讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作-2023屆高三英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫：MyneighborBill閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。MyfamilymovedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Coloradoonmyseventhbirthday.MyfirstmemoryisourneighborBill,anoldman,handingmestrawberriesfromhisgardenthroughaholeinthechain-link（鐵絲網(wǎng)）fence.“Weneedtomaketheholebigger;""hesaidjokingly.LaterIknewthathelivedalone.Billspentmuchtimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtohimfromouryard.Iwasachatterbox.IthinkwhatdrewmetoBillisthathenevergottiredoflisteningtome.IalsothinkBillsawalotofhimselfinme-wewerebothlonelyandanxious-andthatmaybewhyhealwaystookthetimetolistentome.Itwasawonderfulconnection.Thereweren'tanykidsofmyageintheneighborhood,andmyparentswereverybusy,soImostlyplayedintheyardwithmydog,Ihadalotofimaginaryfriends-awholefamily,actually,withawife,children,abestfriend...nojoke.Weirdkid.Oneday,myparentsaskedBillwhetherhe'dwatchmewhiletheywereawayonbusiness.Thisworkedwellforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlyoccurrence.Billhadaspareroominhishouse,whichbecame11my"room.Billpromisedtoteachmetodrivethelawntractor（害（J草機(jī)）somedayandIwasalwayslookingforwardtoit.Inwinter.Billwouldattachasnowplow（鏟雪機(jī)）tothefrontofthelawntractor.IseriouslytoldhimthatIwouldinventabettersnowplowwhenIgrewup."Sureyouwill.You1!!getapatentcertificate.Ittakesacertificatetoproveanimportantthing,"Billsaidwithasmile.Onesnowymorning,anideasuddenlyhitme.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout.WhatifIadoptedBillasmygrandpa?"MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskhim.Paragraphl:Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,z/CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?” Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.PossibleVersion1:Paragraph1:Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?"Hefrozetothespot,Istaredathimwithwildjoy,noticingtearsblurredhisvision.NosoonerhadIreachedforpaperstowipehistearsthanheutteredafirmword,u\can,ofcourse,Ican."Atthattime,Billcouldn'thelpsobbing,murmuring,"We'reafamily!,,Heexclaimedthathewouldteachmetodrivethelawntractor.Afterhearingtheword,Ifeltasenseofexhilarationmingledwithexcitementbubblinginsideme.IdashedtoBill,givinghimabigtenderembrace.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.SonervouswasIthatIdidn/tknowwhattodobutsatthereandgluedatthefence.Sweatdroppingfrommyhead,asenseofnervousnessdeprivedmypowerofspeech.Billwalkedtowardsmeandsaid,"It'snotabigdeal/Thethoughtthathedidn'tacceptmyideasurgedthroughme.Tearsrollingdownonmyface.Billhuggedme,whisperingwordbesidemyear.''Althoughyoudidn'tmakeit,wehavebeenfamilyearlier/Asmileblossomedonmyface.IseriouslytoldhimagainIwouldinventabettersnowplowwhenIgrowupandhewouldneverfeellonelyagain.PossibleVersion2:Paragraph1:Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?"Onhearingthisword,Billstoodrootedtotheground,numbwithshock.Thenhewhispered,Areyouserious,mykid?""OfcourseIam!Asyouknow,IhavenopeerfriendsinceImovedhere,andthetruthisthatyou'remyonlyfriend.Sopleasedon'tsayno."Ibegged.zzlwon't,you'reright,wehavealotincommon/'NosoonerhadhefinishedhiswordthanIembracedhimtightly.Wesmiledradiantly,asifwe'rereallyoldfriends.Thenanideaflashedacrossmymind,"it'stimetolearnhowtousethelawntractorfromhim/Ithought.Fortunately,myadvicemetwithhisagreement.Thenextmoment,Iheldthelawntractorcautiouslyandhetaughtmehowtouseithandbyhand.Ibecamemuchskilled.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.Lookingatthefence,Billfrowned,worryingthatmyparentswouldbeunhappythen.Hetriedtofixit.However,Ijustwantedtoclearitaway."Grandpa/Ishouted,attractinghisattention."Doyoustillrememberyousaidweneedtheholebigger;whynotjustremoveit?"Hefellintosilenceatmywords,thinkingaboutitseriously.Atthatmoment,myparentsappeared,agreeingwithmebeforeBillwentontoapologize.zzWearethefamilynowandforever."Isaid.Fromthatday,nothingdividedusapartandmyimaginaryfamilycameintothereality.PossibleVersion3:Paragraph1:Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?"Billwasfirstabitconfusedbymystrangequestion,butthenheagreedhappily.zzSurelyIwill.Ihaven/thadafamilyincountlessyears/Hehuggedmewithtearssparklinginhismistyeyes.Atthattime,Ifeltmyconnectionwithhimstrengthened.Afterawhile,heaskedmewhetherIwantedtolearnonthenextmorningandIwasreallyexpectingthetimetocome.Iwenthomeaftersayinggoodbyetohim.ItalkedtomyparentsthatBillagreedandtheywerealsohappytolearnthat.Thatnight,Ievencouldn'tfallasleep.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchain-linkfence.Iwasfrightened,forifmyparentsfigureditout,theywoulddefinitelygrowangry.Itriedtodrivebackthelawntractorbutitjustdidn'twork."Easyeasy."ComfortedBill.Hehelpedmemoveoffthebigmachine.zzNowitseemedthatyoudidmaketheholebigger/jokedmynewgrandpa.Myparentswentoutatthattimeonhearingthebignoise.Theywereshockedatfirst,buttomybigsurprise,theydidn'thowlatme.Instead,mymomsuggested,"Whynotremovethefencesothatyoucouldplaywithyourgrandpamoreconveniently!”Allofusagreed.Now,withtwogardensconnected,twolonelyheartswouldneverfeellonelyagain.續(xù)寫題目JuliaalwaysenjoyedrunningthroughTheDarkWalktowardsthelightattheendofit.Itwasadark,damptunnel（隧道）madeofsmoothbranches.Thisyearshehadtheextrajoyofshowingittohersmallbrother,Stephen,andterrifyinghimaswellasherself.Onedaytheyfoundaholeononesideofthewalk.Insidetherewaswater,inwhichtheyperceivedapantingtrout（喘息的魚尊魚）.Theywerebothsoexcitedthattheywerenolongerafraidofthedarknessastheybentdownandpeeredatthefishpantinginhistinyprison,hissilverstomachgoingupanddownlikeanengine;otherwisehewasmotionless.Juliawonderedwhatheateandthoughtofhishunger.Shefoundhimaworm.Heignoredthefood,andjustwentonpanting.Bendingoverhim,shethoughthowhehadbeeninthere.Allthewinter,inthedarktunnel,allday,allnight,floatingaroundalone.Nobodyknewhowthefishgotthere.Hermothersuggestedthatabirdhadcarriedtheegg.Herfatherthoughtthatinthewinterasmallstreammighthavecarrieditdownthereasababy,andithadbeensafeuntilsummercameandthewaterbegantodryup.Beforetheywenttobed,Stephenaskedhismummythewholestoryofthetrout,notreallyinterestedintheactualtrout,butinthestorywhichhismumbegantomakeupforhim,andJulia,inherbed,presentedherbacktothemandreadherbook.Butshekeptoneearcocked.zzAndso,intheend,thisnaughtyfishgotbiggerandbigger,andthewatergotsmallerandsmaller../Passionately,sheturnedaroundandcried,"Mummy,don/tmakeitahorribleoldmoralstory/HermomEvebroughtinafairy（仙子）/whohadmadeitrainandfilledthehole,sothatthetroutcouldfloatawaydowntotheriverbelow.Staringatthemoonsheknewtherewasnosuchthingasafairyandthattrout,downinthetunnel,waspantingforhislife.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephanwassoundasleep.Paragraph2:Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.參考范文ShesatupinthesilentnightandStephanwassoundasleep.Shetiptoedout,quietlyliftedalargepotofwaterandrantotheopeningofthetunnel.Insidewascompletedarkness!Scaredbutdetermined,sheracedin,kneltdownbythehole,andputherhandintoit.Thetroutlashedandtheywerebothmadwithfright.Stillshemanagedtoshovehimintothepotandracedoutofthetunnelanddownthesteeppaths.Allthewayhistailwaslashingagainstthepot.Finally,shereachedtheriverbank.(85words)Juliapouredthetroutoutofthepotintotheriver.Forthefirstsecondsthesomewhatdizzycreaturewasstillvisibleinthewater.Thenallshesawwasthefaintlightofthemooninthesilent-flowingriver.Inrelief,shetrottedbackhome,droppeddownthepot,andflewthroughtheairlikeabirdintobed.Soonshefellasleep,satisfiedandpeaceful.ThenextmorningStephenrushedtoher,shoutingthat〃he"wasgoneandasking"where"and〃how”.Liftinghernoseintheair,sheproudlylaughed,ZZAfairy,Isuppose?"(87words)續(xù)寫原文OneofthefirstplacesJuliaalwaysrantowhentheyarrivedattheirvacationhouseinGalwaywasthetunnel.Itwasadark,moisttunnelmadeofsmoothbranches.Shealwaysenjoyedrunningthroughthedarknessofthetunneltowardsthelightattheendofit.Itfeltlikeatripthroughahauntedhouseatafunfairtoher.Thisyearshehadtheextrajoyofshowingittohersmallbrother,Stephen,andofterrifyinghimaswellasherself.Andforhim,thefearlastedlongerbecausehislegsweresoshortthathewasstillscreamingandracingwhileshehadgoneoutforalongtimealready.Whentheyhadrunmanytimes,theywentbacktotheirvacationhouseandtoldeverybodywhattheyhaddone.Heboasted.Shemocked.Theysquabbled."Crybaby!""Youwereafraidyourself!""You'reabigpig/Tearswerethreateningsodadsaid;"Didyouseethewellinthetunnel?”Shewastwelveandatthatagelittlegirlsarebeginningtosuspectmoststoriestoldbyadults:theyhadfoundouttoomany,fromSantaClaustotheStork.Howcouldtherebeawell!Inthetunnel?Haughtilyshesaid,''Nonsense/Butshewentback,pretendingtobegoingsomewhereelseofcourse,andfoundaholescoopedononesideofthetunnel,shroudedbyfernsthatsheonlyuncovereditaftermuchsearching.Insidetherewaswater;inwhichshesuddenlyperceivedapantingtrout.SherushedforStephenanddraggedhimtosee,andtheywerebothsoexcitedthattheywerenolongerafraidofthedarknessastheyhuncheddownandpeeredatthefishpantinginhistinyprison,hissilverstomachgoingupanddownlikeanengine.Nobodyknewhowthefishgotthere.Hermothersuggestedthatabirdhadcarriedthespawn.Herfatherthoughtthatinthewinterasmallstreamletmighthavecarrieditdownthereasababy,andithadbeensafeuntilsummercameandthewaterbegantodryup.Shewentbacktolookagain.Herbrotherremainedbehindwithmomanddad,notreallyinterestedintheactualtroutbutmuchinterestedinthestoryaboutthetroutwhichhismummybegantomakeupforhim;"Sooneday,DaddytroutandMommytrout..."Ittroubledherthatthetroutwasalwaysinthesameposition;hehadnoroomtoturn;allthetimethesilverbellywentupanddown;otherwisehewasmotionless.Shewonderedwhatheateandthoughtofhishunger.Shefoundhimaworm.Heignoredthefood,andjustwentonpanting.Hunchedoverhimshethoughthow,allthewinter;whileshewasatschool,hehadbeeninthere.Allthewinter;inthedarktunnel,allday,allnight,floatingaroundalone.Shewasstillthinkingofitasshelayinbed.ItwaslateJune,thelongestdaysoftheyear.Thesunhadsatstillforaweek,burninguptheworld.Althoughitwasafterteno'clockitwasstillbrightandstillhot.Shelayonherbackunderasinglesheet,tryingtokeepcool.BeforetheywenttobedhermummyhadtoldStephenthestoryofthetroutagain,andshe,inherbed