讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)課件+戶外探險(xiǎn)-湖中潛水遇險(xiǎn)得到父親的救援課件 高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)戶外探險(xiǎn)——湖中潛水遇險(xiǎn)，得到父親的救援1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwassummer.ItookatriptoabiglakeinIndonesiawithmyfamilytwoyearsago.Itwasreallyahugelakewithbeautifulsceneryallaround.Itwassopeacefulandquiet.Theblueofthelake,thedeepgreenpinetrees,aswellastherisingsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabluediamondshiningjustforus.Peoplewereamazedbytheendlessviewinfrontofoureyes,sowasI.IwasfascinatedsomuchthatIcouldn’tstopmyexcitementasifIwereonthetopoftheworld.4續(xù)寫原文Lateron,unlikeothergirls,Ivolunteeredtogowater-skiingalone.“Don’tgotoofaraway.Itisdangerous.”Mymomcriedbehind.Withmom’scries,Iputonthelifejacket,gotonthemotorboatimmediatelyandstartedmyengineassoonaspossible.FromwhereIstood,thelakeseemedbroadandendless.Iwassothrilled(激動)toenjoymytripamongthemountainsandwatersthatIspeededupmymotorboat.Then,aftersometime,Ifoundmyselfinthemiddleoftheendlesslake.Asuddenfearcamearoundme.Ididn’tknowwhereIwasorevenhowfarIhadgonefromtheshore.Astimewentby,Icouldseenothingbutwater.Whatwasworse,itbegantorainanditbecameverycoldandfoggy.Withthesunsetting,itwasgettingdarkeranddarker.Icouldn’tfindanyonearound.5段首句Para1：Irodeeverywherebutcouldn’tfindmywayback.

Para2：Afterfloatingonthewaterhelplesslyandhopelesslyforalongtime,suddenlyIheardsomeonecallingmyname.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫，文章講述了Kart和三位被困雷尼爾山登山者的遭遇。故事按照時(shí)間順序展開。他們在周五出發(fā)，周六，一位隊(duì)員的高原反應(yīng)減緩他們的速度，讓他們在周日不得不更換臨時(shí)扎營地點(diǎn)——在冰崖下一個(gè)桌子那么大的平臺上。糟糕的帳篷的選址以及惡劣的天氣使他們帳篷嚴(yán)重受損，讓他們度過寒冷的一晚上。周一他們聯(lián)系上911，但是惡劣天氣讓救援無法到達(dá)，食物要耗盡，此時(shí)也無法下山。因此，周三他們聚集所有物品決定繼續(xù)向上攀登上山，歷經(jīng)艱辛與危險(xiǎn)，終于爬到山頂，天氣放晴，他們得救了。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Irodeeverywherebutcouldn’tfindmywayback.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我到處滑水，但找不到回去的路?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者找不到回去的路時(shí)擔(dān)心害怕的心理變化，最后只能等待救援。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afterfloatingonthewaterhelplesslyandhopelesslyforalongtime,suddenlyIheardsomeonecallingmyname.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“在水面上無助、絕望地漂浮了很長一段時(shí)間后，我突然聽到有人在叫我的名字?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懡^望之際父親找到了作者，作者被救后大哭一場。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索找不到回去的路——擔(dān)心害怕——等待援救——聽到有人叫自己名字——父親救了自己——大哭一場12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①大叫：shout/yell②盡量去做某事：trytodosth./doone’sutmosttodosth.③等待：waitfor/await情緒類①害怕的：terrified/frightened②高興的：glad/delighted/pleased13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：【高分句型1】Theysetupwhatwasleftofthetentasbesttheycouldandstayedwheretheywere,prayingfortheearlyarrivaloftheirsalvation.(由what引導(dǎo)賓語從句、where引導(dǎo)的地點(diǎn)狀語從句和非謂語動詞作做伴隨狀語)【高分句型2】Itdidn’ttakelonguntilthewindfrozetheminplace.(until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)【高分句型3】Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.(由Itwas...that結(jié)構(gòu)引導(dǎo)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Irodeeverywherebutcouldn’tfindmywayback.Itwasuselessformetocryorshoutforhelp.IwassoterrifiedthatIbegantothinkaboutallkindsofhorriblethings.Iwasafraidofdyinginaplacewhichmyparentsdidn’tknow（定語從句）,soItriedtofindmywayback,butallinvain.Howworriedmyparentswouldbe!Icouldonlywaitforotherstofindme.16范文呈現(xiàn)Afterfloatingonthewaterhelplesslyandhopelesslyforalongtime,suddenlyIheardsomeonecallingmyname.Atfirst,Ithoughtitwasauditoryhallucination.Afterlisteningtoitseveraltimes,Ifoundthatmyfatherwascallingmyname.Iwasgladthathefoundme.Soon,abigsteamboatsailedtomeandtheypulledmeuptothedeckandaskedmeifIwashurt（營救場面）.Icouldn’tsayawordbutcriedoutinmyfather’sarms.17范文譯文我到處騎行，但找不到回去的路。對我來說，哭或喊救命都無濟(jì)于事。我非常害怕，開始思考各種可怕的事情。我害怕死在父母不知道的地方，所以我試圖找到回去的路，但都無濟(jì)于事。我的父母會多么擔(dān)心！我只能等別人找到我。18范文譯文在水上無助絕望地漂浮了很長一段時(shí)間后，我突然聽到有人在叫我