Unit 4 單元話(huà)題滿(mǎn)分范文必背-2022-2023學(xué)年九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)全一冊(cè)單元重難點(diǎn)（人教版）

試卷第=page1313頁(yè)，共=sectionpages11頁(yè)試卷第=page22頁(yè)，共=sectionpages33頁(yè)Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.單元話(huà)題滿(mǎn)分范文必背1．假定你是李華，你的外國(guó)筆友Amy從媒體上得知中國(guó)已經(jīng)完成了消除絕對(duì)貧困的艱巨任務(wù)，全面實(shí)現(xiàn)小康，他感到難以置信。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，至少?gòu)膬蓚€(gè)方面，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信，向他介紹你所了解的有關(guān)情況。詞數(shù)80左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.郵件格式與開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。DearAmy,I’mgladtohearfromyouagain.NowIwilltellyousomethingaboutthedevelopmentinmylocalareas.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】Possibleversions:DearAmy,I’mgladtohearfromyouagain.NowIwilltellyousomethingaboutthedevelopmentinmylocalareas.Iliveinthecountry.Thevillagersusedtogotothecitiesforwork,butnowtheydon’tneedto.Mostofthemstayinthevillagetodofarmworkorworkinthefactorieshere.Theyliveinthetallhouses.Thereisnoneedtoworryaboutthefood.Almosteveryfamilyhasacar.Thereisakidgarden,aprimaryschoolandajuniorschoolandthechildrencangotoschooleasily.Theschoolsaremodernandtheteachersarenice.Thereisalsoahospitalhere.Weliveahappylife.Ihopeyoucancomeheretoseewithyourowneyesifyouhaveachance!Yours,LiHuaDearAmy,I’mgladtohearfromyouagain.NowIwilltellyousomethingaboutthedevelopmentinmylocalareas.Iliveinthecountryside.Thevillagersusedtoleavetheirhomesforthecitiestohavegoodjobs,butnowtherearemanyjobsforthemonthefarmaswellasinthefactories.Theirlivingconditionhasimprovedalot,too.Tallhousesarebuiltandenoughandnicefoodisoffered.Almosteveryfamilyhasacar.Thechildrencangotoschooleasilyandreceiveagoodeducation.Wecanspendourfreetimeinthepark.Lifeisbecomingbetter.Ihopeyoucancomeheretoseewithyourowneyesifyouhaveachance!Yours,LiHua【解析】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖顯示的信息，寫(xiě)出自己的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生的變化，從各方面寫(xiě)出過(guò)去與現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比，突出實(shí)現(xiàn)小康的事實(shí)，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.

寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要緊扣導(dǎo)圖信息，用第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)相結(jié)合來(lái)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)相結(jié)合，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。2．請(qǐng)以“He/SheHasChangedaLot”為題，從外貌、性格、愛(ài)好或其他方面介紹一下你身邊的一個(gè)人在這幾年的變化。要求：1.至少寫(xiě)出三個(gè)變化，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右。He/SheHasChangedaLot__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HeHasChangedaLotMyfriendJimmyhaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Jimmyusedtobefatandeatalotofunhealthyfood.Threeyearsago,hisdoctortoldhimthatheshoulddomoreexerciseandeathealthily.Sohetookdoctor’sadviceanddidmoreexercisetoloseweight.Nowheisthinnerandhealthier.Jimmyusedtohatetheschoollife.Oneyearago,heandhisparentshadalongtalk.That’swhenhedecidedtochange.Nowhestudiesharderthanheusedto.Heknowsthathisparentslovehimandtheyareproudofhim.

Jimmyusedtobeshy.Hisfacewouldturnredwhenhetalkedtopeople.Nowheismoreoutgoingandcangivespeechesinpublic.Thatmakeshimmorepopular.Peoplesurechange!I’mgladtoseemyfriend’sgreatchange.【解析】題干解讀：該題目是話(huà)題作文，從外貌、性格、愛(ài)好或其他方面介紹一下你身邊的一個(gè)人在這幾年的變化。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：人稱(chēng)用第三人稱(chēng)；時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)；寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可采用“總分總”的思路來(lái)寫(xiě)，先說(shuō)這個(gè)人在過(guò)去幾年發(fā)生了很大的變化，然后具體闡述變化體現(xiàn)的方面，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。注意保證內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。3．近幾年來(lái)，人們的交流方式發(fā)生了天翻地覆的變化。幾年前我們通過(guò)寫(xiě)信、打電話(huà)和發(fā)郵件與他人聯(lián)系，現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人使用(WeChat)交流。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談一談你對(duì)的看法。寫(xiě)作提示：1.使用交流的好處；2.帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題；3.你對(duì)的態(tài)度。寫(xiě)作要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；2.100詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】范文：WeChatisbecomingmoreandmorepopularnow.Afewyearsago,peoplegotintouchwitheachotherbysendingletters,callingorwritinge-mails,butnowmorepeopleareusingWeChat.ByusingWeChat,makingfriendsisbecomingeasier.Wecanalsoshareourlifeexperiences.However,therearealsosomeproblems.IfweuseWeChattoooften,wewillhavelesstimetostudy.SometimesitisnotsafeforstudentstomakefriendsbyWeChat.IthinkWeChatishelpfulinourlife,butweshoulduseitcarefully.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文。題目要求是根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談一談你對(duì)的看法。要包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；語(yǔ)句要通順，條理要清晰，詳略要得當(dāng)，書(shū)寫(xiě)要工整書(shū)，100詞左右。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。4．我們的每一次變化都見(jiàn)證著我們的成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)以“ThebiggestpersonalchangeI'veevermade”為題，并根據(jù)要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。1．要點(diǎn)：1)變化是什么；2)變化是如何發(fā)生的；3)變化后有何感受。2．要求：1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2)詞數(shù)80左右。ThebiggestpersonalchangeI'veevermade_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Onepossibleversion：ThebiggestpersonalchangeI'veeverhad.ThebiggestpersonalchangeI'veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.WhenIwasachild,Ididn'tenjoybooksatall.Later,mymotheralwaysreadstoriesformeandboughtmebooks.GraduallyIbegantolovereading.Whilereading,Ifeelliketalkingwithawiseman.Readingisalsoafantasticwaytopassmyfreetime.Booksaremyfriends.Andtheyhaveandwillbenefitmealot.【解析】題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的個(gè)人變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：The

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lot,等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5．時(shí)光如梭，轉(zhuǎn)眼大家已經(jīng)步入九年級(jí)?；叵脒^(guò)去兩年的初中生活，你是否覺(jué)得自己改變了許多？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以“SomeChangesinMyLife”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談一談自從上初中后，你在哪些方面發(fā)生了變化。提示：1.介紹你生活中的變化：（1）過(guò)去安靜內(nèi)向，現(xiàn)在性格外向開(kāi)朗；（2）過(guò)去不喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，現(xiàn)在喜歡打乒乓球、游泳；（3）過(guò)去討厭學(xué)習(xí)，害怕考試，現(xiàn)在努力學(xué)習(xí)。2.談?wù)勀銓?duì)這些變化的看法。要求：1.包括以上內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；2.100詞左右。標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。SomeChangesinMyLifeHowtimeflies！IthasbeentwoyearssinceIwenttothemiddleschool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SomeChangesinMyLifeHowtimeflies！IthasbeentwoyearssinceIwenttothemiddleschool.Mylifehaschangedalot.Iusedtobequietandshy，butnowI'mmoreoutgoingthanbeforebecauseIhavemadelotsofnewfriends.Iusedtodislikesports，butnowIlikeplayingping-pongandswimming.Ithinkit'sagoodchanceformetorelax.Iusedtohatestudy.What'smore，Iwasafraidoffailingtheexams.NowIstudyhard.IbelieveIcanpasstheexams.I'mverygladthateverythinggoeswell.TheharderIwork，theluckierIwillbe.【解析】1.題干解讀：時(shí)光如梭，轉(zhuǎn)眼大家已經(jīng)步入九年級(jí)?；叵脒^(guò)去兩年的初中生活，你是否覺(jué)得自己改變了許多？以“SomeChangesinMyLife”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談一談自從上初中后，你在哪些方面發(fā)生了變化。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的標(biāo)題。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：usedtobequietandshy；moreoutgoingthanbefore；madelotsofnewfriends；beafraidofdoingsth.。句型：IthasbeentwoyearssinceIwenttothemiddleschool.；Iusedtobequietandshy，butnowI'mmoreoutgoingthanbeforebecauseIhavemadelotsofnewfriends.；Mylifehaschangedalot.6．初中生活中，你有些什么改變？你是怎樣改變的？請(qǐng)以“HowIHaveChanged”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)小短文，描述你發(fā)生的變化。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容包括興趣愛(ài)好、行為習(xí)慣、學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等方面。要求：1.80詞左右；2．任選兩方面內(nèi)容；3．語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔；4．文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名。HowIHaveChanged________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowIHaveChangedHowtimeflies！Threeyearshasquicklypassed.AndIhavechangedalotduringtheseyears.Ononehand，Iwasn'tgoodatEnglishatfirst.WhenmyEnglishteacherlearntaboutthat，shetaughtmehowtomemorizenewwordsandtoreadasmanypassagesaspossible.SoonImadegreatprogressandbecameinterestedinEnglish.Ontheotherhand，inmyfirstyear，Iwastooweaktodomuchexercise.Butwiththehelpoftheteachersandclassmates，IdoexercisewheneverIamfree.AndnowIcanrunveryfastandI'malsogoodatplayingbasketballlikeotherboys.Thankstothemiddleschoollife，Ihavechangedsomuch！Thankstotheteachersandclassmates，Ihavelearntsomuch！NeverwillIforgetthevaluablemiddleschoollife!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹初中生活中我發(fā)生的變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Iwasn'tgoodat……，Iwastooweakto……，Ican……，Ihavelearnt……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了三年飛逝，我發(fā)生了很多變化，接下來(lái)介紹我具體的變化：興趣愛(ài)好、行為習(xí)慣、學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等方面，最后我將不會(huì)忘記珍貴的中學(xué)生活。此處begoodat,learnabout,as…..aspossible,ononehand,ontheotherhand,withthehelpof,thanksto等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。7．隨著年齡的增長(zhǎng)，你周?chē)氖挛镆舶l(fā)生了很大變化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“Greatchangesaroundme”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.過(guò)去,道路狹窄(narrow),房展老舊,空氣…河水…2.現(xiàn)在。路面潔凈、寬闊,交通便利；高樓林立；藍(lán)天白云,滿(mǎn)城綠樹(shù)鮮花,小鳥(niǎo)歌唱；人們…3.感受,…寫(xiě)作要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全,省略號(hào)處須作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐句翻譯；2.語(yǔ)句連貫,條理清晰,詳略得當(dāng),書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3文中不得出現(xiàn)任何賓實(shí)的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；4.100詞左右,短文的題目和開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。GreatChangesaroundMe

Inthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GreatChangesaroundMeInthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundme.Theroadsusedtobenarrowandcrowded.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Theairwasn'tfreshenough.Sometimes,therewasterriblesmell.Theriverwaspollutedbadlyandtherewasrubbishinit.Nowadays,theroadsarewideandclean.It'sreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.Wecanchoosedifferentkindsoftransportationtogoanywhere.Lotsoftallbuildingshavebeenbuiltinthecity.Mostofushavemovedtobigbeautifulhouses.Theskyisblueandthecloudiswhite.Thebirdsaresinginghappily.Myhometownlookslikeabiggardenwithgreentrees,grassandcolorfulflowers.Ourcountryisrichandstrong,wearelivingahappylife.I'msureastimegoeson,ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter!【解析】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如takeplace，aroundme，usedtobe，convenientfor，goout，differentkindsof，lotsof，mostofus，looklike，liveahappylife，goon，becomebetterandbetter等。而固定句型It'sreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.和固定句型Theriverwaspollutedbadlyandtherewasrubbishinit.以及I'msureastimegoeson,ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter!等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．“雙減（doublereduction）"意在減輕學(xué)生過(guò)重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)，并非降低學(xué)習(xí)質(zhì)量。相反，對(duì)“自律（self-discipline）”提出了更高要求。假如你是第一中學(xué)九年級(jí)學(xué)生張凱，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文關(guān)于“雙減”后學(xué)習(xí)上發(fā)生的變化以及這些變化帶來(lái)的結(jié)果。提示如下：“雙減”發(fā)生的變化變化帶來(lái)的結(jié)果作業(yè)明顯減少課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間增加，可以參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，比如，跳舞、打球……；老師更認(rèn)真教學(xué)有機(jī)會(huì)做實(shí)驗(yàn)（doexperiments），從真實(shí)生活中學(xué)習(xí)；考試減少考試能了解自己的進(jìn)步與不足，讓我們更加努力：不過(guò)，沒(méi)有了考試，我們要更加“自律”，也是一件好事。要求：1.內(nèi)容須包含以上全部要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右；3.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。MynameisZhangKai.I’mastudentinGrade9,No.1MiddleSchool.“Doublereduction”policyhopestoreducestudents’learningburdenbyreducinghomeworkandafter-schoolclasses.After“doublereduction”,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourstudy.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MynameisZhangKai.I’mastudentinGrade9,No.1MiddleSchool.“Doublereduction”policyhopestoreducestudents’learningburdenbyreducinghomeworkandafter-schoolclasses.After“doublereduction”,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourstudy.Firstofall,therehasbeenamarkedreductioninourhomework.Itallowsustohavemoretimeforextracurricularactivities,suchasdancing,playingballandsoon.Next,teachersaretakingtheirteachingmoreseriously.Wehavetheopportunitytodoexperimentsandcanlearnfromreallife.Lastbutnottheleast,therearefewerexamsbecauseof“doublereduction”.Examsenableustounderstandourprogressandshortcomingsandmakeusworkharder.However,itisalsoagoodthingthatwehavetobemore“disciplined”withoutexams.Ibelievewecanstudyhappilyandhavefunatschoolbecauseofthe“doublereduction”policy.【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)表格信息寫(xiě)短文介紹“雙減”后學(xué)習(xí)上發(fā)生的變化及這些變化帶來(lái)的結(jié)果，要求要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一、三人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。文章可分為四段式：第一、二段已給出，第三段介紹具體的變化及其帶來(lái)的結(jié)果；第四段收尾。要做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。9．由于父母工作變動(dòng),Mike兩年前隨父母從英國(guó)來(lái)到了中國(guó)北京。他想給他祖父母寫(xiě)一封信,敘述來(lái)中國(guó)后的各種變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容,代替Mike完成這封信,詞數(shù)80左右。注意:1.信息完整。2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。InEnglandInBeijing常和祖父母聊天父母繁忙,沒(méi)人聊天早餐吃面包、喝牛奶習(xí)慣了面條和雞蛋;更加強(qiáng)壯不喜歡球類(lèi)運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)籃球感興趣Deargrandparents,Howisitgoing?________________________________________________________Yours,Mike【答案】Deargrandparents,Howisitgoing?Ihopeyouarebothhealthy.Ihaven’tseenyoufortwoyears,soImissyouverymuch.IrememberIusedtotalkwithyouafterschool.ButnowIhavenobodytotalkwithbecausemyparentsareverybusyeveryday.Andmyeatinghabitshavechanged,too.IusedtohavebreadandmilkforbreakfastinEngland,butnowIamusedtoeatingnoodlesandeggs.Theymakemestrongerthanbefore.Forsports,Ididn’tusetoplayballgames,butnowIaminterestedinplayingbasketball.That’sallIwanttotellyou.Wishyouhappyandhealthy.Yours,Mike【解析】這篇作文要求我們以Mike的身份給自己的祖父母寫(xiě)一封信，介紹一下自己來(lái)到中國(guó)后，生活上發(fā)生的變化。題目中用表格的形式，列出了文章的主要內(nèi)容，包括三個(gè)方面，我們應(yīng)以這個(gè)提示為主線(xiàn)，發(fā)揮想象力，補(bǔ)充具體細(xì)節(jié)，使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，確定文章的主體、時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第一人稱(chēng)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主來(lái)敘述，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化，尤其注意不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維，逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型。句子結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文以Mike的身份給自己的祖父母寫(xiě)了一封信，介紹了自己來(lái)到中國(guó)后，生活上發(fā)生的改變。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息，并對(duì)一些細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)。敘述清晰、有層次，有合理的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，下面主要從和家人的交流、飲食以及運(yùn)動(dòng)三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行了對(duì)比介紹。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，如狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句等，調(diào)整了文章結(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型有IrememberIusedtotalkwithyouafterschool、IusedtohavebreadandmilkforbreakfastinEngland,butnowIamusedtoeatingnoodlesandeggs.、Theymakemestrongerthanbefore.、Forsports,Ididn’tusetoplayballgames,butnowIaminterestedinplayingbasketball.、That’sallIwant