寫作高級(jí)詞匯專練

寫作講義

一，簡(jiǎn)單的自我介紹，學(xué)生狀況的了解

二，開始總論（介紹學(xué)習(xí)方法）

三，進(jìn)入寫作的總論

■評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

■四、六級(jí)作文在準(zhǔn)備和對(duì)策上基本一致，因?yàn)閮烧咴u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)基本一致（除了字?jǐn)?shù)上的差

距：四級(jí)120詞、六級(jí)150詞）。英語考試的作文大多可分為：1、正反論證；2、原因

現(xiàn)象描述類；3、圖表；4、名言諺語。所謂的書信作文，無非就是在這四類的基礎(chǔ)上，

套用信件的格式而已。

■評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的解釋：這些考區(qū)的考官將會(huì)在電腦前批閱作文，因此考生們最好使用黑色水

筆做答,以保證掃描效果。

■寫作考試就好像一次“博弈”。在寫作考試中，考生是真正擁有最多信息的人，考官僅僅

只能被動(dòng)地接受你所給的信息。所以，作文中遣詞造句時(shí)請(qǐng)切記兩點(diǎn)：一、“不會(huì)說的”

處理；二、經(jīng)典句的應(yīng)用.作文只在考核他們的語言表達(dá)能力。避免犯錯(cuò)誤。

■總體評(píng)分

1.找：idea

2.掃：從，寫作方法（例，數(shù)）

3.感：文字，文法，文體，文筆

2分作文----What'shappenedtoyourpants?

?形散神更散

?不成句，不分大小寫

5分作文

?表達(dá)方式錯(cuò)誤

?詳見：最經(jīng)典的中國(guó)英語

8分作文

?表達(dá)方式貧乏——三大法寶

1）therebe

2）moreandmore

3）Ithink（Somepeoplethink...Otherpeoplethink...Ithink...）

11分作文

?表達(dá)方式：因?yàn)閎ecause,inthat,forthereasonthat,becauseofthefactthat,

onthebasisthat,onaccountof7that,inasmuchas”-■些人認(rèn)為”的基本原

理

14分作文

?言之無文，行而不遠(yuǎn)

■寫作的格式有兩種：齊頭式(fullblockform)和縮進(jìn)式(indentedform)。采用齊頭式，要求

所有段落的首行都在左邊頂格，段落中間空行。縮進(jìn)式要求每段首行縮進(jìn)4~5個(gè)字母。

第二、構(gòu)思簡(jiǎn)單，少犯錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)大家一定記住，(思維。標(biāo)點(diǎn)，時(shí)態(tài)一致，單復(fù)數(shù)，

結(jié)構(gòu)。6分原則。寫完后的檢查)

■行文大多可以套用“中心句+1、2、3”模式。即每段第一句是topicsentence,改編自該

段相對(duì)應(yīng)的提綱，后面的1、2、3是銜接詞，每個(gè)1、2、3后接分支觀點(diǎn)。這種表達(dá)，

中心突出，層次分明，同時(shí)也節(jié)省了考生構(gòu)思結(jié)構(gòu)的麻煩。

■銜接詞是文章邏輯關(guān)系的體現(xiàn)，所以不妨盡可能多的使用。比如，“起”的過渡詞：

nowadays,atpresent*firstofall*firstly；"承''的過渡詞：second,besides,moreover,

furthermore,obviously,inaddition,inotherwords；"轉(zhuǎn)''的過渡詞：however,onthe

otherhand*but,instead*conversely："合''的過渡詞：therefore,so,asaresult、inshort,in

brief,inaword,inconclusion。

十大閃光點(diǎn)(求求大家)

1.提問法

2.總結(jié)法

3.“一些人認(rèn)為”

4.從句：賓語從句、定語從句

5.并列句

6.理由詞匯

7.理由段公式

8.路線句型

9.數(shù)據(jù)的表達(dá)

10.結(jié)語

書信的訓(xùn)練

■信件類型：

訂購信、退貨信、投訴信、建議信、道歉信、感謝信、邀請(qǐng)信、咨詢信、安排信、

通知信、倡議信、求職信和辭職信十三種。

1主考類型：

求職信、投訴信、訂購信、咨詢信、倡議信、建議信和邀請(qǐng)信七種。

1未考類型：

求職信、投訴信、訂購信和咨詢信四種。

特殊要求主要體現(xiàn)在以下兩個(gè)方面：

一是要求信息點(diǎn)覆蓋全面。至少應(yīng)當(dāng)包含：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、主要事件（或觀

點(diǎn)）等。

二是突出了語言的準(zhǔn)確性、格式和語域。

■五大信函寫作策略：

1.求職信

開頭段：表明信息來源，說明寫作意圖（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）。

主體段：介紹自己相關(guān)的工作經(jīng)歷、學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，以此證明你能勝任這個(gè)職位（人

物）。

次要段：表明自己申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位的理由（事情）。

結(jié)尾段：等待回音，聯(lián)系方式。

2.投訴信

開頭段：說明與收信人的相關(guān)性，點(diǎn)明你寫作的意圖（人物、關(guān)系）。

主體段：寫明投訴的原因，要展開說明，或者講具體理由，或者談問題的具體

體現(xiàn)方式（事情）。

結(jié)束段：表達(dá)你希望上述問題得到盡快解決的強(qiáng)烈愿望，并對(duì)有關(guān)人員做出的努

力表示感謝（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）。

3.訂購信

開頭段：開篇點(diǎn)出寫信的目的，定購你要的東西（事情）。

主體段：詳細(xì)說明你訂購貨物的規(guī)格、大小、顏色、尺寸等（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）。

結(jié)束段：表示對(duì)方回函以便確認(rèn)（人物）。

4.咨詢信

開頭段：明確寫信的目的，說明寫這封信的目的是尋求某信息或幫助（事情）。

主體段：詢問具體問題，強(qiáng)調(diào)所需信息的重要性（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）。

結(jié)束段：表達(dá)獲取信息的強(qiáng)烈愿望，提供聯(lián)系方式以便收信人與你聯(lián)系，并對(duì)有

關(guān)人員表示感謝（人物）。

批文2002年1月Range-finder

ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus.

January12th,2002

DearMr.President,

1.As（邏輯問題）oneofyouruniversitystudents,Iamnotverysatisfiedwith

ourcanteenservice.Thisletterisfromoneofnouruniversitystudents.Iamnot

verysatisfiedwithourcanteenservice.或者使用定語從句：Thisletterisfromoneof

youruniversitystudents,whoisnotverysatisfiedwiththecanteenservice.

1.Thefirstreasonisthattherearemanystudentscomingfromotherplaces.（邏

輯問題）Myfirstsuggestionforthecanteenisthatitoughttoofferdishesofvarious

kindstostudentscomingfromallpartsofthenation.

2.Theymay*benotnotbeaccustomedtothelocalfoodatthebeginningof*the

termtheiruniversitylife.

3.Soourcanteenshouldprovidemuchmorekindsof*foodfoods（fish，sheep,

water,oil,beer,people）forthemtochoosefrom.

1.Secondly,thepriceofthefoodishigherthanwecanafford（絕對(duì)化）.

2.1hopethepriceofsomefoodcanbe*decreasedloweredalittle.

3.Thenwecanhavealargerchoicethanbefore（至今唯一沒有問題的一句話）.

1.Inadditionto"abovesuggestionsthesuqRestionsabove,Iwanttoreflectthat

manystudentswillhavelunchafterclasses（沒有具體時(shí)間段）havelunchduring

lunchtime（coffeetime）.

2.Atthattime,thecanteenwillbecometoocrowded（第二句沒有問題的話）.

3.Sowehopethatyoucanarrangesomemoreseatsforstudents（邏輯問題）.

1.*ThereThesearemysuggestions*of（myown）for/onourcanteenservice.

2.1reallyhopeyoucantakesomemeasurestomakethecanteenservicebetter

andbetter（經(jīng)典的moreandmore結(jié)構(gòu)）tobetterourcanteenservice.

3.Thankyouverymuch.（第三句沒有問題的話）

書信的格式

DearSir/Madam,ToWhomItMayConcernMrwhat-is-his-name

...Yoursfaithfully

DearMr./Ms/Mrs./Miss（全名/名），,…Yourssincerely/truly

DearTom,...（With）Bestwishes,Yours...

Tommy,...Yours（ever）...

Hai,...Love

2002年1月Range-finder

ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus.

January12th,2002

DearMr.President,

1.VmveryluckytoattendreadforPh.D./MA/BA/BScat/pursuehigher

educationatthisworld-famousworld?renowneduniversity,butI'mafraidI'mnot

contentatleast2/3ofShestudentswouldnotbefullysatisfiedwiththecanteen

serviceoncampus.

1.小跑Firstly,thequalityofthedishesshouldbeimproved.

1修改稿：Firstly,wecouldnotenjoydishesofvariouskinds/suitingdifferent

tastes.

2.*Undou(b)tedly,therearealotofdelicious質(zhì)量好dishes,butalltheyear,

theyarethesame.

1修改稿：Althoughtherearealotofdeliciousdishes,yetwecouldnotsee

big/substantialchangeinthemenuaroundtheyear.

3.Moreandmorestudentsarecomplainingabouteatingthesamefoodeachday.

4.小結(jié)SoIthinkthemosturgentproblemisvariety.

1修改稿：Thecanteen,therefore,oughttoofferanevengreatervarietyoffoods.

1.Secondly,thepriceis*abittoo中式表達(dá)方式high.

"1修改稿：Secondly,weoughttohavetherighttoenjoydishessuitingdifferent

pocketsaswell.

2.Manyofushopethatthecanteencanprovideuswithnotonlydeliciousbut

also求cheaperinexpensivefood.

1.Finally,theenvironmentissonoisythatwecan'tenjoyourmealsingood

mood.

2.1suggestthattherebesomesoftmusictohelpusrelax.

1."ThoseThese*presentedsuggestionssuggestionspresentedarenotjustofmy

own,butalsoofmanyotherstudents.

2.Wehopeour*respectablerespectedpresidentwillpayattentiontoour

suggestions.

1.*Bytheway,thecanteenworkersareverypatientandalwayssmiling.

2.SoIthinkifouruniversityoffersthembetterconditions,theywillofferus

betterservice.

Bestwishes,

求職信（139）

DearSirorMadame,

Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition/post/titleofparttimepart-timeEnglish

teacheryouadvertisedinthenewspaperyesterday（時(shí)間）.Enclosedwiththisletter

ismypersonalresumecuiTiculumvitau,whichwillgiveyoufurtherinformation

aboutme.

Iam24yearsold（有簡(jiǎn)歷）andIamaquiteextrovert（性格）person.Istudied

EnglishLiteratureinatNankaiUniversityfrom1996to2000andgotadegreeof

bachelorBachelor.Aftergraduation,IworkedinatahighschoolAnshaoMiddle

SchoolasaanEnglishteacher.Thereweregoodcommentsfrommystudentsleaders

/supervisorsduringmyteaching.FromForalltheabovereasonsreasonsabove,I

feelsurethatIamtherightpersonthatyouarelookingfor.

Thankyouforyourconsiderationofmyapplicationletter0.1amlooking

forward（to）aaninterviewatyourearliestconvenience.Icouldbecontactedatthe

number23131245from6pmto10pm（時(shí)間段）.

YoursSincerely,

JasonLee

求職信（317）

DearConsul,

IamwritingtoapplyforthepostofvisaclerkatAmericanConsulateGeneral

uponmyboyfriend（andyourinterpreter）Peter'sadviseafterseriousconsideration.

Confidentlyspeaking,Iamwellpreparedforthedemandingandchallenging

workinyourconsulate.Duringmypast1.5-yearserviceatUA（UnitedAirlines）,I

adoptedmyselfperfectlytothebilingualworkingenvironmentandwastherefore

promotedtothepositionofCSO（ClientServiceOfficer）priortoannualappraisal,

whichshallhavebeensubstantiallyjustifiedonthegroundofmyabilitytomanagea

workloadwithinsettimeframeunderminimumsupervision,soundcapabilityasan

interpreterandtranslator,familiaritywithvisaapplicationassessment（someofour

clientsneedtoapplyfortransitvisa）,highstandardsofclientservice,andcapacityto

playasateammember.Myinitiativeandenthusiasmhavebeenhighlyappreciated

bymycolleaguesandsupervisorsinandoutofmysection.

Comparedwiththeworkingconditionsinouroffice,however,yoursaremore

attractivetoambitiousapplicantsincludingmetoagreaterextend.Firstly,your

officekindlyoffersopportunitiesofself-development,whichshallbebeneficialtomy

studyofadvancedinterpretationcourseandfurthertrainingofcommunicativeskills.

Secondly,yourofficeappliesflextimesystem,whichundoubtedlydemonstratesthe

mutualunderstandingbetweenmanagerialstaffandyourlocallyengagedstaff.

Thirdly,yourofficeenjoysbetterreputationofopennessandintegrity,whoseclients

enjoythefirstandforemostplace.Fourthly,youprovidebetterpackageandwelfare

system.Lastbutnottheleast,myfriendandformercolleagueshavesuccessfully

verifiedthecorrectnessofmyassumptionsabove.

Iwouldliketoexpressmyverywillingnessandeagernesstoexertmyutmostto

thedevelopmentofyourconsulate.Yourkindconsiderationofmyapplicationshall

presentmethegoldenchancetoprovemyselfanassettoyou.Iwillbeverymuch

honoredtoreceiveyourtimelyreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyou.

YoursSincerely,

Julia

留學(xué)(157)

DearEmma,

SorryIhaven'twrittenforages.FvebeensobusyoverthelastyearandInever

seemtohaveaminutetomyself.

FdliketostudyelectricalengineeringatuniversityinAustralianextyearandIhope

youcangivemesomeadvice.IthinkIwouldpreferMelbournebecauseIknowa

fewpeoplefrommyvisitlastyear.

ThisyearI'mdoingmathandphysicsatschoolandIhopetodowellinmyexams.

However,Ireallydon'tknowwhichuniversitytoapplyto,socouldyousendme

someinformationaboutdifferentcolleges?Alsocanyoufindoutwhat

qualificationsIneed?Forinstance,asanoverseasstudent,doIhavetotakean

Englishtest?

Ihopeyoudon'tminddoingthisforme.Itismuchbettertogetthisinformation

fromsomeonewholivesinthecountry,soIhopetohearfromyousoon.

Manythanks!

Yours,

Tom

道別(235)

DearAll,

AsyouarenowawareIammovingtotheBritishImmigrationOffice.Iamnot

havingafarewellbash,butIwouldliketosay'seeyaround1nonetheless.Ihadbeen

planningtosaysomethingtrulyinspirational,somethingthatyouwouldendlessly

ponder,somethingthatyouwoulddiscussatgreatintellectuallengthamongst

yourselves,somethingthatwouldremainwithyoufortherestofyourlivesand

perhapstellyourchildrenandgrandchildren.However,greatnessseemstohave

escapedme.So,instead,whatIwillsayisthis;whatmakesthedifferencebetweena

jobandagoodjobisnotonlytheworkyoudo,butjustasimportantly,whoyou*re

doingitwith(sotospeak).Iconsidermyselfextremelyluckytohavebeen'doingit*

withpeoplewhoare'memates*(read*myfriends,forthosenotcolloquially

inducted).Ihaveenjoyedourtime*doingit*togetherandalthough,geographically,I

ammakingaverticalmovementofonlyfiveorsixmeters,myfriendshipsand

experiencesinthisofficeareuniqueandhavetheirownplaceinmyheart.

ThankstoyouBernieforyourguidanceduringthistimeofpersonaltransition.I

havebeenwatchingandlearning.ThankstoJackandthebusinessstaffforyour

patientswithmyincessantrequestsforpronunciationandtheeasewithwhichyou

havemadeworkinginthenewsection.

Thankyoueveryone.

Peter

回顧到應(yīng)用文模版

1.問候型Longtimenosee.

2.Ihaven'twrittentoyouforagesbecauseI'vebeensobusyoverthelast

yearandIneverseemtohaveaminutetomyself.

3.Longdistanceseparatesnobosomfriends.

4.Thoughwehaveneverseeneachother,yetIhavelongheardofyou.

5.Howniceitwastohearfromyouatlast!

6.告知型Youwillbeverygladtohearthat...

7.WithgreatdelightIlearnedthat…

8.Totellapieceofgoodnews,Ihave/amdoing...

9.Iamwritingthislettertotell/informyouthat...

10.Ihavejustreceivedyourkindletterregarding...

第三段

1.客套型Thanksforyourprecioustime.

2.Thanksagainforyourkindhelp/assistance.

3.Thankyouinadvance.

4.展望型Iamlookingforwardtoseeing/meetingyouhereinShanghai

China.

5.寄語型Yourtimelyreplytothisletterishighlyappreciatedbyallthe

peopleconcerned.

6.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucontactmeassoonaspossible.

7.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply/hearingfromyousoon.

8.Writetomea.s.a.p.

9.Remember:Ishallalwaysmyfingerscrossedforyouatanyrate.

10.Shallyoucomeacrossanyproblem,pleasedonothesitatetoletmeknow.

11.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpyouanyfurther.

12.Ihopethisinformationwillhelpyou.

13.Pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation/furtherconfirmation.

14.Itrustthesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.

對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)回復(fù)到議論文模版

例文1

2000年6月Range-finder（149）

AtestofspokenEnglishwillbeincludedasanoptionalcomponentofthe

CollegeEnglishTest（CET）.

1.1開篇提問Isitnecessary?總結(jié)并另啟一段

"l修改稿Whatisyouropinion?

Towhichextentdoyouagreeordisagreewith

1.簡(jiǎn)單句thisidea/notion/concept/suggestion/proposal...

2.復(fù)雜句itwhen,assomeoneputit,thetestofwrittenEnglishhasalready

（使負(fù)擔(dān)）posed/placed/putaheavyburden/workloadonstudents/

examinees/candidates?

1.2語法錯(cuò)誤4--Ontheonehand/Ontheonesideofthecoin/Forone

thin^Manypeople（一些人）,themajority

十大閃光點(diǎn)之三——“一些人認(rèn)為”——Some

無數(shù)的numerous/myriad（amyriadof）

大量的Agreat/large/huge/（in）considerable/significant/noticeablenumber

/amount/quantity/portionof

對(duì)半的almost/nearly/some/closeto/approximatelyhalfof

大多的the（vast/overwhelming）majorityof

一些/另一些（抽象意義）：some-others,majority-minority

think（s）（認(rèn)為）sobecausespokenEnglishiswidely（普遍/經(jīng)常）generally

/universally/constantly/frequentlyusedemployedin*（the）everydaylife.

1.3反問（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：助，倒，反）Ifapersonlanguagelearnerwhoisonly

/merelygoodatwrittenEnglishcan^（文體不正式：省文/略，口語詞匯，只字

片語）cannotspeakit,反可howcanhecommunicatewithothers?

2.1贅言，邏輯錯(cuò)誤+另方而0ntheotherhand/Ontheothersideofthe

coin/Foranother,Somepeopletheminority（對(duì)應(yīng)關(guān)系---工整）

十大閃光點(diǎn)之三----“一些人認(rèn)為"----people

公眾thepublic

各彳亍各業(yè)peoplefromallwalksoflife/thecircle/community/walkofeducation

學(xué)生examinees/testees/students

特殊人群readers/drivers

支持/反對(duì)者followers-objectors,dissenters-consenters

參與者participants/candidates/interviewees

think(s)claimsspokenEnglishislessimportantthannotasessentialas

writtenEnglishbecauseinthat/inlightofthefactthat/basedontheobservation

that/inasmuchas*they*think邏輯錯(cuò)誤mostsciencebooksarewrittenin

English

2.2Onecannotunderstandcomprehend/appreciatethecontentifhecanonly

speakEnglish.

2.3And強(qiáng)遞進(jìn)詞開頭furthermore,thetestofspokenEnglishTheoraltestof

English,furthermore/moreover,isnotsofairasitseems.

2.4Ateachercangivethecandidates/examineesscoresaccordingtohisown

like...之流(產(chǎn)生好感takealikingfor/tosb./愛好havealikingfor=be/

feelattachedto/beadditiveto)

3.1非正式文體開頭Anyway(l)Nevertheless,Ithinkmyhumble/personal/

"stupid(ForestGumpstupid-beontheslowside,expectababy,pregnant,beinthe

familyway)opinion(2)howeveristhat/thewriter(3)howeveriswiththeview

opinionthatitisnecessary.

3.2語法錯(cuò)誤AtestofspokenEnglishcanencouragestimulate/motivate/

urgeustospendmoretimespeakingEnglishpaymoreattentionto/attachgreater

importancetothepracticeofspokenEnglishinthesparetime.

1.3語法錯(cuò)誤It*(is)also*contribute(s)toourwrittenEnglish

learning.

1.4Iwilltrymybestmake/exertaneffortto/力II倍努力redoubleone飛

effortsto求studylearnspokenEnglish*(hard)andpracticeitas

oftenashumanpossible.

Human------強(qiáng)調(diào)

1.5*1think牽強(qiáng)附會(huì)wherethereisawillthereisaway.

*Some"people*thinkweshouldreadselectively.

1十大閃光點(diǎn)之三——“一些人認(rèn)為”——think

認(rèn)為assume/argue/hold(theopinion)/claim/suggest/declare/say/assert/

state/believe/insist/maintain/doubt/suspectthat

支持give/express/show/demonstrateone'ssupportfor

贊成/反對(duì)vote/ballotfor/against

castone'svote/ballotfor/against

sidewith/standonthesideof

接受taketheadvise/followthesuggestion/accepttheopinion/ideathat

意見是one'sviewpointisthat/bewiththeviewthat

2.2Theyarguethat經(jīng)典垃圾句型withthedevelopmentofmodernscience

andtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.

2.3Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.

1煉句：將2、3組合在一起

Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,

moreandmorebooksarepublished,whichmakesitimpossibleforusto

readthemall.

2.4What'smoreTomakethematterworse,(therearemany)badbooks(that)

arepoisonousharmful/dangerous/hazardous/noxioustoourmind,andwe

shouldn'treadthem.

2.5Sincewecan'treadallthebooksandweshouldn'treadbadbooks,we

mustreadselectively.

(必須/一定)----haveto(must)=beobligedto=beboundto

1.1Butothersmaynotagree.

3.2Theyemphasizestress,pointout,put/layemphasison,giveemphasisto

thattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.

7煉句：Others,however,donotagreebyemphasizingthattoday'ssocietyisnot

whatitwas

3.3雙"if’引導(dǎo)正反論述Ifonemanhasmanykindsawiderangeof

knowledgehe'llhavemorechancestosucceed.

3.4Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinglittleinotherfields

others,hemaybeuselessofnogreatuse.

3.5Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledgekeepupwith(hetrendof

thesociety,wemustreadextensively.

4.1Who'sright?

4.2Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.

4.3ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.

1單刀式：Weighing/Balancingtheprosandconsoftheargument,Iam

inclinedtostandonthesidethat...

4.4Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.

1十大閃光點(diǎn)之二一一總結(jié)法

1.玫瑰Allroseshavethorns.

2.花園Nogardeniswithoutweeds.

3.金幣Everycoinhas2sides.

4.利僉!IEveryswordhas2edges.

5.利弊Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantages.

6.眾口Ifshardtopleaseall.

7.仁智Somanypeople,somanyminds.

8.偉人Greatmindsthinkalike.

9.毒肉Oneman'smeatisanotherman'spoison.

10.過及Throwthebabyoutwiththebathwater.

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2003年1月Range-finder

ItPaystoBeHonest

1.1開門見山Nowadays,

1經(jīng)典句型Today'sworldisnotwhatitwas.

manypeopleinincreasingnumber/agrowingnumberofpeople/anincreasing

numberof/thenumberofpeoplewho…isontherisechoosenottobehonestin

ourmodernsociety.

【十大閃光點(diǎn)之四一一從句（主語，賓語，表語，定語，狀語，同位語）

1賓語從句一一引出觀點(diǎn)

1定語從句一一引出人事物

7修改稿Asisknowntoall,dishonesty,unfortunately,isnolongerararesocial

phenomenon.

1.2描述法Wealmostcanfindsuchthingseverydayofourlife

1修改稿Everyday,such[hingscouldbefoundfromtimetotime

Inourdailylife,toourastonishment,suchfactscouldb。foundhernandthere

thin-softhesamenaturehavebecomecommonplace:

somestudentscheatintheexamfor（8種為了）soasto,inorderto,sothat,in

anattemptto/inabidto/aimingto/withaviewto/forthepurposeofhigher

marks;somecorporations（公司agency/broker/company/business/fkm/

service/factory/provider/producer/manufacturer）tellreleasewrongmisleading

orevenfraudulentdatainformation/annualfinancialreporttothepublicinorder

togetqain/draw/attract/absorbmoreinvestment;andsomedoctorstreattheir

patientswithunnecessaryandexpensivemedicinesprescribeunnecessaryand

expensivemedicinesfor[heirpatientsinordertomakemoneyget/have/receive/

collecthighcommission,sometimes求damagedthepatients9health,eventheirlife.

斷開,用Repetition另啟一句

修改稿Thesemedicines,however,couldbeaseriousthreattothepatients9

health,andsometimeseventheirlife.

2.1Seeingthissituation沒有句型開頭，Ithinkitmustbechanged.

1修改稿：Faced/Confronted/Encounteredwiththeseriousnessoftheproblem

/situation,wemusttakesomemeasures/mustdosomething/weoughtto

promoteagrowingrealizationofthebenefits/advantagesofhonesty.

2.2接原因Inthat/Itisself-justifying,self-evidencingthatBeinghonestwill

benefitnotonlyothers,butalsoourselves.

1十大閃光點(diǎn)之五一一并列句

連詞按結(jié)構(gòu)分

1.簡(jiǎn)單連詞：and,or,but,if,because

2.關(guān)聯(lián)連詞:both...and...,notonly...butalso...

3.短語連詞：asif,aslongas,inorderthat

4.分詞連詞：supposing,considering,provided

最常用并列成分

1.notonly...butalso...*

2.both...and...

3.neither...nor...*

4.either...or...*

5.so/such...that....

6.too…to...

7.although...yet...

8.if…then…

9.aslongas

10.inorderthat

*與or一樣遵循就近/鄰近原則

3.First無句型,yourhonestywillmakeotherswillingtotrustyou.

4.Second,beinghonestcanleadyoutofaceourproblembravely,which

helpstosolve(角］決workout/figureout/dealwith/handle/tackle/

address)it.

7修改稿：Honestyisthefirstandforemostpolicytoaddressthedifficultyinthe

mostappropriatemanner.

5.AndthelastThelastbutnottheleast,*honesthonestysurelycertainly/

obviously/apparently/nodoubt/beyonddoubthelpstomakethesocietymore

*harmonyharmonious.

surec.f.certain

Itiscertainthat...

1.So,IthinkThewriter,therefore,stronglyrecommendthat+虛擬everyone

shouldstarttobehonestallthesocialmembers,manandwoman,oldand

young,considerhonestyastheirbasicmaxim/mottnand因果everyone

shouldhavetheideathatoursocietycannotdowithouthonesty.

1修改稿：Inasmuchasoursocietycouldnotsurvivewithouthonesty.

3十大閃光點(diǎn)之六——理由段公式

1.序列詞：

the序數(shù)詞/firstandforemost/lastbutnotleast

theother/another

athird

oneof

2.+n.：

point/thing/fact/factor

merit/demerit/positiveinfluence/advantage

rule/principle

3.+VP：

toremember/tobekeptinmind/oughttobetakenintoconsideration

shallbeborne/keptinmind/couldnotbeforgot/ne/lected/ignored

worthmentioning

ofgreatimportance/significance

holdingthebalance

Iwouldliketomention/thattalks/thatholdswater

4.+isthat

5.+從句

例句：

a)Thefirstpointtobekeptinmindisthat

b)ThesecondmeritIwouldliketomentionisthat

c)Thethirdthingthatshouldbetakenintoseriousconsiderationisthat

d)Thefourthrulethatcouldnotbeforgot/neglected/ignoredisthat

e)Thefifthfactofgreatimportanceisthat

f)Thesixthfactorholdingthebalanceisthat

g)Theseventhpositiveinfluencewhichshallbeborne/keptinmindis

that

h)Theeitheradvantageworthmentioningisthat

i)Theninthprincipletorememberisthat

1例文2

2003年1月Range-finder

ItPaystoBeHonest

1.Althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue,therearestillsomedishonest

peopleinoursociety.

2.ForexampleForinstance/A(good)caseinpoint,somebusinessmensell

fakeandshoddyproductstotheir*consumerscustomers;somestudentscheatin

*theexams.

1.突兀Dishonestpeopleareshort-sighted沒有對(duì)應(yīng)far-sighted.

1修改稿：Ontheonehand,dishonestpeoplecouldgetnothingbutmiserable

short-termbenefit/couldmerelygaintemporaryfinancialbenefitatthe

sacrificeoflong-termdevelopment

2.Thosewhosellfakeproductssubstandardcommoditiesmaymakesome

limitedamountofrottenmoneyatfirstattheinitialstage,butconsumerswon'tbuy

theirproductsanymore.

1修改稿：Afallintothepit,againinthecostumers9wit.Howcanweexpect

theconsumerstopurchasetheirproductsanymore.

3.Asaresult,theywilllosetheirfortuneorevenbesenttoprisonendupin

prison.

4.Bycontrast,honestpeoplegainalotenjoylong-termbenefitbecauseof

theirgoodcredit.

5.Thosewhoalwaystellthetruth*orandkeepredeemtheirpromisenotonly

letmakeotherstrustthembutgaincommand/winbroadrespectfromother

people(aswell).

6.Suchpersonsaresuretohavealotofgoodfriends.

7.Becausetheyare*trustabletrustworthyandrespectable,everyoneiseager

tomakefriendswiththem.

8.Besides,itiseasierforapersonwithagoodrecordofdecentbackground

togetagoodjobfindanidealjob.

9.GenerallyspeakingAsageneralrule,everyalmostalltheemployer(s)

wantshisorheremployeestobehonestpreferhonestemployees.

引用法應(yīng)詞一

1.AsMichaelDelloncesaid,"Honestyisthebestpolicy.”

2.NowonderMichaelDell,anidolfortheyoung,spokehighlyofhonestyata

companymeetingheldinDellNewYorkCenter.

10.SoHencewecansaypredictconfidently/withfbllconfidencethatanyone