透視五年上海高考英語作文試題

透視五年上海高考英語作文試題（１９９９－２００３）高考作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（內(nèi)容１０分，語言１２分，組織結(jié)構(gòu)３分，共計２５分）內(nèi)容要求： A檔１０分重點明確，內(nèi)容充實 B檔 ８分 重點明確，內(nèi)容較充實 C檔 ６分 重點明確，但內(nèi)容單?。?D檔 ４分 重點不明確，內(nèi)容松散． E檔 ２分 嚴(yán)重離題．高考作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)２．語言要求：１）語言表達(dá)正確，文字流暢．（１２分）２）語法，措詞等錯誤，每處扣１分，同一錯誤不重復(fù)扣分．３）單詞拼寫，標(biāo)點，大小寫等錯誤，每處扣０．５分，同一錯誤不重復(fù)扣分．４）每句扣分不超過２分．５）語言分最多扣１２分．高考作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)３．組織結(jié)構(gòu)要求：凡內(nèi)容和語言兩部分得分超過１６分，詞數(shù)超過１２０個，并符合下列條件者可加分．１）凡全文的措詞，句子結(jié)構(gòu)，上下文連貫性等方面比較出色者，可酌情加１－２分．２）凡內(nèi)容充實，語言正確，用詞貼切的優(yōu)秀作文，可加３分．４．詞數(shù)要求：不足１２０個酌情扣分，少于６０個，總分得分最多不超過１０分．記敘文的寫作 WriteanEnglishcompositionabout100to120words,accordingtothesituationgiveninChinese.我最難忘的一課．具體說明為何難忘．感想．（２０００年上海高考題）

Inmyschoollife,Ihaveattendedmanyclasses.ButthemostunforgettablelessonIhaveeverhadisanEnglishlessonwhenIwasatGradeTwo. Itistheteacher’swayofteachingthatIalwaysremember.Ontheday,wetookoutourEnglishbooksandwaitedforourEnglishasusual.Buttooursurprise,sheenteredtheclassroomwithouttheEnglishbook,butaradioandsomepaperinstead.ShegaveoutthepaperandtoldusthatwewouldlearnanEnglishsongandsheaskedusfillintheblanksinthepaperwhilewelistenedtothesong.Howwonderful!Itwasthefirsttimethatwehadhadsuchatext.Wewereveryexcitedandlistenedtothesongverycarefully.Whatsurprisedusmostwasthatwecouldmemorizethewordsmorequicklythaneverbefore. Ilikethelesson.ThisnewmethodofteachingmakesiteasyforustolearnEnglishwords.ItcanalsodevelopourinterestinEnglish.Iwillneverforgetmylesson.SIMILARTOPICSAnunforgettabletestAnunforgettablepersonAhappyjourneyGreatchangesonthecampus/inShanghai/inmyneighbourhood…AclassmeetingbeforegraduationMyfavouriteTVprogramsGrowingpains提示作文的寫作 根據(jù)提示用英語寫出一段１００－１２０詞的短文．一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為學(xué)英語很重要．一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為不必學(xué)英語．我認(rèn)為．．．（觀點，理由）（１９９９年上海高考題）

People’sviewsonlearningEnglishvaryfrompersontoperson.Somethinkintoday’sworldweneedtomakefrequentcontactswithdifferentpeopleindifferentpartsoftheworld,soitisabsolutelynecessarytolearnEnglish.OthersconsiderEnglishuseless.TheyfeellearningEnglishisnothingbutaburden.ButIregardEnglishasoneofthemostimportantsubjects.OfallthesubjectsIlikeEnglishbest. ThereareseveralreasonswhyIlikeEnglishbest.

Firstly,Englishisoneofthemostwidelyusedlanguagesintheworld.NearlyallinformationontheInternetandoverhalfoftheworld’stechnicalmaterialsareinEnglish.Therefore,agoodcommandofEnglishwillgreatlybenefitmeinmywork. Secondly,astheworldbecomesmoreandmoreglobalized,weneedtolearnmoderntechnologyinordertocatchupwithdevelopedcountries.AsolidfoundationofEnglishmeanschancesandopportunities.Inthecompetitionforawell-paidjob,theonewhocanspeakfluentEnglishhasanadvantageoverthosewhocannot. ForallthesereasonsweshouldnotonlylearnEnglishbutmasteritintheshortesttimepossible.SIMILARTOPICSStudyingabroadNecessityforexaminationsMyviewonmixed-abilityteachingShouldastudentownamobilephone?Studentsdoingpart-timejobs?TheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofprivatetutoringMyviewonschooluniformsStudentsdoingcosmeticsurgery?MyviewonraisingpetsHowtospendaweekend?TheTeacher-studentrelationshipShouldprivatecarsbeencouragedinChina?

看圖作文的寫作 WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsonthepictureandinstructionsgiven (2002上海高考題）

Duetotheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyover-indulgethechild. Wecanseeinthepicture,whenachildislearningtoridebicycle,theparentsandgrandparentsaresweatingfromrunningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotestthechild;forfearthatsheshouldfallandhurtherself. Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.SoIthink,fortheparents,theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchpamperinghasontheirchild.Undertheparents’protection,thechildrenknowonlycomfortandease.Iftheydon’tlearnhowtoliveindependently,howcantheycopewiththeadversitieswhichtheywillmeetwithinthefuture?

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