow,whetheritispositiveornegative,onethingiscertainthatforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs,whichIbelievewillnotchangeinshort2012.并非易事這需要充分自我提升。Afterconsideringeveryaspectofthisphenomenon,I,asmostofotherswilldo,safelydrawaconclusionthattoreversethistrendisnotapieceofcake,which →78、9格子。 shouldtaketheresponsibilitytodosth.Onthemicrolevel,thepublicshouldpracticalactiontodoWithproperlawandalertpublic,itwillonlybeamatteroftimebeforeethingsoftheOnlyinthiswaycanwedo結(jié)尾段：表示感謝+期待回信+保持Towhomitmayconcern,DearSirorMadam,Dear+人名，Dear+ Dear+職位，Dear+職位+姓，2009.DearEditor(s),2005.DearMr.Wang,2013.DearProfessor,

2015.Dearbookclub公司職員staffIamastaffmemberof/inyourIamastaffmemberof/inotherIamafreshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduatestudentinXXXschoolofXXXUniversity.IamtheofstudentunioninXXXschoolofXXXUniversity.（Iamsb.whodo2009.我是個(gè)讀者，剛好happentoread讀到你關(guān)于白色污染的yourreportabout“WhitePollution”。Iamareaderwhohappentoreadyourabout“White我是一個(gè)消費(fèi)者customer，昨天在店brokenelectronic electronicdictionaryinyourstoreyesterday.auntsdancinginthesquare community/neighborhood.道歉信：Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincereapologytoyou.感謝信：Iamwritingthislettertoexpress/extendmysinceregratitude/appreciationtoyou.信：Iamwritingthislettertomydissatisfactionaboutsth.Iamwrit