2023年中考英語寫作講評(píng)課件

中考寫作講評(píng)交友建議父母恩情未來選擇目錄Howtogetalongwithothers假如你是某英語報(bào)Problem&Advice欄目的編輯Eva，你收到了讀者Lisa的來信，她向你尋求幫助。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容，給Lisa回一封信。河南開封2023一模書面表達(dá)DearEva,Ihaveaseriousproblemnow.IthasbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschool,butIhaven’tmadeanyfriendsyet.Itisnoteasyformetogetonwithmyclassmates.WhatshouldIdotowintheirfriendship? Canyouhelpme?Yours,Lisa01針對(duì)Lisa遇到的問題，提出至少三條建議，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。河南開封2023一模書面表達(dá)DearLisa, I’mgladtohearfromyou.Don’tworry.You’renotalone.Manystudentshavethesameproblemwhentheymovetoanewenvironment.Iwillgiveyousomeadviceonhowtosolvethisproblem._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ihopethesesuggestionsareusefultoyou.Yours,Eva02初來乍到如何結(jié)交新友交友建議howtogetalongwithothers機(jī)會(huì)：參加社團(tuán)、活動(dòng)性格：友好親切、禮貌待人品質(zhì)：尊重他人、善良助人機(jī)會(huì)：參加社團(tuán)、活動(dòng)takepartin,clubsandactivities,havemorechances,makenewfriendsYoucantakepartinsomeclubsandactivitiessothatyoucanhavemorechancestomakenewfriendssothat為了，以便todo不定式表目的性格：友好親切、禮貌待人bekindandfriendly,smileat,bepoliteBeingkindandfriendlytopeopleisalsohelpful.Forexample,youcanoftensmileatyourteachersandclassmatesandtreatthemwithpoliteness.forexample例如?Forexample,+句子…,suchas+名詞品質(zhì)：尊重他人、善良助人respect,helpItisagoodideatorespectpeopleandgetreadytohelpthem.respectv.尊敬，尊重bereadytodo樂于做，愿意做Iwillbea(an)________person河南開封2022一模書面表達(dá)02IwillbeabravepersonAsaboystudent,Iwanttobeabravepersoninthefuture. Amanhasmanyresponsibilities.Heissupposedtoprotecthisfamily.Heshoulddoalotforhisparents,wifeandchild,especiallywhenhemeetssometrouble.Besides,heshouldalsodosomethingforthesocietyandcountry.Ifhiscountryisnotstrongenough,howcanheandhisfamilylivehappily?So,Iwanttobebrave. Toreachmygoal,Iwilltrytostudywellatschool.Iwanttogotoagooduniversity.Iwillalsotakemoreexercisetomakemyselfstrong.Iwilltrymybesttomakeit.02要點(diǎn)歸納：Tobea_________personkindbravepositive要點(diǎn)歸納：Tobea_________personkindbravepositive意志堅(jiān)定，不畏困難嚴(yán)以律己，自尊自立勤于思考，勇于實(shí)踐待自己：多往好處想，強(qiáng)身健體、享受生活待他人：友好多微笑、及時(shí)溝通待事物：努力并期待美好的未來樂于助人尊老愛幼誠實(shí)友善Tobeakindperson樂于助人behelpful=offertohelpothers=bewillingtohelpothers=bereadytohelpothers尊老愛幼respecttheoldandlovetheyoung誠實(shí)友善behonestandfriendlyTobeanbraveperson意志堅(jiān)定，不畏困難haveastrongwill,

feelfearlesswhenfacingdifficulty嚴(yán)以律己，自尊自立bestrictwithyourself,

beaconfidentandindependentperson勤于思考，勇于實(shí)踐usemyheadasoftenaspossible≈thinkinacreativeway,takeactionformydreamTobeapositivepersonMy_________andI父母對(duì)孩子總是傾注全部的心血。請(qǐng)以“My_________andI”為題寫一篇英語短文。短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：1.在你幼年時(shí)，他（她/他們）如何照顧你；2.青春期的你和他（她/他們）有過什么樣的隔閡、沖突；3.在畢業(yè)之際，你想對(duì)他（她/他們）說些什么。My_________andI_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________河南開封2021一模書面表達(dá)01MymotherandIMymotherwasadoctor.Shewasalwaysbusyinmymemory.WhenIwaslittle,shesometimesbroughtmetoheroffice.Whileshewasworking,Iplayedbymyself.Busyasshewas,shealwayssparedasmuchtimeasshecouldtobewithme.Iwashappythen.However,thesituationthatshewasbusyseemedunchangedasIenteredjuniorhighschool.Imetsomeproblemsatschool.Butmostofthetime,shewasn’ttherewhenIwantedtotalkwithheraboutmyproblems.Oneday,IyelledatherbecauseIthoughtshedidn’tcareaboutmeenough.Shehadalongtalkwithme.Iunderstoodhermoreandfeltsosorryaboutyellingather.Iknewshelovedmedeeply.

Soon,Iwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.AsIlookback,Icanpickupallpiecesofmemoriesofherloveforme.Iwanttosay,“Thankyou,Mom,Iloveyou.”河南開封2021一模書面表達(dá)02MymotherandIMymotherwasadoctor.Shewasalwaysbusyinmymemory.WhenIwaslittle,shesometimesbroughtmetoheroffice.Whileshewasworking,Iplayedbymyself.Busyasshewas,shealwayssparedasmuchtimeasshecouldtobewithme.Iwashappythen.However,thesituationthatshewasbusyseemedunchangedasIenteredjuniorhighschool.Imetsomeproblemsatschool.Butmostofthetime,shewasn’ttherewhenIwantedtotalkwithheraboutmyproblems.Oneday,IyelledatherbecauseIthoughtshedidn’tcareaboutmeenough.Shehadalongtalkwithme.Iunderstoodhermoreandfeltsosorryaboutyellingather.Iknewshelovedmedeeply.

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