高考英語(yǔ)作文專(zhuān)題求助信

高考作文滿(mǎn)分練—求援信題型解讀：在求援信中應(yīng)直截了當(dāng)，斬釘截鐵地把你碰到的難題或許疑心告訴對(duì)方，并向?qū)Ψ角笤?。?yīng)注意：（1）向他人征采建議，態(tài)度必定要至誠(chéng)，語(yǔ)氣委婉；2）掌握時(shí)態(tài)：應(yīng)用大凡此刻時(shí)表示當(dāng)前自己存在的困難，用大凡未來(lái)時(shí)描繪自己獲得幫助后的進(jìn)步。寫(xiě)作思路Para.1:點(diǎn)名身份+直接說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的求援目的滿(mǎn)分詞匯bothertroublev.滿(mǎn)分短語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分句型dosb.afavor1.IamamiddleschoolstudentandI“mwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhastakethetroubletotroubledme.do...2.I“mwritingtoyoutoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.havetrouble/difficulty3.I“mwonderingifyoucouldtakethetroubleindoinghelpmewith4.I“msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomehavenochoicebuttodifficultieshereandI,whichturntosb.forhelpbothmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.fitinwithwithothers=geonwellwithothers1/5beaccustomedtolongtoloseheart1.Iseemnottobeabletofitinwellwithothershere.2.Idon“tfeelquiteaccustomedtothelifehere.3.IlongtolearnEnglishwellbutIdon“tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.4.Ican“tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedaysandIfailedinthelastexamwhichworriesmealot.5.Ioftenfeelleftoutinthisschool,andIdon“tknowhowithascomeabout.6.Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,IhavetoturntoyouforhelpPara.2:說(shuō)明自己存在的困難、疑心并懇求對(duì)方的幫助。言辭必定要禮貌多禮confusedconfusingupsetworriedanxiousanxietyPara.3(客氣話)情真意切表達(dá)期盼之情。timelyeager2/5gratefulappreciaterequest“meagertogetyourtimelyhelp./Ieagerifforyourtimelyhelp.takeinto2.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpconsideration/account.me...3.I“dappreciateifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration/account.4.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldreallygive/lendmeahand.注意：作文的主體時(shí)態(tài)：大凡此刻時(shí)為主，大凡未來(lái)時(shí)有時(shí)穿插。滿(mǎn)分模板：Dear__________寫(xiě)(信對(duì)象),Mynameis__________;Iwriting’mtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein___________(交代自己面對(duì)的困難).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat___________（提出令自己苦楚的問(wèn)題）.What’smore,Idon’tknow___________（進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明自己的窘境）I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto_________sothat（再次懇求對(duì)方的幫助）.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.I’mlookingforwardtoyoreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua優(yōu)秀作文賞識(shí)：題目1：（2016全國(guó)卷1）若是你是李華，暑設(shè)想去一家外資企業(yè)兼職，已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教MsJenkins寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)她幫你改正所附的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適合增添細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連接3/5Sample:DearMsJenkins,I“mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor.Inordertogainsomesocialexperienceandimprovemyworkability.Itotakeapart-timejobduringthesummervacation.Sointerestedinthepositioninaforeign-capturedcompanyamIthatI’vealreadywrittenanapplicationletterandmyresumeallinEnglish.However,I’mafraidthattheremightbesomegrammarmistaorinappropriateformatinthematerialsthatIprepared.’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua題目2.若是你是李華，你家鄉(xiāng)的梨花節(jié)(EwhaFestival)負(fù)有盛名，你寫(xiě)了一篇英文宣傳稿，想請(qǐng)外籍教師Bob幫忙潤(rùn)飾。請(qǐng)依據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)給Bob寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包含：1.求援事由；2.求援內(nèi)容；3.表達(dá)感謝注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適合增添細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連接。Sample:Deerbob,I’mwritingtoyouinthehopethatyouwillbesokindastodomeafavor.WhenitcomestotheEwhaFestival.There“snodenyingthateatitenjoysreputationgrinmyhometown.I,foralongtime,havebeendesiringtowriteanappealingarticletomakeitbetterknown.However,onlywhenIputtheideaintopracticedidIfindmyEnglishfarfromsatisfying.AsfarasIknow,youhavesuchagoodcommandofwrittenEnglishasimpressesmealot.Therefore,I’mwo