浙江省2018屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作提升練(五)含答案

學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精寫作提升練（五)讀后續(xù)寫1(2017·浙江一般高中學(xué)業(yè)水平考試仿真模擬）閱讀下面短文，依照所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完滿的短文。Wanttoknowhowtosurviveaplanecrash?Whataboutaterroristattack?Toputyourmindateaseinnearlyanysituation,youcanalmostguaranteeyoursurvivalifyouneverleavethehousewithout3necessaryitems，i.e.alighter(打火機(jī)),alifestraw（救命吸管）andaraincoat。Rightofftheplacefullofdanger，yourfirstinstinct（本能)mightbetosearchforhelptheminuteyourealizeyou’reintroubleButsurvival。expertsinsistyoushouldstaywhereyouareuntilhelpfindsyou,instead；doingsowillmakeiteasierforthesearchandrescueteamstolocateyourlocation。Whatshouldyoudountilthen,youask?Preparetohunkerdown（盤腿坐下）forthelongrun.That’wheresyourthreepiecesofsurvivalnecessitiescomeintoplay，Stewartsays。Forone，youshouldhavesomethingtostartafireonyouatalltimes.Fire-startingtoolsareinexpensivetopurchase,andyoucaneasilycarrythemaroundinabackpackorpantpocket.Butevenwithoutafancyitem，allyoureallyneedissomethingtolightthefirstflame.“Youcanusecottonballscoveredinpetroleum（jelly凡士林油）asafirestarter,"StewarttoldUSATODAY?！癟heyarewaterresistantandwillstartafirewithjustaspark.”學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精Second，you’llneedsomethingtomakeyourdrinkingwaterfittodrink,suchasacanteen（飯盒）thatcanboilwater.Stewartrecommendsbuyinga＄20lifestraw，which“canbestruckintothemuddiestpoolofwateryoucanfindandyousuckthewateroutlikeastraw.Itcouldstillsaveyourlife，Stewartsays。注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的要點(diǎn)詞語;3。續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭詞或句子已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的要點(diǎn)詞語。Paragraph1：“Ialwayssaythatyourlifedependsonyourwatersource,”hesaid。Paragraph2：Youcankeepallthreeitemswithyouwhenyouareawayfromyour學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精home.2閱讀下面短文,依照所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完滿的故事.Tomappearedonthesidewalkwithabucketofwhitewashandalong—handledbrush.HestoppedatthefenceinfrontofthehousewherehelivedwithhisauntPolly。Helookedatit，andalljoylefthim。Thefencewaslongandhigh.Heputthebrushintothewhitewashandmoveditalongthetopofthefence。Herepeatedtheoperation.Hefeltitwasdifficultforhimtocontinueandsatdown。Heknewthathisfriendswouldarrivesoonwithallkindsofinterestingplansfortheday。Theywouldwalkpasthimandlaugh.TheywouldmakejokesabouthisworkonabeautifulsummerSaturday.Thethoughtburnedhimlikefire。學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精Heputhishandsintohispocketsandtookoutallthatbelongedtohim。Perhapshecouldfindsomewaytopaysomeonetodothewhitewashingforhim。Buttherewasnothingofvalueinhispockets-nothingthatcouldbuyevenhalfanhouroffreedom。Soheputthebitsoftoysbackintohispocketsandgaveuptheidea。Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment，awonderfulideacametohim。Itfilledhismindwithagreat，brightlight.Calmlyhepickedupthebrushandstartedagaintowhitewash.WhileTomwasworking,BenRogersappeared.Benwaseatinganappleashewalkedalongthestreet。Ashewalkedalong，hewasmakingnoiseslikethesoundofariverboat。Firstheshoutedloudly，likeaboatcaptain.Thenhesaid“Ding-Dong—Dong”，“DingDong—-Dong"againandagain,likethebellofariverboat.Andhemadeotherstrangenoises.WhenhecameclosetoTom，hestopped。Tomwentonwhitewashing.HedidnotlookatBen.Benstaredforamomentandthensaid：“Hello!I’mgoingswimming，butyoucago,canyou?”Noanswer.Tommovedhisbrushcarefullyalongthefenceandlookedattheresultwiththeeyeofanartist.Bencamenearer.Tom’smouthwateredfortheapple，buthekeptonworking。Bensaid,“Hello,oldfellow，you’vegottowork,hey?"Tomturnedsuddenlyandsaid,“Why，ityou’s，Ben!Iwasn’tnoticing.”學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精“Say—I’mgoingswimming.Don’tyouwishldyou？Butcouofcourseyou’dratherworkwouldn't—you？Ofcourseyouwould。”Tomlookedattheboyabit，andsaid“Whydoyoucallwork?"“Why,isn’tthatwork"Tom？wentbacktohiswhitewashing,andansweredcarelessly。“Well,maybeitis,andmaybeitisn’tAll。Iknowis,itsuitsTomSawyer."“Ohcome，now,youdon’tmeantosaythatyoulikeit?”Thebrushcontinuedtomove.“LikeitWell？，Idon’tseewhyIshouldn'tlikeDoesitaboyget。achancetowhitewashfenceeveryday?”Benstoppedeatinghisapple.Tommovedhisbrushbackandforth,steppedbacktolookattheresult，addedatouchhereandthere,andsteppedbackagain.Benwatchedeverymoveandgotmoreandmoreinterested.Soonhesaid，“Say，Tom,letmewhitewashalittle."Tomthoughtforamoment，wasabouttoagree;buthechangedhismind?！癗o—no-itwon’tdoBen，.Yousee，AuntPollywantsthisfencetobeperfect.Ithasgottobedoneverycarefully。Idon’tthinkthereisoneboyinathousand,maybetwothousand，thatcandoitwellenough。”“No-isthatso？Ohcome,now—letmejusttry。Onlyjustalittle.“Ben，I’dliketo，butifitisn’tdoneright,I’afraidmAuntPolly。。?！睂W(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精“Oh，I’llbecareful.Nowletmetry.Say—I’llgivemyapple?！薄癢ell,hereNo—，Ben，nowdon’t.I'mafraid。。"?！?/p>

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150左右;2。應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的要點(diǎn)詞語;3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4。續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的要點(diǎn)詞語.Paragraph1:Tomgaveupthebrushwithunwillingnessonhisface,butjoyinhisheart.Paragraph2：Andhehadnotworked.Hehadhadaniceidletimeallthetime,學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精參照答案寫作提升練五讀后續(xù)寫1Paragraph1:“Ialwayssaythatyourlifedependsonyourwatersource,"hesaid。“Ifyouareinabadsituationandhavetodrinkwaternotfittodrink，youtaketheriskofdrinkingwildpoisonouswater，whichcanquicklykillyou.”Inthiscase,lifestrawwillcomeintoplay。Finally，Stewartrecommendshavingaraincoat，oranythingthatcanbeusedtoprotectyouagainsttheweather.Evenfoodshouldtakeabackseattothesethreenecessaryitems，hesays?！癊veryonegetsreallyworriedaboutfood,butthehumanbodyisdesignedtolastalongtimewithoutfood。Whenitcomestosurvivalnecessaryitems,food’sonthebottomofthelist,said。Paragraph2：Youcankeepallthreeitemswithyouwhenyouareawayfromyourhome。Youcankeeptheminabackpackifyou’rehikingo學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精evenacarifyou’retravelingontheroad.Butinaword,thebestthicandotoensureyourownsurvivalhappensbeforeyouevenleave.2Paragraph1：Tomgaveupthebrushwithunwillingnessonhisface,butjoyinhisheartAnd.whileBenworkedatthefenceinthehotsun，Tomsatunderatree,eat