教你如何銜接與過渡

寫作進(jìn)階提升之四

——銜接與過渡

寫作進(jìn)階提升把要點(diǎn)按照時(shí)間先后，空間順序，邏輯關(guān)系，因果關(guān)系整理，加以適當(dāng)調(diào)整，加入過渡詞來串句成文。體會(huì)一下Eg1.Heworkshard.Heisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.Hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.Heworkshard,butheisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.However,hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.Eg2.Becausehehelpedmeintime,Ipassedtheexam.Thankstohistimelyhelp,Ipassedtheexam.Asaresultofhistimelyhelp,Ipassedtheexam.Hehelpedmeintime,asaresult,Ipassedtheexam.表時(shí)間關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞開始

然后

最終atfirst,atthebeginningof,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,first(ly),firstofall

atlast,atlength,finally,eventually,intheendafterawhile,afterwards,andthen,later,afterthat,next,shortlyafter,thenextmoment同時(shí)

atthesametime,inthemeantime,meanwhile過去

atthattime,beforebythattime,earlier,formerly,inthepast現(xiàn)在

atpresent,presently,rightnow,nowadays,uptonowEg.ThenIwillbehappytobeyourguide.

Thenextmomentthecarhithimwhilehewascrossingtheroad.其他

fromnowon,immediately,rightaway,rightnow,shortly,soon,until,when,assoonas,sincethen,forthetime,themoment/minute,hardly...when,nosooner...than,soonerorlater,gradually,beforelong,suddenly表空間關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞說明文和描寫文中，表空間方位和順序

before,behind,below,beneath,between,here,there,where,beyond,nearby,under,above,over,ontheright/left,in(the)frontof,inthemiddleof,atthebackof,atthebottomof,oppositeto,nextto,ononeside,ontheotherside,atthefoot/endof,west/eastofEg.Ourlibraryisinthecenteroftheschool.Thereisabeautifulgardeninfrontofitandourclassroombuildingisrightbehindit.表起始關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞Firstofall,aboveall,sofar,sofaras,accordingto,tobeginwith,inmyopinion

表順序，序列關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

firstofall,tobegin/startwith,first(ly)...second(ly)...third(ly),inthefirstplace...andinthesecondplace...,foronething...andforanother...,inmyopinion,accordingto,asfarasIamconcerned,asyouknowEg.TherearethreereasonswhyIlikehim:first,heishonest,second,heiskind,andthird,heishandsome.表遞進(jìn)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

what’smore,moreover,

furthermore,additionally,inaddition,

also,too,besides,aswell

,still,notonly...butalso,what’sworse,tomakethingsworse,worsestill

Eg.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.What’smore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls.表轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

(al)though,however,onthecontrary,but,inspiteof,nevertheless,yet,otherwise,despite,while,instead

Eg.Icoveredmyearswithhands,butitwasnouse.Althoughthecityismodernandconvenient,therearestillsomeproblems.表因果的關(guān)聯(lián)詞asaresult,thus,so,therefore,hence,accordingly,consequently,asaconsequence(of),

because,for,forthisreason,as,since,onaccountof,

thanksto,forthesakeof,dueto,owingto

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