專題18-讀后續(xù)寫：無靈主語升級(jí)(解析版)-2022年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心素養(yǎng)與實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

專題18讀后續(xù)寫：無靈主語升級(jí)（解析版）一、無靈主語inanimatesubject無靈主語句，是指用無生命的事物做主語，用人或社會(huì)團(tuán)體的行為或動(dòng)作做謂語，因此這類句子常帶有擬人化的修辭色彩。例如：Romewitnessed

manygreathistoricevents.

(在羅馬發(fā)生過許多重大歷史事件)▲它的主語Rome羅馬，是無生命的事物，但謂語witness目擊，是人的動(dòng)作。這種“無靈主語+有靈謂語”的句式，就是無靈主語句。它的亮點(diǎn)在哪？先舉個(gè)栗子：普通句：Shehadagoodidea.無靈主語句：Agoodideacameacrosshermind.▲同樣是表達(dá)“她有了個(gè)好主意”，比起普通句式中的常見句子，無靈主語句中這種“想法跑到腦中”的擬人化表達(dá)，肉眼可見更高級(jí)！無靈主語的分類無靈主語的分類01情感狀態(tài)類名詞02主語（身體部位/音容笑）+有靈動(dòng)詞+其它03時(shí)間地點(diǎn)景物類名詞+witness/spreadacross/fill無靈主語句式與練習(xí)句式1：（aburst/wave/feelingof+)表示情感狀態(tài)的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+sb1、表示“某人感到...”或“一陣/一種....向某人襲來”2、常用于該句式的有靈動(dòng)詞（短語）有：有靈動(dòng)詞（短語）中文意思有靈動(dòng)詞（短語）有靈動(dòng)詞（短語）seize/takeholdofsb“抓住”“控制住”swallowsb“吞噬，淹沒”defeatsb“擊垮”opieces“把...撕碎”sweepoversb“襲來”chokeone’swords“噎住”（說不出話）3、例句Asenseofdespairdefeatedme,andIfellsobbingonthedoorstep.《簡愛》絕望擊垮了我，我倒在門階上哭泣。Maryfeltawaveofangersweepoverher.《秘密花園》瑪麗感到一陣憤怒?！扒楦袪顟B(tài)的抽象名詞+謂語動(dòng)詞”的描寫還有：①Fear

gripped

thevillage.(整個(gè)村莊籠罩在恐怖之中)②Courage

deserted

him.

(他失去了勇氣)③Anger

choked

mywords.

(我氣的說不出話)④Awaveof

nervousness

washedover

him.

(一陣緊張的情緒涌上他的心頭)⑤Achillof

horror

suddenly

sweptover

him.

(他突然感到不寒而栗)⑥Excitement

seized

him.

(他好興奮)練習(xí)一：請(qǐng)把下列表示情感的形容詞改成名詞，做作主語anxious焦慮的n.guilty內(nèi)疚的n.panic驚慌的n.worried擔(dān)憂的n.despaired絕望的n.angry生氣的n.hopeless絕望的n.depressed沮喪的n.horrible恐懼的n.stressful有壓力的n.happy高興的n.sad傷心的n.練習(xí)二：請(qǐng)把下面的句子和相應(yīng)的有靈動(dòng)詞（謂語）匹配。()1、一陣恐慌向她襲來。Awaveofpanic______her.A.choked()2、我抱著禮物，興奮得什么話也說不出來。Iheldthepresent,andexcitement________mywords.B.seized()3、她的焦慮把她撕成了碎片。（她焦慮不安）Anxiety_________herintopieces.C.sweptover()4、那些日子里，一種沮喪攫住了我。Adepression_______methosedays.D.tore句式2：主語（身體部位/音容笑）+有靈動(dòng)詞+其它1、這類名詞有：face/eye/heart/fingers/tears/smile/voice2、有靈動(dòng)詞有：one’sfacebrighten/lightup(露出喜色),tearswellup(涌出),spreadacross(浮現(xiàn))3、例句:Myfingersshookwithanger,sothatIcouldnotgoonsewing.《簡愛》Iwasrelievedwhenabright,sweetvoiceinterruptedus.《簡愛》“身體部位/音容類名詞+謂語動(dòng)詞”的描寫還有：①Smile

crumpled

hisface.

(他笑得一臉皺紋)②Herface

brightened

whenIgaveherthepresent.

(我給她禮物時(shí)，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩)③Hiswords

sent

meaquiverthroughmybody.

(他的話讓我全身不寒而栗)④Laughter

lingeredaround

theroom.

(笑聲在房間里縈繞)⑤Tears

welledup

inAnni'seyes.

(淚水從安妮的眼中涌出)這些句子簡直完勝xxiscrying/laughing/smiling！快把它們記下來，用在續(xù)寫里頭去奪分！練習(xí)：根據(jù)漢語和提示用無靈主語或有靈動(dòng)詞填空，并背誦。他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶。Themomenthesawthefamiliarhandwriting,_________(主語)_____________(有靈動(dòng)詞）inhiseyes.當(dāng)老人多年后回到家鄉(xiāng)時(shí)，激動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶。(激動(dòng)的淚水)Whentheoldmanreturnedtohishometownaftersomanyyears,tearsof_________(主語)________________(有靈動(dòng)詞）inhiseyes.他注視著那個(gè)不尋常地沉默的男孩，一臉驚訝。Hestaredattheunusuallysilentboyandalookofsurprise____________hisface.我給她禮物時(shí)，她的臉上露出了喜色。_______________(主語)_____________(有靈主語)whenIgaveherthepresent.句式3：表時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)的名詞+（有靈動(dòng)詞)witness/fill/spreadthrough等等“時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)/場景類名詞+謂語動(dòng)詞”的描寫有：①Ahush

fellupon

theclassroom.(教室一片寂靜)②Beijing

haswitnessed

greatchangesinrecentyears.

(北京見證了最近幾年的的巨大變化)③Dusk

found

thechildcryinginthestreet.

(黃昏時(shí)，孩子在街上哭)④Thatchillyafternoon

witnessed

himtrudginginthesnow.

(那個(gè)寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉)⑤Nighthasfallenover

thecountry.

(夜幕已經(jīng)籠罩著鄉(xiāng)間)上面這些描寫，都是將時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)擬人化，從它們的視角“看到”事件發(fā)生，不用therebe也不用itisxx，完美展現(xiàn)你續(xù)寫的高水準(zhǔn)！例句與仿寫：例句1：上海發(fā)生了許多重大的歷史事件。Shanghaiwitnessedmanygreathistoricalevents.仿寫：

下一刻見證了他們做早餐的努力，最終他們做到了。_____________________________________________________________________例句2：(2021年全國I卷)早餐的香味彌漫在廚房的空氣中。Thesmellofbreakfastfilledtheairinthekitchen.仿寫：

每個(gè)人都欣喜若狂，院子里洋溢著喜悅。_____________________________________________________________________翻譯鞏固：突然之間，雙胞胎的臉亮了起來，他們的頭堅(jiān)定地點(diǎn)著。_____________________________________________________________________他站在門邊，臉上露出喜色。_____________________________________________________________________一見到他的老朋友，一種幸福的感覺席卷了他。(sweepover)_____________________________________________________________________(2022年蘇州八校聯(lián)考)當(dāng)她看到草莓的時(shí)候，她的眼睛閃爍著喜悅和甜蜜。(twinkle)_____________________________________________________________________(2022年蘇州八校聯(lián)考)當(dāng)她看到草莓的時(shí)候,幸福的淚水從她臉頰留下。_____________________________________________________________________(2022年蘇州八校聯(lián)考)當(dāng)她看到草莓的時(shí)候，一種幸福和快樂的感覺席卷了她。_____________________________________________________________________當(dāng)她打開盒子時(shí)，她的手激動(dòng)得發(fā)抖。_____________________________________________________________________(2021年全國I卷）媽媽試圖掩飾自己的情緒，但是那閃閃發(fā)光的眼淚卻出賣了她。（sthfailsb)_____________________________________________________________________比賽前，她突然失去了信心。（sthfailsb)_____________________________________________________________________她想堅(jiān)持，但是鼓不起勇氣。（sthfailsb)_____________________________________________________________________我一打開盒子，就驚訝地睜大了眼睛。_____________________________________________________________________簡臉色蒼白，一陣恐懼襲上心頭。(seize/takeholdof/sweepover)_____________________________________________________________________她絕望得心都要被撕碎了。_____________________________________________________________________答案:句式1：（aburst/wave/feelingof+)表示情感狀態(tài)的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+sb練習(xí)一：請(qǐng)把下列表示情感的形容詞改成名詞，做作主語anxious焦慮的n.anxietyguilty內(nèi)疚的n.guiltpanic驚慌的n.panicworried擔(dān)憂的n.worrydespair絕望的n.despairangry生氣的n.angerhopeless絕望的n.hopelessnessdepress沮喪的n.depressionhorrible恐懼的n.horrorstressful有壓力的n.stresshappy高興的n.happinesssad傷心的n.sadness練習(xí)二：請(qǐng)把下面的句子和相應(yīng)的有靈動(dòng)詞（謂語）匹配。CADB句式2：主語（身體部位/音容笑）+有靈動(dòng)詞+其它練習(xí)：根據(jù)漢語和提示用無靈主語或有靈動(dòng)詞天空，并背誦。他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶。Themomenthesawthefamiliarhandwriting,___tears______(主語)_welled________up____(有靈動(dòng)詞）inhiseyes.當(dāng)老人多年后回到家鄉(xiāng)時(shí)，激動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶。(激動(dòng)的淚水)Whentheoldmanreturnedtohishometownaftersomanyyears,tearsof_excitement________(主語)_welled________up____(有靈動(dòng)詞）inhiseyes.Hestaredattheunusuallysilentboyandalookofsurprise_swept______over_____hisface.我給她禮物時(shí)，她的臉上露出了喜色。Her_________face_____(主語)__lit_______up___(有靈主語)whenIgaveherthepresent.句式3：表時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)的名詞+（有靈動(dòng)詞)witness/fill/spreadthrough等等仿寫1：Thenextmomentwitnessedtheireffortstomakethebreakfastandtheyeventuallymadeit.仿寫2：)Everyonewereoverjoyed,delightfilledtheyard.翻譯鞏固（每日三題）(2021年全國I卷)Allofasudden,thetwin’sfacelitupwiththeirheadnoddingfirmly.Hestoodbythedoorandhisfacebrightened/litupwithdelight/joy.Atthesightofhisoldfriend,awaveofhappinesssweptoverhim.(2022年蘇州八校聯(lián)考)Whenshesawthestrawberries,hereyestwinkled/sparkledwithjoyandsweetness.(2022年蘇州八校聯(lián)考)Whenshesawthestrawberries,tearsofhappinessrolleddown/sliddown/screameddownhercheeks.(2022年蘇州八校聯(lián)考)Whenshesawthestrawberries,awaveofhappinessandjoysweptoverher.Herhandsweretremblingwithexcitementassheopenedthebox.Momtriedtoconcealheremotion,buttheglitteringtearsfailedher.Beforethecontest,herconfidencesuddenlyfailedher.Shewantedtoholdout,buthercouragefailedher.ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyeswidenedingreatsurprise.Janeturnedpaleandawaveofhorrorseized/tookholdof/sweptoverher.模擬演練01讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

Bobbywasgetting

cold

sittingoutinhisbackyardinthesnow.Bobbydidn'twearboots;orrather,hedidn'townany.Thethinsneakersheworehadafewholesinthemandtheyhadapoorjobofkeepingoutthecold.

Bobbyhandbeeninhisbackyardforaboutanhouralready.Tryashemight,hecouldnotcomeupwithanideaforhismother'sChristmas

gift."Thisisuseless,evenifIdohavean

idea,Idon'thavemoneyforagift."

Wiping

tears

fromhiseyes,Bobbystartedwalkingdowntothestreetwheretheshopswere.Itwasn'teasybeingsixwithoutafather,particularlywhenheneededamantotalkto.

Bobbywalkedfromshoptoshop,lookingintoeachdecoratedwindow.Everythingseemedsobeautifulandsooutofreach.ItwasstartingtogetdarkandBobbyreluctantlyturnedtowalkhomewhenhiseyescaughtthegimmer(微光)ofthesettingsun'srayreflectingonsomethingontheroadside.Hereacheddownanddiscoveredashinny

dime(十分錢硬幣).

Neverbeforehadanyonefeltso

wealthy

asBobbyfeltatthatmoment.Asheheldhisnewly-foundtreasure,warmthspreadthroughouthisentirebodyandhewalkedintothefirststore.Hisexcitementquicklyturnedcoldwhensalespersonaftersalespersontoldhimthathecouldnotbuyanythingwithonlyadime.

Hesawaflowershopandwentinsideitto

wait

inline.Whenthe

shopowner

askedifhecouldhelphim.BobbypresentedthedimeandaskedifhecouldbuyoneflowerforhismotherasaChristmasgift.TheshopownerlookedatBobbyandhisdimeoffering.Thenheput

hishandonBobby'sshoulder,saying"YoujustwaithereandI'llseewhatIcandoforyou."AsBobbywaited,helookedatthebeautiful

flowers

andeventhoughhewasaboy,hecouldseewhymothersandgirlslovedflowers.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭已經(jīng)給出；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:

Afewminuteslater,theshopownercameout.______________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:

Withthebunchofrosesinhishands,Bobbywalkedoutofthedoorandbrokeintoarun.______________________________________________________________________________________翻譯小練習(xí)：1.他手里拿著一打玫瑰，這使鮑比很吃驚。_________________________________________________________________________2.當(dāng)?shù)曛鬏p輕地把玫瑰遞給他時(shí)，鮑比猶豫了一下，愣住了一下，問道：“這么多花，一毛錢就夠了嗎？”_________________________________________________________________________3.店主眨著眼皮，朝他咧嘴一笑：“當(dāng)然！”鮑比一聽到這個(gè)回答，臉上就閃過一陣狂喜。__________________________________________________________________________4.“謝謝你！圣誕快樂！”鮑比接過玫瑰回答說。_________________________________________________________________________5.他緊緊地抓住手中的玫瑰，生怕那是幻覺。_________________________________________________________________________6.考慮到天氣變化無常，店主提議給他一把雨傘，鮑比禮貌地拒絕了。_________________________________________________________________________7.他被大雪淋濕了，只是盡可能快地飛奔，因?yàn)樗荒茉俚攘?。_________________________________________________________________________8.不久之后，在他的視線里出現(xiàn)了他的家。_________________________________________________________________________9.他氣喘吁吁地站在門前，深深地吸了一口氣，走了進(jìn)去。_________________________________________________________________________10.他一進(jìn)去就大叫：“媽媽！”但是在房子周圍只有他的聲音在回響。_________________________________________________________________________11.一陣陣憂慮使他不知所措。只是這時(shí)，他耳邊傳來熟悉的腳步聲。_________________________________________________________________________12.鮑比轉(zhuǎn)過身來，看見他媽媽提著一雙他很久以來就想要的靴子。_________________________________________________________________________13.他把禮物送給她，低聲說：“媽媽，圣誕快樂！”_________________________________________________________________________14.“謝謝，親愛的！”她緊緊地?fù)肀е谒哪樕陷p輕地吻了一下，幸福的淚水順著臉頰汩汩流淌。_________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1.他手里拿著一打玫瑰，這使鮑比很吃驚。Inhishandswasadozenofroses,whichastonishedBobbyalot.2.當(dāng)?shù)曛鬏p輕地把玫瑰遞給他時(shí)，鮑比猶豫了一下，愣住了一下，問道：“這么多花，一毛錢就夠了嗎？”When

theshopowner

handedtherosestohimsoftly,Bobbystunnedforaninstant,withhesitation,andqueried,"Couldonlya

dime

coverthecostsofsomany

flowers?"3.店主眨著眼皮，朝他咧嘴一笑：“當(dāng)然！”鮑比一聽到這個(gè)回答，臉上就閃過一陣狂喜。Withhiseyelidsflickeringswiftly,theshopownergrinnedathim,"Ofcourse!"ScarcelyhadBobbyheardthisanswerwhenafloodofecstasyflashedacrosshisface.4.“謝謝你！圣誕快樂！”鮑比接過玫瑰回答說。"Thankyou!MerryChristmas!"repliedBobby,takingovertheroses.5.他緊緊地抓住手中的玫瑰，生怕那是幻覺。Heseizedtherosesinhandsfirmly,forfearthatitcouldbeanillusion.6.考慮到天氣變化無常，店主提議給他一把雨傘，鮑比禮貌地拒絕了。Consideringtheawfulanderraticweather,theshopownerofferedtoprovidehimanumbrella,whileBobbyabnegateditpolitely.7.他被大雪淋濕了，只是盡可能快地飛奔，因?yàn)樗荒茉俚攘?。Drentchedbythesnow,hejustdartedasrapidlyaspossible,forhecouldn'twaitanymore.8.不久之后，在他的視線里出現(xiàn)了他的家。Soonafter,inhisvisionemergedhishome.9.他氣喘吁吁地站在門前，深深地吸了一口氣，走了進(jìn)去。Standingaheadofthedooringasp,hetookadeepbreathandsteppedin.10.他一進(jìn)去就大叫：“媽媽！”但是在房子周圍只有他的聲音在回響。Theinstanthewasinheexclaimed,"Mom!",butaroundthehouseechoedonlyhisvoice.11.一陣陣憂慮使他不知所措。只是這時(shí)，他耳邊傳來熟悉的腳步聲。Grippedbyagustofworry,hewasquiteataloss.Justatthismoment,inhisearscamethefamiliarclumps.12.鮑比轉(zhuǎn)過身來，看見他媽媽提著一雙他很久以來就想要的靴子。Turnningaround,Bobbysawhismothercarryingwithapairofbootswhichhehaddesiredforsincelong.13.他把禮物送給她，低聲說：“媽媽，圣誕快樂！”Hepresentedthe

gift

toherandwhispered"Mom,merryChristmas!"14.“謝謝，親愛的！”她緊緊地?fù)肀е?，在他的臉上輕輕地吻了一下，幸福的淚水順著臉頰汩汩流淌。"Thanks,mydear!",sheembracedhimtightlyandplantedatenderkissonhisface,tears

ofhappinessgurglingdownhercheeks.參考范文：Afewminuteslater,theshopownercameout.Inhishandswasadozenofroses,whichastonishedBobbyalot.When

theshopowner

handedthe